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Fusion Wars; Finished - Expect a Full One-Post Soon
Topic Started: Sep 1 2005, 11:49 AM (8,016 Views)
Apocalypse
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King Hippo

BRYSTRIXALYPSE TRIANGLE ATTACK = unsuccessful. :(


We still own though. <<>>
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There is a light that never goes out...

You scared me Leon, I thought Psio died.
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Bosceon
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姚明

So much Bosco! :wub:


Now that, was a good chapter.
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Psio's alive! Huzzah! Good chapter, though I don't appreciate being electrocuted to the point of seizures.
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There is a light that never goes out...

MY EYES THEY SEIZURE!!!
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Ah reckon that was a toler'ble entrance. Cain't wait tuh see how li'l ol' Jaffar reacts when he sees Ah'm back. [/hick]

Nice use of anatonymical parallelism (a term I made up meaning almost totally different things with the same basic name and structure.) I like my character, he's silly. Looking forward to some development. Also, great story in general, though I hope Pendant doesn't die. That would be most unfortunate.
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There is a light that never goes out...

Pendant can't die, Leon knows from personal experience that she is invincible
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Bossadai
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Intense.

At least you didn't kill any of us...yet.

Great job, as usual.
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GUUUUNDAAAAAAAM

Just to keep this from dying. Really short, wrote it in half an hour. Shouldn't even count as a chapter.

I apologize for the lack of delays. Disgaea and school has taken over my life.

Chapter 22- Prt 1

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“Nyah, nyaaaaah~”

“W-What?” Pendant sat straight up, instead of laying down on the dirty cement floor. She noticed her surroundings – an ordinary alleyway in the ordinary Fef city. How’d she end up here? Last thing she remembered…

Wait, what?

She can’t seem to tap into her memories. Everything is foggy…what a weird feeling. This can’t be normal.

She scratched her head, it would come to her sooner or later.

“Nyaaaaah~”

Uh, wait. What was that sound she heard just a second ago? Pendant turned her head one way down the alley, and her face got assaulted and molested by a stray kitten. Pendant yelped, but was able to get the thing off her face before its claws came out. The thing was actually pretty cute, with its soft fur… Nyaaah~, it meowed again.

“Aww! So cute!” Pendant giggled, then realized she wasn’t sure where in God’s name this thing has been. B-But it’s a kitten! Cute little kitten! Sweet and innocent and pure goodness! Nyeeeeh! She wanted to huggle it – but then that would just make her female character a bit clichéd, no?

Pendant then noticed the faint change in temperature. The moonlight had faded away, it was just above the alley a moment ago. She looked up, and noticed that clouds had covered the sky quite quickly. But that wasn’t her biggest concern – it was the guy standing in front of her. Pendant took a small gulp and looked up, but couldn’t make out any details on the person. The face wasn’t visible at all, just darkness.

“Um, hello?”

The figure didn’t answer. Pendant still held the kitten with one hand as she put one hand on the ground to push herself up, but quickly noticed she couldn’t move her legs. She grunted, and looked down at her skirt, and below that, her legs. She felt a little light-headed when she saw that her legs were binded down to the pavement with tight, earthen vines. “How could I not notice that before?” She felt a sweat drop go down the back of her neck.

The kitten hissed at the figure. The figure stepped forward, and there before Pendant, was a young military private in weathered uniform. The man leered at the kitten, who leapt out of Pendant’s hand and retreated out of the alleyway, but not before hissing once more on its way out.

Pendant looked up again to see the intimidating person. She pointed her finger at him, but not in an accusing way. One of those, oh, hey! I know who you are! I’m so smart, ways. “Hey, aren’t you Bosco? Are you alright!? Did Marcus do anything to you?”

Her concern fell upon deaf ears. Bosco looked down at her with cold eyes, “Marcus…shall die.” His voice was just as cold as his eyes, and quite raspy.

“Huh?” Pendant was a little confused, “Um. No offense or anything, but Marcus is really skilled…more than me. He matches Colonel Jaffar. As much of a creep he is, I don’t think you’d really stand much of a—“

“Silence.”

“Geh?” Pendant suddenly felt overwhelmed. As if a thousand pounds were just released onto her, she could barley keep half of her body balanced. She put her two hands on the cement and leaned over, gasping. It was an amazing and sudden sweep of pain, “W, what was that!?”

“Power.” Bosco’s sword was drawn. It was no longer the military katana that he had. It was now an actual thick silver sword, practically as tall as Bosco. It looked so heavy, that it was physically impossible for Bosco to lift it. But he did. With one hand.

Odd characters were scribed on it, but Pendant did not have enough time to make them out. She suddenly felt a gust of air around her neck, and cold metal. Her neck was separated from her shoulders, and blood had splurged out from the windpipe in her neck. She was still conscious, however. She could see the alleyway fade out, and her slayer before her…

Then Bryars mere inches away from her face. So close she could see his small facial hair, and him with dreamy eyes on. “She’s so pretty when she’s asleep~♥”

“Bry-Bryars!?” Pendant felt even more light-headed than before, and she and Bryars both turned bright red.

“P-P-P-Pendant!?” Bryars stuttered more than usual, jumping back far enough that the female Major could now tell that she was in a hospital room, and was a patient on a bed, wrapped under sheets. Before she could realize what was going on, Bryars nearly ripped a large chunk of his hair out of his head as he ordered one of the nurses to give Pendant a boost of morphine. The morphine went in, and Pendant could hear her pacemaker beeping to the healthy rate of her heart.

Now she was in Australia with Koalas. Cute little Koalas in a tree. Pendant was a Koala too. A mama Koala grabbed a pear from the tree and ate it. Pendant grabbed a pear and bit into it. It was hard, but juicy. Juicy pears.

Back in Fef, Bryars was recovering from the mad amount of shock he had just received. “Y-You didn’t tell me that she would be awake so quickly!!”

“You never told me that you would be all giddy over her while she is asleep and rape her with your eyes.” The male nurse, Leaf replied.

“Wouldn’t you!?”

“God save us all.” Leaf sighed, then exited Pendant’s hospital room.
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Bossadai
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...What...the...crap...

...So basically, this chapter is Pendant having visions while I rape her with my eyes?

Leon, I think you killed the story already. :P
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XD That was... interesting. Now stop having a life and write more.
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O_o crazy stuff Leon...
Pendant is a Koala!
Bout time someone turned her into something.
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Feb 10 2006, 04:08 AM
XD That was... interesting. Now stop having a life and write more.

I agree. <<>>



I owned. B)
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Uuuupdate Mooooore.
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