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| Slayers Forth; A Slayers fanfic, liek wh0wz3rz | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 26 2006, 12:11 AM (486 Views) | |
| Soja | Jan 26 2006, 12:11 AM Post #1 |
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves
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Story here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1462863/1/ Don't know what Slayers is? Go: http://www.inverse.org/ |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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| Inui | Jan 26 2006, 06:59 AM Post #2 |
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Power of Flower
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I haven't read it yet because it's a massive novel compared to other fanfics, but since you wrote it, I can only assume it's awesome. ur so sexy ivan
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| Crysta | Jan 26 2006, 05:55 PM Post #3 |
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He's been chopping it up over the years, so now I'm gonna have to re-read it. But reading is g00d. |
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| Soja | Jan 27 2006, 12:18 AM Post #4 |
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On average, most books go through at least eight rewrites before being finalized. It's called "drafting." I'm putting more effort into a fanfic than is probably warranted. |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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| Crysta | Jan 27 2006, 01:47 AM Post #5 |
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Follow your bliss, my dear. |
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| Soja | Jan 29 2006, 03:41 AM Post #6 |
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Chapters V, VI, and VII are all proofreaded and up on SF. |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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| Soja | Feb 5 2006, 05:38 AM Post #7 |
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Update bump. Chapters VIII, IV, and X are up. Warning: they are colossal. |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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| Soja | Feb 22 2006, 06:47 AM Post #8 |
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Update bump. BECAUSE I CAN. |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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| Soja | Mar 11 2007, 09:52 PM Post #9 |
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1462863/19/ |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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| Crysta | Mar 11 2007, 10:03 PM Post #10 |
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NO THEY'RE CATCHING ON~!
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| Inui | Mar 12 2007, 09:21 AM Post #11 |
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Power of Flower
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Mwahaha. |
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| Linoud | Mar 12 2007, 09:25 AM Post #12 |
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Knight of Seven
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I havent seen Slayers yets. >>; Must.. Watch.. Then.. Read... Fanfic.
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| Michael | Mar 12 2007, 10:53 AM Post #13 |
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JediSSJ
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Don't have time to read this now. But Slayers is win, so I'll have to eventually. |
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| monsoon moon | Jun 4 2007, 02:40 AM Post #14 |
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Having read up to Chapter 9: I'm totally new to Slayers, which might be one of the reasons I found it really hard to get started on this. In fact it took me three attempts- I really didn't dig the prologue, although I can see that an introduction of that sort was probably necessary, and quite possibly helped me to appreciate the story once the first person narrative got going. In the first couple of sittings I found that I was frequently put off by the gushy and sometimes overly sensational descriptions, but as it progressed I noticed this less and less, which I suspect to have been a combination of improved writing and the fact that the characters increasingly endeared themselves to me. So while technically flawed, it's certainly done the most important thing and involved me with the plot. I enjoy the first person narration too, which I think works really well with the dynamics of Rina and Kari's relationship. My favourite moment so far:
I was laughing for a good couple of minutes... I don't believe the delivery could have been any better. Now to print off the second half. |
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| Soja | Jun 4 2007, 02:53 AM Post #15 |
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Your thorough criticism shall be taken to heart. Many, many thanks.And indeed, I have improved since starting it. I started this project oh... five years ago, as of this September. T_T |
![]() Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover How to Get Banned From FEFF 1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you. 2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you. 3. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days. 5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged. 6. Repeat steps 1 and 2. 7. Do all this in the course of a month. 8. ???? 9. PROFIT!!! Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF! | |
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Your thorough criticism shall be taken to heart. Many, many thanks.
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