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| I Scream, You Scream, We All Scream for Metallica!; Klars. "Is that flavor any good?" | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: June 4, 2011, 1:47 pm (1,661 Views) | |
| the-fifth-horseman | June 4, 2011, 1:47 pm Post #1 |
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Inspired by raging hormones, my love for ice cream, and the fact that it's fucking summer and hotter than balls out. Feedback is welcome and appreciated. Enjoy! Perched on the edge of the sidewalk outside of the King Kone, Kirk watched Lars take a big lick of his ice cream cone. His eyes trailed across the drummer's face, tracing the curve of his forehead, his nose, his lips, his tongue; followed the slow path of a stray droplet of sweat as it appeared from beneath the fair-skinned man's tousled, sweat-dampened hair and trickled from his temple down toward his jaw. He watched that tantalizing, skilled tongue as it lapped at the cool cream, caught a few wandering drips of the treat as they escaped down the side of his cone, and then licked his lips slowly, as if teasing. Kirk watched it all with absorbed, unmoving eyes, his own ice cream cone abandoned and melting in his hand. "Is that flavor any good?" the dark-haired man asked casually, trying not to seem as enraptured as he truly was. He swallowed audibly at the dryness in his throat, fought the urge to wipe at the sticky sweat that crept down his hot neck. "Mmm, yeah," Lars replied through a mouthful of raspberry sorbet, eyes half-lidded in delighted ecstasy. Despite the nearly unbearable heat of the August day, the headiness of Lars' voice almost made Kirk shiver. Glancing over, Lars' lips curved in a lazy smile as he extended his cone to Kirk. "You want a taste?" Unknowingly, Kirk's mouth dropped slightly ajar, the inquiry temporarily taking his breath away. It was a simple question, definitely not the sexual innuendo he'd perceived it as, but it stunned him nonetheless. You'd be surprised with what I'd like to taste, he thought aloofly. Heart thumping in his chest, Kirk snapped his jaw shut again. He swallowed at that dryness in his throat yet again, the everlasting scratchiness that never seemed to wash away. He glanced at Lars' cone, Lars, and then the cone again. He knew what he wanted to do, what he was going to do. Dammit, Kirk, you're fucking stupid. So fucking ridiculously stupid. But he wasn't going to stop himself, either. Preparing himself with a deep breath, he threw all caution to the wind and did what he'd been waiting for for years, but never actually had the audacity to do: he pushed Lars' outstretched arm back against his body and leaned in to kiss him full on those lush, raspberry-flavored lips. At first, Kirk could feel Lars' body go rigid, his eyes widening on the dot. But that was okay. Kirk hadn't expected anything else out of him. Actually, he was surprised that he wasn't getting his ass kicked yet. What really shocked Kirk, however, was when Lars' lips suddenly parted and gave way to the cool, tropical-tasting depths of his waiting mouth. He could feel his head start to spin as he met Lars' tongue with his own as it snaked out to twine with his. His heart thundered against his ribcage frantically as he tasted both the ice cream and Lars. And Lars. Kirk whimpered on instinct, his body leaning more dependently on Lars' smaller frame. He wanted to sink into Lars, to melt into him the way the gooey ice cream was melting over his hand. He wanted to lick Lars all over the way Lars licked the stickiness from between his fingers. He wanted the moment to never end, but it did. After a few seconds too short of twirling tongues, Kirk felt Lars slowly pulling back, and he too withdrew. His fingers were trembling around his ice cream cone, his stomach filled to the brim with nervous butterflies. He couldn't believe what he had just done - what Lars had just done, for that matter - but damn, did it feel good. He couldn't tell whether that was angst or complete adoration bubbling up in his naval now and threatening to make him sick, but he loved it. Kirk willed himself to pick his eyes and his gut up off the sidewalk. Feeling a blush sear his cheeks, he timidly traveled his eyes up to Lars, waiting for the fireworks. Warm, glowing, green eyes met his, still wide with pleasant bewilderment. His cheeks were rosy and the sweat was collecting over his brow. A soft grin gracing his berry-colored lips, Lars couldn't help but let his total enthusiasm spill into his words: "How did it taste?" Kirk let out a trembling chuckle, a grinning forcing its way on to his lips. He wiped a pool of sweat away from his forehead with a shaky hand. "Good," he replied quietly. "Really, really good." "Want some more?" Lars proposed, though both knew that the ice cream had been long forgotten. An ornery smirk curved his mouth, and there was a mischievous glimmer in his emerald eyes. "There's always second helpings." Kirk chuckled again, this time a bit more confidently. "You sure about that?" he teased. "I gotta watch my figure, you know." "Sugar-free." Lars wiggled his brows. "Hm..." Kirk contemplated for a moment, then turned to his comrade again, smiling wickedly. His stomach was still doing flips. "Doesn't hurt to indulge a bit, does it?" Leaning in again, Lars' smirk grew even wider. "Not at all." Part two: Bikini Season. Edited by the-fifth-horseman, July 4, 2011, 8:44 pm.
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| larscriancinha | June 4, 2011, 2:01 pm Post #2 |
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Larsybaby
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I completely LOVED this. so much.
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| Lars Mi Amor | June 4, 2011, 2:05 pm Post #3 |
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I loved it!Good story!,I wish i can write like you but I suck Can't wait for more!!!
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| the-fifth-horseman | June 4, 2011, 2:12 pm Post #4 |
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Thanks, guys! I'm glad that it wasn't a total suck fest. Thanks for the comments, they're much appreciated. ![]() Aaaand also, now that you mention it...I hadn't planned on writing more. However, if you want me to...I could. What do you think? Go for it or trash it?
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| Lars Mi Amor | June 4, 2011, 2:14 pm Post #5 |
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Lars the Great
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MORE MORE MORE!!! |
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| the-fifth-horseman | June 4, 2011, 2:19 pm Post #6 |
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![]() Awesome! I'll see what I can do. Maybe I can throw in some Klars sexy time.
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| Lars Mi Amor | June 4, 2011, 2:22 pm Post #7 |
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WOAH!! about your story, thanks for reminding me I need to finish mine "the unexpected" i totally forgot about and its been like 2 weeks :O |
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| larscriancinha | June 4, 2011, 2:30 pm Post #8 |
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MORE? I'm more excited than I should be.
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| the-fifth-horseman | June 4, 2011, 3:17 pm Post #9 |
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I'm writing it right now.
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| Isis | June 4, 2011, 6:43 pm Post #10 |
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TEA + CUDDLES
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Pretty good hon! Enjoyed that.
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| the-fifth-horseman | June 4, 2011, 7:31 pm Post #11 |
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Thank you! I'm glad.
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| Jik Hyun | June 5, 2011, 11:10 pm Post #12 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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mmmm hav had a few dreams of licking ice cream off kirk's chest over the years. I still think of lars whenever I get a kanel frosnapper(cinnamon twist) and kanel snegle(cinnamon snail)(cinnamon roll) |
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| the-fifth-horseman | July 4, 2011, 3:40 pm Post #13 |
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Haha, yeah, I daydream of licking things off of Kirk too. And not just ice cream...
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| Olyamet | July 4, 2011, 3:52 pm Post #14 |
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Jäger.....
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Wow... I seriosly thought I left a comment a long time ago, when I read this... I guess not. MY BAD! Love it!!! |
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| the-fifth-horseman | July 4, 2011, 3:57 pm Post #15 |
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Thanks, darlin'! Better late than never, huh?
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Thanks for the comments, they're much appreciated.
What do you think? Go for it or trash it?


4:49 AM Jul 11