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| Eve/Eva (The Innocent Kishin); Two Souls One Body | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 27 2013, 11:23 PM (266 Views) | |
| Arisa | Mar 27 2013, 11:23 PM Post #1 |
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Character Name: Eve(Left Eye Patch) Eva(Right Eye Patch) Age: 18 Gender: Female Type: Kishin but not a Kishin Partnered? N/A Image: Eve and Eva Clothing and description: Eve and Eva's appearance have very little differences as they inhabit the same body. They both wear a high slit red Chinese styled dress with flames embroidered into the dress. Down the center of the dress, front and back are diamond slits that go down to her belly button on the front. It rimmed with golden edges. The chest is actually made of hardened leather to protect against attacks aimed at her chest. They also wears a white light jacket. They stand at 5'8, and have a decently toned body but still retain their feminine charm and curves. Her breasts aren't all that big but they aren't small either and the outfits she tends to wear seem to bring attention on them as the clothing around them are very tight. While she is Eve, she has bluish purple long hair, that is straight and its very tidy. She has a white eye patch that covers her left eye, and her right eye is a dark purple. Her soul is normal sized and blue, but around her eye patch murky black flames seem to lick out from beneath it. While she is Eva, she also has bluish purple long hair, but its very unkempt and sticks out all over the place, also her hair curls in the front for the appearance of a pair of horns. Her eye patch is moved to cover her right eye, revealing that her left eye. Its also a dark purple but is surrounded by murky blackness and has a diamond like slit down the center that is also black. Also around her eye her skin is stained slightly black as if the murky blackness in her eyes seeped out. Her soul is five times bigger than your average human soul, and has the appearance of murky black flames that just seem to lick up the light around it. Very faint around her eye patch a hint of blue light shines beneath the eye patch trying to shine through the darkness. History: The Circumstances surrounding their birth was indeed strange. Eve and Eva were suppose to be born twin sisters, but in the womb of their witch mother, for some reason the dominate soul Eva consumed Eve, but Eve didn't disappear entirely, just the physical body did. Left behind was a single child that two souls inhabited. When the child was born it would constantly fluctuate back and forth between Eve and Eva, this greatly troubled her mother. Knowing that her daughter was indeed two daughters, she decided to fix the problem, so with a little ingenuity and magic an artifact was created that could help keep the sisters in a stable state between each other. An eye patch that would seal the soul of one sister into a eye while the other was in control of the body. The fact that they were two souls was never kept from them, so they always knew of eachothers existence, just lacked a good way to communicate. The only way the two are able to communicate one with another is writing in a journal they carry at all times, or if someone was willing to relay a message for them. Eve was much easier to raise and wouldn't randomly try to kill her mother her soul was the one that was released majority of the time so Eva was sealed for majority of their earlier years. Because of this, over time Eva's soul which was so plagued with madness devoured the eye changing its appearance, and over the years this soul because it was hindered, it attempted to escape from beneath the eye patch. It was like a constant battle for Eva, and because of this her soul began to become stronger and stronger as it fought against the magic in the eye patch to the point it became as strong as 5 regular human souls by the time they were 18 years old. But no matter how much she tried, it seemed to be a hopeless fight.. the eye patch was specificitly crafted to seal the sisters souls and couldn't be broken easily, only by moving the eye patch could one be free. Although their mother knew that it could actually be broken by them alone, she knew that over time her daughters would probably get stronger, especially Eva... and that maybe someday Eva might just find the strength she needed to be free of her chains. In Eva's early years, because she didn't show much potential in becoming an actual witch she began learning out to fight with the a sword, called an No-Dachi that she had received as a gift from their mother. The No-Dachi is very similar to a katana but the blade is 6 feet in length, and the handle is another foot, making it 7 feet in total. She wasn't the most skilled at fighting but over time she became able to hold her own, and she relied on the length of the weapon to keep her opponents at a range, but even if they got close she could still slash them with great strength from the combined weight of the sword and her own strength. Eve seemed slightly interested in learning magic, but like Eva they both didn't show much potential, but their mother was hopeful that maybe someday magic would grace her daughters. When they were about 16-17 they left home in search of a new life, a life where magic wasn't everything. By this time both Eve and Eva had made an agreement, that during the day Eve would have control of the body and during the night Eva would have control. They would alternate when they slept