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[001] Flashback; Debut single
Topic Started: Dec 12 2013, 11:46 PM (172 Views)
Lia
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Debut single is released!


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==Singers==
Livy | Dassa | Taeyu | JW | Pandah | Kelly | Stella


When writing your feedback on the single, remember to not flame or bash anyone. Try to point out good points and what you liked about it and poitn out bad things and how to improve. You don't need to know exactly how to improve that exact point - give them tips that you usually do to manage it, give it your best shot! ♥
Please try to reply to the feedback too! Otherwise it might be seen as you've taken the feedback bad and won't listen and such.

Edited by Lia, Dec 13 2013, 12:42 AM.
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I'll go first then, I hope it's here I'm supposed to write, otherwise delete this and I'll see that and I'll just paste this where it's supposed to go (I have it in a googledoc XDD)

First I gotta say; this is a great collab. I'm gonna try and write something now but it's hard XD I'm listening to it over and over nitpicking on everything :p I have literally listened to this like 15 times now. STOP BEING SO AMAZING YOU'RE MAKING THIS TOO HARD FOR ME!

Kelly - Your singing was a great way to start the song. It had great energy and umpf XD I really didn’t have a problem with your singing at all .__. keep up the good work. If anything, maybe a little bit more energy in the chorus?
Stella - bridge was very pretty~ (the thing after my rap XD). You didn’t really have that many lines in this one, idk what to say. Sorry to see you leave, you were great~ best of luck to you and keep up the good work!
Taeyu - idk, I could have liked more energy and articulate more in the boini neo midgil bare? Any perhaps some more umpf in the Dance, like a ”DANCE! 8|” (<- cool guy with sunglasses)
Dassa - I guess I'd have to say more energy. Compared to the others in a few places you sound not as strong. Especially in the chorus. but I think you sounded great nonetheless!
JW - The come in to my world was off pitch in the beginning of the sentences? idk, something seems off to me o.o But the high notes was really good and strong! Your learning not to peak and stuff while recording and I like it : D
Livy - The bridge is really pretty and I thought you had amazing energy! Did it feel like the BABY thing was kinda high? I can kinda hear you struggling maybe? o.o

Should I write something about myself? In that case I’ll say my high notes are not really great, though that I am not surprised over trying to push it out, but I’m impressed by myself for sorta doing the BABY!- thing. The chorus; not so much XD And if they are my harmonies I kinda like them ^_^
Edited by Pandah, Dec 13 2013, 02:44 AM.
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Just as Pandah said, I think it may be hard to give feedback when we're pleased with the outcome of a collab. So I'll try my best and hopefully I can do a better job for future releases. (If I may, I would like to be able to hear a capellas in order to pay closer attention to the vocals. ^_^)

Pronunciation was really good for everyone. Only 1 syllable had a mispronunciation every now and then. Some of the things I point out might not be a big deal, but I'll post them still since we're supposed to help each other out. Sorry if my comments seem stupid. ><

Pandah - I noticed you said "baro up" instead of "baro dab" in the first verse. Just a minor error. Your rap was very good. But I especially liked you in the first verse. Your "baby" really is good as well :)

Taeyu - Instead of "모습" you sung "무습." I think your parts could have used a bit more energy. Just minor things but overall quite good.

JW - I have heard you sing a lot and you have made much improvement until now. I may not be able to express it to well since I don't know the musical terms, but the thing that sticks out to me that you could keep working on is that sometimes you may mumble and sound like maybe you're trying hard to put your voice out like big pop singers do. Your "come into my world" could have used a bit more practice, but I was very pleased with your high/long note since from the very first listen.

Livy - In the first chorus it sounds like you're saying "barabwa" instead of "barAEbwa." It was just a slight and very common error. ^^ In the second verse I feel like you could have enunciated the "jyeo" in sarajyeo a bit more. But this part sounded very good vocal wise to me. Your "don't let me down" sounded very good!

Kelly - You also said "barabwa" instead of "barAEbwa" xD (I don't blame you guys since I used to think that was the lyric). I like that you didn't copy everything and made the song more your own.

Stella - I love your part in the bridge. It's very pretty. Your accent in "flashback" is cute and works very well ^^ It's too bad you're leaving after such a great job done, but thanks for joining for this release and I wish you the best!

Sorry if it seems like I said more about a few people than others. I tried to even out my comments. I'll do better next time with this ><

(Pandah - I think people keep saying I lack energy because my voice is really soft. Maybe here it's because I was thinking of the sad emotions more than the "feeling crazy" ones. I'll try to bring it out some more ^^)
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I don't like to write feedbacks for everyone but well it can also improve our singing! but i'm not really good at it so please excuse meee !

Livy, well autotune sounds sooooo good in you *-*, I really enjoyed your bridge part!

Dassa, you have such a cute voice, sometimes, you lacks a little energy too but overall it was pretty good^^

Taeyu, I think that you lacks a little energy, your first line sounds a little flat but I loved the way you said DANCE!

