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Topic Started: Mar 9 2006, 09:27 PM (910 Views)
Bossadai
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New Days

Yeah, you'd expect ME to write fanfiction.

Anyway, this is my first fanfic. It's about FEF in general, in the terms of actual internet. I'm a sorta bad writer, but am going to try to focus on some made-up plot. I'm planning to have violence and such, so it won't sound stupid Like it already does.

Uhhuh, so here we go:

Chapter 1:

Bryars woke up. The air was cool and nice, as if someone had put a fan next to his bed. The room was dark, with the exception of a faint light pouring in form the window. Yawing and standing up, he was greeted by a zooming box, apparently coming out of nowhere.

“You have a new personal message!” The title exclaimed. Bryars, curious about who would want to send him a PM this early, open the message.

Bryars,

Do you think you and Seph might want to come and go with me to Wikipedia? I have to look up something for my research paper I’m doing for school, and I would appreciate your help! Maybe you can find some others to help too!

Thanks, Lila.

“Okay, okay…” Bryars half yawned, half muttered. He replied back with a quick response, and focused on his room for the first time that morning.

It was slightly new, being the Jiang forum. The walls and carpet were non-soiled, and the bed had comfortable sheets. There was a bathroom on one end, and an exit on the other, which led to the Jiang index.

After he got dressed, Bryars walked out of his room, pinning his “Jiang Veteran” badge on, and under it, “I’m Fish”. As he trotted out of the Jiang index (There was no sign of people), he entered the general forum index.

It was immense. The roof arching like some castle and the exit portals shaped like a gate, FEF was fit to be some kind of stronghold. This main forum was relatively new, being that the last one was cracked. The entrance to each forum was like a giant medieval door with a knocker, though relatively easy to open. Above all doors was a sign that indicated which forum you were entering, be it “General Discussion”, “Chit-Chat”, or “Gaming” Inside each were bulletin boards, pinned with messages on monitors that various forumers wrote on.

Remembering Lila’s plea, Bryars began to look for people to ask. He immediately saw one of his friends, Leon with another person, a girl, named Pendant.

“Hey, guys!” Bryars called. The duo looked up and greeted him back. Bryars walked up to them.

“What’re two looking at?” He inquired. “Oh, just the Libertine battle map.” said Leon. “We’re trying to devise a perfect strategy…”

“And this guy’s a HOPELESS tactician.” Pendant laughed. “I’m not sure if he even knows who we’re fighting.” Leon gave her a look, and she just laughed again.

“Well,” Bryars said “My friend Lila wants us to meet her at Wikipedia. She needs help with some research paper or something…”

“Sure, I’ll come!” exclaimed Leon. “I’m tired of getting reprimanded.”

Pendant ignored this retort, and said, “I wish I could go, but I’m actually about to eat breakfast. Tell her I said I’m sorry, okay?” She then waved to Leon and Bryars, and then vanished into thin air, logging out.

“Well, ready to go?” Leon asked. Bryars nodded, and he pulled out a small book out of his back pocket. Inside were various web addresses, one of which included Wikipedia.

He threw it on the ground, next to their feet. The next thing he knew after that was some sensation of being warped trough time and space…
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Apocalypse
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Interesting idea. :pacman:
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Brazy CK
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5 warnings=ban

This is.... odd. >_>;
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Bossadai
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New Days

Jah. It'll get better. Trust me.
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Brazy CK
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5 warnings=ban

Oh, so you are going to include me in it.
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Feez
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It's nice. I'll lose interest soon though, as I do with most fics besides my own.

And Leon's.
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Mar 10 2006, 02:34 AM
It's nice. I'll lose interest soon though, as I do with most fics besides my own.

And Leon's.

I lost interest in yours.. Even though I own so much. :(



Not bad, Bryars. Interesting concept. <<>>
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nice, nice. you're really creative. I can tell you read a lot of books. It's a good thing. ;)
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cool story bro


Zephyr
Mar 9 2006, 09:34 PM
It's nice. I'll lose interest soon though, as I do with most fics besides my own.

And Leon's.

I lost intrest in Leon's because I'm too lazy to read the first 500 chapters. D:

Intresting idea here though, I'd like to see what you can pulll from it.
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Bossadai
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FYI, for anybody who doesn't know, Lila is AKA Lyndis 2004 or Lady Lyn.

