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Character Name: Michael "Mike" Ichitsuyo Age: 14 Gender: Male Type: Half Demon Meister Partnered? No Image: Human Form: ![]() See demon form in spoiler Spoiler: click to toggle Clothing and description: Many people at his hometown, Tokyo described Michael as a handsome boy. The teenaged girls there in their own opinion have said he's cute or dreamy. This outlook on him is enhanced by his good nature. The boy stands at a height of 5 feet and 7 inches and weighs 148 pounds. His body is quite toned from the training his father have him. The muscles on his body can hardly be seen with his clothes, however. The shade of his skin is a cream white. His hair is a bright shade of brown standing up in a spiky, flame head-style. A small portion of his hair hangs in the back of his neck, which is are shown by two locks. His hair may be spiky, but it's really soft to touch. Three bangs hand down in front of his forehead and in between his eyes. The last part of his appearance is eye color, which is emerald green. When in his demon form, Michael's scleroses become black and his eye color turns bright red. His pupils also become slits. His teeth also become razor-sharp . Michael's clothing is very interesting. It's also quite easy to describe. He wears a long-sleeve shirt that is a light shade of light-red. Worn over this shirt is a purplish black coat with short sleeves. The sleeves themselves reach halfway to his elbows. On the lower half of his body, he wears baggy shorts that are the same purplish black as his short-sleeve coat. The cuffs are folded and they reach up to his knees. On his feet, he wears a pair of smooth boots. They are a dark shade of crimson red. The part where he inserts his feet into them has cuffs. Also they reach up to his ankles. Michael's demon half's outfit consists of a similar style, but with different colors. He wears the same long-sleeve shirt and short-sleeve coat, like Michael. The difference is that his shirt is a brighter shade of red and his coat is regular black. His shorts are also the same shade of black as his coat, along with his boots having the same shade of red as his shirt. History: Michael was born in Tokyo, Japan into a loving family. His name was given to him from his mother. Through her studies in other cultures from books, she discovered the angel known as Saint Michael. This is where she got her son's name, because it felt like a little angel had entered her world. He seemed to radiated a strong light as she held him as an infant. Due to their great wealth, they lived in a mansion. It's big enough for a family of 8 members. It was bought when Michael's mother and father got married and decided to settle down in a nice big place. The mansion also had a nice field of grass where the kids can play or relax. In size, It's pretty much considered a miniature castle. The family that lives in this wonderful mansion within Tokyo is the Ichitsuyo Family. They are a family of powerful meisters and weapons. It was started 700 years ago, a 100 years after the sealing of the Original Kishin, Asura. The weapons of the family have powerful elemental abilities passed down to their children, ranging from any kind such as wind, fire, earth, water, lightning, etc. The members that are meisters have powerful souls, which are larger than the souls of average meisters. Because of their powerful souls, the meisters possess strong soul wavelengths. There is also have something else darker that lies in their bloodline. The Ichitsuyo Family has demon blood passed down through the generations. The parents with demon blood has a high possibility that their children will be born half demon. In fact, there are many half-demon family members. More than human family members. When a half-demon family member is born, their demon blood remains dormant until it awakens from the ages 11 to 17. The family member's demon blood can also have a late awakening when they are pass the age of 17. Each half-demon family member has a demon form unique to them, but with similar features to each other depending on their parents' demon forms. There are family members who have mastered their demon halves and those who haven't. Family members who have mastered their demon half can transform freely into their demon form. They also have have access to abilities they hadn't before their complete mastery. Those who haven't mastered their demon halves yet can only awaken them through extreme anger. Because of this, they only use this power when they really have to, but they must be careful of how much power they can use. If a family member who hasn't mastered their demon half uses too much power than they can handle, they risk losing their reason to their own anger and end up becoming a raging beast. While in this state, they are wild and vicious. They could possibly attack anyone or anything that came near them whether they were friend or foe. A family member's demon half is the part of them that's demon. However, despite being part of their other respective halves, they act as separate entities. This means they have their own personalities. They can either differ or be similar to the family member's own personality. The great rage that influences a family member comes from the demon blood that runs through their veins. This means that their demon halves have nothing to do with the influence, except their power is indirectly loaned. For a family member to master their demon half, they would have to try and connect with the demon in them. This meant they would have to enter their soul world and undergo training for abilities they will get when using their demon power someday. For an advancement in their training, the said family member is recommended to be aided by an adult or elder who knows of the process of mastering one's demon half. With the process of mastering their demon half, the family member can still lose control of their power with enough anger. It takes time for a family member to fully master their demon half, but