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| L, Is for Love baby!; James-Lars. 1998. One-Shot Smutt | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: June 17, 2011, 2:02 am (809 Views) | |
| Elli <3's Papa Het | June 17, 2011, 2:02 am Post #1 |
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hey girls im still writing Forgive me, Forgive me not. but decided to post what i thought of for the past few days XD. this sets during the recording of Garage Inc. James and Lars Smutt hope you like.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------- Lars' POV I looked at James standing there and singing his hear out, Loverman.. song originally made by Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds the original was good. but James, he made the song come alive and put images in your head like no other. Ive always thought of James as attractive even more than that but he never knew that. maybe he did a long time ago but that was 81 when we were alone a lot more than we are now. i looked at him up and down that figure grasping my eyes making them stay locked on his broad body. he was just wearing a black cap, plain white tee-shirt, and black jeans. his lips pressing onto the black cold microphone like it was the lips of his long lost lover. Ive always imaged that he would treat me like his mic devour me and tear my lips up like it was nothing like many people thought so his voice was the sound of angels. but to me he was the Devil in this song claiming a mere human to dominate. i would fantasize of myself as that weak figure not trying to push the front man from hell away just taking him in. his striking light blue eyes looked at me sharply. all this thinking and imagery was interfering with my drumming for the final recording. it was late at night and i knew he would be pissed if i screwed up even the slightest bit, but like normally i wouldn't try to confront him back. tonight i was beyond in love with him and i really want him. need him to notice that. the song was coming close to the end and i took my gaze from him and finished the song. hoping it would end quick, James said his last lyrics and we all tiredly put our guitars away and drum sticks. "Hey guys its late, what do you say we all just go to bed uh?" his voice was rough but irritated. i looked at him and nodded with a slight smile. all the other guys walked out and i decided to walk out with James but he stayed in the "Inner Sanctum" just looking through the music. usually Bob ould but he was at home sleeping. i walked in there behind him looking at the computer screen. he stood up and looked down at me. fucking giant. "you should go Lars. i got this. i don't need help" i would have just waled out like every last time. but no not this time, this time i wasn't going to leave im going to stay "no. im going to stay this time ok?..not tired" he looked at me. gave me baby blue eyes and he went from irritated to..happy, all of the sudden to.. maybe he did want me to stay. i looked up at him again and he handed me a beer. we both sat down on the dark brown leather couch and sipped our beverages like good old times. "whats the matter, why so quiet?" i smiled at him with lazy eyes "nothing is matter. just remembering this is almost like good old times. you know just me and you, alone. having a couple of beers like long time friends" he looked at me and nodded "those days where great" did James really remember when we would make love like that back then, i thought he had forgotten but i was wrong. "loved your plump lips" he muttered. i shot emerald eyes at him and smiled widely "heh yeah.. i miss your soft ones" my body got warm. and i felt shivers run up my spine. he noticed i heard him and he took a long drink finishing off his and getting another. he offered me a 2nd. i held up mine and was still full. " your slow" he smiled that beautiful boyish smile of his. "fuck you" i took a drink "i know you would" he quietly laughed "damn right.." we both laughed. and i finished off mine and got another. "seems i underestimated someone" i quickly popped off the cap and smiled "seems you have" i looked down and saw that large bulge tightened on his crotch "don't you think you should stop? at least before your jeans rip" he looked at me confused but then he noticed himself. "heh.. well i never gave a flying fuck about it and neither should you!" "heh guess not.." i took another drink."but this beer don't effect me like it does you Hetfield!" he looked at me "well.. how do you know its even the beer that's doing that to me" i felt a red warm wave run across my face. "oh well. then what is it" "awwh Lars.. just because its been years. you don't think *hiccup* you don't think i get off thinking about you??".. no lie when James was Drunk he flat out old the truth about everything and anything. he sat next to me on the couch again after getting his 3rd, his face close to mine and eyes bright. "never thought you cared" i said to him "you kidding!! why do you think i reject almost every damn groupie hahah!!" so James still remembers and thinks about thoes times. and even fucks himself over them. i felt my cock jump. now its my turn to play along "well James" i ran my small finger down his large chest "dont you ever think i would like to spark up those memories again for you?" he smiled and i could feel his body getting hot close to mine. "i-i never thought you would want to *hiccup* ever again.." " you thought wrong" my teeth gripped his bottom lip softly i could feel his burning eyes staring at me. i startled his lap. just starting to bring back everything. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------- next and last half coming soon. lol
