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Story of the branded
Topic Started: Aug 21 2006, 12:40 AM (210 Views)
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[Well. I like Soren so I made this. Simple as that :lol: . Enjoy <<>> ]

It was a dark and stormy night. The rain pouring down from the heavens with ferocious might. It created violent fludings across the land, destroying homes and killing townsfolk. It's ominous appearance signaled the maleficent birthing of the ones we call...the branded.

---------------------------------CHAPTER 1: TERMOIL---------------------------------------

It was three days before the birth. A beorc couple argue over the child. Harsh words fly back and forth as their argument continues.
"Frelina! You musnt have the child!"
"I am sorry Dohingen...but I must."
"Are you a fool?! You MUST stop this childs birthi--"
"No! You can't tell me what to do anymore Dohingen...I will not allow it."
Rage boiled in Dohingen. How can this wench speak to me so! I will not allow her to say such things!
Dohingen pulled his hand back and smacked across Frelina's face. She fell to the floor quickly and easily. She stared in horror at her husband as he stared at her with malice and hatred. How could I have married such a...a...monster. Frelina lowered her head and began to cry. Her tears showed so much sorrow that the gods themselfs wheeped, for at that moment a light rain began.
"Foolish woman." said Dohingen. Frelina looked up at him, still crying. He continued, "You have no right to bear children to another man. A Sub-Human no less! I have no sympathy for you...all I feel for you, your sub-human, and that...that thing!....is hatred....only hatred......get out of my home...NOW!"
Frelina let herself up. Her head held low.
"You're nothing, Frelina...nothing at all!"
"You're wrong." Dohingen looked suprised.
"About what?!"
"My child is not a thing....in is to be a boy or a girl. I will love and cherish it for it is a gift from Ashera herself. You are the only fool here. Instead of showing happines that I wanted to bare the child under your name, under your home, you beat me! You mark my child as if it were a monster! And you leave me out in the cold, dark, and forbiding world...you are a crule and selfish man with no heart...but still. I wish peace to your family...for I cannot hate them...only you." Frelina dawned a brown tattered cloack. She then took some food and walked out, leaving Dohingen to fester in his hatred.

-------------------------------------CHAPTER 2: DREAMING OF YOU--------------------------------------

The rain began strengthin. It grew harder the longer Frelina walked. Frelina walked out of town, and toward the cave where her childs father lived. It was a short jog on sunny days but in this kind of rain it could take hours. As she got farther and farther away from the light of the town her world grew darker and darker. She began to grow cold from the pouring rain's assult. She didn't think she could go on for long. Then she feel to the floor. A small ditch had triped her, on any normal day she would've easily seen it but in this rain it was almost invisible. She got up unsteadily, being pulled down by the rain. She then took a faw steps then collapsed from exaustion. She layed on the wet, muddy dirt for a while until she fell asleep.

Frelina dreamt of a young man. He wore black and tattered robes. He had pale skin and crimson red eyes. His hair was a jet black. He appeared to be unhappy, a frown is all he showed. When Frelina looked upon his brow she noticed a mark. It was red...but she couldn't make out the design. It appeared to be the mark of the branded. Could this be?! A glimps...of my baby?...if it is.....then I hope he's more happy then he appears...

Frelina awoke on a hard floor. It appeared to be cave rock she lay on. She could hear water driping in the corner, probably the rain water. There was a glorious warm light by her side. It bathed her in its radiant glow. She didn't open her eyes. She just let them stay as she listened to the cave noise.