the more they train the more in tune they become with their inner demon. Michael's mother, Mia Ichitsuyo, is a Meister and was a student of the DWMA. She graduated with high grades and great combat skills. She's also one of the family members of the Ichitsuyo family that is all human. She was a regular talented Meister attending the academy before meeting his father. After becoming partner, she ended up falling for him and getting married. Michael's Father, Oiichi Ichitsuyo, is an elemental weapon of wind. To be specific he's a wind scythe. Michael inherited his mother's meister blood, but inherited something else from his father. His father was also half-demon which means he inherited his demon blood. His father has fully mastered his demon half years ago. Michael at the age of 10 asked his parents about his demon blood and when will it awaken. His father told him that half demon family members usually all awoken naturally or by emotions, mostly anger. He also told him it happens to a family member between the ages of 11 and 17. Sometimes there are late awakenings pass the ages of 17. This meant that Michael had to wait until he was 11 and counting. After one year has passed, Michael's demon blood had awoken. It happened a week after his 11th birthday. When Michael was outside in the backyard of the family mansion and laying down in the shade of a tree, he started to hear demonic growls in his head. Then, a surge of dark power came coursing through his body. It was very intense as Michael had to hold his head with his left hand to focus. He walked back into his home and told his mother and father what happened outside. They were both expecting this as they knew the day would come when it's deduced that Michael is half demon. Being one of the meisters in the family and his mother, Mia taught her son hand-to-hand combat before he entered the DWMA. His father was the one to teach him on how to master his demon blood. He has trained him for 3 years. As a result, Michael so far can transform to the point where his eye and teeth change. He requires more training to transform further without losing his reason. The reason for this is because he has difficulty find the demon within him. Sessions were divided into certain amounts of time, so Michael could get the same amount of training from both his parents. Michael's father was also the head of the family. It mean the had difficulty making time for his son. Every time he was a little late, Michael understood that it was because of his duties to uphold the legacy of the Ichitsuyo Family. As a young boy, Michael was raised well by his parents. He grew up with the ideas of doing good, being strong, the knowledge of weapons and meisters. He also grew up knowing of the DWMA and it's purpose to maintain peace. With these ideas in mind, Michael grew up into a strong and righteous young man. Before attending the academy, Michael was a student at a junior high school in Tokyo. He was one of the cool kids and got along with many of the student. Some even looked up to him as a idle. Whether this is due to his family's reputation or him just being Michael, his popularity was impressive. Basically, Michael's family is greatly known throughout Japan, so it's no surprise that the students idolize him. The boy found it cool that he was a celebrity of some sort. Still, there were punks looking to start a fight with Michael. They were jealous of his popularity and decided to challenge him. This ended with them easily defeated. It wasn't so difficult for Michael due to his training with his father. Like any other laid-back 14 year-old boy, Michael often slept through class. He hardly ever paid attention to the teacher. It was because to him that it wasn't as interesting as the DWMA. He felt like he wasn't at home here, even how well his life is going, despite his sleeping in class. With the lack of effort he puts into schoolwork involving using his intellect rather that his physical ability, he got barely got Cs. Michael's relationship with his family in general is strong in bond and vast in love. He loves his parents greatly and is willing to give them a hand now and then, especially his mother. He's also willing to spend time with them, bonding over certain activities. At times, his mother and him go out to certain scenic routes. They will often talk about what's on their mind and have some lunch. When bonding with his father, they do more physical activity such as sports. Oiichi was the one to teach Michael basketball, in fact. Michael also has siblings, which he has a close bond when growing up. Specifically, he has three older brothers, one younger sister, and one younger brother. This meant he has 5 siblings. Luckily, none of their relationships were strained and never treated each other poorly. They were always looking after one another and looking to cheerful their younger siblings up. Michael has always dreamed of going to the academy and becoming a powerful Meister. His dream is to become a legend among meisters, like Stein was the most powerful Meister to ever graduate. Also like any other young Meister, Michael aspires to make a Death Scythe. Oiichi and Mia decided it was time to move back to Death City, but this time with the family. They packed their things and moved to another mansion, stationed in there. Michael was then, enrolled into the academy as a freshman and starts his first day tomorrow. Now his journey begins to become a great Meister. Personality: Michael is a kind and caring person. He cares greatly for his friends and loves his family. If there is anyone in trouble, especially them, he'll help. Whether it's a small problem or someone in dire need, Michael will not hesitant to provide assistance. He is quite confident in himself and his abilities. He is flattered at times when someone compliments him on his technique. This shows he has some pride in his skill. He can at times, be laid-back and carefree. He will often enjoy the best of life whether by himself or with friends and family. Michael looks on