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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Jan 29 2012, 09:41 AM Post #61 |
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☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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| Shayniz21 | Jan 29 2012, 04:35 PM Post #62 |
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i will update soon, hopefully tonight! school, work, my daughter its all craziness right now! |
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| Shayniz21 | Feb 4 2012, 11:36 PM Post #63 |
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So this one is a short one, I'm not happy with the way this turned out. In this chapter I tried to make it seem like Aria wasn't all that aware of what was going on with her because of the denial and depression she was going through. I dont think i did a good job with that. Let me know what you think! Aria's POV I woke up the next morning with a massive headache. I was in bed...alone. I looked at the clock it noon. Last night, started to play over in my mind. I felt a weight lifted off my chest. All was finally out in the open, freeing me from being trapped inside my dark despair I created long ago. I got up and walked into the bathroom feeling very dizzy. I started to fall to the side when I caught myself using the doorframe to the bathroom. Once I steadied myself I walked the rest of the way into the bathroom and turned the water on. I splashed my face with some cold water and then grabbed a towl. I patted my face dry and looked in the mirror. I stared back at my reflection in shock. I really had no idea I looked like this. My face was thin and pale. I had these huge dark bag under my eyes. My teeth were stained from smoking. I looked hideous. I looked.....lifeless. My eyes started to water realizing I walked around in front of my children like this, when they needed me the most. How could I be so selfish? How could I be so weak? The tears started falling down harder and I sat down on the floor. I put my face in my heads and started sobbing again. I was so ashamed. I let my feelings get the better of me and push the needs of my children aside. The tears slowly started to subside and I leaned against the cabinet underneath the sink. I heard footsteps in my bedroom and then James figure appeared in the doorway. He took a quick look at me and came running to my side. " Babe, are you ok?" He asked with concern in his eyes. " Yes I'm fine, just realizing alot of things." He looked at me confused and held out his hand. " Come on Aria, come downstairs I'll make you some lunch." I nodded and took his hand. I stood up and started to walk out of the bathroom but I got dizzy again and swayed into the wall. I tried to grab the doorframe again but I was too late but luckily James caught me. "Aria, whats wrong?" James asked nervously.I steadied myslef with James help. He held me closer and our eyes met. We stared deep in each others eyes for a while. " I think I'm ok now." " I think you should lie down. I'll go make you something to eat. When was the last time you ate?" " I...don't know." He looked away and shook his head. " I'm going to get you some food and call Corrine's husband to come check you out." " I'm a doctor James." I could see him glaring at me out of the corner of his eyes. He picked me up and carried me back to bed. He set me down andput the covers on me. " I'll be back in a few minutes." James started to walk away. " James wait." He turned around and walked over to me. " I'm sorry for the way I have been acting and the way I look. I love you and want to work things out." James smiled with tears in his eyes. He bent down and kissed my forhead. " You dont know how good it feels to hear you say that." |
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 5 2012, 03:41 AM Post #64 |
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☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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I like it, she realised how bad things are
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| Lilith | Feb 7 2012, 09:55 AM Post #65 |
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Well, they say the first step to change is to realize the reality. She finally took it.
