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Slayers Forth; A Slayers fanfic, liek wh0wz3rz
Topic Started: Jan 26 2006, 12:11 AM (486 Views)
Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

Story here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1462863/1/

Don't know what Slayers is?

Go: http://www.inverse.org/
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
06:08 PM
nigga please
Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic
Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic
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How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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Inui
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Power of Flower

I haven't read it yet because it's a massive novel compared to other fanfics, but since you wrote it, I can only assume it's awesome.

ur so sexy ivan :wub:
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Crysta
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wat

He's been chopping it up over the years, so now I'm gonna have to re-read it.

But reading is g00d.
~ Crysta, Zombie Queen
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GODonPCP
 
I always give frying pans to female survivors in Dead Rising. It's really the only thing I'm confident they know how to use.
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Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

On average, most books go through at least eight rewrites before being finalized.

It's called "drafting."

I'm putting more effort into a fanfic than is probably warranted.
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
06:08 PM
nigga please
Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic
Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic
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How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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Crysta
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wat

Follow your bliss, my dear.
~ Crysta, Zombie Queen
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GODonPCP
 
I always give frying pans to female survivors in Dead Rising. It's really the only thing I'm confident they know how to use.
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Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

Chapters V, VI, and VII are all proofreaded and up on SF.
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
06:08 PM
nigga please
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Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic
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How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

Update bump.

Chapters VIII, IV, and X are up. Warning: they are colossal.
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
06:08 PM
nigga please
Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic
Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic
Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover

How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

Update bump. BECAUSE I CAN.
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
06:08 PM
nigga please
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How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1462863/19/
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
06:08 PM
nigga please
Fusion Universe - FEF Fanfic
Slayers Forth - Slayers Fanfic
Smartest Member '06 & '07 & '08 & 'o9 & 10, Favored Debater '07 & '08 & '09 & 10, Most Popular '08, Manliest '08 & '09, Author of Nightmares, Scourge of the Luxon, Rules Lawyer, Nick's Former Hero, Crysta's Lover

How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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Crysta
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Note: Hikaru Midorikawa, Zelgadis' Seiyu in the Japanese version of Slayers has voiced a character from a popular videogame series that has the name "Emilio" in the first game and the alias "Judas" in the second.


NO THEY'RE CATCHING ON~! :Psyduck:
~ Crysta, Zombie Queen
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GODonPCP
 
I always give frying pans to female survivors in Dead Rising. It's really the only thing I'm confident they know how to use.
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Inui
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Power of Flower

Mwahaha.
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Linoud
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I havent seen Slayers yets. >>; Must.. Watch.. Then.. Read... Fanfic. D:
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Michael
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JediSSJ

Don't have time to read this now. But Slayers is win, so I'll have to eventually.
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Michael says:
-So....when worse comes to worse, how should I write -BlackLion out of the RP?
Psio says:
-eaten by a lion
Psio says:
-whle in a car
Michael says:
-hmmmm...fittting
Psio says:
-and the lion has a ">:3" face
Psio says:
-and says "rawr"
Michael says:
-....so I should sick Kovu after him?
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-yes
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monsoon moon


Having read up to Chapter 9:

I'm totally new to Slayers, which might be one of the reasons I found it really hard to get started on this. In fact it took me three attempts- I really didn't dig the prologue, although I can see that an introduction of that sort was probably necessary, and quite possibly helped me to appreciate the story once the first person narrative got going.

In the first couple of sittings I found that I was frequently put off by the gushy and sometimes overly sensational descriptions, but as it progressed I noticed this less and less, which I suspect to have been a combination of improved writing and the fact that the characters increasingly endeared themselves to me.

So while technically flawed, it's certainly done the most important thing and involved me with the plot. I enjoy the first person narration too, which I think works really well with the dynamics of Rina and Kari's relationship.

My favourite moment so far:

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Off the subject, Kari gave form to his thoughts.

"I've been thinking... you know, about Jesus and all that..."


I was laughing for a good couple of minutes... I don't believe the delivery could have been any better.

Now to print off the second half.
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Soja
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves

:hmm: Your thorough criticism shall be taken to heart. Many, many thanks.

And indeed, I have improved since starting it. I started this project oh... five years ago, as of this September. T_T
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
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nigga please
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How to Get Banned From FEFF
1. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to verbally warn you.
2. Break a rule enough that a moderator has to actually warn you.
3. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
4. Repeat steps 1 and 2 again, getting suspended for a few days.
5. Repeat steps 1 and 2 yet again, getting suspended for a week and Underdogged.
6. Repeat steps 1 and 2.
7. Do all this in the course of a month.
8. ????
9. PROFIT!!!

Congratulations! You've been banned from FEFF!
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