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Konoha Fusion!; The actual story
Topic Started: Oct 27 2006, 08:59 PM (2,764 Views)
Michael
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I'll try to work on it tonight.
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Michael says:
-So....when worse comes to worse, how should I write -BlackLion out of the RP?
Psio says:
-eaten by a lion
Psio says:
-whle in a car
Michael says:
-hmmmm...fittting
Psio says:
-and the lion has a ">:3" face
Psio says:
-and says "rawr"
Michael says:
-....so I should sick Kovu after him?
Rock says:
-yes
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JediSSJ
Oct 30 2006, 05:11 PM
Kaento
Oct 30 2006, 09:04 PM
JediSSJ
Oct 30 2006, 01:26 AM
ZoSo
Oct 30 2006, 03:51 AM
so, just so i'm sure, this is a story about japanophiles made by a japanophile adult who is writing a japanophile story on the internet with a bunch of little kid teenagers about ninjas and japan.

Fixed so that only the parts that made sense and used real words remained.


@Pendant - yeah, you turned out quite a bit like Team 7, but I'm going to make sure you guys turn out differently.

Well, like Team 8 then. The one with Kiba. Whatever. :pacman:
Turn out differently?
Hmm...

Yeah, even our Sensei's personality is kinda like Team 8, but the only difference about our team and Team 8 is....

You guessed it.


NO GIRLS.

Pendant's team turned out like team 7, yours turned out more like team 8. Don't worry about not having a girl, though. I'll make sure your character is extremely feminine to make up for it.


Seriously, though,one of the guys on your team will die soon, and be replaced by a female.












Kidding.











Or am I?

KOHARU IS NOT FEMININE. :psio: He's just shy. Until he gets used to people.
Wow, Pendant's team is REALLY similar to Team 7. :blink:
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Next chapter. Note, chapters will probably be shorter now, and only really focus on one, or maybe two teams. Also, I'm using a random order for dealing with the teams, as opposed to doing team 11 first every time and team 14 last.

[size=14]Chapter 3[/size]


The first person to arrive at Training Field 12 had been Aburame Anji, who had found the nearest tree and leaned up against. He stuffed his hands in his pockets and lazily glanced over the field through his sunglasses. His long coat rippled slightly in the morning breeze. His hair likewise ruffled around his Forehead Protector. Periodically, he would hold out a finger for a bug to land on and report information about the area. It was several minutes before one of his insects announced that one of his teammates was almost there.

Strife Linoud arrived at the field and looked around. It took him several moments to spot Anji, but he then moved over, close to his teammate. Linoud wore the traditional black Genin body-suit with a dark green trench coat and, oddly, wooden sandals. He had a leather belt looped over his torso, securing a sheathed broadsword on his back. His Forehead Protector was tided on one arm like a band. Linoud ran a hand through his blond hair before grinning and waving to Anji. The insect-user nodded in recognition.

It was a little early in the morning for Linoud’s usual hijinks, so the two waited in silence for a few minutes until their final teammate arrived. She wore her crimson hair in a simple ponytail, with her bangs peaking over her Forehead Protector. She wore a white tunic styled after a kimono, and baggy light blue pants. Her belt sash held a katana in place. She greeted her teammates with smile, which was returned.

Several minutes after Desu’s arrival, the sun finally began to peak over the horizon. “Good, you’re all here.” The three Genin spun around at the sound of their instructor’s voice. Anji scowled slightly - his bugs hadn’t detected the Jounin’s approach. Hollie approached the three, grinning slightly. “Beautiful morning, isn’t it?”

Desu agreed readily, but Linoud and Anji just shrugged. Hollie just chuckled. “Alright ladies and gentlemen, our first issue today is assessing your current skills. This way, I can determine where each of you needs the most work, and what areas your are likely to excel in.”

“Are you gonna have us fight each other?” Linoud asked, looking curious. Anji raised an eyebrow in interest.

“Close,” Hollie replied. “You three are going to fight together against me.”

“All three of us?” Desu asked, concerned.

Again Hollie chuckled. “Don’t worry. Even with all three of you, you won’t be able to hurt me.” That earned her a scowl from Linoud. “Don’t worry about hurting me, in a straight fight, you three wouldn’t stand a chance. In this battle, however, your goal will be this.” She held up a piece of red ribbon. “You’re goal is to get this away from me. It has velcro in the tip, and I’m going to attach that to the back of my jacket.” Making good on her claim, Hollie reached around back and stuck the velcro end of the ribbon to her jacket, so that the ribbon hung their like a tassel, billowing in the wind. “A good yank is all it should take to pry it off,” she told the Genin. “Whichever one of you manages to get the ribbon will be this team’s sub-commander.” At that, Linoud and Anji’s eyes lit up. “You can use whatever means and weapons you want, “the Jounin continued, “but I warn you . . . I won’t be gentle in defending myself.” She winked.

