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| Ouch!; A story about a surprise | |
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| Geezer | Apr 25 2016, 07:35 PM Post #1 |
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Author's Note This short story is a collaboration. A friend awoke with this story in mind and suggested it for publication here. By the time I got to write it, I had roughly doubled it's size . The story is unchanged but I have fleshed it out with added commentary and additional details. While I preferred the original form, I do not think I have harmed the flow of the story and I have solved some transitional problems which may have troubled readers. To the story then. Ouch! Jack placed his hand on my back and pushed me forward, I went neatly across his lap. I felt him place his left arm across my back. I tried very slightly to lift myself, not to get up but to test his hold on me, I would not be getting up. "What are you doing?" I asked, my words coming out in a rush. "You have been rude to me all day," he replied. "I have tried to be patient but it hasn't helped so I'm letting you know that it is ending now!" He emphasized "now" by raising his voice and by delivering a smart slap to my bottom as well. "Ow!" I said, it didn't hurt that much but it surprised me. "You can't do this," I told him, ignoring the fact that he was currently doing exactly that. This was no time for logic! But I was right, we were friends, good friends but just friends, we did not have an intimate relationship. What made him think he could spank me? His reply was to once more apply his hand smartly to the seat of my pants. Once more my reply was,"Ow!" "I guess we will see about that," he responded to my previous comment. He delivered another smack to my bottom, "Ow!" I repeated, it wasn't original but I meant it. Smack! "Ouch!" I cried, I felt that one! Why didn't I wear something baggy like my cargo's as usual, they would have absorbed some of the spanking. Another smack, "Ow! You're not allowed to spank me, I won't let you!" As previously mentioned, I had already dispensed with logic. Smack! "OWW! That hurts!" It really did! It continued in this manner, another smack, another "OW!" I had run out of anything else to say. When Jack finished, my backside was very warm, decidedly sore and my eyes were watery. I continued to lay across his lap until finally he patted me on the back and asked if I was ready to get up yet, I nodded my agreement. I got up slowly and wiped my nose on the back of my hand. Jack got to his feet as well. He put his arms around me in a hug and I clung to him, pressing my cheek against him. "Are you going to be more polite in future," he asked? I nodded my reply. "Good," he told me,"because the next time you get spanked, it will be without your pants." My heart stopped for a beat and I caught my breath, "He wouldn't dare do that," I thought. I wondered how much it will hurt. "Come with me," he said and I followed him to his bedroom. He led me to his bed and helped me to lay down. After he removed my slippers he covered me with a blanket and kissed me on the forehead, "Stay here and rest awhile, when you are ready, come back out with me." I nodded, "Thank you," I said and he left. I pulled the blanket around me to snuggle up. My bum was sore and there was only one thought in my mind: our relationship had changed!1 1 Originally posted Oct 27 2010, 03:45 PM in Restricted Writings, a subsite of The Written Sword which was precursor of The B. L. Lounge |
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