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| Michael | Oct 27 2006, 08:59 PM Post #1 |
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First off, A glossery of terms which will be continually updated. [size=7]Glossary[/size] Genin - Lowest level of ninja or shinobi Chuunin - Middle ranked ninja Jounin - Highest level ninja Kunai - a type of knife ideal for throwing or close combat Hidden Village - Title for the varios ninja villages throughout the world. No country has more than one, though some have none. Their are five major Villages, just as there are five major countries: Fire Country: Village Hidden in the Leaves. Konoha. Wind Country: Village hidden in the Sand Water Country: Village hidden in the Mist Earth Country: Village hidden in the Rock Lightning Country: Village hidden in the Clouds Shinobi from a particular Village may be denoted as Nins, ex: Leaf-nin, Sand-nin, etc. Note: The Hidden Sound Village is the evil Orochimaru's base. Sound-nin are understood to be enemies. Kage - The title held by each of the leaders of the five great Hidden Villages. They are expected to be the strongest in the village and hold massive power and responsibility. Hokage - Leader of the Leaf Village. Currently it is Tsunade, the Fifth Hokage (Gondaime Hokage) Jutsu - Ninja Techniques. Henge - Transform Jutsu. It is the jutsu used to change ones appearance, often immitating someone else. A basic skill Bunshin - Clone Jutsu. It creates a nuber of replicas of the caster. These clones are just illusions and have no solid substance. A basic skill Kage Bunshin - Shadow Clone Jutsu. Creates clones of the caster, but these actually have substance and can fight. They dissapear if they take a hit. Advanced technique. Jounin only (and Naruto). Kawarimi - Replacement Jutsu. The caster switches places with an object in the area, such as a log. The object briefly maintains the apparance of the caster, allowing them the element of surprise. Fairly basic skill Bloodline Limit - Special, unique abilities passed on genetically within a family or clan. Byakugan - Evil Eyes. The Hyuuga Clan's Bloodline Limit. It allows the user a complete 360 degree view in every direction (except a tiny blindspot directly behind them). It also allows them to see an incredible distance straight ahead. The user can see through objects. Chakra - the basic energy used for Jutsus. Missing-Nin - A Ninja who has deserted his or her Village and become an outlaw. The symbol on their Forehead Protectors are scratched out. --------- [size=14]Teams and Profiles[/size] [size=7]Team 11[/size] Jounin
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* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * [size=14]Chapter 1[/size] Situated within the great Fire Country was Konoha, the village hidden in the leaves. Despite outward appearances, Konoha was the military epicenter for the entire Fire Country. Being one fo the worlds great Hidden Villages, Konoha was a ninja village. Governed by the Hokage, it was the headquarters for the Fire Country’s shinobi. Shinobi serve as the world’s main military power, and much as the Fire Country helped establish Konoha as one of the great Hidden Villages, Konoha helped to establish the Fire Country as one of the great nations. One of the most important features of Konoha, as with any hidden village, was it’s ninja academy. Here children enrolled and studied to someday become fully-trained ninja. They began their training young, and were expected to study and train hard. Despite their age, even the young academy students were dangerous fighters. Inside the academy, Iruka-sensei stood at the front of the senior-most class arranging papers. It was that time of year again - time for graduation from the academy. Assuming the students passed their final test, they would be promoted to Genin, the lowest level of ninja. Iruka sighed. This was the first graduating class sense Naruto and his class graduated. It was hard to believe that had only been a year ago. Iruka gave his papers a final shuffle, before casting his eyes over the class. A number of the students were chattering with their classmates. Amongst those, several stood out for being unusually loud. A bay name Kai Leon, whose tan skin and dark pants contrasted sharply with his white hair and jacket was making pronounced gestures and those around him seemed to find whatever he was saying amusing. Several tables away, a dark green-clad Strife Linoud was chatting happily with the red-headed Niwa Desu and the green-haired Hyuuga Koharu. In contrast, the severe, pale Aoi Crysta was doing her best to ignore Leon and the monochrome-clad, brown-haired Davii Oto sat quietly studying for the imminent test. Iruka cleared his through and the noise in the room died down. He had to clear it twice more, though to finally shut up Linoud and Leon. After everyone had quieted down, Iruka picked up his stack of paper and stood in front of his desk. “Alright students,” he began. “Today is your final examination. If you pass, you will become full-fledged ninja of the leaf and receive one of these,” He gestured to the Konoha Forehead Protectors lined up on his desk. This brought a few excited whispers from the class, but Iruka pressed on. “I will call you up here one at a time and you will preform a Transformation Jutsu, making yourself look like me.” He examined his stack of papers. “First up, Kanai Anzen.” The mauve-haired kunoichi flinched slightly at the use of her proper name - she preferred to