Linoud grinned. “This’ll be cake.”

“I’m glad you think so,” Hollie replied, walking a few paces from the Genin. “You may begin.”

The three Genin exchanged glances before shrugging. Anji extended his arms and a swarm of insects began to form around him. Linoud and Desu each drew a fistful of shuriken from the weapons pouches strapped to their hips. They exchanged another glance before Linoud and Desu both launched their throwing stars. Hollie easily darted to the side to avoid the attacks. Linoud charged, drawing a kunai. Hollie met the blond’s attack, turning aside each blow. Anji growled slightly, Linoud was in the way of his sending bugs after the Jounin. Linoud launched a particularly vicious attack, which Hollie used to spin him around as she parried, before planting her foot on his but and kicking.

As Linoud went flying to the ground, Anji was about to send his bugs in, when Desu charged in front of him, launching a flurry of fist and foot attacks. Hollie parried these just as easily, eventually grabbing Desu’s arm and judo-launching her over her shoulder.

Here Anji finally had his chance to attack, directing them with his arms, he sent his swarm of insects at the Jounin. Seeing the incoming swarm, Hollie took several quick hops away, but the bugs followed her. She made several quick handsigns before puffing up her cheeks, as if her mouth was full. She brought her head forward, spitting out a glob of pink goo, which splattered upon reaching the insect swarm, catching the bugs in a blob and dropping them to the ground. Anji ground his teeth in anger. Sending his bugs in force obviously wasn’t going to work here.

There was a quick, metallic click as Linoud withdrew the broadsword on his back, gripping it with both hands. His sensei had said not to worry about holding back. Following Linoud’s lead, Desu drew her purple katana, holding it in one hand and grabbing a bunch of kunai in the other. At the same time, Anji had another swarm of his insects scatter throughout the area.

As Linoud and Desu charged, Hollie withdrew a kunai in each hand. The first she launched at Desu just as the Genin was preparing to throw her own handful. This caused Desu to falter, dropping several of her kunai, and throwing the rest well off target. Hollie parried Linoud’s sword with her other knife, before spinning and parrying Desu’s katana. While this was going on, Anji sent his insects in, a few at a time, to latch onto the Jounin. He withdrew a kunai of his own and joined the close-quarters fight.

In close quarters, Linoud continued to try and attack his teacher with his broadsword. Unfortunately, with four people all in a small area, the effectiveness of his weapon was reduced.

Anji attacked with an odd mix of kunai, foot, and bugs, using his insects as anything from a staff to a shield to simply sending the bugs after his opponent. All the while, his other bugs made their way towards the Jounin.

After several minutes of intense fighting, the three Genin backed off to catch their breath. They were all panting hard. Hollie wasn’t. The Jounin put her kunai away and began making handseals again. This had the Genin backing off further and bracing themselves. “Fire Type: Burning Aura!”

Flames shot up around Hollie, covering her whole body and making her look like a human bonfire. After several seconds, she released the jutsu and the flames died away. She grinned at Anji, who scowled. She’d burned off all the bugs that had managed to reach her. Realizing the futility, he called all his insects back to himself.

The fighting continued on like this for hours. They had reverted back to hand-to-hand combat, as Hollie had knocked Linoud and Desu’s swords from their hands and made it a point to keep doing so any time they tried to pick the weapons back up. Anji was restricted to using his bugs in close-to-mid ranged combat. Surprisingly, the four made a better close-range team without the weapons, partly because they had more room to maneuver. Still, none of them managed to so much as touch the ribbon or land a blow on their sensei.

It wasn’t until several hours after noon that Hollie called a break for lunch. The three Genin tore into their lunches hungrily. They were already exhausted. After several minutes of nothing but the sound of ravenous eating, Hollie spoke up. “So, what have we learned so far?” she asked.

“You’re too fast,” came Linoud’s reply, which had Hollie smirking.

“About you, not me.”

“We’re horribly outclasses,” Anji responded.

Desu nodded in agreement. “Even with our weapons, we couldn’t hit you.

Hollie nodded. “Yes, about your swords . . . don’t bring them to training again until I say to. Also, don’t bring them on missions.”

“Eh?!” came Desu’s startled cry.

“Why not?!” Linoud demanded.

