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| Gabriel.A | Feb 16 2015, 04:42 AM Post #1 |
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Character Name: Arzel Zuku Age: 16 Gender: Male Type: Kishin Demon Weapon Partnered? No Image: Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Clothing and description: Wears a tan button-down shirt, a vest that has a hoody connected to it over his shirt, black jeans, and brownish tan sandals. Arz has blonde hair, is well built but, not cocky, by which I mean when it comes to being fit he would be somewhat similar in leg build to a kick boxer and in upper body strength similar to a boxer. When it comes to height Arz is slightly taller than most teens but, is still pretty average. He is approximately 6'1. His most distinguishable feature are his eyes. They shine a fiery amber color that slightly gleams a gold color when it is bright. History: As a child at the age of five Arz was pretty happy, well until the incident. He mostly spent the rest of his childhood living with his uncle and his baby sister but, this wasn't always the case. It used to be his mother, father, and his 2 year old baby sister he lived with. His parents and most of his family died after having a family reunion type gathering at the elder of the family's house out in the countryside. It was a pretty regular day when his parents had received a letter from Arz's great grandfather about having a reunion, since it had been quite some years since the whole family had been together. Arz's parents were jubilant about the family getting together and packed up some things for the trip right away and began driving to the elder's house. It was hours before Arz's parents arrived to the elder's house via car ride. During the visit the whole family was there. Nothing special exactly happened and Arz was only 5, so he could care less about it all and just played with his other cousins that were kids. Even though he didn't care he did enjoy himself quite a bit though, which tired him out and made him fall straight to sleep. While Arz slept, the adults had got into a heated argument. "So whose next to become the heir after Elder Huymen has passed!! It sure won't be you Kizuka!! You would bring this family to ruin!" Arz's dad shouted at one of the other family members. "Ooooh, like your one to talk! You barely graduated school asshole!! All you did was let Yukimii yake care of everything!!" And so the adults went back and forth with arguements like that of "Who is more suitable to be in charge of the family" throughout the night but, there was one man who could careless about that. This man was Arz's father's brother, his uncle. His uncle hated everything about that family, he barely considered himself apart of it. So while they argued Arz's uncle decided to end it all, starting with the elder. As he got up from the table he went towards the ancestral katana of the family, something of great value and he decided to cut all ties using that very sword that represented family. While the elder sat there, unable to stop the arguing, Arz's uncle unexpectedly stabbed Elder Huymen through the back, piercing straight through his heart. The men of the family tried to stop him but, Arz's uncle was far from being a pushover and was a capable swordsmen. He cut all of the men down one by one and then went on to females, killing them all and leaving a crimson sea behind but, he wasn't through, oh he was far from through and the children were far from safe. He killed them all off, except Arz who was in his room with his baby sister sleeping. His uncle could hear the sound of snoring and went into Arz's room. He watched as Arz and his sister innocently slept. As he raised the katana up high, preparing to end it all, he couldn't bring himself to do it. He couldn't take it, too much "blood" had been loss. He couldn't take another family member's life, especially a child and a baby. His uncle quickly hid the katana and shook Arz awake, telling him a lie about how a stranger had got in and killed the whole family. His uncle took the two and left, after burning the household down to ashes. Months pass by as Arz grows accustomed to living with his uncle and baby sister who just turned 3 years old, in his uncle's apartment. After the incident Arz wasn't the same child anymore. His attitude towards life at such a young age had turned more towards the darker side if things. At such a young age, after witnessing seeing corpses of almost his whole family, his mind matured quite dramatically. He already had begun understanding the concept "all good things, not must but, will come to an end". So it wasn't a surprise when he had a mental breakdown and found out he could morph into "Headphones". A demon weapon. He decided to hide this fact from his uncle, seeing as how he had just been through a mental breakdown. That wasn't the end of Arz's troubles though. One day he started questioning his uncke about the death of the whole family. He found it strange that only his uncle survived and plus the fact he had no form of injury, at all. "So....how did one did one person kill off almost the whole family uncle?" Arz had asked his uncle this question during breakfast at the family table. It was just the three of them, Arz, his sister, and his uncle. They all sat at the round table. "What do you mean Arz? I told you he caught us all off guard by sneaking in. Now can we not talk about this again and finish eating our breakfast?" His uncle said quite sternly. "Yeah, but