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| Shayniz21 | Feb 7 2012, 05:31 PM Post #66 |
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Thanks for your comments!! Chapter 25 Aria's POV Later on that day, Corrine's husband Sean came over and checked me out. He said I was dehydrated and probably anemic which I already knew. I was already kicking myself in the ass for what I let happen to me. I followed Seans instructions and drank lots of fluids, drank some nutrition drinks and ate 6 small meals a day. James, of course, said no more working until I'm 100% better. I agreed to that but only because I knew I needed the time to fix my marriage and try and mend what I did to my children. I was lying in bed, bored as hell. James took the kids out for some ice cream, so I was all alone. I decided to get out of bed and walk around to collect my thoughts. I went to the bathroom and looked at myself in the mirror. " Ugh, what the fuck have I done to myself?" I said out loud. I decided to hop in the shower and let the hot water relax me. I got out and looked in the mirror again to see if the shower had improved my appearence at all. It didn't. I sighed heavily and went to put on some clothes. I picked a white beater and jean capris. I blow dryed my hair and decided to put some makeup on. I put almost 3 layers of foundation on under my eyes to hide the dark circles. It didn't work completely but covered it somewhat. I brushed my teeth twice and then swore to see a dentist ASAP to get my teeth whitened. I walked down stairs and found I was still alone. I walked outside in the backyard by the pool The sun was shining and the sky was a beautiful clear blue. There was a warm breeze blowing my hair around. I closed my eyes and smiled to myself. I felt alive. I felt like the huge dark cloud that was covering me was finally gone. I opened my eyes and let my happy tears fall freely. I decided to enjoy nature a little more and grabbed a blanket from inside. I layed it down in the grass and sat down. I layed down on my back and stared up at the sky. I lay for a while, almost dosing off when heard the kids yelling my name. " Mommy!!" Melody and Aiden both yelled. I looked back and saw their beautiful smiling faces. James was right behind them smiling too. They both jumped on the blanket and hugged me. " Mommy we brought you back some ice cream!" Aiden said excitedly. I took the cup of ice creamm and smiled when I saw the pounds of sprinkles and hotfudge piled over vanilla ice cream. " Alright you guys go get cleaned up." James said and walked over to the blanket and sat down next to me. I looked up at him and smiled. He smiled back and leaned forward. He placed a soft kiss on my lips. He started to back away but I grabbed him by the back of the neck and pulled him in for a deeper kiss. He wrapped his arms around me and lifted me up onto his lap. It felt so good to have his arms around me, to feel the love he had for me. I broke the kiss running out of breath and breathing heavily. James smiled. " See what all that smoking has done to you? You can't even give me a proper kiss." He laughed. I couldn't help but laugh myself. " Don't worry I'm done smoking." James looked at me deep in the eyes and smiled. " I missed you so much." He said caressing my face. A tear escaped his his eye and I wiped it away. " I missed you too. I'm so sorry to have you come home and see the state I was in. That was so selfish of me. I should have been strong for you and our children. I brought Corrine into this and took her away from her family. I'm so sorry I did all this to everyone." I said fighting back my tears. " You shouldn't be the one apologizing, if I hadn't been such an asshole none of this would've happened. I am truly sorry for everything I have done to you and our children. I hope one day you can forgive me." I could see he was genuine in everything that he was saying. I ran a hand through his hair and looked deep into his eyes. " I've already started to forgive you. I can't hold a grudge against you. I love you too much." We both smiled and kissed each other passionately. " MOM! DAD! HURRY UP!" Melody yelled. We broke the kiss and laughed. James got up and helped me stand. I bent over and and picked up my all but completely melted ice cream. I looked at it with disgust. " Do I really have to eat this?" James looked at me and started laughing. " No, babe, I tried to stop them but they insisted on all the sugar." " If I eat this I'll need insulin." He howled with laughter and took the ice cream from me. " Come on, lets go have dinner." He grabbed my hand and entwined his fingers in mine. |
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| Lilith | Feb 8 2012, 05:13 PM Post #67 |
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Aw! James is being a sweetheart. I'm glad Aria is up again, and feeling so much better. With James' love and care I bet she'll be in perfect shape in no time.
