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- It's Your Judgement Day.

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- An Agent of the Heavens.
"When the moment is right... That's when you shall find out who you truly are..." The words spoken from the being whom had endowed Māku with these powers he would soon learn to control. These are the only words Māku remembers from his childhood and sadly, the faded, broken image of the being that had spoken these words is the only image Māku can draw on. He remembers nothing of parents, family, friends. For as long as he can remember, he's been wandering the streets all of his life. Finding his own food, fighting his own battles. Māku bounced from various homeless shelters, because for some reason, he didn't want to stay at any orphanage. Something -- Some voice -- Steered him away from them. In his time sleeping on the streets, though, Māku had started to have a recurring dream. A dream a leather-clad punk looking being with a flaming skull in place of an ordinary head, rode a Harley with flaming wheels. Swinging around a chain, blasting fire from his mouth and eyes. Locked in battle with a large figure, black bodied, and a strange white mask. These fights would feel like they've lasted for days, even if Māku had only been asleep for a minute. One night, strangely enough, the battle had finally ended. The leather-clad fighter being the victor. Upon turning around, his face returned to normal. It was Māku's face. He'd awoken with a jolt, a jump. He simply got up, and ran. Ran with no direction, just ran. He wanted to, he tried to outrun the dreams, that alley, he wanted to outrun his life. However that's when his first "incident" happened. It was a hollow attack, and Māku could see it all too well. The dream had pushed Māku spiritual standing over the edge -- he'd become spiritually aware, to a degree. He saw a faded image of what was the hollow, and he stared at it, unable to do anything. Scared out of his wits. And that's when he saw the smoke. Coming, from his head. Flame had erupted, and his head had turned into a skull! A flaming one, at that. And out of a billowing pillar of fire, a Harley was built with flaming wheels. Māku did nothing, some force guided his body. Mounted him on the Harley, and in another burst of fire Māku was leather-clad. This same force is what made Māku drive at the hollow, and cause several chains to fly from his arm. This same force kept Māku locked in combat with the hollow for hours. This same force, caused Māku to chain the hollow and blow a hole straight through his face, with flames that came from Māku's eyes and mouth. It was at this point Māku had driven off, and transformed back into... well... Māku. Despite the awesome battle, despite what he'd just done, the power he'd just displayed, Māku didn't want this. However he had no idea what had just happened, what he was, what he was supposed to do. And he remembered those words... "When the moment is right... That's when you shall find out who you truly are..." The moment felt so right, but Māku still couldn't draw on anything. It is from that point on Māku decided to travel wherever he would, to discover his true identity, and figure out what he's supposed to do with his amazing power.
- [Full Name]: Māku Subarashī.
- [Age]: Sixteen.
- [Height]: 5'11".
- [Weight]: 145 Pounds.
- [Residence]: Tokyo, Japan.
- [Occupation]: None.
- [Race]: Human/Fullbringer.
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- Defining Hellbound.
- [Sharingan]: Sharingan (精神の復讐, lit. 'Copy Eye') is a dōjutsu kekkei genkai, which appears in some members of the Uchiha clan. It is one of the Three Great Dōjutsu (三大瞳術, San Daidōjutsu; Literally meaning "Three Great Eye Techniques"), along with the Byakugan and the Rinnegan. The Sharingan is also called "Heaven's Eye" (天眼, Tengan), because of the many abilities it grants the user.
精神の復讐 ○ Sharingan: Abilities - [Tomoes]: As seen in all holders of the Sharingan, their pupils turn red upon activation of the Sharingan. Tomoes, or commas, represent the amount of power located within a Sharingan eye, depending on it's user. One to three, and then the users Sharingan takes its own form after gaining the hidden eye, Mangekyo Sharingan. The way of gaining the tomoes, (one and three) is through near-death experiences and enough chakra to even generate for the Sharingan to form. The second tomoe comes from training with the Sharingan eyes, delevoping an ease for using the eye, though unmastered.
