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| Ankou | Feb 24 2014, 09:57 AM Post #1 |
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Out of Character Information Handler's Name: Aeron E-Mail Address: kfisher@siue.edu AIM Handle: : dbzocgkevin Name: Kevin Race: Hybrid Saiyan Class:Weaponmaster ![]()
Gender: Male Height: 5"11 Weight: 175 lbs Hair Color: Golden Blonde Eye Color: Blue Skin Color: White/ slightly tan Age: 17? Origin: Tuonela
History: Is this a dream? Aeron opened his eyes. This place was most definitely not his home. ~An unknown length of time ago~ Aeron ran through the streets of Zanar. The city was a technological masterpiece. Aeron was just enjoying his day watching the game of Aeron when suddenly the place blew up. Aeron was scared. He kept running. It didn't take long for Aeron to reach the exit out of Zanar. The forest outside was massive, with the shortest tree in sight being at least 100 feet tall. It was also full of deadly monsters. Aeron turned around quickly and put his back to the massive wall that was nearby. The wall protected Zanar but...there were monsters inside. It was the only thing separating Zanar from the rest of Tuonela. The wall had fallen. Three monsters approached Aeron. He dashed forward with his blade and tried to slay them but they knocked his broadsword "Rei" out of his hand. Rei was a blade passed down his family and he didn't want to lose it. It was the last gift given to him from his mother! "No!" Aeron dove for the blade and one of the creatures nearby pierced through his back. "No...." Aeron gasped as he slowly lost consciousness. The last thing he saw was multiple Oozaru's rampaging through the city killing monsters. If only he had been born with a tail... ~Present day~ Aeron looked at his chest. The wound had pierced straight through him but he was healed now. There was a massive scar on his chest and he could feel another one on his back. How long had he been out....and where was he? Aura Color:White Martial Arts Style: Aoyusumu Custom Skill, Block, or Signature Technique Name:Swordplay of Nightmares Custom Skill, Block, or Signature Technique Description: Aeron slides int oa stance unfamiliar to those in this land and unleashes the signature technique of his father. His blade seems to phase through objects and appear where the enemy least expects it. Custom Skill, Block, or Signature Technique Effect : Physical attack doing 110% damage. Successful: If your attack roll was 20 or higher SEVER. stats[/u] These are your starting stats, you may distribute 48 SP among them. All Stats must have at least 20% of your Total SP, meaning you must spend at least 10 SP on each stat at this point. Custom #2 TBD HP - 850 Power - 340 Dexterity - 17 Starting Moves Deep Wounds Mastery [FREESTYLE, MASTERY] Description: Many swordsmen stress the importance of honor or technique. You, on the other hand, have learned the true power of swordsmanship: cleaving. You tear into foes like a maniac wielding a hot knife against a butter army. The power behind a sword is what leads it to victory, and you bring as much power as the sword can handle. Effect: Whenever you perform a natural perfect attack roll on an attack that requires a Sword, SEVER. After taking damage from one of your attacks that has the Sword Weapon requirement, your opponent’s next attack and defense roll both suffer -2 to the result(s). This effect does not stack with itself. Requirements: You must know at least three (3) Non-Latent, Non-Custom Freestyle AAs/Skills Training Days: 4 Expert Swordplay [FREESTYLE, CONSTANT SKILL] Description: Displaying honed skills with the blade, the user shows their opponent the deadly arts they have learned. Effect: CONSTANT - Your attacks that require a Sword do +(5% Power) Damage. When performing an attack that requires a Sword, if your opponent's defensive roll result is +2 or less your attack roll result, you may still gain any SUCCESSFUL effects that are not a 'SEVER' effect. Your defensive roll results against moves that require a Sword gain +2. Costs 2 KI Points. Requirements: Sword Training Days: 2 Inner Peace [AOYUSUMU, CONSTANT SKILL] Description: It is not easy to create a sense of inner peace in battle -- fighting is chaotic in nature and hard on the spirit. Aoyusumu practioners are taught to disregard the chaos and maintain this hard to attain inner peace, putting them at ease and keeping them calm under pressure. Effect: CONSTANT - Whenever you STOP a single dice attack, gain 1 KI Point. Costs 1 Ki Point. Requirements: N/A Training Days: 2 Tricky Sword Maneuvers [FREESTYLE, PHYSICAL, WEAPON, MANIPULATED KI] Description: The sword is maneuvered in a variety of different directions as a means of confusing the foe as the attackers draws nearer. As the gap is closed, a feigned attack is made before a mirage version of the sword is thrown into the air. With the opponent focused elsewhere, the real blade is brought down. Effect: Physical attack doing (30% Power) Damage. SUCCESSFUL - If your attack roll result is 20 or more, you may activate a Constant Skill with 'Swordplay' in the title. If 'Expert Swordplay' is already activated, this attack gains +3 to the results and gains "SUCCESSFUL - Your opponent loses 1 KI Point". Costs 1 KI point. Requirements: Sword Weapon Training Days: 2 Slice 'n' Hack [FREESTYLE, PHYSICAL, WEAPON] Description: When wielding a blade, sometimes simplicity is best -- hack and slash until you see blood. Effect: RESTRICTEDx2. Physical attack doing (30% Power) Damage per hit. Your attack roll is 2d30 with this attack. SUCCESSFUL - If both attack roll results are 25 or higher, this attack gains 'SEVER'. STOPPED - Gain 1 KI Point. Costs 3 KI Points. Requirements: Sword Weapon Training Days: 3 Defiant Stance [AOYUSUMU, BLOCK] Description: Standing with feet shoulder-width apart, the user thrusts their arms out, ensnaring an incoming physical attack or physically halting an energy attack with their bare palms. Effect: RESTRICTEDx2. Block. Stop a physical or energy attack. Costs X-1 KI Points. Requirements: N/A Training Days: 3 Edited by Ankou, Feb 24 2014, 09:18 PM.
