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Critisize me... HARD
Topic Started: 19th May 2016 - 09:39 PM (252 Views)
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I want everyone to point out the OOC issues, flaws and discrepancy they find in Toshindai, Nueva Ardia and me as a writer. I want to improve the quality of my RP and nations, so please, don't let up.

I won't be offended... I promise...

i think

I'm also putting up a 'no defence' policy, as in I'm not gonna try to make excuses for the flaws
Edited by Gadshack, 19th May 2016 - 09:39 PM.
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My only issue is the speed you swap nations at, but I get the reason for that very well, just makes it hard at times to work out how to interact with you and your nation of the hour ;) Generally I enjoy reading your material so don't worry on that aspect.
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Fair point, I mean I'm in too deep for both of nations now. I recall that now I'm back with my original nations, which is funny considering I wanted to ditch them.

But yes... less swapping would be great...
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Oh
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I have a hard time keeping up with all the characters and pronouncing their names xD
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aw damn, see i know its super hard to keep up but i can't help it x) but i know what I need to do. *sharpens death*
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