go by Ciel. She stood and made her way tot he front of the room, adjusting her open vest. She stood in front of Iruka and waited for him to give her a nod. Once he did, Ciel made a quick Ram hand seal and called out “Henge!” In a puff of smoke erupted, hiding her from view. When it cleared, there stood an exact copy of Iruka. The teacher nodded. “Very good,” he told her, and with a puff of smoke, she returned to normal. Iruka took one of the headbands off the desk and handed it to her. “You pass. Here is your Leaf Forehead Protector.” “Thank, you, Iruka-sensei,” Ciel replied happily, as she made her way back to her seat. Iruka examined his second sheet of paper. “Next up is Kam Yun.” A boy with long, black hair dressed in a traditional blue and gold silk oriental tunic stood and made his way to the front of the class. * * * * * * * In another part of the Leaf Village, a group of older shinobi crowded around the Hokage’s desk. Tsunade, the Godaime Hokage, sat at her desk, leaning back in her chair and paying attention with mild interest. On her desk sat a red velvet cushion, upon which rested a crystal ball. The ball displayed an image of Iruka’s classroom as the potential Genin began to preform their final test. Tsunade’s assistant, Shizune, and her apprentice, Sakura, flanked her on either side; the pink-haired Sakura was clutching a stack of folders. The rest of the room’s occupants all wore Jounin jackets - well, aside from the black canine that flanked one of the Jounin. All the shinobi were gazing into the Hokage’s crystal ball and watching the exam. Their attention was briefly diverted, however, as the door opened and another Jounin entered. The lean, sandy-haired Jounin gave a sheepish smile. “Sorry I’m late,” he apologized. A taller, bulkier Jounin casually raised an eyebrow over his dark sunglasses, not bothering to uncross his massive, muscular arms. “So you made it after all,” he stated in a monotone voice. The new arrival smirked at his taller companion. “Oh, you’re here too, Lyle?” Tsunade cut in, effectively ending the conversation. “I’m glad you made it, Michael. The students have just started their exam.” She motioned towards the crystal ball. Michael nodded, silently taking up position by the desk and watching. Inside the crystal ball, a green-haired boy with pale, white eyes was making his way to the front of the class. “Is that a Hyuuga?” the Jounin with the dog asked. “He has the eyes, but doesn’t look like one.” The Hokage nodded. “That’s Hyuuga Koharu. He’s only half Hyuuga, though. Hence his unusual appearance.” The Jounin, Inuzuka Sentenal nodded in understanding. In the crystal ball, the young Hyuuga had received his forehead protector and made his way back to his seat, when Iruka called up the next student. A dark complected boy in a frayed black gi with hide wrappings made his way up to the front. “That kid’s not a local, is he?” Lyle, the larger Jounin commented. “No, he isn’t,” Tsunade replied. “That is Hakushiro Soja. He’s from a nomadic clan. His family migrated to Konoha a while back. They have a high affinity for fire. He’s a vary serious one.” The Jounin watched continued watching as the rest of the class was called up to take their test. Tsunade made occasional comments about the students, and the Jounin asked occasional questions. “So, they all passed,” a female Jounin stated as the final student received his forehead protector. A pale-skinned redhead, the Jounin flicked her hair over her shoulder as she asked, “Were they all expected to graduate, Hokage-sama?” Tsunade nodded. “Yes, Hollie, we figured they would.” She passed a hand over the crystal ball and the image of the classroom faded. “Now that you all have had a brief look at the new Genin, it is time to assign the teams you will each be leading. Sakura.” Tsunade’s pink-haired assistant stepped forward, handing out folders, each to the Jounin whose name was on the cover. “As they all passed, we don’t have to make any changes to the intended lineup. These folders contain the profiles of the three Genin that are being assigned to each of you, as well as your team’s number. I expect you all to have this information memorized before tomorrow morning, when you meet your team.” The Jounin began leafing through their folders, inspecting the pictures and profiles of the new graduates. As they examined the information, the Hokage continued, “Naturally, these teams have been arranged through careful examination and evaluation.” At that, both Shizune and Sakura coughed into their hands. The Hokage spared them each a brief glare. “Alright, they were actually decided by getting drunk and throwing kunai at their pictures.” Several of the Jounin snickered at this. Sakura frowned. She’d never gotten drunk before, but the Hokage had insisted. She’d had the world’s largest hangover the next day, and she was fairly certain that Tsunade has nearly hit her with one of the kunai. “So, the teams are random?” Michael asked, looking up from his folder. “Yes,” Tsunade confirmed. “It seems that most any arrangement of these teams will produce balanced and unique combinations, so we decided to leave it up to fate.” Shizune coughed what sounded like “Fate and sake.” But she just smiled when the Hokage again glared at her. “Anyways,” Tsunade continued. “You all have your team assignments now. You will meet up with them tomorrow. Dismissed.” With a final, “Yes Hokage-sama,” the Jounin departed her office. * * * * * * * Back in the academy classroom, Iruka had