I was wondering.....how did you make it out alive when all of the others didn't?" Arz stated quite dubious and innocently. His uncle began to become angry as he said "Arz you don't know what the hell your talking about. Ear your food. Now." Arz smiles quite twistedly and says "Unless........it was you. You never do give precise details on "how" you escaped or "how" the killer looked and whenever I bring up mother and father you always have this funny "look" in your eyes uncle. A look of sorrow, hate, regret-" just then Arz's uncle cuts him off with a loud outburst stating "WILL YA SHUT UP AND EAT, DAMMIT!!" Arz then looks his uncle in the eyes coldly and calmly and says "No.....killer." As Arz states that line his uncle flips and begins shouting "YEAH, I KILLED EM!! AND I WOULDA OR SHOULDA KILLED YOU TOO, YA LITTLE BASTARD!!" He then lunges at Arz with a knife. Arz reacts by transforming his palm into something similar to the hole in headphone buds and shoots a powerful soundwave (this is what his weapon mode used to be like before he became a kishin) through his uncle's chest, severly injuring him by leaving a huge hole in his chest. As his uncle hits the floor gripping his wound he wriggles around trying to get rid of the pain and move towards Arz at the same time. Arz simply gets up and takes the knife out of his uncle's hands and puts the knife under his baby sister's throat stating "Uncle...you tried to kill off the whole family......and failed but, I won't." He then slashes his sister's throat. Blood paints everything and his baby sister's corpse hits the ground he smiles twistedly and watches as pure, innocent soul emerges. He then becomes entranced by the sight of it. His eyes are mesmerized by it. He begins walking towards it as if he were in a trance. As he puts his hands under the soul, he grasps it and shoves it down his throat. As he does this a black aura shoots out his mouth and begins to surround him, transforming him into a kishin. He glares insanely at his uncle and states "All good things Will come to an end." He then crouches down and sits on his feet, as he watches his uncle bleed out. After watching his uncle squirm around trying to reach out to something to survive and then dying, Arz set the apartment on fire, just as his uncle did to elder Huymen's home. Arz then decided to go wonder the world, in search of souls. Arz was now free from any and all ties. As a result of killing his last two remaining family members, that he knows of, he left his uncle's apartment and began wondering the streets and would often get into fights on purpose. Knowing he would be more powerful than the average kid with his newfound abilities he would often use that as an advantage in a fight. He wasn't interested in any of the souls of the kids he cane across because, he found eating there wasn't as satisfying as eating pure souls but, one day he picked the wrong fight and that fight was with another demon weapon. It was through this fight that he learned to use his ability "Mad Wave" and as a result because, of that ability he won the fight. It was through more fights with tougher opponents like this one he learned he coupd buff himself using his "Partial Weapon Mode". As the years went by Arz became nothing but, a wonderer. He would go from city to city eating souls. After that event with his uncle and sister, it started Arz down a dark path. Arz went on to commit many more crimes and consume many more souls. For power? Fear? No, maybe its that same believe that "all good things will come to an end" that drives him. Personality: Arz is basically emotionless, except when he is being sadistic, manipulative, and evil. In those cases he might show some signs of joy, in his own twisted sick way. He loves messing with people's head and loves other's madness. He doesn't care about anything such as race or DWMA in particular. He sees it all equally as something he can either consume, corrupt, or kill. He is very intelligent and can care less about morals. He does what he does because, he can and chooses to. He might become angry if he sees something that is considered "Good" that hasn't come to an end yet. Arz might to talk down or act above people he thinks are pretty simpke-minded or thwt might try to reason with him with something that he sees a lot of flaws in, like "morals". Other than that Arz will probably observe someone silently or he might act snarky. He usually manipulates simple minded people using his point of view and by making them see from his point if view, while being snarky. In battle he uses this same intellect and cunning to deal with opponents stronger than him. For someone weaker he will just try to get rid of them using what he sees fit or appropriate for that opponent. Abilities: Technique Name: Partial Weapon mode Effects/Description: Arz transforms his palms into headphone speakers or holes and can boost his own fighting abilities (speed and strength). His palms will also send out waves of madness, which is what amplifies his strength. The madness can also increase weak-willed people's madness, boost other kishin's strength, and will be less effective against strong-willed people but, he used to be able to shoot normal soundwaves. He can only shoot normal soundwaves when he is mentally stable but, as a result of him becoming a kishin egg he loss the ability to use the normal function of his "Partial Weapon Mode" which is powerful soundwaves. · In his Partial Weapon Mode his boost isn't as strong as the