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Shapeshifter Isle Story Chapter 24
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I violently sit up as I awaken in cold sweat, cursing under my breath because of the pain it causes me, another nightmare. John is now awake too, looking at me with his held tilted he has a look of confusion and guilt
"Ahh no worries buddy, not your fault" I say as I pat him on his head
I dont bother putting on a shirt as get up and out of my tent, its still dark out, if I had to guess somewhere between 24:00 and 2:00 I always had a preference for the 24 hour clock, just makes more sense. Morris wanted to stay in the big camp with the others but I opted for staying on the outskirts, the main camp was digusting, I wouldnt be caught dead living there, in many ways its literally a shit hole.
Knowing hes watching me I gesture with my hand for John to follow me, I have been working with him to follow both verbal and hand commands since I first started to train him, that way as long as he could see me I could command him without making a sound, It was useful for hunting.
"Lets go for a walk Johnny boy, how about to the beach? Im up for a late night swim how about you?" John gets excited at the suggestion, the only words he likely recognizes is walk and go but thats more than enough to get him hyped. As we walk to the beach I do a little chatting with John I know its not much better than talking to myself but I already do quite a bit of that so it doesnt really matter. I stop to take off my bandage to let the cuts breath a bit only to find there are no cuts, my smaller cuts had healed fairly quickly but I didnt breath into it much but this was odd, the large wound along my ribs has disappeared in a matter of days now replaced by a mighty impressive looking scare.
"This is probably the doing of Moon bit-" a sudden gust of wind cuts me off
"Now shes interupting in real life to boot, fan-fucking-tastic" I say to no one in particular, not that theres any one but John here to hear me.
I put my bandage in one of my pockets figuring i could wash it and find some repurpose for the material later. As we continued along our way I realize that while my ribs still hurt the pain is now ignorable and more of a really annoying companian than a hinderance.
"dammit" I curse having stepped on something sharp, Fuck do i ever miss shoes, I dont get why Drake and Zane choose to run around like this. My thoughts are cut off when I notice John is very alert and focusing his ears off to the left somewhere, I concentrate on my hearing and try to pick something up, I can hear the sound of some kind of struggle, between humans for sure, I can hear voices, not well enough to hear what they are saying but I can hear them. I start running towards the direction I heard them from, for much longer than I would have thought im surprised I was able to hear them at all now realizing the distance between us, when suddenly something in me tells me to slow down, get low and be as quite a possible, I gesture for John, who was following suit instead of charging ahead, to get low and be quite, we worked on doing this ever since we started hunting, we had to or he would chase the prey off before i could get into postion and then I couldnt back him up, he always reminded me of a border collie herding sheep when we did this. Finally we came across the source of all the rukas, from the woods I could see three guys kicking the crap out of some poor kid on the beach
"Who's gonna save you this time punk? Your babysitter is nowhere to be found!" one of them says in a mixed tone of anger and arrogance
"But dont you worry, me and my friends are gonna pay him a visit next and maybe I'll do what he didnt have the balls to do and take his finger, Fuck it I'll just kill him" the man says while still boot fucking the shit out of this poor kid.
"Alright ive seen about enough of this crap" I say to myself quitely as Possible while pulling my sock out of my pocket and puting two roughly palm sized rocks inside, I creep closer to the edge of the forest and then give John the hand signal to attack prey hoping he knows my intended targets, He burst from the tree line and swiftly covers the several meters between us and the assholes attacking that poor bastard, he goes for the mouthy one Jumping up and grabbing hold of his face, as soon as John's feet hit the ground he begins to violently shake his head, The man screams in agony as John tears off a large piece of his right cheeck, The two other men recover from the shock of this attack just in time to be caught off guard by mine, I swing my make shift flail as hard as I can against the side of one of there heads, even in the dark you can see some of his teeth leave his mouth with the blood that splashes from his face onto the sand, he hits the ground like a sack of bricks and doesnt move. The other one turns from the specticle of John mauling his partial faced comrade to face me, he never gets a chance to put up a fight however as an over head blow strikes him on his hair line, splitting open his forehead and sending him stumbling backwards before falling to the ground. I hear a yelp as I turn to see the partial faced man throw John off of himself and half run half stumble into the woods holding his face, John quickly recovers and begins to give chase but I call him back
"Dont worry boy, he'll be real easy to recognize now" I say to the dog with a feeling of pride
Out of the corner of my eye I see the guy I hit in the forehead is struggling to get up
"Stay the fuck down or I'll have my dog rip a strip off of you too" I yell
scared and confused the man does as comanded
I walk over to the kid who was on the recieving end of there beat down and help him up, his lip is busted open bad, he already has some pretty big shiners, parts of his face are starting to swell pretty bad aswell and he no doubt has some sore ribs but seems to be able to keep his feet under himself, so I assume he isnt too fucked up, well atleast compared to the first guy I hit who still hasnt moved as far as I can tell.
"You alright?" a pointless question
"Yeah, I think so" he replys a little grogy
"Whats your name?" I ask, partially because I need to know and partially to check how rattled his brain is
"J-James" he replys with a little effort
"Well James seems like they didnt screw you up too bad, you live in the main camp? Or somewhere else?" I ask needing to know where I need to help him get too
"I live in the main camp but can you help me to a different camp instead?" he replys
"Why?" I ask raising an eyebrow and questioning my previous assesment of his mental state
"Id just feel safer there" he replys between breaths
"Alright whatever floats your boat" I say questioning the logic behind feeling safer in a smaller camp
Before we go I walk over to the first guy I hit and feel for a pulse, still alive, although i doubt for long, while getting up I cant help but notice the size of his shoes.
Well isnt that convient I think to myself pulling them off of his feet.
I turn to the other one
"Yo scatter brain, you should get your friend here to whatever medical care he can get on this rock before he dies"
Eyes still glazed over and blood pouring down his face he simply nods
"For his sake I hope your not as messed up as you look" I say turning to James
"Alrighty James, Lead the way" I say as I finish putting on my plundered shoes and questioning the wisdom in letting the possibly concussed take the lead but seeing as I had no idea where the camp was I didnt have much in the way of options.


