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| A Trip to Market; Blazing Sword/Rekka No Ken | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 11 2006, 11:47 PM (119 Views) | |
| IVIaedhros | Dec 11 2006, 11:47 PM Post #1 |
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For whatever reason, I had suddenly had the idea that I should write some FE fanfiction. A Trip to Market is my first FE fanfiction and it is written as a characterization piece focusing on Lucius and an OC that plan to use an AU continuity. It is based loosely off Les Miserables and the relationship between Cosette and Jean Valjean. Notes: spoiler free, mild language, some disturbing images
Click here to read Currently at 13 pages. Plot is finished, but still very much WIP. The ending section especially needs revising as I was forced to rush in order to make my professor's due date. As always, any reviews or critiques are welcome, however, please be as detailed as possible!, kthnxdrvthru. |
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| IVIaedhros | Dec 30 2006, 05:47 PM Post #2 |
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Finished! I added a bunch of content to further elucidate Lucius and Amy's thoughts at the end. I especially wanted to focus on how the two felt guilty for having lost the other. Oh, and Amy gets her shoes
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| IVIaedhros | Jan 9 2007, 10:57 AM Post #3 |
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Apparently FFN doesn't like it when you have separate chapters devoted to non-story content IE my acknowledgments and afterword sections. Thus, I have merged everything into one big chapter. I also took the opportunity to clean up some grammar mistakes that I had missed in my haste to begin on Awakening. |
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