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| Tweet Topic Started: July 25, 2011, 6:39 pm (1,398 Views) | |
| Pippy | July 25, 2011, 6:39 pm Post #1 |
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Bad Seed
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Notes: Set in 1984, early Metallica. Hello! this is the first fic I will post here, it's short and was written quickly, but I hope you will enjoy it Loads of thanks to Trinny for proof-reading and finding the prompt for me! (and coming up with the title!) The rise and fall of his bare chest, his plush mouth open slightly, the tiniest hint of sweat in his long blonde hair. The way James looked was almost pornographic. He doesn't know i'm watching him. Lars dragged his eyes up and down every single inch of exposed skin, drinking in the sight before him. It seemed as though the entire world was dead except for him and the warm body at his side. He was tired. It was six in the morning, but he couldn't sleep no matter how hard he tried. The dim orange of a street lamp outside pooled on the hotel room floor, some of it pouring over James, tinting him gold. He wanted nothing more than to reach out and touch James, to feel his hot skin on his own, to run his hands through that blonde mane - anything. Anything to make him feel less alone. Drawing his knees up to his chest he sighed, brushing his hair behind his ears and trying his hardest to ignore the ache he felt. Why am I being so pathetic? He glanced back over to the sleeping singer, a pang of adoration sweeping through him as James gave a tiny sleepy whimper. He relished the fact that he was the only one that got to see this side of James. He was most vulnerable when he was asleep. Calm and still. I miss him. Lars laid down on his side, facing James and pushing himself closer. Closer. Heat radiated off of James, creeping over Lars' body. He breathed in hard. Inhaling. He smelt of faint sweat, musky soap and something distinctly James that Lars had to bite back a groan. Don't touch. Silence again. It was suffocating. Lars wanted noise, he wanted laughing and yelling, something. Don't leave me like this. He lifted a shaking hand, but quickly retracted it when James grunted and turned over in his sleep, facing Lars. He sucked in the sight of long lashes splayed on rosy cheeks, and his heart seemed to drop into his stomach. He was his, but he wanted more of him. The shaky hand lifted again, brushing stray blonde hairs out of James's face. Fingers lingering on the strands and... pulling. Slowly at first, gradually getting harder and harder. Come on, show yourself. Where are you? Grunts, a sigh, Fierce blue. "Lars? What the fuck?" "I-" "Do you know what fucking time it is?" What the hell were you expecting Lars? James scanned Lars's face for some sort of explanation, faltering when he saw tears prick in those green eyes. Do something James. I don't want to talk. His tears blurred his vision, rolled down his cheeks. James scooted forward. "Hey..." Strong, warm, arms enveloped him, drawing him close to James's chest. Listening to the erratic beats, Lars let out a small breath he didn't know he was holding. He was doing this to him. He was making James Hetfield's heart beat faster. He closed his aching eyes, drifting off to the rhythm of James' heart. Don't leave me behind next time. |
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| Isis | July 25, 2011, 6:42 pm Post #2 |
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TEA + CUDDLES
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Well done, hon! Welcome to the world of Met fanfic~
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| The Cosmic Gerbil | July 25, 2011, 6:46 pm Post #3 |
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Forbidden Forest Ranger
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Aww, that was so cute I loved it when James hugged Lars at the end
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| youthanasia | July 25, 2011, 6:49 pm Post #4 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Oh god this is beautiful Now where's the smutty sequel? ;-) |
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| larscriancinha | July 25, 2011, 6:56 pm Post #5 |
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Larsybaby
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This is sweet, Very well written. I loved it!
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| Olyamet | July 25, 2011, 6:59 pm Post #6 |
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Jäger.....
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Wow! This is great! Love it!
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| Jungleland | July 25, 2011, 7:01 pm Post #7 |
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HUG PEOPLE
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Loved this. I especially like the first line. |
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| Lilith | July 25, 2011, 7:34 pm Post #8 |
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♥ Jaimelicious ♥
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UNF! This was...
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| Pippy | July 25, 2011, 7:44 pm Post #9 |
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Bad Seed
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Thanks everyone! I'll get working on a sequel right away
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| Olyamet | July 25, 2011, 7:46 pm Post #10 |
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Jäger.....
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Cool! I'll be waiting!
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| youthanasia | July 25, 2011, 7:56 pm Post #11 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Best news I've heard all day!
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| Pippy | July 25, 2011, 8:52 pm Post #12 |
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Bad Seed
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Yay! I'll try to be quick
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| Lars Mi Amor | July 25, 2011, 8:58 pm Post #13 |
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Lars the Great
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Beautiful ![]() |
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| lilevilchick | July 25, 2011, 9:21 pm Post #14 |
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Bad Seed
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i loved it!
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| BleedingSoul | July 26, 2011, 7:56 am Post #15 |
Frantic
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Loved it.
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Loads of thanks to Trinny for proof-reading and finding the prompt for me! (and coming up with the title!)









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