----------------------------------CHAPTER 3: FELINES---------------------------------------

Frelina finaly opened he eyes. She was really in a cave, as she had thought. She noticed no other beings though...only more cave. Once she sat up she realized she had a sprained ankle. For the pain she felt there was undoubtably real. She looked around again to see if she was trully alone. She heard someone walking in, but she couldn't quite see them since she was a little far back in the cave. She then heard a cat's growl. It must've been a Laguz. Suddenly three Laguz cats came into range, a red one, a brown one, and a teal one. Once they transformed she cold tell there gender. One was a female with skimpy orange clothing and long red hair. The other was a male with nomadic brown clothing and short brown hair. Finaly, the last was her love. Osash. He wore the same nomadic clothing as the other male, but his were a deep set blue. His hair was short and blue. He looked upon Frelina with great love.
"So you're up. I thought you'd sleep for ages."
"Don't be so foolish, Osash. Humans are less feable than that." said the female.
"Oh be quite Sasheil! Frelina...you've meet my sister. Right?"
"Yes. Of course, and your brother Dogol as well."
"So Frelina. How comes the baby?" asked Sasheil.
"I don't know...he seams alright...but I have no indication of when he will be born."
"...we found you out in the rain."
"Yes. Dogol speaks the truth. You were so...so cold. I didn't know if my love was still bound to this world. But Ashera has gifted me with your well being. I am blessed."
"So how did it go?" asked Sasheil.
"...he was a brute. He wouldn't have me living in his home so he hit me to the ground and forced me out." The group let out a gasp.
"What a fool."
"Too true Dogol. But what will we do? I am but a female Laguz, and you two male Laguz...we have no say in the--"
"RRRAAAAAGGGHHH!!!" Osash let out a loud roar.
"That dastard! I'll kill him for touching you! He'll pay for this deed with his life! RRRRAAAAA!!!!" Osash transformed into his cat form and speed out of the cave.
"Osash! No! The villagers will slay him! I must--ahh!..." Frelina tried to get up but her ankle prevented it. She fell to her knees.
"Ah....I'm so useless."
"Stop that talk....I'll stop my brother. If he'll listen to anyone it will be his older brother." Dogol kept a stern face as he transformed and ran after his brother.
"I'll stay here with you. If anything should hapen to you my brother would only have more rage."
"...you think they'll be okay?"
"...I hope...I honestly hope"

--------------------------------------CHAPTER 4: A FELINE'S WRATH-------------------------

Osash ran faster and faster, not being hindered by the pouring rain. He was determined to find and kill Dohingen. Out of no where a cat jumped in front of him. Because of the rain he couldn't tell who it was.
"Get out of my way! I'm off to kill the one called Dohingen!"
"Stop this brother!"
...brother?...Dogol?
"Dogol? What are you doing here?"
"I'm here to stop this foolery. What you are doing is madness."
"Hold your tongue! You know nothing of how I feel."
"...please...you do not know how much I relate."
"I do not wish to hear of your past loves brother, this is my love! I will do whatever it takes to protect her."
"Ha! You protect her by going out to die?"
"I...will not die. Laguz are far and away better fighters then Beorc!"
"A common mistake by arrogant Laguz. You know not the strength of the man you face. Dohingen is what the humans call a Paladin General. He works under the apostel herself. He also weilds weapons that are specialized to kill Laguz! Now do you understand how much he out matches you?"
"he doesn't out match me! I am a proud and nobel Laguz that cannot be bested by scum such as himself!"
"He is not scum, he is just corrupt. His power has made him cocky and bitter. It's the only reason why he would hit a woman so."
"Do you think I care brother? Do you think it matters? He hit my love...my one true love. I will not let him get away with such a thing!"
"...you're so foolish."
"Get out of my way now Dogol...or I'll move you by force!"
Osash crouched and grew ready to strike. He snarled a bit to let Dogol know he was serious. Dogol just looked at him through the rain and nodded his head in dissagreament. he then switched back to his demi-human form and walked up to Osash.
"I really can't stop you can I?" He bent on one knee and hugged his little brother.
"I...really can't"
"Ah...Dogol...you're...being a bit too senti--"
"Ever since we were children you've always tried to best me. You always tried to show you were better than me but failed misserably."
"Eh....yeah...it was preety emberasing..."
"I've always been the bigger brother, the stronger brother...but now...it's changed. You've shown me that you're stronger than I give you credit for...stronger than I've ever seen you...brother...be safe."
"...Dogol..." Dogol let go of his brother. He then tied a small stone to his neck.
"This will help you stay in your Laguz form for the entire battle. He's sure to have underlings as well. I will pray for you to return." Dogol walked over to a perch and looked at the town.
"I'll be able to see the battle from here."
"But what about the--"
"It'll stop. Once you get there it'll stop."
"...thank you brother...for...for everything." Osash turned toward the town and continued running. He looked up to see some of the clouds parting and the rain clearing.
So that's how he knew...well...don't worry brother. I'll do my best...and I'll kill Dohingen!

