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Character Guidelines; YAY
Topic Started: Sep 22 2013, 06:52 AM (36 Views)
GodLikeImmortal
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Right, straight to the point:

1. Your weapon CANNOT be a Keyblade. We need more originality than that.

2. I suppose here I'll give an example of a 'bad' move and a 'good' move.


  • Bad Move
    Bob unleashes a firey storm from the sky, destroying everything within a 30 foot radius.

Problem: There is a number of problems here. We don't know how the fire even works, like a wave of fire or raining fireballs perhaps, and it states it destroys anything like it's a guaruntee everything will be destroyed. 30 feet is also a large radius for any attack, much less one this powerful. This attack wishes to be large, fast, and deadly at the same time, which won't fly in my book.


  • Good Move
    Bob raises his hand, and fireballs with a 1 foot radius rain from the sky upon a 5 foot radius.

This attack is better because we know the actions performed, we know where the fireballs can land, and we also know how large the fireballs are. It's not overexplained either.


3. Besides that, just about anything goes. This may be modified on a later date, however.
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