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| Shayniz21 | Feb 19 2012, 09:07 PM Post #68 |
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Chapter 26 Aria's POV The past few weeks went really well. James and I were getting along great. Rehab really changed him, he was like a completely different man. We spent most of our time with Melody and Aiden. James was being a better father than he ever was before. Melody and Aiden were finally getting to know their father. I was doing better as well. I was starting to gain some of my appetite and weight back. I quit smoking. Everything was awesome. The only thing that scared me was the upcoming counseling session James and I had. Metallica's therapist Phil, suggested we get a couples counselor. We are going there today to talk about everything that has happened. James and I are both nervous, without even having to say it to each other. The kids were getting ready to go to Corrine's house while we went to our counseling session. I was looking out the window trying to calm my nerves when I saw Corrine's car pull up. " Melody, Aiden, Corrines here!" I yelled. I walked to the front door and let Corrine in. " Hey sexy lady!" Corrine said smiling and giving me a hug. " Oh please, anyways what are you and the munchkins doing today?" We walked into the livingroom and sat down on the couch. " Well, I think I'm going to take them to the zoo. It's a beautiful day." " Yeah, it is." I sighed. Corrine looked at me suspiciousley. "I take it your nervous?" "Yes, I'm nervous about this whole thing and what's going to be brought up. I mean I know it has to happen but I'm just nervous. I'm nervous about that pain coming back." " Well, just be strong and everything will be ok. Sure its going to be hard but you have to do this for you and James and your kids. Be strong Aria, I know that you can be." "I will." We smiled at each other and the kids came running downstairs to us. "Alright guys lets go to the zoo!" The kids jumped for joy and hugged me goodbye. I watched them get into the car and drive off. I went upstairs and to get ready. I jumped in the shower and then got dressed> I did my makeup and my hair and was out the door. James was already there waiting for me. I parked the car and walked inside the facility. I have to admit, my palms were sweaty. I was nervous as hell. I walked back to suite 202. I opened the door and James was sitting there by himself waiting for me. He turned around and stood up. He smiled and embraced me in a hug. He pulled back and kissed me deeply. I felt so turned on as I had every day he kissed me like that. We hadn't had sex in a long time. I wanted it badly, as did he but we held back for some reason. James broke the kiss and roamed his eyes over my body noticing the dark navy blue strapless dress I was wearing. " You look amazing." He said as he licked his lips. " Thank you, I'm slowly starting to get my body back." " Yes you are....definitely.....getting your body back." James ran his eyes and hands over my body. I started to feel his dick get hard. "James, we have a counseling session you need to calm down." I said grinning. He kissed me again deeply sliding his tongue in my mouth and grabbing my ass. He moaned in my mouth and I felt his jeans get even tighter. I broke the kiss and looked into his eyes.I could see the lust and love in his eyes. " I love you." I said. He smiled and gave me a quick kiss on the lips. " I love you too." Right then the counselor walked in and smiled at us. He held out his hand. " Hi I'm Connor, you must be Aria." I nodded and shook his hand. He motioned for us to sit. We sat down in seperate chairs and our smiles instantly vanished. " Well, why don't we begin. Aria, James has told me alot about you and everything that has happened. You guys have gone through a great deal of trials in your marriage." " Yes, we have but things seem to be getting better now." I said smiling. He smiled and continued to talk about the issues that were in the begining of our marriage. About and hour had passed and we were now on the subject of James last weeks before rehab. " So Aria, tell me what you were feeling before you kicked James out." I swallowed hard and looked down at my hands for a moment, remembering the feelings of anger and sadness as the flashbacks of those weeks flooded my mind. I took a deep breath and looked up and tried to be strong. " Well, I was angry and sad. The man that I love was out drinking all the time and neglecting his family. You know, it hurt that he neglected me, that he pushed me away, but when he pushed his children away, that fucking hurt. Seeing that our children had the questions in there eyes as to why daddy wasn't paying attention to them killed me. You know, fuck the fact he was running around on me and-" Connor cut me off. " So you knew James was cheating on you?" " Yes, why?" I asked confused. I looked at James, he had tears running down his face. He looked me in the eyes. " I didn't know that you knew." James said quietly. Was he serious? " Of course I knew." " Well, Aria how did you know?" Connor asked. "The night I kicked him out and we were fighting, his phone rang and an empty condom wrapper fell out of his pocket." James looked at me like he suddenly remembered and his eyes started to water again." I'm not stupid. I'm married to a rock star. Any girl knows that this sort of thing comes with the territory. The only thing you can do is hope that your husband has the respect and decencey not to cheat