the bright side of situations, never losing hope and always keeps going. This perseverance can also rub off on others to help strengthen their confidence. He is protective of his friends and family, often standing up for them when they are in danger or threatened. He's also protective of innocent people when they are in danger as well or are being bullied. When his friends and/or family are in danger, he'll defend them no matter what. He will even suffer injuries. No matter what happens to him, he'll make sure to protect those close to him. He will even risk his life for an innocent bystander he doesn't even know. This shows that Michael is a very selfless person, often thinking of the well-being of others instead of his. The boy also likes to get stronger. He'll train to increase his mastery and the strength of his abilities. Michael tries his best to become as strong or stronger than the other students as he is determine to become the strongest. It doesn't matter how old he is, he'll get strong. Michael is a person who chooses brute force rather than a strategy. The reason being he is not much of a strategist. This leaves him at a disadvantage when in battle of wits. He is also at odds in other situations dealing with certain trivia. Michael is not one of the smartest students and so he gets grades that are of passing rate, rarely getting "A"s. Despite not being as smart as the other students, Michael's physical skill and prowess is more than enough to make up from this weaknesses. He can also improvise when coming up with an idea of his own. Michael is a creative individual and can think of the most unexpected answers to questions at times. His creativity is effective in through off an opponent, making him unpredictable. Michael can be brave and courageous in the face of many dangers. When facing extreme odds, he will stand his ground no matter what. It doesn't matter what evil stands before him, he will not run away. He will stand and fight for his friends, family, and innocent lives. Whether it be a Kishin egg, Witch, or even a demon, Michael will face them with great courage in his heart. This bravery of his does not waver, even under the most intimidating of opponents. Instead, their presences prompts him to engage in combat. Michael can also be serious in battle or when the situation calls for it. Michael also has a love for battle, like his father and brothers. He likes to fight powerful opponents and is always up for a challenge. He will, however, not fight a girl as he believes it to be wrong. Unless the girl is evil then, Michael can fighter without holding back. When he is about to began a battle, he usually says his favorite phrase, "Time To Fight" at the start. Michael will also, smirk sometimes when he meets a powerful opponent, when the battle becomes exciting, or at the start of a battle. Michael has a hot-temper, meaning he's easily angered. He can endure insults well, but if they are about his family, friends, or skill, he'll explode. It can also be his friends acting like jerks as well as when they are fighting. If they happen to argue, Michael will get them to stop by yelling at them to stop and remind them of what's important. When angered, Michael can be aggressive and violent. He can also get a furious look in his eye. Mostly, he's aggressive with the guys, since he will never hurt a girl or woman. Michael is a chivalrous boy and treats a woman with respect. He is also loyal and would never betray a friend. His vicious temper was inherited from his father, but the man only get's aggressive with his adult friends. Michael can also be stubborn when it comes to his own opinions or doing what is right. He will do it himself, if the situation calls for it. When he has his mind set on doing the right thing, he will not take "no" for an answer. Michael's demon half has a personality is more focused and determined compared his human half. He does have similar personality traits. Like Michael, his demon half is kind and caring. He also cares for the people his human half cares for. He can be protective of others as well. Another common trait is his unwavering courage. Unlike Michael, his demon half is more serious contrast to the boys laid-back attitude, He's always focused on the attack at hand. When the task is complete, he is then able to relax. Michael's demon half is also more intelligent than him. This means he's also strategic and can think of certain tactics to defeat an opponent. Unlike Michael, his demon half is more level-headed, not losing his temper so easily. He is more calm and collected, never letting insults get to him. Abilities: Technique Name: Demon Wavelength - Rage Type Effects/Description: The Demon Wavelength is a rare and dark type of wavelength common to the Ichitsuyo family members with demon blood. The color of this wavelength is black and red. It's unique in which it doesn't emit a madness pull, like a Madness Wavelength from other individuals that harbor madness such as Kishins or Witches. The Demon Wavelength is a wavelength quite opposite to the Anti-Demon Wavelength, having dark characteristics akin to it's destructive nature. Still, it has some similarities in regards to the user's protection. Whereas the Anti-Demon Wavelength repels madness, the Demon Wavelength controls both madness and darkness. It empowers the user with these forces, enhancing their abilities and attributes. However, the Demon Wavelength only provides a resistance to insanity, but leaves the user vulnerable to rage. This means that they only have a partial resistance, considering rage also has madness in it as well, hence an Ichitsuyo family member losing their reason to anger. The amount of madness Michael can stand is 60%. This wavelength only affects the user mentally, leaving their partner safe from the mental affect. The Rage Type is very destructive against opponent while in battle. It's abilities and characteristics are based on anger. The destructive power the Rage Type has is dark and demonic. It can even give chills as if a