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Neighbors; Dave/Junior, NC-17.
Topic Started: July 7, 2011, 4:00 pm (1,380 Views)
youthanasia
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This is for you, Burnout! :horns:

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“Hey, you old enough to get us beer?”

The wide-eyed long-haired Minnesotan stood in the doorway like a scared puppy, wrinkled $20 in hand. He’d already pissed off his new neighbor twice that night and wanted to make amends.

The neighbor’s sneer softened as he took the $20. “Wait right here,” he said, going downstairs and out of the building.

It wasn’t long before he came back with a case of Bud in tow. “What’s your name, kid?” he asked as he unlocked the door to his apartment.

“David, what’s yours?”

“Same. You can call me Dave.”

The two men went into Dave’s apartment. There wasn’t much in the living room – an old couch, a dirty dish or two, an electric guitar, an amp with an empty whiskey bottle on top. David stood in one spot, just looking around. What a different kind of life, he thought to himself.

Dave ripped open the case and threw a beer to David. “Aren’t you gonna drink?”

“Yeah of course.” David cracked open the can and started chugging.

Dave sat on the couch as David continued to stand. He peered at David, who had been unsettlingly quiet since he got there. “So do you like Judas Priest?”

“Yeah, their new album is pretty good,” David said before sipping his beer in silence again. Dave got up and put British Steel on the stereo. David smiled brightly and continued to drink.

Before long, the two would get up for new cans of Bud, one right after the other. They’d headbang with arms around each other, they’d challenge each other to drinking games, and most of all, they’d talk metal. Within the hour, over half the case was gone.

“Hey, I’m glad you’re not mad anymore about the thing, you know!” David could control neither the enunciation of his words nor the volume of his voice. He slapped Dave on the shoulder in a friendly gesture, and left his hand there. “You’re a good dude.”

Dave smirked and put his hand on top of David’s. “You too, kid.” He took David’s hand away and got up to get another couple of beers.

When Dave returned to the couch, David was asleep. Dave slapped him across the face and he woke up with a start.

“Huh? I was resting my eyes!” he said as he scrambled to sit upright. Dave thrust a beer at him. He took it and drank.

“Such a fucking lightweight,” Dave slurred before taking another swig. He put his arm around David and smiled. David rubbed his sore face.

“You like Sabbath, right?” Dave asked, rubbing David’s shoulder idly and taking another few gulps of beer.

“Yeah, Sabbath’s alright,” David replied as he leaned further back. Dave got up, somewhat surprised that his balance had deteriorated in the past few hours, and put on Paranoid.

He plopped down on the couch with a bleary-eyed smile and put his arm back around David. “You’re a good dude,” he said, tussling David’s hair.

“Hahaaa, I already said—“ Dave cut him off by grabbing the back of his head and planting a sloppy kiss on his forehead. David stared at his neighbor speechlessly, unsure that he could or should do anything at all, feeling oddly yet pleasantly sober. As soon as he opened his mouth to talk, Dave kissed him on the lips.

As David felt the five o’clock shadow on his face and smelled the almost-too-familiar scent of beer, he began pushing Dave away. Dave rolled his eyes. “What,” he snarled, crossing his arms.

“My beer, it’s, it’s not done.”

“Oh, for FUCK’S sake.” Dave sat staring at the wall while David took a long drink of Bud. He discreetly adjusted his jeans as David hurriedly finished the last drops.

David was somewhat timid about reciprocating kisses even as Dave pushed him back on the couch and ran his calloused fingers through his hair. He knew he wanted it, he knew Dave wanted it, they were both drunk as all get out, yet still he hesitated a little. Dave’s self-assuredness intimidated and aroused him.

As he tugged at the bottom of Dave’s shirt, David asked, “You sure you wanna be doing this?”

Dave looked down at the bulge in his jeans and then back at David. “Uh, yes?”

“Okay, okay, just making sure.”

“I mean, I’m literally on top of y—“

“Okay! Whatever!” David adjusted to lay flatter on his back. “People don’t like this sort of thing in Minnesota is all.”

Dave sat up briefly to remove his shirt, his long red hair cascading down through the neck-hole. As he threw the shirt behind the couch, he replied simply, “Well this is California, so shut it.”

