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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 10 2008, 10:00 PM (86 Views) | |
| Danieloo6 | Oct 10 2008, 10:00 PM Post #1 |
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"Sexyness" - Whoever Wrote This......... ILY!!
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Meh.... These are just a few poems i thought off the top of my head not very good ones but there they are anyway
Oh... btw if you dont like emoish poems dont read these :: Possible Muscles tense, blood racing , veins bulging Feel so strong yet so weak Fall to my knees and begin to cry But why? ... No reason, unexplainable actions Why? Why do I feel like this? Rage building up inside my chest Needed to be unleashed But I Suffer... I hold it in. Tears trickle down my face begining to tickle Do I laugh? ... No... I just flood more. Heart feels broken feels split... Cant be mended, Even with carpenters hands Not even with the delicatest touch. Hear a voice, voice of an angel Whispers but stands yet so far. Muscles begin to loosen, blood pressure falls veins begin to dissappear. On my knees feeling weak but yet so strong... How is this possible? Without You You were my eyes You were my ears You was my heart You was my soul You was the thing that made me whole I miss the sweet scent of your perfume It was like no other. I miss the way you'd swish your hair From one side to another. I miss YOU... and everything we did Now your gone i cant have our little chats. No one to open up to... To hear my thoughts No one to calm me down... When i was angry Without you theres not a whole me Somethings missing... Like the cogs in a clock Somethings lost... Like im deserted without a map You was my island... Some where i could escape to With you not here im like an update Stuck at 80% complete and not going any further Without you... This Ones Un-named... Start to shudder as the windows burst open the cut in my arms become even more open exposed to the air as i drop the knife if im going to take my life, im taking it tonight. hard to believe i dont shed a tear slip to the floor in the pool of red poison maybe life is just a game maybe that explains why were all not the same. Maybe this was the way it was meant to be... you living on without me cant stick by you forever not matter how hard i try. i promise ill try and be there whenever you are down because i never want to see you with a frown. as i glance up i see the place fading. I hear distant voices that are too unclear to understand. everyones out and there's blood on my hands. the blood runs from my elbow to my finger tips. What have i done? they seem so quiet as the hit the floor but its banging on my head like id bang on a door. Everything that felt so good was all left behind what only mattered was that she was on my mind. stuck in my head and she didnt go away cureing it would be like finding a needle in a whole stack of hay. Im collapsed on the floor nearly passed out skins gone all pale and i feel freezing now. A pool of blood surrounds the floor I try to make it to the front door ive realised what ive done was a whole big mistake but its too late now... its just too late. I hope they are to your liking :lol:. If not then oh well :wacko: Thanks, Danieloo6 |
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| George 050 | Oct 10 2008, 10:17 PM Post #2 |
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Not bad... and consider that a compliment as it is coming from a person who hates emo. I suppose it works, although maybe if you sometimes made the message more subtle rather than just bluntly stating how you inflict self-harm. This Ones Un-named is quite good. Really makes you think. |
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| reaperx33453 | Oct 13 2008, 08:08 PM Post #3 |
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hey thats cool, emo but cool ill make some love ones to combat it: the viberant face contains the night and takes away all my fright lucious meadows and forests green skies blue and waters clear the many things i have seen and the experiences i have had inbetween are nothing compared to thy beautiful face for my love is here and my life down i place aint it cute that is dedicated to my wonderful lauren
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| garsha0 | Oct 13 2008, 09:00 PM Post #4 |
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Garshy teh council guy
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omg, ur the third person i know to have a gf called lauren right now
That poem is so sweet well, i'm gona have a go at it...very inexperienced at this stuff :S You never will now just how i feel, I love you so much, that i cannot conceal, You are the one i always thought, Would be with me, but now I'm distraught. The tides of time are coming my way, Soon i will go, but i have to say... You must know just what it is, Which makes me feel as strong as this. You are the girl, there, always so shy, Now when i see you, i break down and cry, You are a splendour, you're beauty galore, I know this has never happened before. I love you, i love you! I said it, there! But yet I know this isn't fair, If you love me too, i just can't bear, The way you'll look at me, when i say... The tides of time, are coming my way. Now soon i go, so far from you, And you know, you need not ask me to, You'll always be here, in my heart, Always there dear, you were from the start. Goodbye, goodbye, that monstrous word, Which i know that you have now heard, The pain, the pain, it starts from today, From that simple moment, once i say... The tides of time have come my way. |
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| reaperx33453 | Oct 13 2008, 09:09 PM Post #5 |
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impressive my friend
soon ill put a long one on, but thats a short lil one lauren is amazing
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| garsha0 | Oct 13 2008, 09:11 PM Post #6 |
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Garshy teh council guy
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P.S. Dan, ur poems really descriptive and emotional, i found it really good! |
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that is dedicated to my wonderful lauren
7:24 PM Jul 11