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[AS] Shuntenmaru Hagakure [Genso]; Insert short caption here or leave blank
Topic Started: Nov 28 2013, 05:29 AM (171 Views)
Kujikirikongo
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Name: Shuntenmaru Hagakure

Age: 10

Gender: Male

Height: 4'8

Weight: 80lbs

Appearance: Pure White hair, that goes down to the middle of his back. It is silkly smooth and is sometimes braided. His left eye is Gray, and his right eye is black. He tends to wear A blue sleeveless shirt with blue pants. His shoes were extreme lightweight boots. Finally he wears a cloak that his father gave him with the symbols of his parents legagcy. The symbol of the Okami, Wolf Head with what appears to be ice shards around it at the top. And under it the Giant water fist of the Oborozakura.

Rank: AS

Village: Genso

Language: Gensii and Common

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Element:
Water
Wind
Ice

Character Traits:
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Trait Points Gained:2
Total Trait Points: 6
Unspent Points: 0

Character Stats: (Remember, 5 is the minimum!)
Strength: 20
Spirit: 20
Willpower: 30
Speed: 20
Perception: 20
Endurance: 20
Resistance: 20

Points Gained: 150
Total Points: 150
Unspeant Points: 0

Jutsu: (Academy Students start with 3 D Ranks and 1 C rank)
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Jutsu Slots Gained: 3D, 1C, 0B, 0A, 0S
Total Slot Amount: 3D, 1C, 0B, 0A, 0S
Jutsu Slots Empty: 0D, 0C, 0B, 0A, 0S

Background: Hagakure grew up as a farm child. His parents were as far as he knew average but he didn't know about his parents othe side, his father was from the clan of Okami and his mother was of the clan Oroborozakura. The two clans warred and hated each other because of a misunderstanding. The Okami were the followers of the wolves, savages who wield ice in the name of survivial of the fittest. The Oroborozakura were people who cherish the power of money more than anyting else. They wee also able to wield water and used there power to make money hording water.
When the two clans fell from power, his mother and father stayed together out of the need to survive which soon became love, and finally a change in ways and thinking. His parents calm down and gave up there way of life. Couldn't have known that not only did they pass down their skills but both bad family traits. Now Hagakure he has never been first place for anything, has never done anything special, and has never been the type of kid you could rely on. So it was even more of a shock to his parents when he decided to become a ninja. Something deep in his soul told him to go, and when he confronted his parents,his mom gave him a cloak that she was saving for the day that his father would have ever decided to rebuild the kingdom. Yet still Hagaure couldn't believe they were actually sent him off telling him. " The day you become chuunin, is the day your destiny will be laid out for you, and on that day I pray you have the power to protect yourself from the world." With that phrase in mind Hagakure left home, never forgetting it.

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- [Element Revamp] {Combined Element - Ice} (2) - Dec 2013
Edited by Apoc, Dec 18 2013, 11:01 PM.
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Comments in reEeEeEed :)

Besides the things I commented on does it look good. Welcome to Jinsei!
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Kujikirikongo
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Thank you for taking the time so let me say I changed all the above stuff but the typos because I couldn't find them and also anything and everything is possible with chakra lmao.
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Haha fair enough XD

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Background: Hagakure grew up as a farm child. His parents were as far as he knew average but he didn't know about his parents othe side, hs fathr was from the clan of Okami and his mother was of the clan Oroborozakura. The two clans warred and hated each other because of a misunderstanding. The Okami were the followers of the wolves, savages who wield ice in the name of survivial of the fittest. The Oroborozakura were wealthly greedly people who wield water and used there power to make money hording water.
When the two clans fell from power, his mother and father stayed together out of the need to survive which soon became love, and finally a change in ways and thinking. His parents calm down and gave up there way of life. Couldn't have known that not only did they pass down their skills but both bad family traits. Now Hagakure he has never been first place for anything, has never done anything special, and has never been the type of kid you could rely on. So it was even more of a shock to his parents when he decided to become a ninja. Something deep in his soul told him to go, and when he confronted his parents,His mom gave him a cloak that she was saving for the day that his father would have ever decided to rebuild the kingdom. Yet still Hagaure couldn't believe they were actually sent him off telling him. " The day you become chuunin, is the day your destiny will be laid out for you, and on that day I pray you have the power to protect yourself from the world." With that phrase in mind Hagakure left home, never forgetting it.


I bolded the ones I could find, but the last one is probably a punctuation typo :)
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Kujikirikongo
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Thanks once again and it has been fixed as pre suggestion de-gozaru
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Robberix
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Looks good!

Approval #1
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Kujikirikongo
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yay a couple more and I can start my story believe it >_>
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Mew
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Approval 2! Go for it man ^^
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