on you, but in the back of your head you know that they are and if any other woman out there married to a rockstar thinks their husband hasn't cheated on them, then they're fucking stupid." James looked at me wide eyed. I looked back at Connor and half smiled. " Well, Aria you seem to have a pretty good grip on things. I did hear that you had some type of breakdown though right after you kicked James out. Tell me about that." " Well, I was hurt. I felt unloved and unattractive. I tried to be intimate with him and he pushed me away. That really fucking hurt. I felt worthless. My mother used to tell me I was worthless and a piece of shit. It took me a long time to try and recover from that. James brought all those feelings back and it was like a slap to the fucking face. That breakdown was my weak point.... it wont happen again. I was so upset that I let my children see me like that. Espicially my daughter, I need to be her role model and show her how to be a strong woman incase, she ever has to put up with shit like this." We continued to talk about everything and how it made us feel. Two hours had now passed and the session ended. We said our goodbyes to Connor and walked outside silent. We got to my car and I looked James in the eye. He looked torn and guilty. His eyes were swollen and red. I leaned forward and kissed him on the cheek. " I'll see you at home." I got in the car and left him standing there. I drove back home and thought about everything I said. I shocked myself a little about the things I had said in our session. It was the truth though. I meant every fucking word of it. It felt good though. Really good. I felt strong and empowered. I smiled feeling proud of myself. Before I knew it I was already home. Corrine still wasn't back yet and I beat James there. I parked the car and went inside. I put my keys and purse on the counter and made some coffee. I poured myself a cup and went to the bedroom. I sat down on the bed and took my heels off. I started to unsip my dress and let it fall to the floor. " Wow." I jumped and turned around. James stood there, eyes glued to my body. " You scared the shit out of me." James walked closer to me and wrapped his arms around my waist. He looked deep inot my eyes. " I'm so sorry I made you feel unwanted and unattractive. I'm more then attracted to you and will always have want you. You are more than beautiful to me. You are the strongest woman I know and an amazing role model to our children." He leaned forward and kissed me deeply sliding his tongue into my mouth. We both moaned in response. James started to take my bra off and thong off. I took his shirt off and started to unbutton his jeans. He broke the kiss and took them the rest of the way off. He stood there naked in front of me. He wrapped his arms around my waist gently kissed my neck. He brought his lips to my ear. "I love you so much Aria, words can't describe." He looked into my eyes. We both had tears in our eyes. He led me over to the bed and layed me down. He climbed on top of me and kissed me softly. "I promise to never treat you like that again." He opened my legs wider and sucked on my neck. My whole body shook and I moaned in response. He looked back into my eyes and I could see lust in them. He leaned down and started to kiss me deeply. I felt the tip of his dick slowly make its way inside and then, with a quick thrust, he entered me, while I moaned his name........
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| Lilith | Feb 21 2012, 04:48 PM Post #69 |
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Uuuuh! Why you stopped there? I think they are doing a great progress in therapy. And I'm glad Aria is feeling much healthier.
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 22 2012, 05:51 AM Post #70 |
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They froze in my head Make them move
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| Shayniz21 | Mar 4 2012, 04:52 PM Post #71 |
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Chapter 27 (Continuing the sex scene )Aria's POV He began to slowly thrust in and out of me. It felt amazing, better than the first time. It was as if everything was intensified 10 times. He kissed me with such passion that it seemed like we were the only ones in the world, like the earth stood still for us. Neither of us were in a rush and remained in a slow steady pace. He broke the kiss and moved down to my breast and began to suck on them and massage them. James brought his head back up and rubbed his nose on mine. I opened my eyes and found him staring at me with love in his eyes. " I love you so much." He said. " I love you too." He leaned forward and kissed me softly breaking the kiss shortly after. He sat back up and lifted my hips sliding in me even further. I moaned loudly. " Harder!" I yelled and he did as he was told, grinning knowing that I loved it when we were in this position. His thrust got a little faster and I knew he was close. I started moaning louder and louder and he groaned in response speeding up his thrusts and thrusting harder. My body shook as my orgasm hit me and he soon followed, thrusting as hard as he could before his orgasm was over. He rested on his forearms and kissed me deeply. When he broke the kiss he looked deeply in my eyes. We layed for a while just staring into each others eyes. He suddenly looked away and rolled to the side. " James whats wrong?" I asked rolling to my side looking at him. He looked at me with