boost the wearer would get in his full weapon mode. The boost he and other kishin would get, would mist likely give them above average speed and strength, nothing like super strength or super speed, it would just be heightened and above average and if it is already above-average it just makes it one step higher to advanced speed and strength. · What his madness wave would do to weak-willed people is most likely make them very paranoid but, nothing as serious as flat-out insanity. It just make their focus and other senses thrown off ( something like being drunk but, instead hype and fearful, instead of slow. And unable to focus properly, short attention span, not thinking straight) The madness Arz gives off in this state is passive, he can't control it. Technique Name: Weapon Mode Effects/Description: (Picture is under his image)Arz transforms into headphones during his weapon mode. While in weapon mode Arz will constantly be giving off madness through speakers in the headphone's buds. This will affect certain people in certain ways. Anyone who doesn't feed off or enjoy madness will feel the madness right away because, Arz is shooting madness straight into their head affecting their mental state. If the person who wears Arz in this state does enjoy or feed off madness then they will get a boost in their speed, strength, and their ability to focus, oddly enough. The original way Arz's weapon mode would have affected anybody who wore him would have been, Arz plays music that goes with that person's soul (basically allowing him to synch with any meister) and boosts the wearer's strength, speed, and focus but, if it was someone who Arz wouldn't want to synch with then it would just be an earsplitting screech they would hear, decreasing their strength or it would just be pure silence giving them no boost. It would have also allowed the wearer to block out madness but, since he became a kishin egg be loss the ability to use the original function of his weapon mode. · The boost in this form would make someone who is unathletic have speed and strength on par with an intermediate martial artist. So if someone with skill wore him, they would be quite powerful from the direct madness they would be receiving, that is if they fit the requirements to wear Arz. Their strength, speed, and focus would be heightened above those who are already above-average. · Other forms of defense Arz has to keep unwanted wearers from wearing him is sending disruptive madness soundwaves directly to that person's skull, which will make their soul unstable causing them to be extremely paranoid and delusional. Technique Name: Mad-Wave Effects/Description: Arz can attack people with " physical madness (in the form of a black soundwave)" this type of madness doesn't affect anybody's mental state and are just black waves of energy Arz can send out by slashing the air with his hand. This attack doesn't do any severe damage but, can still injure opponents. It is less effective against people who have more tolerance for madness and is more effective against weak-willed people, dealing slightly more damage than normal, and it doesn't affect other Kishin. This move has a long range and can hit opponents from 5 - 6 yards away at maximum range. · The damage this move does is Impact damage and pierce damage. Arz can use the impact damage freely at will. For piercing damage he needs to charge it up for 1-5 posts. 1-3 posts is small to moderate damage, that would range from a medium sized cuts to small dents in armor like material or substances and 4-5 is serious damage, such as a gash but, if the opponent was wearing or had on sone type of armor like material it would pierce it but, consequently deal the same amount of damage as a "3" charge mad-wave attack , if Arz charges past 5 then the mad-wave he was charging dissipates. Arz can use a small amount of pierce damaging madness waves freely but, it won't do as much damage and will deal moderate damage at point-blank. Combat Style: Arz doesn't have any formal training yet and is a graceful street-brawler. He likes to target his opponents weak spots and if he can't do that then he will just try and beat them into submission some way. His strength and power as of right now is on par with a Kishin egg. When outnumbered Arz will approach the situation a certain way depending on who hevis fighting and their strength. ·If the group is made of people far weaker than himself, he will most likely take them on and attack with close combat and madness attacks. ·If it is a group of kishin and he doesn't have the advantage he will be very evasive when fifhting them. ·If the group is overall stronger than him ( and doesn't contain kishin) he will fight using long-range and madness attacks. ·If it is a group made up of people on par with himself, he will just try to pick them off with long-range attacks and then defeat the last opponent standing with whatever he deems fit as suitable to taking that opponent out. Miscellaneous info: Arz's aura can give off black gunky madness, his soul looks like a blackish-wine red sphere with an insane twisted smile that is nearly connecting on the opposite side of where the smile begins and to top it off, his soul also wears headphones. (I'm just stating the requirements for a partner, if he ever did decide to partner up)If Arz ever had a meister or a partner, they would have to have a high tolerance for madness or enjoy madness, seeing as how in his weapon form he would be playing madness in his meister's ears. Strengths:
