There she goes...

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There she goes...
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Shade	Sep 26 2006, 09:07 AM Post #1
Unregistered	Whee, a quickie for FE8, to hold people over until I can finish my Shinon fic. Drabble, Colm/Neimi, Colm's PoV. There she goes again, bawling like her heart is broken. Man, can’t she take a remark without bursting into waterworks? It’s not like she’s never heard of sarcasm before. Oh, she’s running off. Nice going, Neimi, let EVERYONE know I was being my snide self again. You always have to run off like a little baby, don’t you? You need to grow up, Neimi. There are always going to be people that hurt your feelings, you just need to not take everything so personal. I don’t know why I’m running after you. Sure, I feel sorry, but I’ve never wanted to run through an army camp, yelling apologies like a love-struck loser. At least your hair is bright, so I can chase it easier. Thank god I’m faster than you, too, or we’d be at this all night. You should at least try not to flail your arms when you run, because it was easy to catch your wrist. Neimi, Neimi, Neimi, you just act so silly sometimes. Oh, don’t start up the crying again. I don’t mind you being so silly. I actually like it when you’re silly. Heh, I bet you were expecting something sarcastic again, weren’t ya’? I knew you wouldn’t expect a hug, anyway. Even I didn’t expect to be hugging you, much less you hugging me back. Yes, I’m sorry. You’re so naļve at times, but--- OW, THAT WAS MY FOOT! Neimi, don’t run off again! Amelia, shut up, I’m not a jerk. Argh, I thought she couldn’t wail any louder! Dang it, here we go again…still…more…constantly…Oh, Neimi… Comments?
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Hollie	Sep 26 2006, 01:17 PM Post #2
Resident Brit Posts: 6,859 Group: Veteran Member #801 Joined: May 19, 2006	I have mixed feelings. I love it and hate it. Uh, mabe the writing style didn't suit it?



Inui	Sep 26 2006, 01:30 PM Post #3
Power of Flower Posts: 23,952 Group: Veteran Member #40 Joined: June 9, 2005	I hate both of those characters. But I don't mind this short piece.



Kamaitachi	Sep 26 2006, 01:39 PM Post #4
Eyes that see into Infinity Posts: 5,365 Group: Veteran Member #613 Joined: February 13, 2006	The style worked very nicely for Colm's PoV and personality.
	~~~I believe in nothing. Not in sin, not in god~~~ Fusion: Rebirth


Shade	Sep 26 2006, 03:59 PM Post #5
Unregistered	Hollie: That was really the only way I could write for Colm. I also thought of it around midnight last night, too. Sadaharu: Colm is teh secks. Second only to Rennac as far as FE8 characters go. Kamai: Thanks!
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Dragon_Sniper	Sep 26 2006, 06:12 PM Post #6
chicks chicks chicks Posts: 7,163 Group: Veteran Member #426 Joined: September 18, 2005	It was cute, so to speak. I liked it. =3
	Awardz **


Tao	Oct 24 2006, 03:41 PM Post #7
Psycho Irish Ninja from Outer Space Posts: 511 Group: Fusionite Member #511 Joined: December 1, 2005	Umm, I would see all of that happening, too. That's what's weird.
	Thanks to Myke for Avvy Thanks to Dragon_Sniper 4 sprite Supports: Tiara: C Tooaya: C Lenton: C Linoud: C Sargon: C


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