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The Rhein States
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Apr 8 2015, 12:47 PM
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- The Rhein States
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The Upcoming Week, I, and if you want you may propose and test new recruitment telegrams. Talked with CDLand and we see a slowdown in recruits, this could be a recruitment telegram issue (not sure).
Anyway, with the Welcome Text and Everything we have in place the current Recruitment Text is seriously outdated.
I will write a recruitment text asap.
Information I want to have in the New Recruitment Telegram: - http://w11.zetaboards.com/Allied_States_Forum/index/
Another Revision - Code:
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Greetings %NATION%,
I'd like to invite you to join [region]The Allied States[/region], a nice region of around 150 nations. We have lots of knowledge about NationStates and have created a whole special community. Our region is build on our [b]government roleplay[/b] with frequent elections and real decisions to be made and our [b]forum economy[/b], which is one of the [b]most advanced[/b] in NationStates. Our region cannot be defined by a certain type of person, we have people of every kind and you can easily make friends.
* We mainly use our [b]Offline Forums[/b] who are extremely active, more than 30.000 forum posts have already been made. [url]http://w11.zetaboards.com/Allied_States_Forum/index/[/url]
* We are a medium sized region which means that [b]we are active[/b] but it also means that you won’t have to compete with thousands of other nations in the region.
* [b]All citizens[/b] are members of the House of Representatives, which means you immediately get a say in how the region and the roleplay nation is run!
* We have lively [b]political discussion and debates[/b] as part of our government roleplay.
* We hold [b]frequent elections[/b]; once every month. That means that you have plenty of opportunities to enter elective office!
* We are [b]ever evolving[/b] to a better region, become part of our community and profit from this evolution! [b]Most Regions forget you[/b] once you have joined but we will not, we will inform you every week about what happened in our region!
To participate, head on over to The Allied States today! The forum is where most of the government activity occurs, so it is certainly worth registering on our forums. There you can apply to be a citizen, vote, join a state and much more. Make your voice heard!
Old Recruitment Text Greetings %NATION%,
Thank you for taking the time to read this telegram! I would like to invite you to join [region]The Allied States[/region]. We have two primary activities: a government roleplay where members of the region take jobs such as President, Senators, and Governors and control a nation as well as a forum economy where you can create your own business and buy and sell goods and services to other citizens. Here are some of the reasons you should move to The Allied States:
* All citizens are members of the House of Representatives, which means you immediately get a say in how the region and the roleplay nation is run!
* We are a medium sized region which means that we are active but it also means that you won’t have to compete with hundreds or thousands of other nations in the region.
* We have lively political discussion and debates as part of our government roleplay.
* We hold frequent elections; once every month. That means that you have plenty of opportunities to enter elective office!
* We also have a roleplay map for diplomacy and war that's linked to the forum economy.
To participate, head on over to The Allied States today! The forum is where most of the government activity occurs. There you can apply to be a citizen, vote, and make your voice heard!
- Recruitment Text 1
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Welcome %NATION%,
[region]The Allied States[/region] is a nice region of around 200 nations. We have lots of knowledge about NationStates and have created a whole special community. Our region is build on our [b]government roleplay[/b] with frequent elections and real decisions to be made and our [b]forum economy[/b], which is one of the [b]most advanced[/b] in NationStates. Our region cannot be defined by a certain type of person, we have people of every kind and you can easily make friends.
* We mainly use our [b]Offline Forums[/b] who are extremely active, more then 22.000 forum posts have already been made. http://w11.zetaboards.com/Allied_States_Forum/index/
* We are a medium sized region which means that [b]we are active[/b] but it also means that you won’t have to compete with hundreds or thousands of other nations in the region.
* [b]All citizens[/b] are members of the House of Representatives, which means you immediately get a say in how the region and the roleplay nation is run!
* We have lively [b]political discussion and debates[/b] as part of our government roleplay.
* We hold [b]frequent elections[/b]; once every month. That means that you have plenty of opportunities to enter elective office!
* We are [b]ever evolving[/b] to a better region, become part of our community and profit from this evolution! [b]Most Regions forget you[/b] once you have joined but we will not, we will inform you every week about what happened in our region!
To participate, head on over to The Allied States today! The forum is where most of the government activity occurs, so it is certainly worth registering on our forums. There you can apply to be a citizen, vote, join a state and much more. Make your voice heard!
Edited by CDLand, Jun 10 2015, 11:29 PM.
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