- [Nyoronyoden]: Nyoronyoden (にちげつ/, lit.
'Percieving Movements') is an ability given once gaining the third tomoe of the Sharingan. After gaining the third tomoe, the user is able to predict and act on what his Sharingan has the ability to percieve. The ability of the dodging comes purely from the user, if he's fast enough to dodge and react from the incoming attack. It's percieving movements ability also works on percieving handseals, giving the Sharingan-user the ability to copy ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu, outside of Kekkei Genkai. - [Sharingan Genjutsu]: When having three tomoes, the user is able to connect through eye contact with the opponent. Binding them in Genjutsu, needing an outside source somehow, to release them from within the Genjutsu given by the Sharingan. The Genjutsu inside the Sharingan is manipulatable by the user of the Sharingan itself. Variating in power by the user. Also, using the technique Utakata is a way of binding one inside of a Genjutsu without using eye contact, but you need an outside force.
- [Kugyōgyōshi]: Kugyōgyōshi (苦行凝視, lit. 'penance stare'), is perhaps the most powerful ability Māku has in his arsenal. Upon coming to direct eye contact with a being, Māku can, in mere seconds, inflict every bit of pain they've caused in their entire lifetime unto them. A pain that they shall feel for an eternity. However, when he performs the penance stare, Māku sacrifices portions of his own spirit. Therefore he can only use it so many times before he dies. [LOCKED.]
- [Enhanced abilities]: Zokugai has been shown to be like a super shinobi. Showing a great prowess in almost anything he does, through the use of his Sharingan. Mastering in Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Bujutsu. Though, with the ability to mimic from the Sharingan, he's able to use projectiles and other type moves at a quick rate, even on par with those who have mastered them all.
- [Immense Spiritual Energy]: Māku's spiritual energy becomes incredibly great in power, and spiritual pressure corresponds.
(These are Māku's powers when he gains full control over his fullbring, therefore I'll realistically roleplay the increase of power control versus the abilities he has at full potential, or unlocked period.)
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- A Tale of Vengeance.
Māku Subarashī - Character Progression
PART I: Identification. (COMPLETED)
Approved Updates - [Prologue]: Māku Subarashī. A teenager who has recently discovered he has power, incredible power. He has taken down a large, powerful hollow, and yet he still has not reached his peak. However, Māku doesn't want this power. He believes it to be a curse, to be doomed to avenge the innocent for god knows how long. He's on a quest. A quest to find out who he is, what he's meant to do, how he can rid himself of this curse. A quest to find himself.
- [Dinner Crashing!]: Māku was riding his Harley through Karakura Town when he'd stopped by a park, to go in and look for someone who could help him find some answers. He'd gotten a quick glance of a woman sitting on a building, however he hadn't payed much attention to that. It was at that point that he'd began to hear crashes, bangs, and booms. Upon turning around, he saw it. A Gigante, breaking buildings and cars and coming right at him. He swung a punch towards Māku, however he'd easily evaded it. And then a volley of arrows, from the rooftop. The lady he'd seen previously, was shooting arrows. Māku had fled, but in the distance an innocent woman was murdered by the Gigante. So, Māku was obligated to take vengeance. He'd transformed into the Spirit of Vengeance, and went right back at the Gigante. It was knocked back at him, and he quite easily just tossed it out of his way. The Gigante came to him with a punch, and Māku had announced his motives and intentions in that one moment. His chain coiled aroudn the Gigante's fist, and hellfire aptly coated it. With a simple constriction, the hand was decimated. The Gigante then began to flee, begging for it's life. Māku shot a torrent of hellfire from his mouth, and destroyed the Gigante. However, in that same moment what was thought to be a freak accident resulted in the death of two humans. And so, Māku took off into the streets.
