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Found the Foreign Office Foreign Defenses Trading Company; Draft
Topic Started: Sep 18 2012, 03:28 AM (50 Views)
m88youngling
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I put this together
Foreign Office Foreign Defenses Trading Company

I like to get these submitted on Sundays, which is rather easy for me to handle, but since I thought about it during the week this time, does anyone have any ideas on what should be changed or added?
I just wanted to double check. Thanks.
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Jimbobfrey
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Paying participating nations whom help create the co-designed defenses and weaponry with 45% of generated funds
This line could be open to impractical interpretations - there is no definition of what qualifies as co-designing and creating. The possible misinterpretations could be:

  • Contributing financially could qualify as helping to create weaponry.
  • Providing resources/equipment to build the weaponry may qualify as helping to create them.
  • Each participating nation must be paid 45% of the generated funds - this would limit the number of participating nations to 2 and this would cost 90% of all generated funds (if there were more than 2 participating nations, then more than 100% of the profits must be payed to them).
  • If a nation participates one time, they must keep being paid forever since the 'generated funds' is not specific to the defenses and weaponry they actually helped create (it could be interpreted as the generated funds of the whole Foreign Office Foreign Defenses Trading Company).


I think that this is a particularly good idea and a nice incentive. Perhaps though this line could be changed to the following:

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Paying the collective nations whom directly co-design the defenses and weaponry alongside the Foreign Office Foreign Defenses Trading Company with 45% of the generated funds of the aforementioned defenses and weaponry.


Despite this, I want to say that this is a very good proposal. I'd certainly vote for it. Well done. :)
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m88youngling
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Thanks, I edited to help make it more understandable. ^_^
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