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Zane Blake
Topic Started: Mar 20 2012, 08:32 AM (194 Views)
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Name: Zane Blake

Age: 18

Gender: male

Height: 5'8

Weight: 165lb

Description: He has jet black hair, hazel eyes, and always has a little sadisctic smile on his face.
He's tall for a Asian, and is very athletic.

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Power: Super Reflexes

Traits: None

Weapons/Items:
- Katana
- Silenced 9mm pistol (nicknamed glory)
- Three well balanced throwing knives (Due to designs, can be hidden anywhere)
- Lockpick set
- Wallet (Contains debit card, fifty dollars, library card, etc)

Side: Rogue

Background: He was found by a police officer when they got a call in about gun fire in a rural area in japan, when the police got there they found a nine year old boy in the midst of a bloody masscare. He was later taken up in an orphanage by an American couple , and was raised in newyork city. At the age of eleven he was a prodigy amongst the other students at the local bushido dojo , and later graduated at the top of his class. Now he spends every wakeing moment hunting the people who murdered his family.
Edited by VeiledInsanity, Mar 28 2012, 09:24 AM.
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This actually looks pretty good ^.^Could you put a space between each of your sections though?

Ex:
Name: Zane Blake
Gender: Male

Purely for aesthetic reasons and makes things nicer to read, so it's mainly just a nit pick :P Could you also change your spelling on your side choice? It would be Rogue, you're looking for ^.^ But really that's another nit pick.

That's basically all I see right now. I don't know how long I'll be on though so this is just a really quick run through. If someone doesn't approve this soon though I'll be on later tonight or tomorrow and will try to do that for you xD Great job on your profile though! You should have seen my first one... It was a nightmare :O (Referring to another site, TNF)
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Hey thanks for the input Veiled, and I can't wait to get to work with Zane.
Edited by Zion, Mar 21 2012, 06:51 AM.
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