dark presence is among others. It differs from other wavelengths being that it's not human. This wavelength comes from the part of a family member's soul that is there demon half no matter what type. Michael activates this wavelength when he awakens his demon half's power through his rage. It works as an enhancement for his body, making him faster, stronger, and more deadly. His strength reaches the point he can lift 300 pounds and the moment. His speed has risen to the point of running faster than an athlete. The current increase in power he gets allows him to hold his own against a Kishin Egg. However, he still has difficulty in the battle. This increase in power will only help him so much against a Witch. It will have more difficulty fighting them than a Kishin Egg. The power of Michael's Demon Wavelength increases as he becomes angrier. Still, he has to watch the amount of his anger as he power can rage out of control. Reaching this point, he will start losing his reason and eventually attack anything and anyone out of rage. The Demon Wavelength can also disrupt the user's own Soul Wavelength when in a struggle over their anger. While in this struggle it becomes difficult for the user to match wavelengths with their partner, since their rage throws them out of sync with them. The dark characteristics are ignored in terms of resonance as Michael's personality is dominant. It is due to the reign of his attitude that it's difficult to match wavelength with his partner when he is starting to lose his reason. This also means that the dark characteristics don't affect the weapon. The destructive potential of the Rage Type is quite astonishing. Currently, the level of power and control Michael has over the Rage type is that it increases his strength and speed to a level high enough to keep one step of a Kishin Egg and be able to avoid most attacks from a Witch. They can also increase the damage inflicted by his punches and kicks, having them deliver larger impacts. They are strong enough to break through light armor and dent heavy armor. Michael has discovered this wavelength, because his demon blood has awoken. It is due to the fact of the Demon Wavelength coming from the demon part of an Ichitsuyo Family member's soul. The demon wavelength can be exhausting after extensive use, however. Technique Name: High-Speed Healing and Regeneration Effects/Description: A passive ability for an Ichitsuyo Family member with demon blood. Since Michael is half demon, his wounds heal faster than humans. They heal so fast that others can see them closing up, like an immortal's. Steam will usually show around Michael's wounds when they are healing. His healing ability is not to be confused with a actual immortal. This ability is active in bot his human and demon form. Michael and his family are also not of the Immortal clan, meaning they're not immortals, but powerful mortals. A particular size of the wound matters. They will all heal at different amounts of time. Aside from the basic ability to heal cuts and bruises, the High-Speed Healing and Regeneration can also heal broken bones faster. This regeneration sometime contributes to the healing of deeper cuts or gashes. Despite this miraculous ability to heal one's self, it does not replenish expended energy. This means, Michael has to regain his strength by normal means of rest. This also means that it won't guarantee he will continue his current battle with an opponent or that will be able to execute attacks. Depending on the size of injury, it takes certain amounts of time for his wounds to heal. For small wounds such as cuts, stabs, and bruises, it takes 4 posts. Multiple wounds of this kind will take longer to heal, up to a maximum of 6 posts. For larger wounds such as deeper cuts, larger bruises, broken bones, and harsh burns it takes 8 post. It would take much longer to heal multiple wounds of these kind. It will take up to 10 posts. The time it takes for a large wound is basically twice as long for Michael. There is also has a weak spot for his regenerative abilities, his heart and brain. If one of this spots are damaged beyond repair, then he really will die without personal aid. Technique Name: Demon Half Transformation Effects/Description: Through his training with his demon blood since the age of 11, Michael has tapped into the ability to transform into his demon half. This rise in power combined with his Demon Wavelength makes him a deadly force. However, so far Michael has only reach the stage of the transformation where his eye and teeth change. In this state, he is exceptionally fast and incredibly strong. He can lift 300 pounds and run faster than an athlete. One punch can crack rock as hard as stone. He can hold his own against a Kishin egg, but still have difficulty. He will also has more difficulty fighting a Witch, even with his extra boost in power. While fighting with a weapon partner, he still has trouble fighting a Witch, but has a lower possibility of getting serious injuries. When fighting a Kishin egg with a partner, he still has trouble at times and can get hurt. However, the increase in speed and strength gives him a slight advantage as he can evade the Kishin egg's attacks and deliver damage slightly more potent than regular blows. As powerful as he his when in this state, there is a danger for exceeding his current stage. If he were to change any further, he would risk losing his mind and becoming a raging beast, destroying everyone and everything in sight. He needs more training with his demon blood to change further into his full demon form. While Michael is in control of his demon half's power, the resonance with him and his weapon is stable with no problems. His wavelength remains the same, but much stronger. However, if he loses control of his anger along with his power, his wavelength could fluctuate and result in higher difficulty for the weapon to keep their wavelengths matched. His rage changes his wavelength to a different one quite foreign to his partner to resonate with. There are