Sometime later, he once again encountered the woman, who revealed her name to be Stütz. Stütz displayed a form of spiritual sensory earlier, and had thought that with the abilities that Māku had previously displayed, he could easily come upon some form of sensory. And sure enough, not too long after that, Māku had in a brief flash sensed an incoming soul. You see, Stütz had previously crushed some hollow bait, and in came the menos grande. Māku was just about to leave, when the menos had murdered an innocent bystander. And so he became the Spirit of Vengeance, and lunged into action. Māku rushed at the menos, and swung his chain around it's neck. Then Māku swung around on the chain, and stood on the back of the Menos. He began to restrict, and tried to tame it like it were a wild horse. It bucked and jumped around, like it was a wild horse. Māku knew he wasn't going to win that battle, but he just wanted to distract the menos long enough for Stütz to take the shot. Stütz lunged into action and fired a volley of arrows, just as the menos had thrown Māku half way across Karakura Town. He aptly returned, and not only were his injuries minimal, but the broken part of his skull healed over in moments. Māku had brought down a menos grande, but that wasn't the last of his problems...
An adjuchas. An adjuchas had came moments after the menos grande was vanquished. His brief appearance even caused Stütz to drop and weaken, so Māku carried her to safety. Upon his return, he'd noticed another figure locked in combat with the adjuchas. The adjuchas had evaded one of his strikes, and had come back with a strike of his own. Māku secured his chain around the incoming claw, keeping the unknown fighter from being harmed. However the adjuchas had fled, while the unknown fighter sent a recently killed to the Seireitei. He insisted to Māku that he was "no one," but Maku just could not believe that. But with the disappearance of the fighter, Māku drove off into the night on his Harley, with knowledge on what he's supposed to do. He drove off, knowing that now he's an avenger. Knowing that he's to use these powers to protect those who have yet to die, and deliver swift justice on behalf of those who have died, his way. (6/10/2012)
- [Vanden What...?]: While wandering Karakura with another fullbringer, Māku and this fullbringer had come along two souls, rushing through Karakura. These souls were different, however, as they didn't seem so directionless as the others. They communicated, worked together, and were definitely heading somewhere. Māku followed them on his harley, attempting to figure out why they were running. And it was then, they moved faster... Faster... and teleported. They followed the two through a construction sight, up a building, and ... Into the Seireitei. Māku was initially confused, he wasn't sure where he was... But then he sensed it. That same spiritual pressure of the great man that stopped the adjuchas that had attacked previously. And the other fullbringer was busy taxing the patience of the man. Māku kept trying to coax the other fullbringer into leaving, but he wouldn't go. And then after a series of events, the fullbringer's leg was severed. He was aptly given back to Māku, who had then left the Seireitei through the gate that brought them there. After dropping him, he'd encountered a gunslinger, Jenvioletto. Jenvioletto had learned of Māku's hellfire, and wanted to test it. So after a lengthy battle, in which each of the competitors landed a fair enough shot on one-another, Māku had accidentally performed the Kugyōgyōshi on Jenvioletto. Bringing up so much pain he had to keep from crying, but in that had pushed Jenvioletto to some new boundaries. Then, Jenvioletto proposed that Māku would be good for Vandenreich, a group of people who are generally against the world, and see that only they should be protecting mankind. Māku accepted their offer, and not too soon after Stütz wound up breaking some hollow-bait and the battle was on. Jenvioletto handled one, and Māku and Stütz handled another. Māku jumped on the hollow's back, and steered it like an animal by way of his chain on the beasts' neck. The menos grande flew back around, and Māku jerked back, keeping the thing at bay and distracted. While it fought Māku, and almost broke the chain, Stütz unleashed a massive flurry of arrows and Māku leaped from the menos grande in time to not be skewered. "VANDENREICH COMBO NUMBER ONE: MENOS-BREAKER!" is what Māku dubbed it. A combination worthy of a name, indeed. In the end, they reigned victorious. Māku has found himself, who he is, what he is meant to do on this world, and he's ready to represent Vandenreich and all that they stand for.
PART 2: Vandenreich Versus the World! (ONGOING)
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