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Playing the Saint (WWE Freestyle); Feedback
Topic Started: Jan 6 2013, 04:34 PM (128 Views)
VladAnMind
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Edited by VladAnMind, Jan 6 2013, 04:40 PM.
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SKMVz

good job.
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Angelina

well done
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yLmVz
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Nice edit bro, Earthquake very awful...
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yLmVz
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Very nice job bro, Earthquake effect awful. ^.^
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Leelee
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Solid work overall. The one good thing about you sticking with this concept is that people can vividly see your progress better just on critiquing purposes. While there's some improvements (flow and timing is getting better), there's some issues that I personally thought you would vastly improve in being that you use live footage on a consistent basics.

Clip selection throughout was a bit of an issue with me. You can really tell from watching this where you just lacked the proper footage to use as the 1st 3 or 4 match highlights threw me off your video some. The sudden camera jump cuts really made some spots look messy and, for me, had me a little lost of what was going on. So try to pay more attention to what footage to use. Try to limit the amount of standard camera shots you use and try to stay away from the sudden jump cut footage I mentioned. Examples of the footage you should be aiming for are usually shown during replays.

Editing throughout was ok. I thought your pacing was decent, but thought your syncing could've been better. For such a fast paced video, syncing seemed to lack heavily. Not a bad video overall though, just work more on your audio editing, transitioning better from section to section, and try to put more effort in your syncing. Solid work though.



..in other words: good job)))
Edited by Leelee, Jan 7 2013, 11:04 PM.
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BOSS
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Makes my booty pop
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VladAnMind
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Thanks Leelee
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SKMVz

oh fuck.
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