Pandah, your voice is really pretty but the harmonise that you did at 2:15 was off key, so it didn't sound so right. I think that your voice suits cute song better than fierce one but during your little rap part, it suits nana perfectly ^^

JW, I think that your falsetto is really beautiful especially the down down down I know that Raina's SUPER MEGA HIGH NOTE is SOOOOOOO Hard, you strained a little your voice there which makes me feel like you're not counfortable at all but it was still amazing.

Stella, I love your attitude! And the way your pronounce your words, you give a little feel that is need in this song.
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So far, all comments you've made sounds so good and will help everyone improve in their own way! :D So keep up the good work~
The comments doesn't have to be an essay long so yeah xD it's okay to just point them out and what you thought about it.
I can upload an acapella soon and will also do that in the future, but it will be uploaded here though xD but I guess that okay haha~

I'll be back with personal comments too! :)

Good job everyone!
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Dec 13 2013, 02:12 PM
So far, all comments you've made sounds so good and will help everyone improve in their own way! :D So keep up the good work~
The comments doesn't have to be an essay long so yeah xD it's okay to just point them out and what you thought about it.
I can upload an acapella soon and will also do that in the future, but it will be uploaded here though xD but I guess that okay haha~

I'll be back with personal comments too! :)

Good job everyone!
Thanks! Just a box upload is what I had in mind.

Kelly - Thanks for your feedback! ^_^
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So I think it's my turn now :)
But since everyone have said a lot of things (I suppose all of them can be consider as... a lot.... .__.)
I just want to say WOW for Dassa's comments about the pronunciation. I'm not that meticulous to realize about them...
and SINCE (again) all I want to say are approximately have all said by you guys, so I'll just reply what you guys have said about me :3 (Hope that will be alright :))

To Dassa - Wow, idk you've heard me sing from a lot :o Thank you :3 Ummm let's see. Maybe it's because I'm having a transition phase from classical to pop? Yea, maybe that's what you mean too. It's just have been a few months. Hope my voice can adapt with kpop style better later :') And about the mumbling, I'll try to fix that. Thanks for the feedback :D and I just love how you pull out that 'molla' (or what was the lyrics again...) in the end of the phrase of your part in 1st verse :0

To Pandah - Yup, they're out off the pitch. I'm sorry for that.... I think it's because I tried to focus on the high notes too much so I didn't really pay attention to the phrase before :( I'll try my best to be better. And you know what? Your voice is my favorite here :D (I've said that and I want to say that again :))

To Kelly - Aww, you're too sweet. You sound awesome too~ especially the opening rap. I was just blown away~ You got the swag, girl! Yea, idk. Sometimes when I try to belt it mostly sounds hoarse a bit but sometimes it doesn't feel hurt. But the other sometimes it feels hurt. I have to develop my chest and mixed voice more. I've just tried belting around 2-3 months ago and usually I used head voice to hit high notes. So... I still have a long way to go :3

To Lia - I hope you're the mixer... Because I want to say this is soooo well mixed!!

To Stella - I hope you still can read this. You're so good. It's so bad that you have to leave :( I believe you leave for good. I hope I still can hear a lot from you in the future :D

To everyone - I LOVE YOU GUYS! YOU GUYS ROCK~
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Dec 14 2013, 09:17 AM
So I think it's my turn now :)
But since everyone have said a lot of things (I suppose all of them can be consider as... a lot.... .__.)
I just want to say WOW for Dassa's comments about the pronunciation. I'm not that meticulous to realize about them...
and SINCE (again) all I want to say are approximately have all said by you guys, so I'll just reply what you guys have said about me :3 (Hope that will be alright :))

To Dassa - Wow, idk you've heard me sing from a lot :o Thank you :3 Ummm let's see. Maybe it's because I'm having a transition phase from classical to pop? Yea, maybe that's what you mean too. It's just have been a few months. Hope my voice can adapt with kpop style better later :') And about the mumbling, I'll try to fix that. Thanks for the feedback :D and I just love how you pull out that 'molla' (or what was the lyrics again...) in the end of the phrase of your part in 1st verse :0

I hope it's not too much ><
I just think pronunciation is a very important thing. All of the members are doing great in that department, so I'm very happy. :)
Thanks for sharing about your transition from classical music. That makes sense, and I'm glad you understood what I meant. ^^
Also glad you liked my molla.
Edited by Dassa, Dec 14 2013, 10:06 AM.
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Lia's personal comments~!

First off, I am really, really pleased with your debut single! The outcome is so much better than I expected and all those harmonies! As a group, I think we can come a long way!
In this single, I tried to give you lines that should be right by the edge of your abilities (or something, I may have failed....) to decide where the limiter is.

