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Revising the Recruitment Text
Topic Started: Apr 8 2015, 12:47 PM (169 Views)
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The Upcoming Week, I, and if you want you may propose and test new recruitment telegrams. Talked with CDLand and we see a slowdown in recruits, this could be a recruitment telegram issue (not sure).

Anyway, with the Welcome Text and Everything we have in place the current Recruitment Text is seriously outdated.

I will write a recruitment text asap.

Information I want to have in the New Recruitment Telegram:
- http://w11.zetaboards.com/Allied_States_Forum/index/

Another Revision


Old Recruitment Text


Recruitment Text 1
 
Welcome %NATION%,

[region]The Allied States[/region] is a nice region of around 200 nations. We have lots of knowledge about NationStates and have created a whole special community. Our region is build on our [b]government roleplay[/b] with frequent elections and real decisions to be made and our [b]forum economy[/b], which is one of the [b]most advanced[/b] in NationStates. Our region cannot be defined by a certain type of person, we have people of every kind and you can easily make friends.

* We mainly use our [b]Offline Forums[/b] who are extremely active, more then 22.000 forum posts have already been made.
http://w11.zetaboards.com/Allied_States_Forum/index/

* We are a medium sized region which means that [b]we are active[/b] but it also means that you won’t have to compete with hundreds or thousands of other nations in the region.

* [b]All citizens[/b] are members of the House of Representatives, which means you immediately get a say in how the region and the roleplay nation is run!

* We have lively [b]political discussion and debates[/b] as part of our government roleplay.

* We hold [b]frequent elections[/b]; once every month. That means that you have plenty of opportunities to enter elective office!

* We are [b]ever evolving[/b] to a better region, become part of our community and profit from this evolution! [b]Most Regions forget you[/b] once you have joined but we will not, we will inform you every week about what happened in our region!

To participate, head on over to The Allied States today! The forum is where most of the government activity occurs, so it is certainly worth registering on our forums. There you can apply to be a citizen, vote, join a state and much more. Make your voice heard!
Edited by CDLand, Jun 10 2015, 11:29 PM.
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