what seemed to be sadness in his eyes. He rolled on to his side to face me and propped himself up on his elbow. He brushed a strand of hair out of my face. " I don't deserve you." He stated. "Haven't we had this conversation before?" I asked laughing slightly. He gave a soft smile in return but faded quickly. " I have put you through so much and yet you're still here...with me." He was looking down at the bed. I put a hand on the side of his face and made him look at me. " James, yes you have put me through alot but of all the things you've done don't measure up to the amount of love I have for you. I can't live without you, I tried that once and I was miserable." " Yeah I remember those years as well. I still don't think I deserve you or your love for me but I cant live without you either. The time that I spent away from you and our children practically killed me. I would wake up in the middle of the night crying out for you and seeing Melody and Aidens faces in my dreams. I was so scared that I lost you. That I was going to come home and find you and the kids gone or that you were leaving me. That was worse than not being able to drink but it gave me the strength to not give up. I kept thinking that maybe, just maybe, you'd have me back. Then when I came home, I was a wreck. I though for sure you were going to leave me but then I saw the kids and they ran up to me, all I wanted to do was to hold them and never let go. I looked around nervousely for you when I saw Corrine instead of you. I immediately thought you left me. When I started to ask Corrinequestions about where you were and then I saw you out of the corner of my eye, I felt a relief but then I noticed "you"." I got up off the bed and grabbed James tshirt and put it on. I got nervous. I didn't want to hear what he had to say next. " Aria whats wrong?" James got up and walked over to me putting his arm around my waist. I bit my lip nervousley. " I...I don't know if I can handle what you were about to say. I realized how disgusting and sick I must have looked," I said with tears running down my cheeks, " I realized it after our talk with Corrine and Cliff's parents, when I woke up in the morning and looked in the mirror I was shocked. I looked like death, how could I let our kids see me like that? Then I thought of you and how you probably felt about my appereance but I dont want to hear you say it. It will hurt too much." James leaned forward and kissed me. He broke the kiss and grabbed my face with both his hands. " The only thing I thought when I saw so you was " what did I do to my wife". I never thought that you were gross or disgusting. Yeah you were alot thinner but not gross. I did that to you and I'm sorry, I just hope one day you will forgive me." " I already do forgive you James." James smiled at my comment and so did I. We kissed each other and held each other close.James leaned back a little and rested his forehead against mine. " Your an amazing woman, wife and mother to our children. Cliff was right, your not someone I want to lose and I will never put our family through bullshit again. I promise." "I know you wont break that promise." James smiled and slowly slid his hands down my sides, pulling me closer. He took a couple of steps back and looked at my body. " You look better in my clothes than I do." He grinned. " Should we switch wardrobes?" I grinned. He picked my dress up off the floor and held it up to his chest striking a pose. " What do you think? I don't know if this shade of blue is my color." I was laughing so hard. His face was priceless and the girly voice was the icing on the cake. " You sound so girly." I howled with laughter. He dropped the dress and put his hands on hips, trying to look offended. " Girly?! I'll show you fucking girly! "He growled and started chasing me around the bedroom. I laughed the entire time even though it was short lived. He caught me quickly and tossed me on the bed and climbed on top of me. He grabbed my wrists and pinned me down. I layed there laughing hysterically and soon he joined in laughing hysterically too. Finally our laughing subsided. " I love you so much James." He smiled but didn't say it back. Then his face went serious. He sat down next to me and pulled me on his lap. He looked deep into my eyes and smiled. " Marry me....again." I chuckled a little bit and looked at him confused. " What do you mean? Why again?" " I want to renew our vows and take you on an amazing honeymoon. The vows I took with you were broken by me and I feel I need to redo them." I sat there and looked at him shocked. I smiled and wrapped my arms around him. " Yes James i will marry you..again." He smiled and kissed me passionately. Three years later.... "Mom, do I look ok?" Melody said unsure. " Of course you do you look gorgeous." I said staring at my daughter. It was prom night and she was getting ready to go meet her boyfriend Blane downstairs. I looked her over. She was so beautiful, my little princess all grown up. I let out a sigh with a few tears escaping. " Mom please don't cry." Melody walked over to me and gave me a hug. I hugged her tightly. I put her at arms length and smiled at her. " You really do look amazing baby girl." She smiled at me and turned to look in the mirror. She had a beautiful turqouise gown on. It had a halter top with a sweetheart neckline and the breast part was covered in different colored crystals. Her hair was curled and slightly pulled back. James went out and bought her diamond earrings