Chapter Two:

Bryars and Leon got to their feet. After being whirled all around the internet, they arrived at Wikipedia.

Wikipedia was like a giant library. Filled with books of many kinds, it stretched for miles and miles. A young woman of about 15 was standing next to the “Random Page” room, a room which teleported you to one section of the site. She had long, auburn hair, and a light blue skirt and blouse. It was Lila.

“Hey, Lila!” Bryars yelled. She looked up. “Oh, hi Bryars! I’m so glad you guys could come.” She walked over. “My paper is on background radiation, something I have no clue what to write on. So I figured you guys could help me look around…”

“Well, sure.” Leon replied. “I’ve got nothing to do today…”

“Alright then! Let’s get started!”

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Two hours later, Bryars, Lila, and Leon were at the exiting portal. “Thanks SO much for your help, you guys! I don’t see how I could’ve gotten all this done…”

“No problem,” Bryars said. “It was our pleasure to help, right Leon?” But Leon was busy trying to prevent all of the books Lila checked out from falling on the ground. “Mmph…” was all they could hear.

“Well, here we go!” Bryars exclaimed. He again pulled out a little book, and threw it on the ground. Its pages flew, and before all three knew it, they were back at FEF.

“Alright you guys, I’m going to-“

The next things happened very quickly.

The ground split open. Like a giant ocean trench, it tore apart and became massive within every second. Various forumers who were under (The trio were not) the chasm fell. Then the foundations of the forum itself began to collapse, as if experiencing a magnitude 10 earthquake. Loads of rocks, stone, and logs of wood fell from this, and crushed and gorged many people. Blood everywhere, people frantically tried to log out, but to no avail-it wouldn’t work.

“What’s happening!?” Lila yelled. Leon, who had dropped the books, grabbed Bryars’s and Lila’s arm, and tore for a giant rock which was propped up from the ground, in which he threw them under. "Leon, what are you DOING?” Bryars shouted. Leon gave him a look mixed with worry and graveness, and said, “Protecting us! Now get under there before you get crushed!” Leon too, threw himself under, and then all Bryars could remember were shouts and screams of terror, assorted with clashing on rocks and wood and steel.

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After about 15 minutes, the roaring seemed to stop. Leon motioned for both Lila and Bryars to come out, and they obeyed.

What they saw astounded them. FEF was utterly destroyed. Debris lying everywhere, as were dead bodies, seemed to scar their eyes. “L-let’s try to find s-survivors.” Lila said, trembling. The two men nodded sternly.

They began to find people they knew. Zephyr and Rock were crushed under a giant rock. Crysta and Mind Bomber were impaled with a long, wooden rod. It was terrifying.

“Is that someone up ahead?” Lila whispered. Ahead was a figure. It was short, wore glasses, and seemed to be limping. It was Richie.

“Richie!” Bryars exclaimed, running up to him, the other two following.

“You guys…” Richie moaned. “I tried to get out, but I couldn’t…I had to use a proxy…”

Bryars knew that a Proxy was a mechanical object that made you transparent for some time.

”It wore off just as…” he then pointed to his leg. It was bleeding quite badly, as a piece of glass had stabbed it, going all the way through the bone.

“Who could DO this?” Leon said angrily. “I wish I knew…” But then shortly they found what was believed to be his answer.

A scream pierced the air. All four spinning around quickly (except for Richie, who limped) were faced with a grim sight.

Bosco was on the ground. A silver sword, gleaming with unreal power, was pointed at his neck. And its holder was no other but…

“Hello” said Marcus.
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Inui
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:3

I'm such a good villian in the fics.

Yet an amazing hero for the forum in reality.

So ironic.

Keep up my evilness, nigga.
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Bossadai
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Realize that this is nothing against you. ;P

But yeah, you do fill the bill pretty nice.


Haha, Fill, Bill! Hahahahaha...
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Kei Yuki
Mar 12 2006, 01:18 PM
Realize that this is nothing against you. ;P

But yeah, you do fill the bill pretty nice.


Haha, Fill, Bill! Hahahahaha...

Of course. XD I do fit the villian persona the best.

lol intraweb

update now, whore
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Soja
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Is this when Lucas carpet bombed FEF? :D
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Mirar on Sep 8 2007
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nigga please
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EVIL FAGS TAKE OVER THE EARTH

I'll read in a minute.
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