He lowered himself back onto David and peppered the side of his neck with kisses and bites. David, still a little apprehensive, put his hands on the small of Dave’s back and ran his fingers over his skin. After some exploration, his hands found the front of Dave’s jeans, unbuttoned them, and unzipped.

“Get more naked,” Dave said, pulling David’s shirt off over his head. He stood up to remove his jeans and shoes, and David did the same. “Ready?” he asked. David nodded, so he went to the kitchen to retrieve some condoms from an otherwise empty drawer.

He staggered back to the couch, still feeling a tiny bit inebriated, and put the condoms on the floor. He pulled David on top of him as he laid back, and they continued kissing each other ravenously. He slid David’s underwear down, and David instinctively stopped all he was doing to pull them completely off. As they returned to kissing each other, Dave caressed David's body roughly, leaving long scratches on his back. Their hips ground together and they began to sweat.

David gasped as he felt a finger enter him. “You act like you've never done this before,” said Dave accusingly as he pushed his finger deeper.

“Aha, well...” David trailed off, closing his eyes and losing himself in the pleasure. With his free hand, Dave picked up one of the condoms.

He held the condom between his teeth as he took off his underwear. He ripped open the packaging and handed the condom to David, who then cautiously rolled it over Dave's cock.

“Get underneath me,” Dave said, allowing some room for a quick position change. David nervously complied.

“OW, fuck.” Despite Dave's best efforts to be as gentle as possible, he couldn't avoid hurting David just a little upon entry. He waited to go further even though it was killing him, even though he wanted to throw caution to the wind and ravage the fresh-faced teenager underneath him.

“Relax.” He pushed deeper ever so slowly, and he thought he might bruise David's hips considering how hard he clutched them in an effort to hold himself back. Once he was all the way in, he finally let out a heavy sigh and brushed David's hair out of his face. He wanted to see clearly the look on David's face. As he pulled out and forced his way back in, David moaned quietly and closed his eyes again.

David reached down and began stroking himself in time with Dave's increasingly rapid thrusts. He almost couldn't believe this was happening to him – not that he was hooking up with a man, but that it was so natural. He'd heard horror stories from his Sunday school teacher as a kid, and though he never quite believed them, they always stuck in the back of his mind. He internally chastised himself for thinking about Sunday school during sex and resumed jerking himself off.

Opening his eyes slowly, David was almost afraid to look at Dave. The scene along with the sensations overwhelmed him. Dave's hands groping his body, his sweaty hair plastered to his chest and whipping back and forth with each thrust, his head thrown back and his Adam's apple moving up and down with every breath...soon David felt the violent release of tension he'd longed for. He was immediately hit with a wave of fatigue.

Dave followed soon after, coming so hard he saw stars behind his eyelids. Only after the throbbing stopped did he realize how hard his grip on David's thigh was. As he released it, the area went pale and flushed red. He wiped the sweat from his brow and carefully pulled out. David pulled him down for a kiss, but Dave cut him off to go to the kitchen again. When he came back, he had a small towel in hand. He used it to wipe himself down before handing it to David, who then wiped the seed off his stomach.

He pulled a pack of Marlboro Reds out from under the couch, lit one up, and offered the pack to David. “Want one?”

“Uh, not really, no.”

“Suit yourself.” Dave took a long drag off the cigarette and sat back on the couch. After a few moments, he noticed that David was looking at him. “What?”

“Nothing!” David cleared his throat. “Nothing,” he asserted. Dave took a few more drags and dropped the rest of the cigarette into the empty whiskey bottle.

“Well, good night!” Dave got up to go to his bedroom and David followed closely behind. “Where are you going?”

“To bed?”

“You can sleep out there, on the couch, or you can go home since you live in the building. Your choice.”

Somewhat dejected, David said, “I guess the couch is fine.”

Dave grabbed a blanket from his closet and handed it to David. “Here you go. Night.”

Before Dave could close the door, David pushed his way into the room and kissed him passionately. Without thinking, Dave snaked his arm around David's waist and pulled him in closer. David pulled away. “Night.” He walked back to the couch with the blanket draped over his shoulder.

