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| FenDier | Feb 8 2014, 08:10 PM Post #1 |
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”Are you my nightmare? Or am I yours?” Character Name: Auger (sometimes “Decker”) Age: Constructed one year ago Gender: Male Type: Sentient Golem Partnered: No Clothing and description: While Auger stands roughly 8 1/2 feet tall, and 7 while relaxed, he's unusually light and humanoid for a Golem. He is built almost entirely from common sandstone, supplemented with worn and splintered wood at the joints. The fine detail and technical craftsmanship that was so evident when Auger was given life, have since faded. Without a skilled hand to repair him, wear and tear has taken it's toll. This is partially due to his relatively slight frame - much akin to an average human - as opposed to the bulky, sturdier frames of the more common golems. He does however, have the classic Emeth symbol, engraved into a seal between where his shoulder blades might sit, were he a human. Auger's most distinct feature is a lack thereof: his elongated head is completely bare, lacking any normal structures. His faceless visage has evokes both terror and pity, but it does not once betray the feelings of the construct that wears it. To consume souls, Auger retracts the interlocking plates that comprise the front of his chest, creating an opening to the void space that occupies his center mass. Auger can put the souls within himself, where they are absorbed before the plates return and lock together, after which the souls may not be retrieved. If Auger himself is viewed through any form of Soul Perception, his fractured soul appears as though it was viewed through substantial interference. This is not actual interference with the viewing of a soul, but rather a visual representation of his broken soul. His voice is stolen - once Decklan's, then Decker's - and like his soul, is just a shadow of it's former owner: Sample History Personality: Having been infused with only a portion of a soul (albeit a strong one), Auger has very mixed traits. His vocabulary and grammar are taken from his learned technician, yet his affect is flat and relatively emotionless. Despite sounding experienced, Auger does not know much, for his time sentient is still very little. His movements are methodical, thought out, and rarely rushed. He was accustomed to having working in tandem with another, so much of Auger's actions are still uncertain – like a large, aggressive newborn. With sentience being a new experience, Auger is fascinated by learning new things, although you wouldn't be able to tell from his lack of affect. Emotion and feeling are still new concepts to Auger. He inherited fragments from Decklan – a flash of rage, a prick of sadness, the electricity of joy – but they are just that, fragments. They have the capacity to blossom into full emotions, but only time will make that possible. Additionally, without any preconceptions about witches, Kishin eggs and Shibusen, he does not have any inherent feelings about them. He is likely to form his opinions in the moment, as he meets and interacts with them for the first times. Auger is constantly driven to fill the void that was once occupied by Decklan's fiery, twisted soul. Now that he is an individual, he has no desire to be worn by anyone else, as he is enjoying his newfound freedom. However, the consumption of another being's soul adds to his own individualism. It strengthens the fragmented soul within him, and perpetuates the madness that animated him. Auger knows he cannot continue to exist without souls, and his dubious/non-existant moral compass makes acquiring them a simple process. Abilities:
Combat Style: Auger favors an aggressive and methodical approach in combat, relying on his sturdy frame to sustain hits, and his incredible strength to kill his opponent. The knowledge of combat that he has was gained from his creator, who also favored a single well-placed blow as opposed to many weak strikes. Despite relatively little combat experience, Auger is a formidable opponent due to his inhuman strength and durable exterior. He is more than able to dispatch thugs, and at the very least, able to hold his own against trained fighters. Auger's demeanor can be disarming, as he has no qualms about ruthlessly tearing an opponent limb from limb. He does not understand concepts such as honor or mercy. In a sustained fight, Auger will attempt to use his advantages as a golem to win out in the long run. Without getting tired, Auger can wear an opponent down until they are fatigued enough to finish off. Aside from lost limbs, he can continue to function at relative full capacity until he is put out of commission. Miscellaneous Information:
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Roleplay Sample: http://s1.zetaboards.com/42_42_564/topic/4561019/1/ and http://s1.zetaboards.com/42_42_564/topic/4809901/1/ Edited by FenDier, Feb 17 2014, 06:34 AM.
