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| DEBATE - Creation of the MHO | ||||
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| Topic Started: 23rd November 2015 - 08:23 PM (340 Views) | ||||
| NordicPeoples | 23rd November 2015 - 08:23 PM Post #1 | |||
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GENERAL ASSEMBLY SUBMISSION FORM Formal Name of Submitting Nation(s): The Union of Nordic People Nations involved: All CTO members Title of Submission: The Creation of the Mundus Health Organisation
[1] OOC - 3 months Edited by NordicPeoples, 23rd November 2015 - 09:32 PM.
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| Achkaerin | 23rd November 2015 - 09:09 PM Post #2 | |||
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OOC- image included so I know which character I've got in this debate.![]() Kelsey Delgado Another morning shift and another debate- why did all the good ones seem to get put in on the early shift? Kelsey smiled as she read the draft at least it made sense just as long as it didn't infringe on JET's capabilities, but then the UNP was one of the major driving forces there so that was unlikely. "Firstly I'm sure when news of this draft reaches Pyrena the Empress will be smiling that finally someone has built on the foundations of one of her many suggested initiatives in this case the Mundus Humanitarian Organisation. Now to a more serious point the charter appears fine to me just check point number three of the appendix for spelling and I think it can work. And if may suggest either a change in wording or addition of clarity to point 13(i) of the appendix- It presently states i) Not hold any government position in their home nation at the time of their appointment. I suggest we re-word this to 'time they begin MHO work.' the reason is that there's a difference between appointment and when someone starts work. So I propose that re-wording on that basis or failing that I urge the inclusion of clarity as to what is meant by the present wording." |
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| NordicPeoples | 23rd November 2015 - 09:32 PM Post #3 | |||
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"The formatting and grammar issues suggested have been made to the draft." Elise said tapping away on a tablet. | |||
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| NordicPeoples | 25th November 2015 - 11:27 PM Post #4 | |||
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OOC - If there are no concerns/amendments raised by 10pm UK time on Friday I'll move this to a vote then. That gives around 48 hours. | |||
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