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A Trip to Market; Blazing Sword/Rekka No Ken
Topic Started: Dec 11 2006, 11:47 PM (119 Views)
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For whatever reason, I had suddenly had the idea that I should write some FE fanfiction. A Trip to Market is my first FE fanfiction and it is written as a characterization piece focusing on Lucius and an OC that plan to use an AU continuity. It is based loosely off Les Miserables and the relationship between Cosette and Jean Valjean.

Notes: spoiler free, mild language, some disturbing images

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It is dark again in another hall, far away, and a small gasp echoed through it. Except now there is no rushing mob, only the dim outline of a small, shuddering figure, its silhouette upright and unmoving except for some tiny tremors. There are no wailing cries, only a shuddering breath. After a long moment, the figure moves off to the side, grouping blind through the dark until it encounters the wall. Blindly following its linear path through the pitch black, it made its way along down a corridor.

Finally, it seemed to reach its destination: a rough wooden door. Through its widening cracks seeps a wavering light, revealing the figure for what it was, the form of a young child, a girl, standing with head bowed and one hand upon the door’s handle. A low voice, seemingly in prayer, whispered from behind the doorway.

She stood there listening for a long time and then, seemingly coming to a decision, turned and retraced her steps back until she was once again laying down. Burning heat no longer scorched her skin and the cries were silenced by the memory of prayers spoken in a young man’s kindly voice.


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Currently at 13 pages. Plot is finished, but still very much WIP. The ending section especially needs revising as I was forced to rush in order to make my professor's due date. As always, any reviews or critiques are welcome, however, please be as detailed as possible!, kthnxdrvthru.
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Finished!

I added a bunch of content to further elucidate Lucius and Amy's thoughts at the end. I especially wanted to focus on how the two felt guilty for having lost the other. Oh, and Amy gets her shoes ;)
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Apparently FFN doesn't like it when you have separate chapters devoted to non-story content IE my acknowledgments and afterword sections. Thus, I have merged everything into one big chapter. I also took the opportunity to clean up some grammar mistakes that I had missed in my haste to begin on Awakening.
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