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Jashin; Jaunt Ron
Topic Started: Aug 26 2014, 08:40 PM (77 Views)
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Full Name: Jaunt Ron Jashin
Pronunciation: Jaw-Sheen
Nicknames: N/A
Age: 21
Height: 6"2
Weight: 186 lb
Appearance: Jashin stands at a resonable six feet and two inches. He possesses a muscular physique, taking one look at him anyone could tell that he regularly trains himself. He has neck length dark hair that he wears combed over towards one side. His arm has various scars from previous fights that he has had, none of which he is embarrassed to show. He has yet to take up any tattoos or any other discerning marks. As it is, he is a rather plain looking individual. He wears simple clothing, preferring more comfortable wear rather than anything restricitng. By his waist he wears his scabbard. He also carries a small bag on his back to keep any extra items or food.
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Personality:
Alignment Jashin's natural alignment would be something along the lines of chaotic neutral, not believing himself to be tied down to nny kind of faction, doing what he wants when he wants. He prefers to live a life free from the warring nations and their quest to locate the center. Though if it were to spike some interest in him, he would go off to make an attempt at locating it.

Morals The dark haired man isn't one to take the moral high ground, in most cases he would be known to simply eradicate his foes. One or another they are going to die, so he feels as if he should be the one to help them through that journey. He believes in honour on the battlefield, feeling that if an opponent is worthy enough, he'll claim their life and trust that they'll make it to a spiritual afterlife reserved for those who are strong.

Social Interaction When it comes down to it, Jashin is one to interact with others, believing himself to be very sociable with those who he doesn't deem worthy enough to kill, or in some cases, not yet worthy to kill. When he feels like it, he can be very helpful towards others.

Goals One of his major goals within life is to find an enemy strong enough to kill him. It is because of this he is always after enemies to satiate his boredom of the world. When he finds individuals that he believes can become a challenge for him later in life, he gladly tries to assist them in improving their skills and tactics so they can become formidable foes.

--Character Quirks--
Maniacal Jashin can be at times seen to burst into fits of laughter from every day things that he deems hilarious. Things that afterwards, could hold no effect on him.

Ego Vanity is something that he seemed to have been born with, believing himself to be an angel restrained within the body of a mere mortal man. Those who dare oppose him soon feel the wrath of his might if he deems them unworthy to properly challenge him.
Combat: Normally, during combat, Jashin will not go all-out at the start. Only ever doing so when he knows that his opponent is a worthwhile foe. In all other cases, he'd restrain himself to the point where he even appear weak towards his foe. He'd only ever begin to fight seriously against those who reach his expectations. For those who seem to hold a lot of potential, he almost always quits and those who deems to be unworthy, he'd hold his nose up to them and simply ignore or walk away from them.
Strengths:

  • Enhanced Strength
  • Enhanced Speed
  • Enhanced Durability
Weaknesses:

  • Fully Offensive - One of his greatest strengths also acts as one of his greatest weaknesses. Jashin never acts on the offensive so those who can get past his attacks can easily make a good hit against him.
  • No Martial Arts - Jashin lacks the ability to fight against those who use hand-to-hand combat. If he were to lose his weapon, he would be completely vulnerable to his oppositions attacks.
  • Bad Start - Jashin always holds back at the start of his fights against his opponents, for anyone who prefers to go all out during the start, they'd have an excellent match-up against Jashin.

Special Abilities: Expert Swordsman. Known figure among the members of the underworld.
History: For Jaunt, life was boring. Within a world filled with conflict, nothing ever exciting ever happened to him or anything around him. He grew up within the confines of a small farming village. The only thing he had that resembled companions were his parents, both of whim were good willed farmers. He detested their very presence. Well manners, civilised, kind-hearted, everything that Jaunt wasn't. Not that it was their fault that Jaunt was riddled with angst from the moment he was born. He was simply born that way, no one had any say on the matter.

It was the boy's dream to go out and see the world and encounter those who would allow him to live the life he had always wanted and knew was destined for him. His parents were aware of his uncalled for anger within him, the blood lust which exuded from him every time they turned their backs towards him. Which was why, when one day he was no where to be found, they realised that there would have been nothing they could have done to stop him. If anything, he would have surely killed them both for being near him.

With his life now on the road, he had to fight to survive. These were his better years. Every opponent he found was always at his level or above, forcing him to fight to his utmost to win. As he began to age, entering his late teens, those days began to become few and far between. Each of the regular opponents he fought becoming weaker and weaker until he believed he himself was the only person that could defeat him. His viscous fighting style being his take on reality. That is that he wishes to cut through everything until someone finally manage to hit and defeat him. He travels the world to find opponent to free him from reality.




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How long you've been roleplaying for: None of this information is necessary
Anything else we should know: smh fam
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Appearance: Nothing much wrong here, good job. Regularly trains himself in what though? Also 'his arm'? Which one? Or do you mean both? I'm a little confused. 'By his waist he wears his scabbard.' I think you mean that he carries a sword, in a scabbard, on his waist (I'm presuming on a belt or something.), because the way you've phrased it makes it sound like he just runs around with an empty scabbard. But like I said, overall good job, 2/10 would not bang.

Morals: Stellar job here, apart from a grammatical error 'one or another they are going to die'. I'll guess you mean 'one way or another'. As for 'spiritual afterlife', is there another kind?

Goals: In theory, anyone can kill him. I think you mean kill him honorably or something.

Maniacal: Since when does laughing at things he thinks are funny make someone a maniac? Maybe describe the things he thinks are funny.

Combat: Uh, this needs a re-write. 'he almost always quits' doesn't make any sense. You mean, if he's being attacked, he just quits if he deems them unworthy? How is he not dead? It's not as if the attacker is just gonna be like 'I would kill you, but you don't think I'm worthy. I'm gonna go train, get some weapons, and then kill you. This needs to be overhauled completely. There's also some spelling and grammar issues.

Strengths

  • Enhanced Strength is good!
  • Enhanced Speed - In combat? Do you mean agility, or just movement speed? Be more specific here.
  • Enhanced Durabilty - Do you mean he can take a lot of hits? Exercise for a long time? Both? Neither? Be more specific here.

Weaknesses Won't bother making a list, but you contradicted yourself with the first one. You said he's fully offensive, but you also said he's never offensive. Pick one!

History 'he wishes to cut through everything' that would make sense, only you've already said he won't fight people he deems unworthy or that might be worthy later on. So not everything then. Change this please! Also, his opponents don't get weaker, he gets stronger. Please, change this, it's confusing. Finally, I think you might mean something other than 'angst'. Anger? I could be wrong!



Overall very good job, I will approve it when you make the above edits!
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