and necklace. " Can I come in?" Corrine said peeking her head out from the door. " Aunt Corrine!" Melody yelled. She ran over to her and hugged her aunt. I saw tears in Corrines eyes. " Oh my god Melody you look so beautiful." Corrine said with her tears falling down her cheeks. " Not you too." Melody laughed. I walked over to Corrine and hugged her. " You're growing up too damn fast." Corrine said over my shoulder. I let Corrine go and grabbed Melody's purse. " Ok sweetie, we cant keep your man waiting!" Melody and I smiled and went downstairs. I saw James sitting there talking to Blane and Aiden while holding Corrine's 1 year old son Chase. Suprisingly Blane and James got along great. Blane comes from a good family and his dad is one of James' biker buddies. James turned his head hearing us coming down. He smiled and then looked shocked seeing his daughter. He got up and walked over to us. " Wow princess you look stunning." Melody smiled and hugged her father. " Thanks daddy." She walked over to Blane and he gave her the orchid corsage. I looked at Chase in James' arms and motioned with my hands for him to come to me. James looked at me and pulled away. " No I'm not done holding him." James said. " Look he wants to come with me." I said as Chase was reaching for me smiling. " Only because you gave him the idea." He said trying to sound angry. Corrine came over and grabbed Chase and handed him to me. I grinned wickedly at James. " Ha!" I walked over to the front door to say goodbye to Blane and Melody. " Mom, thanks for doing my makeup and my hair." Melody smiled. " Your welcome honey. Go have fun." " But not too much." James said. Melody rolled her eyes and hugged us both. The kids got in the limo waving to us as they drove away. I looked at James and saw his eyes were glossy. He looked at me and seemed a little embarrassed. He leaned toward me and kissed me softly. " Ugh, get a room." Aiden said walking outside with his basketball. We both laughed. " Dad you wanna play?" " Sure son." James went outside with his son and they started to play basketball. I stood there and watched them smiling. Everything was perfect. James and I were doing great and hes been sober for almost four years. We renewed our vows and took the kids on our honeymoon to the Bahamas. Well, I guess you cant really count it as a honeymoon but I loved it just the same. I don't think I have ever been so happy. James and I had never been so close. It was like meeting each other all over again. I was sitting in the living room watching TV and holding Chase. I was babysitting for Corrine. James was in the studio in the basement working on some new riffs. I heard him come upstairs and sit down next to me. Chase fell asleep and I got up and layed him in his playpen. I sat back down next to James who was grinning like a fool. " What?" I asked. " I miss watching you hold a baby." " What are you getting at?" James pulled me onto his lap making me straddle him. He ran his hands down my thighs and back up to my breasts squeezing them. " Well, maybe we could have another baby." He smiled, eyes full of lust. " Are you high?" I said laughing. " No I'm quite sober and I've been thinking about this-" " How long have you been thinking about this?" I said cutting him off. " Since Corrine came over with Chase today." " Ok, does this have anything to do with Melody going to prom? I know its hard with our babies growing up but if we have another one that will grow up too." " I know but I really want another one." He said pulling me closer and putting his hand under my sun dress. He moved my panties aside and rubbed his thumb over my clit. I moaned and shuddered at the same time. " Are you trying to seduce me into saying yes?" " Is it working?" He asked sliding a finger inside me. I moaned. " Well, a finger is not going to get us very far if we want to make a baby." I said. James looked deep into my eyes and smiled like a child recieving a reward. He kissed me passionately. He broke the kiss and stared into my eyes. " I love you Aria." " I love you too James." The End Thanks guys for reading my fic and your comments. I have some one shots I'm working on and a pretty big, long story I'm working on too. Thanks again! Love you guys and keep writing!!!
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Mar 4 2012, 05:10 PM Post #72 |
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I don't like ends And they were just about to.... I love it!!! And congrats on finishe fic
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| Shayniz21 | Mar 4 2012, 06:51 PM Post #73 |
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I dont like ends either!!! I was struggling with this all day, I didnt know if i wanted to end it there or keep it going for a little while longer but then I didnt want it to be one of those never ending stories that are like "oh my god is this ever going to fucking end". I'm not pleased with this fic, it could have been alot better but oh well, im not giving up!! |
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| Sekhmet49 | Mar 5 2012, 02:49 AM Post #74 |
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Sad to see it end... but very good story nonetheless! |
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| Lilith | Mar 7 2012, 03:41 PM Post #75 |
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Aw... :3 Hehe, such a sweet and naughty ending! lol Congratulations! It was a great story!
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