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![]() Auger - Kishin Egg - Color Code #9900CC Fenris Dierdred - Half-blood Werewolf - Color Code #751975 Vox - Kishin Egg - Color Code #008900 I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain. | |
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| Tatsuken | Feb 15 2014, 05:23 PM Post #2 |
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Ok Fen, Tats is trying to get back into modding properly, so don't mind fact that this is the first proper character request I have modded since getting sick. Hopefully I won't make anymore mistakes or at least keep them to a minimum. I have decided to start with some hopefully simple mods. Clothing and Description: This is a minor thing and not directly related to improving the character portion of the profile, but rather the writing. In the first sentence you mention he is rather small and then list him at 7-8.5 feet tall. This is actually a common height for golems and there are even smaller golems in canon, Soul and Maka see a group of small golems sitting around when walking through Leow. However, from what I've been told about Auger I assume you're talking about the fact that he is more humanoid rather than bulky. I think mentioning this fact when you say that he is small for a golem will help more than the height you gave. If he is meant to be worn similarly to a suit of armor, why does he have wooden joints? Another thing to consider, if viewed with a sight based soul perception, what would the soul in Auger look like? Especially since it's fragmented. History: Since Auger and Decklan basically fuse into one character, may I ask that you talk about Decklan's history before creating Auger? I am generally curious about how Decklan was raised, what his family was like, and his education. I understand that the character profile is about Auger so we don't need a full proper history for Decklan. The thing I am most interested in, thus prompting this request, is why he uses sandstone and wood for golems (maybe a bit on how he uses it and how he learned to use it)? Personality: Seems pretty good so far to me, i just don't understand what you mean by "yet his affect is nearly nonexistent." I'm going to stop here. This is partly because I fell asleep and need to regather thoughts on the combat/mission section of the profile. But, it's also pretty much the entirety of the character oriented side of the profile so I figured this would be a good place to stop. |
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| FenDier | Feb 16 2014, 12:43 AM Post #3 |
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Hey Tats, thanks for the mod, I'm glad you're feeling better. Here's a list of my changes and rationale's - I edited the description to include his relatively humanoid and light frame compared to other golems, rather than just referring to height. - Added a bit about how he'd look through soul perception. - The wooden joints were an effort to allow full range of motion while also protecting and supporting the tech inside, so I added that under History. - Added a good amount more about Decklan, and even more about why Auger is constructed the way he is. Let me know if you'd like me to elaborate on that further. - When I was talking about his affect, I was referring to the noun definition that means emotions. I tweaked it a bit to avoid confusion, in any case. Let me know if you have anything else you'd like me to edit, thanks! |
![]() Auger - Kishin Egg - Color Code #9900CC Fenris Dierdred - Half-blood Werewolf - Color Code #751975 Vox - Kishin Egg - Color Code #008900 I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain. | |
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| Tatsuken | Feb 16 2014, 07:25 PM Post #4 |
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I don't see too many problems left. Personality: This is more due to my curiosity, but what is Auger's opinion of Shibusen and of witches? History: There is a strange use of the enter key in the second, i think, sentence of backlash (after immediately). Combat Style: I would like to have a gauge of how strong Auger is in a fight so how easily could he beat a thug? or a group of people? how well could he deal with the average meister-weapon pair or another kishin egg? |
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Den Ekigane Color Code: #666 || Demon Liquid Metal Weapon Sigil Nathaniel Color Code: bgcolor=white color=#006 || Two-Star Meister, Werewolf, and Blacksmith || Remaining Lifespan: 476 Charm Lyn Color Code: #F93 || Weretiger Meister || Remaining Lifespan: 484 badges
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| FenDier | Feb 17 2014, 06:37 AM Post #5 |
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Glad to hear it! Here's what I changed: - I realized that, while I had it in my headcanon, I neglected to mention that he does not have any predispositions of witches, kishin eggs, or shibusen. I added a sentence that say just that. It was my goal to have a character that has a 'blank slate' of experience, so to speak, so that while he's driven by his own motives, he's not particularly influenced by any outside forces or concepts. Yet, at least. - Fixed the strange use of the enter key, not sure how that happened. - Added a bit in Combat Style about his ability to deal with your common thug, or a trained fighter. As I see it now, a thug really has no way to significantly hurt Auger, while a trained fighter could both do good damage and also elude his attacks, especially in his current, weakened state. Cheers! |
![]() Auger - Kishin Egg - Color Code #9900CC Fenris Dierdred - Half-blood Werewolf - Color Code #751975 Vox - Kishin Egg - Color Code #008900 I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain. | |
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| Tatsuken | Feb 17 2014, 04:34 PM Post #6 |
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APPROVED |
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Den Ekigane Color Code: #666 || Demon Liquid Metal Weapon Sigil Nathaniel Color Code: bgcolor=white color=#006 || Two-Star Meister, Werewolf, and Blacksmith || Remaining Lifespan: 476 Charm Lyn Color Code: #F93 || Weretiger Meister || Remaining Lifespan: 484 badges
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