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| Mobile Suit Gundam Seed: Destiny Altered; GSD Rewrite Project | |
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| RosenDrache | Mar 20 2012, 01:50 PM Post #1 |
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As I have mentioned in a couple of places, I have for a couple of months now been actively working on a project that's been floating around my brain for literally years. Essentially, it started when me and a buddy got together and discussed how Gundam Seed Destiny started off really well, and went to crap fast, and we figured we would see how WE would have done it. The original draft of the story started off exactly the same way, but began to diverge from how the story itself went along at around Phases 13 and 14. I later changed that because I hated the idea of doing a Gundamjack again. So that went out the window; Phases 1-4 went straight to the bin, and the story picks up with Phases 5 and 6. Sort of. Anyway, there were a couple of major issues we had with GSD, which we set out to fix (I'm now working this project solo, but as it was my idea to begin with that's not a big deal). The key points were: 1. Canonically, the Alliance characters are all depicted as fanatical lunatics or brainwashed tykebombs. I decided to use the Eurasian Federation as a distinctly separate political entity from the Atlantic Federation, whereby I introduce characters that are, you know, normal. Even perhaps to a degree protagonistic. 2. Characters surviving shit that they should not have. NONE OF THAT CRAP. You know who you are... 3. Severely address the catastrophic character deconstruction in GSD of Cagalli, Athrun, and Shinn. I take enormous issue with Cagalli being portrayed as a spineless weakling who essentially rolled over and let slime like the Seirans do whatever they wanted. On the same note, Athrun in GSD starts out a spineless, indecisive weakling in GSD the way he was for all of two episodes in Seed before getting better. And then got worse. My goal is to instead develop him as a mentor-type figure for Shinn(Think Amuro and Kamille during the Zeta Earth arcs.) Finally of course, Shinn, who starts out the main character in the series before turning into Durandal's obedient pet raging berserker. In this version, he starts out the main character and STAYS THAT WAY. I also plan to significantly alter his development as a character in the story's concluding arcs in particular. 4. Speaking of which, I was more than a bit annoyed that the series chose to go the "Kamille-Four" route with Stella. Because being around her was doing wonders for his character, and just when they had a good thing going, they killed her off. So I plan to keep her around, too. 5. Finally, the timeline is moved forward a year and a half or so, to February 75 as the starting date instead of October 73. Changes are also made to the MS roster(some major, most minor) and the ships, as well as a couple of changes to the case. But anyway, enough of all that talk, here it is: Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 is written as well, and should be up in the near future. Final note: This fic takes place in the same continuity as my previous one-shot fic, An Alternate Fate. |
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| RosenDrache | Apr 19 2012, 09:31 AM Post #2 |
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For anyone around here who cares, Chapter 7 is up. |
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| RosenDrache | May 10 2012, 08:52 PM Post #3 |
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For anyone around here who cares, Chapter 8 has been up since Tuesday, and I just put up Chapter 9 |
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| RosenDrache | May 28 2012, 08:27 PM Post #4 |
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In the unlikely event anyone's still paying attention, CHAPTER 10 has been up for a while, and CHAPTER 11 and CHAPTER 12 went up today. |
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