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| Tweet Topic Started: May 9 2010, 10:46 PM (114 Views) | |
| the-pulse | May 9 2010, 10:46 PM Post #1 |
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Meat Sucker
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I've been working on songwriting for my band, and I've come up with a few pieces. No full songs yet, but pieces. Where you're trying to go What you're trying to see its not for me so leave me be cause i dont care what you know So why would you try and turn around when what you need is right in front of you? so look, pay attention, and open your eyes what you need is right there, even if in disguise We won't break, we won't bend, what a way to watch it end, laying back to watch, to pass it by no more need to depend or rely on anything we had before we looked so long we have the right now to ignore all the pain that we've felt and the hands that we've been dealt so we won't break, we won't bend, we won't go quietly my friend, no more need to fight, to fight, for now, sit out and watch it end. You say you'll try and save me, but no longer am I here you said goodbye, to leave, and so I've gone and disappeared so what do you expect from me, I've done just what you said I listened, cried, then let us die but still I'm filled with dread So I count to ten, say amen and hope you don't come back again comments or feedback that don't have the word fag in them would be appreciated |
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| Nudi | May 10 2010, 12:10 AM Post #2 |
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King of 2D Fighters
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awesome man youve got good creativity, have you done/read poems in the past? they can help more. also avoid cliched phrases overused in lyrics (i wont forget you, let us part ways, or something about leaving each other, and stuff like that) but then again that comes from a guy who goes Chiwiwich!! whenever he can :D |
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| the-pulse | May 10 2010, 07:14 PM Post #3 |
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Meat Sucker
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^dedicating a song to chiwiwich. |
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