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Roleplay Sample: Arz had searched all night for souls to eat. It had been a while since he had eaten some. His favorite part of getting souls was watching it exit a cold, lifeless body. As he scoured the streets, he looked and searched for something that would satisfy his sick sadistic need. He decided to stop his search snd just let his meal come to him. As he waited near the entrance of an alleyway, he stared at the moon, which reflected the coldness in his pupils that night. He just stared and wondered "When will it come to sn end?" Arz was referring to the world. Surely he stuck to his one true belief that "all good things will come to an end" but, he wondered why was the world still here. Was it a good place that has yet to come to an end or a bad place that wasn't coming to an end? Pondering this made Arz even hungrier, that's when heard the cries of a baby. These cries reminded him so much of his first meal. He now hungered for something nostalgic. As he followed the cry it leas him to an orphanage. The baby was on the doorstep of this orphanage with no one in sight. Arz leaned over the crying baby and raised his foot above his head and smile twistedly as he said "Let me put you........at ease." And with a swift stomp, he did as he said and ended it's painful crying. Arz then watched as a soul floated above the body. With a calm reach forward he grabbed and ate the soul. He then entered the orphanage and said "......Let the feast begin." Edited by Gabriel.A, Mar 1 2015, 09:49 PM.
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| Tatsuken | Feb 17 2015, 01:45 AM Post #2 |
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Hello, I'm Tatsuken and I shall be modding your character. So let's start with the clothing and description section: Please put a proper measurement on Arzel’s height, I mean keep the description, that’s fine, but also include a measurement. History: How old was Arzel when he killed his sister and uncle? You mentioned his sister was a baby earlier at the party, but it’s implied a decent amount of time passed since Arz and his sister began living with their uncle, but when Arz killed his sister, she didn’t resist so I’m wondering how old she was. What has he done since then (for example there is no mention of him learning how to access his third eye, learning how to buff himself using his partial weapon form, nor is there a first use of mad wave as it is now)? Where is he now? Abilities: Impartial Weapon Mode: I don’t think you mean Impartial, I think you meant partial. Impartial just means you’re fair. If Arzel can access normal sound wave attacks that will have to be posted as another technique, though personally I like the idea that it was replaced with mad wave so maybe that ability overrode Arzel’s normal sound wave attack until he gains access to it later (although this will cost a training thread later, it’ll make it so you don’t have to change history or mad wave to make it fit). What is the range of his madness buffing waves? Kishin's eye: I feel as though you’re giving Arzel an attribute that you believe all kishins have. I don’t want to jump into the wrong conclusion. So to be sure, are you referring to Ashura’s 3 eye motif? Or are you giving Arzel his own third eye to do stuff with? I ask because you’re mentioning future abilities as if it was a canon thing. Where does this third eye appear? What are the limits of the soul perception it gives? Can he pierce soul protect? How far away can he see souls? How far away can he sense people? Does this eye give him more details than who has an innocent soul and who has a kishin egg soul? What do these souls look like to him (does it give him the standard view of a soul like Maka? Or is it unusual)? You should move the details about the third eye in misc into the ability. Mad Wave: What kind of range does mad wave have? Combat style: you mentioned in weaknesses that Arz isn’t on par with kishin eggs, but you mention here that he is on par with a kishin egg. I’d also like to ask what he does when outnumbered. Miscellaneous information: I’d like to know if you’re just future proofing or not in this section when you talk about partnering. I ask this since Arz doesn’t have a full weapon form listed in his abilities. I don’t know for sure if you’ve seen our Rules and Guidelines page, but I suggest reading it again, there is some helpful stuff in there. |
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| Gabriel.A | Feb 17 2015, 08:50 PM Post #3 |
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| Tatsuken | Feb 19 2015, 10:48 PM Post #4 |
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This will be a quick mod, so just saying things that I noticed right away. I see the third eye was taken out from abilities, but it's still mentioned in the misc info. I think you should look for a different weakness instead of trust, since he is a kishin egg and being able to trust a kishin egg isn't a normal thing. I think you'll find something useful in the rules and guidelines thread, specifically in the In character section. |
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| Gabriel.A | Feb 21 2015, 08:20 AM Post #5 |
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I think he's completely fixed now XD |
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| Tatsuken | Feb 23 2015, 10:00 PM Post #6 |