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| Kalkavek | Feb 24 2014, 04:51 PM Post #2 |
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We're trying to avoid direct SEVER from customs, as those are more of an after-life tier effect. For assistance with SEVERing, give Carcer Jackrum's customs a look. He wanted SEVER but I couldn't allow a direct effect, and instead increased existing ones within the parameters. I hate bubblebursting, but hope this helps! |
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| Ankou | Feb 24 2014, 07:07 PM Post #3 |
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Ager , however, are customs not meant to be around afterlife tier? How does this sound. Name: nightmare slash Description: Aero n's entire body seems to have monsters coming from it as he charges his opponent. Each slice seems to make his opponent weaker to blades. Signature attack Effect: restricted x1. Physical attack doing 110% damage. Successful: for the remainder of the match your attacks that require a sword can sever with a roll two lower than normal Second one. Name: dream swordplay description: Aeron becomes slightly ethereal and his body seems to phase through objects. He uses this to his advantage to increase his ability to slice with his blade. Effect:constant : your attacks that require a sword gain +3 yo the results. Edited by Ankou, Feb 24 2014, 07:40 PM.
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| Kalkavek | Feb 24 2014, 07:11 PM Post #4 |
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Customs are actually specifically stated to not be afterlife tier they're meant to by Style tier.
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| Ankou | Feb 24 2014, 07:13 PM Post #5 |
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I Aim High :p
Edited by Ankou, Feb 24 2014, 07:29 PM.
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| Kalkavek | Feb 25 2014, 01:28 PM Post #6 |
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Proposal: Nightmare Slash [FREESTYLE, PHYSICAL, WEAPON] Description: Aeron's entire body seems to have monsters coming from it as he charges his opponent. Each slice seems to make his opponent weaker to blades. Effect: RESTRICTEDx1. Physical attack doing (100% Power) Damage. SUCCESSFUL - Your attacks that require a Sword weapon deal +(5% Power) Damage for the remainder of the Match. The next time you perform a single dice attack that requires a Sword Weapon, you may reduce the base damage to (0% Power) to have that attack gain "SUCCESSFUL - SEVER" for that turn. Costs 7 KI Points. Requirements: Sword Weapon Dream Swordplay [FREESTYLE, SKILL] Description: Aeron becomes slightly ethereal and his body seems to phase through objects. He uses this to his advantage to increase his ability to slice with his blade. Effect: CONSTANT - Your attacks that require a Sword cannot have their KI Point costs modified by your opponent's effects. After using a Block, your next attack that requires a Sword gains +3 to the result(s) and does +(10% Power) Damage. Costs 2 KI Points. Requirements: Sword Weapon |
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| Ankou | Feb 25 2014, 01:49 PM Post #7 |
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Let me consider them, however I would like the sig to have "Requirement:Sword Weapon " |
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| Kalkavek | Feb 25 2014, 02:01 PM Post #8 |
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Edited that in and clarified. As it was, it could work on multi-dice, but it also could have been interpreted to only effect basic weapon attacks. Now it's clear to be single dice weapon AAs and single dice basic weapon attacks.
Edited by Kalkavek, Feb 25 2014, 02:01 PM.
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| Ankou | Feb 25 2014, 04:40 PM Post #9 |
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Accepted |
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| Ankou | Feb 26 2014, 01:16 AM Post #10 |
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am I good to go? changing starting llocation to dark star |
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| Kalkavek | Feb 26 2014, 09:14 AM Post #11 |
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they're meant to by Style tier.
3:44 AM Jul 11