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| Isis | June 17, 2011, 1:34 pm Post #2 |
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TEA + CUDDLES
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Nice! Is this your first James/Lars and/or slash fic? If so, wee! Welcome~ XD
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | June 17, 2011, 2:28 pm Post #3 |
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yesh it is lol
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | June 17, 2011, 2:54 pm Post #4 |
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last part lol ------------ ----- James' POV he sat on my lay kissing my dry lips, my eyes halfway shut. fuck i shouldn't have drank so much if i knew he was going to do this! i wanted to see him, again just like the days we used to have together his hands soothing my head thoes fingers running through my hair and those teasing hips slowly and with torture dry humping my crotch making it bigger than before. my back resting against the couch and head leaned back hoping that his teeth will sink into me making me his my hopes were instantly answered feeling shots of pain running coursing through my veins my neck flushing red wanting, needing more. he bit down hard i could feel those teeth sinking in my muscles his hips moving slowly on me my hands holding his small waist. "please.. Lars.. more. please" i begged hoping to get the response i wanted but it wasn't happening not this time. moving slow i let out small whimpers into his ear he knew what he was doing he pleased me by going slightly faster and rough, my jeans fighting with gravity itself but he continued dry humping me slightly fast but yet still tantalizing slow all at the same time he slipped off my white tee in a second and left my bare chest for him, in response to that i took off his roughly his lips stared to kiss my neck with nibbles here and there but those teeth gripping my collar bone laving yet another mark on my soft skin. his sinning hands propped open my jeans along with his rubbing his bare member with mine harsh. i bucked my hips up at him hoping yet again to get him to thrust faster, he slid up more upon my stomach squeezing my cock within his hands making me yelp like a little girl he was enjoying this. slicking my cock up into his tight ass making him moan and my growls heavy. i took hold of his waist tighter pulling him unto me his eyes squinting to my already hard member hitting him hard "oh fuck James more" he looked back into my eyes, my hips bucking at him hard hitting his prostate roughly making him scream my name in pleasure i continued doing so making him whimper and moan and just like he sis to me i bit down on his neck hard leaving dark purple marks to be seen by all eyes. my hand stroked his hardness along with the rhythm of my thrusting hips staring at his emeralds and them staring at baby blues his lips kissing mine. i could tell that he was close and so was i, we moaned into each others mouths loudly feeling our orgasm reaching harshly, he exploded all over my stomach and remnants onto my lips as well i came tight after him hearing him gasp to the hot white seed that spilled inside him. "you still got it.. old man" he laughed at me "hey fuck off" i licked his remains off my lips with tongue and stared at me with a slight smile "ive always loved that tongue of yours..too bad we couldn't stop" i knew what he wanted from me "well Lars.. who ever said this was our last time?" we stared and locked lips not caring to go wash up. just taking in this moment. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------- End. lol hope it was at least an ok story |
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| Isis | June 17, 2011, 7:49 pm Post #5 |
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TEA + CUDDLES
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Aww, welcome! This was alright! A good first slash fic. If you want we can talk PM and I can give you some crit and feedback so you can improve-- but only if you want! Otherwise, I enjoyed it.
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| Jik Hyun | June 17, 2011, 10:11 pm Post #6 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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nice fic. bet james is as addicting as a bag of pork rinds. lol |
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lol hope it was at least an ok story 
4:49 AM Jul 11