limits to Michael demonic transformation. Currently, he can only stay in this state for a total of 5 posts. After that time has been reach, he will automatically revert back to his human form. To transform again, he would have to wait a good 6 posts to change again. As mention before with the tiring effect on his Demon Wavelength, Michael will have to wait a certain amount of time to recuperate his strength. This will take 2 post to get in normal condition again. During that time, Michael will be exhaust and have difficulty dodging even a Kishin Egg's attacks. Combat Style: Michael's fighting style involves fighting at a close range. When fighting unarmed, he uses an array of punches and kicks. When fighting with a weapon, he combines punches and kicks along with their strikes, but mostly it involves strikes from his weapon. Due to the training his had taken from his father, Michael has above average strength, allowing him to deliver more damage than a regular punch and kick. He's also durable, making him more resistant to blunt damage than regular meisters. Michael can be evasive as well to an enemy attacks. However, he's not so fast that he can dodge attacks moving at high speeds. Michael exact strength is that he can lift a total of 130 pounds. This makes his quite strong for a boy his age. His speed is adequate, being near the level of an athletic runner, but still not high enough to dodge high-speed attack, such as bullets made of Soul Wavelength. Michael is not much of a strategist as he mostly uses brute force in battle. Since he's a powerful attacker, he sometimes tries to overwhelm his enemies. He often rushes head-on into a fight against an opponent, hardly thinking of what strategy to take. He will then, engage in close-quarters combat. He mostly goes with the flow of the situation. Michael is a creative individual and his creativity provides much of an advantage. Despite not being so tactical, he can come up with interesting and unexpected ideas to turn the tide of battle in his favor. When in the middle of a battle, Michael remains focused and alert to his opponent. He is ready for any attack they decided to execute. Michael is mostly the one to begin the battle with the first strike. However, if his enemy would like to start first, he will oblige. He basically rushes at the opponent and prepares to land a blow. If the attack fails to make contact or is blocked, he retaliates with a second hit. While on the offensive, Michael goes with his instinct and delivers blows as well as countering his opponent. When on the defensive, basically guarding against an enemy's attack. Michael will either try to guard or evade the attack. When guarding, he uses his body when unarmed or his weapon when partnered. If the attack is to much for his weapon, he'll take the blow instead. Michael also will take any blow to defend his friend, even if it does leave him close to death. Being skilled in hand-to-hand combat, Michael can easily beat a thug to a pulp. He fairs well against a gang too, being able to knock them all out in record time. For powerful and/or inhuman opponent, it's a real challenge for him to defeat. Against a Kishin egg, he is still able to fend for himself, but needs a weapon to deliver a killing blow. Fighting a witch is more difficult. They are experienced magic users as well as being the 100th soul to collect. Michael, obviously, will not far well against theses opponents. Michael's demon half fights more seriously. When training with Michael in his soul world, he remains alert for any attack his human half might launch. It's similar to how Michael fights, even rushing head first into a battle, but he attacks more aggressively. Being his demon half, it's natural for him to use excessive force. When on the defensive, he either defends or dodges an opponents attack. Miscellaneous Information: Fears: Losing Those Close to Him - Michael fears losing the people close to him Strengths:
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Roleplay Sample: Within the class of Crescent Moon, students sat in their seats quietly as the teacher took attendance. He was carefully going through the names of the students present within the classroom. He is trying to be sure not to miss one. In one of the seats that laid at the back of the class, Michael Ichitsuyo sat peacefully. He was leaning back on the front of another desk behind him, which served as a wall. Both his hands rested behind his head and his feet remained on the floor as he looked up towards the room's ceiling. It was an easy case to tell that Michael was bored. 'Man, when is this class gonna start and end already, I'm so bored.' He thought as his gaze changed to the front of the classroom. It was focused on the teacher as he was going through the students' names. He was wondering when he will find a weapon to wield. After all, a Meister can't put up much of a fight without their weapon partner, but Michael can handle himself well. Even without a weapon, he is still a formidable foe to fight against. Despite this certain strength, the boy still aspires to make a Death Scythe. Another thought relating to his future partner suddenly came to him. 'Hmm, I wonder if my weapon will be a boy or girl.' He thought. It really doesn't matter that much to him on his partners gender, but thinks it would be interesting to have a girl as his partner. Having a guy as his weapon is approving as well. He really doesn't mind all that much. He did wonder, if they would end up being good friends. He also wondered, if he weapon would considered him a great master. If that was the case, he would consider his weapon a great pupil. He thoughts were diverted as the teacher announced the starting of class. Michael leaned up straight and laid both his hands from behind his head on the desk. He was hoping the class would start sooner or later. 'Ah finally, class is starting. So, what are we gonna learn today' He thought, listening on the teacher's explanation on what Kishin eggs are. Edited by mjt016, Feb 7 2014, 01:57 AM.