just finished telling the new Genin to be back in the classroom at the normal time tomorrow to receive their team assignments and meet their Jounin instructors. The students cheerfully made their way out of the classroom, all excited about finally being made into real ninja. “This is gonna be great!” a exuberant Leon exclaimed to the rest of the class. “My team’s gonna be the greatest ever!” “Don’t count on it,” Crysta muttered under her breath. Completely ignoring the anti-social girl, Linoud replied to Leon, “Oh yeah? Not unless you’re on my team it won’t be!” The rugged, dark haired Santi Raphael snorted. “A team with those two on it would be a joke.” “What was that?!” both of the loud youths cried, glaring at Raphael, who just rolled his eyes. “I hope I’m not on a team with either of those two,” Oto muttered. Next to him, Yun smiled, smoothing his silk tunic. “I don’t know . . . at least it would be amusing.” “Well, we’ll just have to wait until tomorrow to find out,” Hamatatsu Katori said softly, adjusting her ankle-length black hair. The other Genin murmured their agreement before they all broke away to meet their families, most of which were hanging around the academy, waiting to congratulate the graduates. |
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| Soja | Oct 27 2006, 09:16 PM Post #2 |
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Gentle Water, Crashing Waves
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My my. This was well-written for a fic that apparently took you only a few days and a sign-up to plan. ![]() It's done its job and hooked me in, which is a miracle considering my opinion of Naruto. (It also helped that I knew most of the jargon anyway; adding a glossary for those unfamiliar with it might be a good move). I look forward to more of this. |
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| Tiaro | Oct 27 2006, 09:25 PM Post #3 |
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BOOM! Headshot.
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Yes, very! <3 Keep it up, Jedi!
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| Leon | Oct 27 2006, 09:56 PM Post #4 |
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GUUUUNDAAAAAAAM
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| Pendant | Oct 27 2006, 10:10 PM Post #5 |
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Praetor
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Go go Jedi. |
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| Michael | Oct 27 2006, 10:15 PM Post #6 |
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I just put one in the sign up topic. Good idea. I will try to get the next chapter once I have my last Genin, we're still short one. |
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| Santi | Oct 27 2006, 10:16 PM Post #7 |
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Da Niggaz Leader
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Good job. You fit in the character pretty well. I'll keep reading. |
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| Spartan-099 | Oct 28 2006, 12:25 AM Post #8 |
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Not a bad start my friend. |
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| Admin | Oct 28 2006, 12:57 AM Post #9 |
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There is a light that never goes out...
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I keep forgetting which character is who alot, but that is my problem, not the Fic's. Me likes. |
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| Linoud | Oct 28 2006, 01:14 PM Post #10 |
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Knight of Seven
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It's sexy. Leon, if we're on the same team we'll own, forget them fools. Our team wouldnt be a joke.
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| Hollie | Oct 28 2006, 01:24 PM Post #11 |
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Resident Brit
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Awesome. Keep it up.
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| Kaento | Oct 28 2006, 01:30 PM Post #12 |
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My drill will pierce the heavens!
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I like how you only took a few days and already had gotten each character into their personalities so quickly. |
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| Andras | Oct 28 2006, 07:45 PM Post #13 |
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I'm unimaginative.
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Not bad so far. ...there's a sign-up topic? Must have been when my internet went out for the past couple days (GODDAMN YOU TIME WARNER). You got any spots left? |
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| Linoud | Oct 28 2006, 07:54 PM Post #14 |
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Knight of Seven
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Yes, there's one left I believe Andras.
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| Michael | Oct 28 2006, 08:39 PM Post #15 |
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Actually, Harem got his profile in. You could sign up to be an enemy ninja (from a different country) or something, and eventually I'll need instructors and entrants for the Chuunin exam. But that's not for a while. |
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