Hollie crossed her arms. “Because neither of you are ready to work on weapons combat yet. A ninja does not rely on weapons in a fight; a ninja is the weapon. If you can’t fight without a sword, you can’t be a ninja. I’m not saying weapons are bad; there is no reason for a ninja not to use every advantage at his or her disposal; but you simply aren’t ready for them. You need to work on the basics first. Once your Taijutsu has improved enough, I’ll tell you that you can start bringing you swords to training again. Once I feel that you have become proficient enough, I’ll let you start bringing them on missions as well.”

Linoud and Desu hung their heads. They hated to admit it, but their sensei was probably right. She’d fended off their sword attacks with nothing more than a throwing knife.

“You can continue to train with our swords at home,” Hollie added. “Just not during our teams official training time.”

The two Genin nodded in agreement. Hollie then turned to Anji. “You Taijutsu needs work as well. You are too easily off balanced when you opponent is capable of countering your bugs. However, we’ll probably focus more on chakra control for you. Your control is probably the best of the three of you, but it still needs work. You two,” she turned back to Linoud and Desu, “barely even tried to use chakra. We’re going to be doing a lot of work to improve the three of yours’ Taijutsu and chakra control. As a matter of fact, we are going to spend the rest of our time today learning to meditate and focus our chackra.”

“Uh, Hollie-sensei? What about the ribbon?” Linoud asked.

Desu nodded. “Yeah. None of us managed to get it.”

At that, Hollie chuckled. “Well of course none of you got it. You are all low-level Genin who just graduated from the academy, and I have been a Jounin for years. There’s no way you were actually going to get the ribbon from me. I just wanted to see where you all were at in your training.” With that, she reached around and pulled the ribbon off her jacket herself, putting it in her pocket. The Genin groaned. “Anyways, once you three are done eating, gather around in a circle and we’ll start working on meditation.”

“Yes, Hollie-sensei,” the three chorused.
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Michael says:
-So....when worse comes to worse, how should I write -BlackLion out of the RP?
Psio says:
-eaten by a lion
Psio says:
-whle in a car
Michael says:
-hmmmm...fittting
Psio says:
-and the lion has a ">:3" face
Psio says:
-and says "rawr"
Michael says:
-....so I should sick Kovu after him?
Rock says:
-yes
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Clearly, I am superior. D:
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Hollie owned.
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@Reaver: Me grammer is better than ur post count newbie.

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Man, they got pwned. B|
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There is a light that never goes out...

Holly went soft on them. I would hope I'm faster than Holly, so I got no idea what my group would try to do against me. It will be interesting :hmm:
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Clearly Harem, my broadsword owns your bugs. D:

Sexy, Linoud can't use his broadsword, though that may happen, lawl.
Don't know how the hell I was supposed to grab a ribbon while using my sword. Hehe.
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BOOM! Headshot. :3

Hollie rox my sox!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
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I didn't mind my team being last since you know the best is always saved for last.
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dame's "useless", or....it's kinda like saying "sucks"
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Sexy, Linoud can't use his broadsword, though that may happen, lawl.
Don't know how the hell I was supposed to grab a ribbon while using my sword. Hehe.

I had kinda hoped fewer people would want unique weapons, or at least small ones. So lots of people are going to be doing without their prefered weapons for a while.

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I didn't mind my team being last since you know the best is always saved for last.

It was mostly so that Sentenal's team didn't go first every time. I want to avoid making them follow after Team 7 and steal the limelight.
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Michael says:
-So....when worse comes to worse, how should I write -BlackLion out of the RP?
Psio says:
-eaten by a lion
Psio says:
-whle in a car
Michael says:
-hmmmm...fittting
Psio says:
-and the lion has a ">:3" face
Psio says:
-and says "rawr"
Michael says:
-....so I should sick Kovu after him?
Rock says:
-yes
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That's why I chose claws, small, light, and perfect for melee
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BOOM! Headshot. :3

Well, I win because I have ankle-length hair. B)
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I almost chose the claws. But I thought the naginata was more suited to the character, so eh. Hardly a ninja weapon, really. XD But as was said, the ninja is the weapon~ D:
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Well, I win because I have ankle-length hair. B)

You are sooooo gonna trip over that. ;)
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Michael says:
-So....when worse comes to worse, how should I write -BlackLion out of the RP?
Psio says:
-eaten by a lion
Psio says:
-whle in a car
Michael says:
-hmmmm...fittting
Psio says:
-and the lion has a ">:3" face
Psio says:
-and says "rawr"
Michael says:
-....so I should sick Kovu after him?
Rock says:
-yes
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