Livy | First off, I have to say I love the tune of your voice. It is on the higher sounding side but even so you manage to turn it rather mature. Like everyone else, your bridge line was really awesome! The harmonies suited it perfectly and brought out a new kind of sound to the song. Personally, I don't think the "baby" line was too high. It might sound higher than it should because of your voice type, but it was perfectly on pitch. I wish you had a better mic though haha ♥

Dassa | Like previous speakers, some lines could have used a bit more energy, but for this song I think your lines suited really good! You really nailed the first solo lines you had. As you said, you have a rather soft voice and a limited range, but I think that's something we can make use of as well as improve :)

Taeyu | Firstly, sorry for bothering you a lot with your lines. Like speakers above, pay attention to your feelings and energy when singing. First solo lines sound good pitch-wise but sound rather bored. I'd say you should try to sing out more and focus on how the lines are performed. In the duet line with JW, you kinda missed the "feeling of the line" but hit the pitch instead, making you two not blend so good. I also have to say I really liked your harmonies though, they suited your lines really good. Sing out girl, because I know there's more in there than we hear now!

JW | I am really amazed with your high notes and vocals. The adlibs before the last chorus might have come off a bit out of pitch, but I think you made them "yours". Like you said yourself, you struggle with the techniques how to switch between the head voice and chest voice (and so on), but that's just practice and practice! Pitch-wise you seem to be okay as well as in the emotion department. The thing I'd like you to be careful of in the coming singles is timing. You time your lines okay, but watch the syllables! Take note on how long the syllables really should be. Now you seem to stop short and cut them off. It's better if you drag them a bit longer and take the next sentence in another file ;)

Pandah | I really, really like your bridge part! I hear that you struggle with the higher notes, and I am sorry for that, but you seemed to work it out quite okay after the feedback I sent :)
But girl.......... you need to sing out more! I sense a girl that is hiding in the closet right now! You can sing! There's no need to hide and think you're not good! It sounds like you want to hide from your own lines.... go and eat them! Show them you're the boss!
Your "strike a pose" sounded so boss that I didn't think it was you at first.

Kelly | Opening line is perfect, just perfect! Like with Dassa, I think your range is a bit limited? Let's work on that! Because it sounds to me that the voice wants to go out and discover the world, but something is in the way. I like the tune of your voice and your harmonies worked really well too! I say to you like I said to Pandah, sing out! :)

Stella | Sad to see you go because you did a really good job in here, nothing big to say about it, and it would have been more than a pleasure to have you in the group! But all luck to you!
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Dec 15 2013, 03:37 PM
Lia's personal comments~!

First off, I am really, really pleased with your debut single! The outcome is so much better than I expected and all those harmonies! As a group, I think we can come a long way!
In this single, I tried to give you lines that should be right by the edge of your abilities (or something, I may have failed....) to decide where the limiter is.

Livy | First off, I have to say I love the tune of your voice. It is on the higher sounding side but even so you manage to turn it rather mature. Like everyone else, your bridge line was really awesome! The harmonies suited it perfectly and brought out a new kind of sound to the song. Personally, I don't think the "baby" line was too high. It might sound higher than it should because of your voice type, but it was perfectly on pitch. I wish you had a better mic though haha ♥

Dassa | Like previous speakers, some lines could have used a bit more energy, but for this song I think your lines suited really good! You really nailed the first solo lines you had. As you said, you have a rather soft voice and a limited range, but I think that's something we can make use of as well as improve :)

Taeyu | Firstly, sorry for bothering you a lot with your lines. Like speakers above, pay attention to your feelings and energy when singing. First solo lines sound good pitch-wise but sound rather bored. I'd say you should try to sing out more and focus on how the lines are performed. In the duet line with JW, you kinda missed the "feeling of the line" but hit the pitch instead, making you two not blend so good. I also have to say I really liked your harmonies though, they suited your lines really good. Sing out girl, because I know there's more in there than we hear now!

JW | I am really amazed with your high notes and vocals. The adlibs before the last chorus might have come off a bit out of pitch, but I think you made them "yours". Like you said yourself, you struggle with the techniques how to switch between the head voice and chest voice (and so on), but that's just practice and practice! Pitch-wise you seem to be okay as well as in the emotion department. The thing I'd like you to be careful of in the coming singles is timing. You time your lines okay, but watch the syllables! Take note on how long the syllables really should be. Now you seem to stop short and cut them off. It's better if you drag them a bit longer and take the next sentence in another file ;)

Pandah | I really, really like your bridge part! I hear that you struggle with the higher notes, and I am sorry for that, but you seemed to work it out quite okay after the feedback I sent :)
But girl.......... you need to sing out more! I sense a girl that is hiding in the closet right now! You can sing! There's no need to hide and think you're not good! It sounds like you want to hide from your own lines.... go and eat them! Show them you're the boss!
Your "strike a pose" sounded so boss that I didn't think it was you at first.

Kelly | Opening line is perfect, just perfect! Like with Dassa, I think your range is a bit limited? Let's work on that! Because it sounds to me that the voice wants to go out and discover the world, but something is in the way. I like the tune of your voice and your harmonies worked really well too! I say to you like I said to Pandah, sing out! :)

Stella | Sad to see you go because you did a really good job in here, nothing big to say about it, and it would have been more than a pleasure to have you in the group! But all luck to you!
Understood, Lia :) I'll do that next time :D
And you mixed it very well :'D
It's just so balanced and i love it. You're awesome!!
Fireflies, fighting~
And btw I can't wait to know who's our new member. I saw the audition is now closed :)
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