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| [AS] Vilmos, Foy [Netsugakure] | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 29 2013, 08:44 PM (164 Views) | |
| ShredShogun | Oct 29 2013, 08:44 PM Post #1 |
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Academy Student Name: Vilmos Foy Age: 8 Gender: Male Height: 4"8 Weight: 70lb Appearance: Eyes: Blue Hair: Black Skin: Dark Brown Body: His hair is kept short enough that it is little more than a light fur on the top of his head, in a rounded line up. His body is lean and fit. Having always taken his pranks to the next level his body is in peak physical condition. His weight is distributed evenly around his body. And his arm length is slightly above average When not in a civilian shorts and tees Foy wears stealth ninja garb. A hooded outfit comprised mostly of deep blue and a small mix of dark grays for optimal shadow blending. The torso and thighs are deep blue changing to the gray just below the knee as the pant legs close in around the calves. From the wrist to the elbow the material is gray before the abrupt change to blue. The outfit comes with two black item carrying cases. A leg holster (which he prefers to keep on his left leg) which holds his paper bombs and wires. And a pouch that sits in the small of his back containing kunai and shurikan. Rank: Academy Student Village: Netsu Language: Netsui/common Inventory: 5 Kunai 5 Shurikan 2 30ft wires 3 exploding tags Special Inventory: none Element: Wind Character Traits: Stealthy, Acrobat, Deft Hands, spring loaded Trait Points Gained: 0 Total Trait Points: 4 Unspent Points: 0 Character Stats: 150 Strength:10 Spirit:20 Willpower: 20 Speed:50 Perception:30 Endurance:10 Resistance:10 Points Gained:0 Total Points: 150 Unspeant Points:0 Jutsu: Henge Bunshin Kawarimi Harigane Gappei [Meld Wire/Wire Fusion] Rank: D Requirements: Wire Description: This allows the user to turn a loop of wire into one solid piece, trapping an individual such that Nawanuke no Jutsu cannot help them escape. This ability doesn't require handseals. Fuuton: Fuuatsu Sashitsukae [Wind Release: Wind Pressure Impediment] Rank: D Description: The user goes through a relatively long series of handseals, and then places his palms flat on the ground. He then guides his Fuuton chakra through the soil and creates cavities of high pressured air between him and his opponent. As a result, if anyone steps on those hollow spaces, their balance is disrupted and they blow up with enough force to startle or trip them and create an opening. Stop Rank: D Requirements: None Description: When the need arises the user can burst Fuuton chakra from their body in order to stop their movement completely in all directions or even just one. This can stop you from moving momentarily while falling, or even catch an enemy shinobi off guard as they blast past you while in pursuit. Fuuton: Renkuudan [Wind Release: Drilling Air Projectile] Rank: C Requirements: None. Description: The user inhales a large amount of air into his chest and then slams his fist into his chest to expel it. To strengthen the attack, the user will imbue chakra into the air. When expelled, it forms concussive spherical projectiles capable of inflicting large damage. Jutsu Slots Gained: 0D, 0C, 0B, 0A, 0S Total Slot Amount: 3D, 1C, 0B, 0A, 0S Jutsu Slots Empty: 0D, 0C, 0B, 0A, 0S Background: Foy Vilmos is the only child of a merchant family. A few generations ago his family were known and respected ninjas. In the past the family would train the children from the age of three until they were a full ninja. Ordinarily it was the taking of life that finalized your move into adulthood, and the ninja world. Every child of the generation was given a ninja outfit based on their skill set. As times of piece came around the Vilmos family changed to the calm merchant life style, leaving behind all of their ninja ancestry. Having no siblings and few others to play with Foy became focused on being as sneaky as possible in his earliest years. Always pushing the limits of what he could do or get away with. During one of his expeditions into the forbidden section of his homes Foy found the records of his family history. Everyday after that for a year Foy would sneak inside and read until there was nothing left for him to know. Using the old notes he found the uniform designed for his favorite part of being a ninja, The Ninja Stealth Grays. His parents were against him joining the Ninja Academy but eventually yielded, acknowledging the will of the ninja that flows throw his veins. Previous RPC Profile none Growth Log: Edited by ShredShogun, Nov 8 2013, 06:18 PM.
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| Lestat | Nov 5 2013, 12:42 PM Post #2 |
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1. Could you please make your entry titles bold? In this format: Name: Vilmos Foy Age: 8. I dont mind, but it makes those parts of your app stand out. 2. How much does he actually weigh? 70 lbs or 70 kg? 3. Could you please flesh his appearance out a bit? You didn't really include a description of his body, just his eyes, hair, skin and clothing. 4. Where does he keep his inventory (shuriken, kunai, e-tags)? 5. Your resistance is pretty low [5]. Lower than an average civillian's [10] for that matter. It means you almost don't have the ability to bear pain or resist genjutsu. And would probably pass out once slightly injured. Oi. Big Welcome to the forum. I'm really sorry this took so long to get to. |
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| Cain | Nov 5 2013, 12:43 PM Post #3 |
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The fluffy one
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looks good to me. Approval #1 |
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| ShredShogun | Nov 6 2013, 08:53 PM Post #4 |
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All good points. And all corrected. |
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| Lestat | Nov 7 2013, 12:16 PM Post #5 |
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Other than the broken coding on the NAME title, you are ready to go. Fix that, and you have my #2 Approval. |
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| ShredShogun | Nov 8 2013, 06:20 PM Post #6 |
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Also fixed |
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| Lestat | Nov 11 2013, 03:09 AM Post #7 |
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Happy Rping. |
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