| lunaticus; world's smartest mute | |
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| lunaticus | Apr 13 2012, 05:24 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Lunaticus. He, however, is incapable of communicating this. Age/Age Range: probably somewhere around 14 Gender: male Race: human Occupation: N/A Physical Description: Whilst he might seem like a fairly generic 14 year old, the most recognizable traits being that he wears glasses and his very curly hair. His right hand, that he almost universally keeps hidden in a pocket, is however mostly covered by what looks most like some sort of golden gauntlet (covering pretty much the entire arm.) with a sizable opal in the palm. History: It is unknown what happened in lunaticus' past, and it is unknown wether lunaticus remembers it himself or wether he doesn't know either. The only thing one can conclude is that he gained incredible skill in the production of magitechnological and technomagical contraptions, like his gauntlet and his universal light source. He also lost the ability to speak or write at some point, but can still communicate with drawings (he usually caries a notepad around) and gestures and understand both written and spoken english. Important Relationships: unknown, if any. Combat expertise: low/weak. Lunaticus is weak and inexperienced in combat, but can use his magitek to make up for this in a pinch. Magic expertise: high/expert. His ability to make magitek is incredible, but he is incapable of using normal magic. Overall Goal: He doesn't to be appear quite sure about what to do, but he is very curious about the world and would like to see more of it. He also spends a lot of time fiddling around with magitek, but appears to consider it little more then a handy tool and a fun thing to mess around with. Strength: 8 Endurance: 9 Intelligence: 27 Willpower: 11 Dexterity: 13 Agility: 11 Charisma: 1 (He is completely incapable of talking or even writing.) Talents: Universal light source: Lunaticus carries a universal light source that can produce any kind of light, most notably blinding flashes and lasers. (active) Strength amplifying gauntlet: Lunaticus can overload the magitek implements in his gauntlet to temporarily boost the strength of the arm with the gauntlet, granting him a protective forcefield, and limited "telekinetic" (In the sense of moving things from a distance, no relation to psychic stuffs) powers. note: temporary as in 1 or 2 seconds, not a minute. (active) Technology expert: Lunaticus is incredibly skilled at working with technology, usually easily understanding how to use it near instantly, and being able to fix it (using magitek replacement parts) almost as fast and in astonishingly little time. (passive) Edited by lunaticus, Apr 14 2012, 09:28 AM.
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| Takoto | Apr 13 2012, 05:30 PM Post #2 |
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Please improve your capitalization and punctuation ^^;; |
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| lunaticus | Apr 13 2012, 05:56 PM Post #3 |
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I added most, if not all, of the caps i missed. Not sure what punctuation i did wrong, seeing as i not someone who has had any form of useful English education. next time, please just tell me what sentences their meanings are unclear because of the awkwardness of my English. Saying "bad punctuation" isn't very helpful to me, seeing as i am not from any English-speaking country and school hasn't really thought me anything regarding English punctuation. Edited by lunaticus, Apr 13 2012, 05:56 PM.
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| Takoto | Apr 13 2012, 06:12 PM Post #4 |
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Ah, okay. Well, under the first talent, elaborate on what "and a bunch of others." is. Once you've done that, I'll approve it |3 |
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| lunaticus | Apr 13 2012, 06:37 PM Post #5 |
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a variety of other gadgets, do i absolutely have to set everything in stone? if so, i guess an arc-welder/tazer combination and a grappling hook would be fine. could make new gadgets later on, though? maybe even for the other characters? Edited by lunaticus, Apr 13 2012, 06:37 PM.
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| OniSuika | Apr 13 2012, 09:15 PM Post #6 |
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Almost approved. I would only ask that the first power be limited to a single powerful gadget with a precise use, to avoid unfairness to other characters. Multiple gadgets can still be part of his character and used to describe attacks! but as far as having a direct effect goes, being able to pull out "any of numerous gadgets" to do anything you want is a bit unfair. Other than that, everything is fine. |
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| lunaticus | Apr 14 2012, 09:30 AM Post #7 |
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ok i changed it to only the universal light source EDIT: so, have i been approved now...? Edited by lunaticus, Apr 17 2012, 04:34 PM.
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| Takoto | Apr 17 2012, 05:03 PM Post #8 |
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Yes, approved by me. But it needs to be approved by another moderator as well. |
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