Edited by VenomousDragon, Dec 15 2013, 03:47 AM.
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
Mikaela isn't even in my age group. In the story Bree only said her friends thought I was cute. You can say a person is cute and not like them. When did Rashidos girl even hit on me?

As I said, your 10/10 is based off one isolated case.
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
Mikaela isn't even in my age group. In the story Bree only said her friends thought I was cute. You can say a person is cute and not like them. When did Rashidos girl even hit on me?

As I said, your 10/10 is based off one isolated case.
it doesn't matter if they "like" you or not, point is they show interest in you pretty much how every girl is supposed to act around a stereotypical womanizer, you don't see a whole ton of girls waving to Apex or Dave or VD, it's always you, any way I don't really care about that point is you make yourself really perfect in the stories you gotta have more flesh and blood than that BI
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
Mikaela isn't even in my age group. In the story Bree only said her friends thought I was cute. You can say a person is cute and not like them. When did Rashidos girl even hit on me?

As I said, your 10/10 is based off one isolated case.
it doesn't matter if they "like" you or not, point is they show interest in you pretty much how every girl is supposed to act around a stereotypical womanizer, you don't see a whole ton of girls waving to Apex or Dave or VD, it's always you, any way I don't really care about that point is you make yourself really perfect in the stories you gotta have more flesh and blood than that BI
As I said, you can say someone is cute, and not like them or even have interest in them. As I said, your 10/10 is based off an isolated case. When in the story do your seriously ever see me really bothering with the females in the camp or in ZASS? Seriously tell me when. Cause 9/10 I ignore them or brush them off. Or they wave and keep walking.

My character is not even close to being as perfect as your implying.
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
Mikaela isn't even in my age group. In the story Bree only said her friends thought I was cute. You can say a person is cute and not like them. When did Rashidos girl even hit on me?

As I said, your 10/10 is based off one isolated case.
it doesn't matter if they "like" you or not, point is they show interest in you pretty much how every girl is supposed to act around a stereotypical womanizer, you don't see a whole ton of girls waving to Apex or Dave or VD, it's always you, any way I don't really care about that point is you make yourself really perfect in the stories you gotta have more flesh and blood than that BI
As I said, you can say someone is cute, and not like them or even have interest in them. As I said, your 10/10 is based off an isolated case. When in the story do your seriously ever see me really bothering with the females in the camp or in ZASS? Seriously tell me when. Cause 9/10 I ignore them or brush them off. Or they wave and keep walking.

My character is not even close to being as perfect as your implying.
alright that's why everybody likes and adores you no matter what you do, come on Bi you gotta admit your character is pretty much unflawed
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
Mikaela isn't even in my age group. In the story Bree only said her friends thought I was cute. You can say a person is cute and not like them. When did Rashidos girl even hit on me?

As I said, your 10/10 is based off one isolated case.
it doesn't matter if they "like" you or not, point is they show interest in you pretty much how every girl is supposed to act around a stereotypical womanizer, you don't see a whole ton of girls waving to Apex or Dave or VD, it's always you, any way I don't really care about that point is you make yourself really perfect in the stories you gotta have more flesh and blood than that BI
As I said, you can say someone is cute, and not like them or even have interest in them. As I said, your 10/10 is based off an isolated case. When in the story do your seriously ever see me really bothering with the females in the camp or in ZASS? Seriously tell me when. Cause 9/10 I ignore them or brush them off. Or they wave and keep walking.

My character is not even close to being as perfect as your implying.
alright that's why everybody likes and adores you no matter what you do, come on Bi you gotta admit your character is pretty much unflawed
"Likes and adores me"

^ that contradicts your last chapter and mine before that and recent one.