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| GameMasterZX | Feb 7 2014, 12:55 AM Post #11 | ||
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Demon Wavelength - Rage Type Where you mention that he has partial resistance to insanity, could you give an estimate of how strong that resistance is? Does he resist 50% of an insanity wavelength aimed at him? 35%? 60%? 3.1415%? You mention that there are "bloodlust distortions" in Mike's wavelength while he is using his demon wavelength, and that they have "safe side effects" on those of the Ichitsuyo bloodline. What exactly are these safe side effects? Also, you mention that these distortions can prove deadly to those not from the Ichitsuyo family. Wouldn't this mean that if Mike attempts to wield a demon weapon while using his demon wavelength, that weapon is actually at risk of death? About how long would an individual have to be exposed to this wavelength for it to prove fatal? Given all the aforementioned concerns about Mike wielding a demon weapon while using his demon form, I'm having trouble seeing the justification for his demon form empowering his partner. Both in terms of the obviously destructive nature of Mike's demon wavelength and in terms of general balancing and fairness concerns, it seems like Mike would damage or weaken his partner, rather than empowering them. Demon Half Transformation You mention here that Mike's demon form currently only changes his eyes and teeth. Given this, could you remove the wings, horns, and tail mentioned in his appearance section for now? You can add them back in later once he gains the ability to manifest those through future training threads, but for now I'm concerned that leaving them in there could cause confusion and lead to people thinking he has wings and such when he actually doesn't. ^^; Also in the first paragraph, you mention that his strength can increase further the angrier he gets. I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask that you remove this. There has to be a clear, upper limit on the boost to his strength he can receive. I can't approve of an ability that could effectively give him infinite strength bonuses. As I mentioned above, I don't believe it's very logical or fair that Mike's demon wavelength can be both a powerfully destructive force of madness as well as empowering his weapon partner. Mike himself is already granted a significant boost to his strength and speed while in demon form, and further augmenting this by empowering his weapon partner as well is simply too much for a starting level character to be able to do. Keep in mind, new abilities can always be added later through training threads, so even if you have to remove some of Mike's powers now, you can always have him train to learn them later. Lastly, the time limit of five posts is good, but I'd just like to clarify that this is a limit of five posts per thread, correct? Meaning, after he used up his five posts and reverted to human form, he would not then be able to use five more posts later in the thread. Also, you mention in his demon wavelength ability that his wavelength has a tiring affect on him when used extensively. Could you give some kind of estimate of how tired Mike would be after exhausting his five posts and reverting to human form? Could he still fight or would he just pass out immediately? If he can still fight, how effective would he be? Lastly, I'm perfectly happy with the indicated increases to Mike's strength and speed. I have a much clearer idea of how strong and fast he is while in demon form. But I would like some idea how strong and fast he is when in normal human form, just so we know what he can do while not using his demon wavelength. Overall I think we're nearly there, mjt. Thank you for your patience through this whole process. We just need to do some final balancing to make sure that Mike's power level is fair compared to the levels of other starting characters. As he stands right now, Mike could easily take on characters with half a dozen training threads under their belt, and it's a bit unreasonable for a brand new character to start out as strong as someone who's been on numerous missions and gone through lots of hard work and training, don't you agree? ^^ |
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| mjt016 | Feb 9 2014, 03:01 AM Post #12 | ||
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Thank you for your patience through this whole process mjt, and congratulations. This character is now APPROVE. However just be aware that if he is determined to be too OP during the RP, we will have to take him back in for remodding. | ||
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