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| Tweet Topic Started: August 3, 2011, 12:52 am (647 Views) | |
| Oh Hell | August 3, 2011, 12:52 am Post #1 |
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Outlaw Torn
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Shortest 'story' I will ever write. Written in the last hour or so, feeling a little shitty. IDK. I wanted to write a little angst. You all know I'm NOT a crafty writer. I write porn and happy shit, I do NOT WRITE ANGST. But, this just came out. 'Enjoy'? P.S. NSP = No Specified Pairing. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The last few weeks had been the hardest he'd ever faced. In the entire forty years of his life. Every day had been a battle. From the hardest things, to the simple things. Waking up was the most difficult. He didn't want to face another day. The questions. The things people said. I'm sorry almost sounded redundant. An insult. They weren't sorry, they just didn't know what else to say. He'd detached himself from reality. Phones all removed from his house, computer in the attic, along with his laptop. He couldn't take the constant pain. People talking at him. Checking he was 'okay'. “No, I'm not.” That was what he'd said to the last person he spoke to before hurling his cell phone at the wall, watching it split, shatter and break. Couldn't take it. This had been the fourth -early- morning in a row where he'd simply walked out to the beach, alone, to think. He laid on the sand, bare backed, cheeks wet with the effects of his pain, eyes closed. ”Just know that... no matter where you are...” a smile had crept onto his somber features. No-one had made him feel so strongly for another human being like he did. “I'm sorry...” he whimpered, feeling pathetic. “You... mean more than anything... else... to me...” he held weakly onto his big hands, a tear rolling down his face. His body was heavily bandaged, skin covered in cuts and bruises, IV hooked to his arm. He still managed to smile up at him through his sufferings. He'd broken him with that final faint smile. “Please...” he whispered, throat choked with a sob. “Don't...” “I... love you...” “Why?!” he screamed into the ether of the cold daybreak. “How could you take him from me?!” he cried out like a wounded animal. “I didn't even... get to say goodbye!” If you loved someone, what would you tell them if you couldn't tell them that? How would you make sure they knew how you felt? Just... Watch your words... |
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| namenlos | August 3, 2011, 1:17 am Post #2 |
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The Daft To Your Punk
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Aw, this is so sad. Very well-written.
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| larscriancinha | August 3, 2011, 4:37 am Post #3 |
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Larsybaby
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So sad. But I liked it.
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| BleedingSoul | August 3, 2011, 8:07 am Post #4 |
Frantic
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This was sad and even got me thinking... I liked it. |
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| LaurenHetfield | August 3, 2011, 10:15 am Post #5 |
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Shadow Kissed
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Wow. I agree, that was very well written. I have to admit that I'm a baby all the time and cry over everything, even animated films. But this story almost had me at the point of crying, I had tears welling up in my eyes. Edited by LaurenHetfield, August 3, 2011, 10:15 am.
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| Olyamet | August 4, 2011, 8:47 am Post #6 |
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Jäger.....
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LOVE IT. |
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| Jik Hyun | August 4, 2011, 11:36 pm Post #7 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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who is the pairing? kinda feels like james and lars. but dun be sure. |
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| Oh Hell | August 4, 2011, 11:52 pm Post #8 |
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Outlaw Torn
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It's up for individual interpretation. Could be anybody. I have had 2 people tell me already that it feels like a James/Lars. So, I don't know. Maybe it is, maybe it's not. I did write it with a pairing in mind but, it's irrelevant lol. |
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Very well-written.



4:48 AM Jul 11