What are you talking about again?
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im not happy about ho eak my character is portrayed beaten up twice in a month and being only a minor character ho does shit all
Cause you don't fucking write in SIS. You expect us to develop your character for you? Bitch please.
yeah then theres you a ba with poer like goku and a freaking pet wolf ho can take 5 guys and gets all the girls easily
I just get beat up by pussies and not the female ones at that
Listen bitch, don't get mad cause your too lazy to fucking write and wanna bitch cause VD wrote about you getting your ass beat.

And my character is nowhere fucking near gokus power. And it's not a tamed damn wolf for the last fucking time.
Black ice your character's are always badass, womanizing, debonairs, who always come out on top at the end and everyone either loves, is impressed by or scared of them :huh:
Cause that's how I am in person. When you let me get powers, I get even better!
well we'll never know if every girl who meets you wants the D so i guess we can't make judgements but come on you have practically no flaws in either stories except maybe you're slightly insane but everyone seems to get past that
No flaws? I got fucking jacked up by Zane and Dave in a fight to a stalemate even with my enhanced ability.

And do you know how many times in ZASS I got my ass kicked by zombie or was near death?
you so occasionally reach a few physical challenges, big deal even superman gets his butt handed to him sometimes, but that's only with really powerful guys or stacked odds 9 out of 10 times you easily beat the crap out of anyone in your way. 10 out of 10 times you get the girl and 9.9 out of 10 times you get everybody to somehow like you even if you did drag them into the woods before.
Name one girl other than Bree in the story I really wasted time talking to. Name one. Your 10/10 is based on one isolated case. 9/10 the people I'm fighting really are below me.
um Mikaela? all the swooning girls who constantly wave at you both at camp and on the cruise, I think at one point even Rashido's girl hit on you, the only female character introduced that doesn't have some kind of minor crush or interest in you is Maylin, other than that every female loses thier minds around you. But i guess most people you face are below you so there's a little basis there. But come on you can't be that perfect in real life, interesting characters are imperfect characters, the ones who mess up bad are how audiences relate.
Mikaela isn't even in my age group. In the story Bree only said her friends thought I was cute. You can say a person is cute and not like them. When did Rashidos girl even hit on me?

As I said, your 10/10 is based off one isolated case.
it doesn't matter if they "like" you or not, point is they show interest in you pretty much how every girl is supposed to act around a stereotypical womanizer, you don't see a whole ton of girls waving to Apex or Dave or VD, it's always you, any way I don't really care about that point is you make yourself really perfect in the stories you gotta have more flesh and blood than that BI
As I said, you can say someone is cute, and not like them or even have interest in them. As I said, your 10/10 is based off an isolated case. When in the story do your seriously ever see me really bothering with the females in the camp or in ZASS? Seriously tell me when. Cause 9/10 I ignore them or brush them off. Or they wave and keep walking.

My character is not even close to being as perfect as your implying.
alright that's why everybody likes and adores you no matter what you do, come on Bi you gotta admit your character is pretty much unflawed
"Likes and adores me"

^ that contradicts your last chapter and mine before that and recent one.

What are you talking about again?
nothing, absolutely nothing
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its just that i get beaten up by guys ho got mauled by a BLOODY DINGO a MEDIUM SIZED DOG IS BLOODY STRONGER THAN BLOODY SIS APEX
HES EVEN WEAKER THAN OHSS APEX AND HE WAS 12 BLOODY YEARS OLD!!!!! ZASS APEX HANGS HIS HEAD IN SHAME AT HIS PATHETIC COUNTERPART
THEN WRITE A CHAPTER AND BLOODY SHOW YOUR NOT WEAK YOUR DAMN SELF !
oh great so now everybody gets to have unrealistically badass characters with no flaws or problems :huh: , come on you guys be true to yourself apex I have no doubt when you get mad your fighting improves but beating up three grown men?
If a subadult dingo can I think a fully gron male human can
Lol low blow
Apex the dingo had an ambush and he only grabbed one guy, the other two were beaten by VD who also got the jump on them
and i didnt land one punch at all just laid on the ground and got the daylights kicked out of me
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its just that i get beaten up by guys ho got mauled by a BLOODY DINGO a MEDIUM SIZED DOG IS BLOODY STRONGER THAN BLOODY SIS APEX
HES EVEN WEAKER THAN OHSS APEX AND HE WAS 12 BLOODY YEARS OLD!!!!! ZASS APEX HANGS HIS HEAD IN SHAME AT HIS PATHETIC COUNTERPART
THEN WRITE A CHAPTER AND BLOODY SHOW YOUR NOT WEAK YOUR DAMN SELF !
oh great so now everybody gets to have unrealistically badass characters with no flaws or problems :huh: , come on you guys be true to yourself apex I have no doubt when you get mad your fighting improves but beating up three grown men?
If a subadult dingo can I think a fully gron male human can
Lol low blow
Apex the dingo had an ambush and he only grabbed one guy, the other two were beaten by VD who also got the jump on them
and i didnt land one punch at all just laid on the ground and got the daylights kicked out of me
Lol least VD saved you.
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