----------------------------CHAPTER 5: LONE LAGUZ---------------------------------

As Dohingen looked off from the town's tower he eyed at the lone laguz, it's coat shinning in the night shine. The clouds had parted and the rain had stopped. At this point...it was ethire do or die...be or be killed. Dohingen turned towards one of his lutenints, taking a few weapons from the nearby stand.
"Are the forces set?"
"Yes Brigader General Dohingen."
"Good...that Sub-Human is not one to be toyed with. He is a dangerous foe that has killed more than a single man in one killing stroke. He's been known to bring down hordes of brigands and cutthroats that dare try to get to him, and his family is infamous for the same. There's a large bounty on his head...but you must understand. Do not let the townsfolk be harmed."
"Yes sir. I understand that you would rather have life come first than petty money."
"...yes."
Dohingen walked past the lutenient, who saluted off to the general.
"...fool." he wispered on as he left through the door, walking up the steps and to the highest point of the tower.

As Swashey finished his meeting with the general he ran down the tower to meet with his brigade of troops. He thought to himself as he speed down the steps, almost tumbling on a few.
Brigader General Dohingen seems to be acting strange as of late. Perhaps he and this sub-human have more history than we are ment to know.
He reached the bottom of the steps, eyeing his platon. It was centered mainly on his specialty and class, which was Berserker, so he knew what their strength and weaknesses would be. It was the same way with all the other lutenints that were set out throughout the town. First Gilsan and his mages, Chon and the archers, Sillrena and her wyvern riders, and finaly the protectors of the tower. Swashey and his pirates. All the teams were set up stratigicaly so that they could best combat the enemy. A lone laguz. As Swashey thought of this he let out a large bellowing laugh, but stopped once thinking of the commanders words.
"That sub-human is not one to be toyed with, men! He is a ruthless killer that wishes harm upon Brigader General Dohingen and the people of the town. Your famlies and friends all live in this town. They will be killed if we do not succed. So...for them...for yourselfs...and for Brigader General Dohingen! WE MUST NOT FAIL!!!"
Swashey lifted his large axe above his head as his men screamed and shouted battle crys of joy. They were ready to defeat this sub-human, even if their lives depended on it.

Osash stopped at the towns limits, sniffing the air infront of him. HE smelt steel...he heard them rallying...and he saw traces of an ambush. These were the signals that he had been expected, and they were ready. He knew damn well that he may not be getting out of this town alive. But if this was his final fight, he would take comfort knowing that in the future his family would not be pestered by...by this beast. He took one step...hesitated...then ran head first into the towns first courtyard.
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BOOM! Headshot. :3

I like your writing. It has a nice depth to it. :hmm:

Keep it up. :)
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TOTALLY A MAN

:blink: whoa...that was deep...i like it. I love Soren :wub:
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We love Soren :wub:

Carry on writing please.
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*brings topic back*

I will be continuing this story soon. Probably by this weekend the next chapter should be up.
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GUUUUNDAAAAAAAM

I'll delete the other, then.
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Thanks. Also, remember Soren lovers. Come back friday-sunday <<>>
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Sorry for the double post but Ch 5 has been added. Enjoy.
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