so not to exhaust their body. Also in dangerous situations Eva would be allowed to come out as she is more of the fighter. Their life in the world has been hard but fruitful, Eve has had the chance to see many new things and meet many people, while Eva continues her training in fighting and takes odd and end jobs to gather some money to survive on, but for the most part they survive on what Eva gathers for them, be it lawfully gathered or not. For Eva didn't care if she got food unlawfully, if she had to kill for food that didn't bother her at all. This made it especially difficult for them to stay in one area for very long, where Eve would make friends with people, Eva would kill them for the food off their table. This greatly troubled Eve but she knew she couldn't control or limit Eva forever. Eve feared that soon Eva's actions would gain the attention of Shibusen, and even though technically they were different people, not much could distinguish them from eachother as they look pretty much the same. So this would mean that the enemies Eva made would still be enemies when Eve is in control. Just about the same time Eva set her eyes on the powerful souls that reside in Shibusen, thinking that if she could consume a few of them that maybe the seal would be easily broken. Neither sister knows what the other is doing, so when they are sealed behind the eye patch its like they are in a limbo world that they can't escape unless freed. Eva takes advantage of this and is secretly still working towards breaking the chains that bind her when she is behind the eye patch. She had learned about the Kishin through her mother and other witches, and with this knowledge she went out into the world with the desires to begin slaying innocents and consuming their souls. And because she wanted all the power, she learned that she could actually consume the soul through her eye and it would be added only to her soul granting no further power to Eve, in the hopes that someday her spiritual strength would be enough to break the seal on the eye patch freeing her whenever she wanted. Eve knowing nothing of this is completely innocent and only seeks to live a happy life. But Eve has her own little secret, she seeks to find a way to some how separate their souls, so that maybe they could both live at the same time in different bodies. Personality: Eve: Eve is a very kind hearted girl who seeks to have an equilibrium between herself and Eva, it was her that presented the fair trade agreement that they would switch off dependent on the time of the day and situations. Around others she is a little bit shy and quiet but she really wants to make friends. She is a bit clumsy, but this is one of her traits the helps her be lovable. But growing up around witches and not being really being a witch herself, made it a little difficult for her so she wasn't really able to make any friends, so she just played by herself or read books. This is what made her want to leave home, for she wanted to see the world mentioned in the books she read, and she wanted to make friends. She also really cares for and fears Eva, for she wants to help Eva find her own body so that they both could exist at the same time and maybe even be friends... but at the same time she is a little afraid of Eva. Even though she doesn't really know what Eva is doing while she is in control, she has always had a feeling Eva was trying to consume her. She also thinks she can feel some sort of murderous intent from beneath the eye patch that seals Eva. And more than once Eva's actions have made it difficult for Eve and this greatly frustrates her. Eva: Eva is a very angry and mad child. She for some reason was born tainted with madness and because of this it has driven her to become more evil than good. She seeks for pleasure in killing people and torturing others. Her one desire in the world is to become stronger so that maybe she could break the chains that bind her while the eye patch seals her away. Its because of this she is seeking to become a true Kishin and is heading out into the world to consume souls. Many times she cheats the agreement she made with Eve, and stays out in the world even though its day time, but Eve is completely unaware of this but may be a little suspicious about it from time to time. But Eva really only does this when she has something to actually do, for the most part she actually honors the agreement, but only because she likes to rest every now and then. Eva doesn't really care for either witches or other kishins, she might work with them but she would just as soon try to kill them if the opportunity presented itself. Abilities: Technique Name: Soul Eye Patch Effects/Description: An eye patch forged of witch magic and the combined souls of Eve and Eva, it has the power to seal one of the sisters at a time in their eye. Right eye belongs to Eve, and the Left Eye belongs to Eva. The sisters cannot break out of this seal unless the patch is moved to the other eye, partially moving does nothing and the last one that had control still has control. The Eye patch can be moved by anyone, and really it is the sister greatest weakness. Dependent on which eye is covered their soul looks different. When Eve is out her soul is normal sized and blue, but around her eye patch murky black flames seem to lick out from beneath it. When Eva is out, her soul is Five times bigger than your average human soul, and has the appearance of murky black flames that just seem to lick up the light around them. Very faint around