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Not being able to defend yourself in weapon form is an inherent weakness of weapon form and thus won't be counted, especially since you could just transform back into human form if you really needed to fight yourself. If you really wanted it to be a weakness, you probably could be more like, Arz doesn't have the same near invincibility other demon weapons have in their weapon form, but remember any damage suffered by the weapon form translates to damage to the person (if i recall correctly, Soul even bled when Crona cut through his weapon form). You mentioned that Arzel is well built, well what kind of build does he have? for example a well built runner will be built differently than a well built boxer. And then even among athletes in the same sport there are different kinds of builds. There could be a boxer who's built smaller so as to get a bunch of fast punches in, then there ones who built more muscle to deal powerful, albeit slower, punches. You may compare him to a type of athlete/stereotype (sumo wrestler, tennis player, body builder, sprinter, etc to name a few examples) and I'll be fine with leaving it at that, though I'd like to know if there was some sort of emphasis (which can be done by itself as well) with how his body is built. |
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| Tatsuken | Feb 24 2015, 05:04 AM Post #7 |
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I apologize for adding more, but I've given it a little more thought and a closer look, I've also managed to get some help. For this first part, we'll be defining your abilities so as to prevent god modding. Now I'm not accusing you of anything, just due to the nature of RP some people might blow abilities out of proportion when reacting to them, even if you have defined what your ability can and can't do. For example, my character Sigil, besides being a werewolf and a meister, he is also a blacksmith and has the ability to forge fragments of his soul into his weapons, but he is then forced to carry these weapons with him at all times because they are a part of him. However, in a mission soon after he developed these abilities, some one decided that the weapon Sigil gave them had one of these fragments and used it as a booster to their abilities. Right there is some conflict, Sigil wouldn't lend someone one of his soul infused weapons. Although I admit that it doesn't always help, I think it prevents most people from doing more crazier things. Some of the following questions don't necessarily need to be answered in the profile, for example if i say "just to clarify" I probably would like an answer in your post when you let us know you're done. Partial weapon mode: These madness waves, how much stronger does he and other kishin eggs become (examples are probably most useful here)? What kinds of things can this madness prompt weak willed characters to do (like do nice people just suddenly become rude, or would it be more like a person becoming paranoid? please use an average person as the base)? How far do these madness waves reach? I'm assuming that this is a passive effect while Arz is in partial weapon mode (as in he has no control over it and just happens while in this form), if this isn't the case what kind of control over the madness wave does Arz have? Weapon mode: The questions here are essentially the same as above, although at this point I'm assuming the power is more potent since he not only is using a full transformation, but it is also focused on one person. So how much stronger would a person who utilizes madness get (again examples are good here)? Just to clarify, if a normal person wore the head phones, they just straight up go mad right? It sounds like Arz has some control over this form's madness/sound waves, is there anything else he can do besides make earsplitting screeches when worn by someone he doesn't want to wear him? Mad-Wave: I would like a baseline for the damage dealt, use an average person and describe the kind of damage he/she might suffer (like does it scratch them up? cut them? pierce them? burn, shock, or maybe freeze them? or is it impact damage?). What is the maximum range of this ability? Since this ability seems like it has to be activated, is there any drawback (such as a need to charge up energy, a cool down before it can be used again, or maybe there's a some other condition)? or can he do this freely? We're moving onto the next part, his personality. This is something I personally have trouble with so it took a while and some advice to get to it. You covered most of the bases I've asked for, but it doesn't feel quite right. Is there no way for him to get angry? How does he interact with people? What kind of tactics does he use to manipulate others? Like does he depend heavily on his madness waves from his weapon modes, or does he use his own intellect and cunning? We'd also like for you to break up the history section a little more. It makes the history section a little easier to read. |
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| Gabriel.A | Feb 28 2015, 05:29 PM Post #8 |
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| Tatsuken | Mar 1 2015, 09:52 PM Post #9 |
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Alright, this profile is APPROVED. Because this is your first character, I must let you know that if your character turns out to be unintentionally more powerful than expected then the mods have the right to recall your character for remodding. |
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