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Pieces of songs
Topic Started: May 9 2010, 10:46 PM (114 Views)
the-pulse
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Meat Sucker
I've been working on songwriting for my band, and I've come up with a few pieces. No full songs yet, but pieces.

Where you're trying to go
What you're trying to see
its not for me
so leave me be
cause i dont care what you know



So why would you try and turn around
when what you need is right in front of you?
so look, pay attention, and open your eyes
what you need is right there, even if in disguise






We won't break, we won't bend,
what a way to watch it end,
laying back to watch, to pass it by
no more need to depend or rely
on anything we had before
we looked so long we have the right now to ignore
all the pain that we've felt
and the hands that we've been dealt
so we won't break, we won't bend,
we won't go quietly my friend,
no more need to fight, to fight,
for now, sit out and watch it end.


You say you'll try and save me, but no longer am I here
you said goodbye, to leave, and so I've gone and disappeared
so what do you expect from me, I've done just what you said
I listened, cried, then let us die
but still I'm filled with dread
So I count to ten, say amen
and hope you don't come back again


comments or feedback that don't have the word fag in them would be appreciated
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Nudi
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awesome man youve got good creativity, have you done/read poems in the past? they can help more. also avoid cliched phrases overused in lyrics (i wont forget you, let us part ways, or something about leaving each other, and stuff like that)
but then again that comes from a guy who goes Chiwiwich!! whenever he can :D
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the-pulse
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^dedicating a song to chiwiwich.
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