her eye patch a hint of blue light shines beneath the eye patch trying to shine through the darkness. Someone with a developed soul perception that could see through a witches soul protect, would be able to see the other soul clearly behind the eye patch. Technique Name: Strong Soul Effects/Description: Eva has a soul that is as strong as Five souls, this gives her a boost in her physical strength and if she truly wanted to, and tried hard enough she would be as strong as 5 people combined being able to complete feats of strength like lifting a boulder that weighed a 1\2ton. Although lifting a 1/2ton would be like a weight lifter bench pressing his maximum load once, after doing it she would be entirely exhausted. Unfortunately her Strong Soul only seemed to affect her physical strength, so she is still left with a somewhat frail body that can't take much damage. Combat Style: Eve doesn't fight at all, she switches over to Eva if fighting is necessary and unavoidable. Eva is a all out attacker, she uses full force at all times swinging her long No-dachi with all the strength she can. She prefers to keep people from getting close to her using the range of the No-dachi to do so. She dislikes fighting against people with projectile weapons, as it is a hassle to close the distance to attack them, but she will do so. Eva does not believe in mercy, if she is going to kill someone she is going to kill them, and she will either do it quickly or as painfully as possible. Miscellaneous Information: Eve is afraid of looking in mirrors, because she thinks that Eva would be there staring back. Eva hates being in dark rooms, she isn't afraid of the dark just hates dark rooms because thats pretty much what its like while she is sealed up. Strengths:
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Roleplay Sample: [link]http://w11.zetaboards.com/42_42_564_Redux/topic/8104912/1/#new[/link] Edited by Arisa, Mar 29 2013, 03:10 AM.
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| Lammy | Mar 28 2013, 11:57 PM Post #2 |
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Hey there, Arisa! Considering that one of your earlier characters happened to be a reformed Kishin Egg, I see no problem in doing the same thing here. With that out of the way, let's begin the character moderation process! This profile actually looks pretty good, so there are only a few areas that need to be tidied up. History:
Personality: More of something to add to history, but does Eve ever get confused for Eva, and vice versa? Since the two look alike, I assume that Eve might run into some trouble due to Eva's endeavors, especially with Shibusen. Furthermore, do the souls that Eva consume affect Eve in anyway? Is it possible that Eva could overcome Eve by eating enough innocent souls? Abilities: Can the eye patch be forcibly moved from one position to the other, or can it only be moved by a Witch or Eve and Eva themselves? With Strong Soul, just how strong is Eva anyway? Strong enough to lift an entire train, or just a little bit stronger than the average human? Strengths and Weaknesses: Does Eva also have a frail body, or does this only apply to Eve? Furthermore, while Eva may be strong, just how much endurance does she have when it comes to taking attacks? Go ahead and make these changes, and tidy up the character on your own if you see fit. Just be sure to tell me what additional changes (if any) you've made, and don't forget to send me a PM when you're all done. This is a great start to an interesting character! |
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| Arisa | Mar 29 2013, 01:14 AM Post #3 |
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Edited: Didn't really touch much on Personality, put most of it in History cause like you said it seemed it should go there. Edited up abilities and S/W to be more clear. Hope everything looks better now. Oh and they don't really have magic now, but maybe later I will develop it, so I guess yes they have magic affinity. Its hit on in history but not much cause they don't really have much right now, aside from a little interest in it from Eve. |
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| Lammy | Mar 29 2013, 01:30 AM Post #4 |
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I only have one problem with the profile as it is, and it's the specifications of Strong Soul. Do you think perhaps you could ton this ability down, maybe to where she is only as strong as 5 souls, and able to lift around half a ton at the cost of greatly exerting herself? Though later on you can of course upgrade it. Other than that, you've done a fantastic job. Edited by Lammy, Mar 29 2013, 01:30 AM.
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| Arisa | Mar 29 2013, 03:10 AM Post #5 |
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![]() You just wish this was you... So do I Clarissa Devonshire - Color Code #CD00FF - Theme - To Aru Ryuu No Kami No Uta Silviana Meulockmatovah - Color Code #80a0ff - Theme - Blah Blah Blah Ichimei Ketsurui - Color Code Crimson - Theme - Pendulum Njlon&Kateri - Color Code GrayGold - Njlon's Theme - Hitohira No Hanabira / Kateri's Theme - Ringo Biyori Eve/Eva - Color Code WhiteBlack - Theme - Devils Never Cry Leona Geriant - Color Code Yellow - Theme - Rose of May My DeviantArt Page | |
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| Lammy | Mar 29 2013, 03:38 AM Post #6 |
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A-A-A-ACCEPTED. |
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