Dave stared at him as he walked away. “Um, right,” he stammered before turning off the lights in the kitchen, closing his door, and lying awake in the darkness, alone with his thoughts.
Edited by youthanasia, July 7, 2011, 11:13 pm.
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:drool :drool :drool
sdklfjskldfjskldf

THAT
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*first times are cuuuute* :heart:
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namenlos
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Hot! :drool Been awhile since I read a good Dave/ Junior fic... did you hear me Sandi? :biggrin
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FUUUUCK.
Junior was so cute! :heart: Bah, I love me some Junior. Eek.

But yeah, this was freaking hot. I loved Junior's little "People don't like this sort of thing in Minnesota" comment. And Dave's typical snottiness. :biggrin Very good!
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namenlos
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I know one girl from Minnesota who likes that sort of thing. :biggrin
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youthanasia
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I'm so glad you all enjoyed it! I'm a huge feedback whore, so I appreciate all the lovely comments :biggrin
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ElisabethOrion
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Then you will love this:
I read it a second time. :biggrin
:drool :drool :drool :drool
It's already like 93 in here but this turned it up like 100. :lol: :tu:
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I'm speechless. :drool :drool :drool
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Burnout
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Wow :blush: It's dedicated to me. :blush: I feel so special and proud now :biggrin
And it was (british accent on) BLOODY BRILLIANT!! (british accent off) Very, very hot (and yet so sweet :wub: ).
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July 8, 2011, 1:35 pm
Wow :blush: It's dedicated to me. :blush: I feel so special and proud now :biggrin
And it was (british accent on) BLOODY BRILLIANT!! (british accent off) Very, very hot (and yet so sweet :wub: ).
Aw, thanks! When you posted in my intro thread about liking Dave/Junior, I couldn't resist posting it :biggrin
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Aww, why did Junior leave the bedroom at the end? He should have jumped on Dave and ravished him there and then :lol:

That was so cute though :D Junior was all young and sweet and innocent :heart:

To Lori, I have tons of Dave/Juniors but many are too naughty to post up :nanner:

Sequel please :nanner: (Yep, I am obsessed with that nana) :lol:
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youthanasia
July 8, 2011, 3:31 pm
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July 8, 2011, 1:35 pm
Wow :blush: It's dedicated to me. :blush: I feel so special and proud now :biggrin
And it was (british accent on) BLOODY BRILLIANT!! (british accent off) Very, very hot (and yet so sweet :wub: ).
Aw, thanks! When you posted in my intro thread about liking Dave/Junior, I couldn't resist posting it :biggrin


And I'm glad you didn't resist :biggrin I read it, like, five times over and over again. Just gets better!!!
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July 9, 2011, 9:22 am
Aww, why did Junior leave the bedroom at the end? He should have jumped on Dave and ravished him there and then :lol:

That was so cute though :D Junior was all young and sweet and innocent :heart:

To Lori, I have tons of Dave/Juniors but many are too naughty to post up :nanner:

Sequel please :nanner: (Yep, I am obsessed with that nana) :lol:


Junior was too shy to join him, especially since he acted so tough! You can see that Dave kind of wanted to keep him there though :)

Also, a Dave/Junior story too naughty to post is one that should be PMed so send send send! :biggrin
Edited by youthanasia, July 9, 2011, 10:22 am.
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July 9, 2011, 9:22 am
To Lori, I have tons of Dave/Juniors but many are too naughty to post up :nanner:
Well, if you ever post them to LiveJournal, send me a link on Facebook. :biggrin I, like, literally never visit LiveJournal any more, so I don't know if you have anything new on there. :blush:
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Awww, poor shy little Junior :heart: Go on Dave, soften up and invite him to bed :nanner:

I have tons of naughty stories and like Lori said, some are on LiveGerbil...I mean LiveJournal :lol: I haven't posted any new ones up in ages though :( Do you have LiveJournal? If you do, I can send you a link to my X rated ones. If not, I'll PM them to you :nanner:

Lori, I haven't updated on LJ in ages :( I will send you some on Facebook though :nanner: Which ones do you need? Did you read "Beer"? (The one where Junior forgets to buy the beer and Dave punishes him) :P I have "Dave's cardi" too, though I think I only posted Chapter One of that to LJ, so I can send the rest, if you need it :)

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