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Topic Started: Feb 22 2014, 09:47 PM (229 Views)
Pieisthebestthing
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I've completed my submission.
Plot 5-5.
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Silver Mist
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Congratulations you passed!
I will tell you what I did and didn't like in this review, so you can make your next house even better! (In my oppinion :P )

Cons:
-The kitchen doesn't have things like:
-A fridge
-A sink
-Or any decorations whatsoever.

-The whole first floor seems verry rushed, there are no decorations, and the space isn't used verry well.

-The attic has a TV, and they are not cannon, so they don't belong in a ponyville house.
They are actually cannon in a way, in the show there was Arcade machines. Which are basically computers, and TVs are computers In a way. (Get out of my post, Breeze! :P And arcade machines still aren't 30inch flatscreen TVs!)

-Try another design for closets, a chest with a door in front of it won't do.

-The roof of the balcony looks kind of weird.

Pros:
-The outside of the house looks nice, with the decorations and all.

-The interior in the bedroom on the first floor is verry nicely done.

-The bathroom looks clean and modern.

-The windows are well placed.

-Though there are some cons, I think they can be eassily adjusted.


Overall, there are more cons, but I think you can eassily improve on those points and build a builder worthy house!
Edited by Silver Mist, Feb 22 2014, 10:26 PM.
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