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| Topic Started: 19th May 2016 - 09:39 PM (252 Views) | ||
| Gadshack | 19th May 2016 - 09:39 PM Post #1 | |
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I want everyone to point out the OOC issues, flaws and discrepancy they find in Toshindai, Nueva Ardia and me as a writer. I want to improve the quality of my RP and nations, so please, don't let up. I won't be offended... I promise... i think I'm also putting up a 'no defence' policy, as in I'm not gonna try to make excuses for the flaws Edited by Gadshack, 19th May 2016 - 09:39 PM.
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| NordicPeoples | 19th May 2016 - 09:43 PM Post #2 | |
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My only issue is the speed you swap nations at, but I get the reason for that very well, just makes it hard at times to work out how to interact with you and your nation of the hour Generally I enjoy reading your material so don't worry on that aspect.
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| Gadshack | 19th May 2016 - 09:48 PM Post #3 | |
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Fair point, I mean I'm in too deep for both of nations now. I recall that now I'm back with my original nations, which is funny considering I wanted to ditch them. But yes... less swapping would be great... |
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| CGJ | 19th May 2016 - 10:06 PM Post #4 | |
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Franz Kaufmann (1886-1944)
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u live in colorado and we want you here man | |
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| Gadshack | 19th May 2016 - 10:11 PM Post #5 | |
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Where? |
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| hobbes | 19th May 2016 - 10:13 PM Post #6 | |
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important message![]() <@CGJ> Hobbes wants to save lives, not end them <@CGJ> He creates enough burn victims in a day to effectively keep himself paid ![]() Sparta: (hobbes is) the god the Independent Order deserves, but not the one anyone cares about right now. | ||
| Gadshack | 19th May 2016 - 10:24 PM Post #7 | |
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| Sparta | 20th May 2016 - 01:15 AM Post #8 | |
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I have a hard time keeping up with all the characters and pronouncing their names xD | |
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| Gadshack | 20th May 2016 - 06:52 PM Post #9 | |
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aw damn, see i know its super hard to keep up but i can't help it x) but i know what I need to do. *sharpens death* | |
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May the force be with you.



Generally I enjoy reading your material so don't worry on that aspect.






