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Counting Sheep; Lars comes up with an idea to make Kirk tired. Smut.
Topic Started: August 7, 2011, 10:11 pm (1,531 Views)
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Alrighty, sorry about the crappy title. First fanfic :blush: . Grammer kind sucks with me, so bear with me a bit. Story is in three parts and takes place in 1989. Enjoy :D

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"Get out!" Lars shouted.

"Fine, I hope to never see your face again!" screamed some girl.

"Perfectly fine by me." Lars replied, just under a yell.

Kirk laid in bed trying to sleep when he first heard Lars walking down the hallway just outside his hotel room, giggling with some girl. He could hear the door close across the hall from his. Not 10 minutes later of trying to sleep, Kirk heard the screaming-fest outside his door. He heard Lars' door slam and the girl's silent footsteps as she walked away.

"Great," Kirk whispered under his breath, glad that he wouldn't hear any sex noises coming from Lars' room tonight. He really needed to rest. It was 3:25 a.m. and they had a gig the next day. So Kirk closed his eyes, hoping to drift off, rather sooner than later.

No luck came, so Kirk's mind started to wander of what he did that night. The Metallica dudes arrived in New York around 5 p.m. and checked into their hotel. Not really knowing anything better to do, they went for supper and quickly decided to go bar-hopping. They ditched Jason at the second bar and around the fifth bar, Lars, James, and Kirk felt comfortable enough to stay there. James chatted up some girls while Lars and Kirk went to the washroom and did one line of coke each. James soon after left with the girls and Lars flirted shamelessly with some other girl. Kirk ended up leaving the bar around 1:30 a.m. and went back to the hotel to try get some sleep. But sleep wasn't coming to him and it was frustrating him. I knew I should've never taken that line of -

Kirk's thoughts were interrupted by a knock on his door. He looked at the clock beside his bed. 3:32 a.m. Fuck. He rolled out of bed not caring he was only wearing his underwear. Seeing the time, he knew it only had to be one person. He was proven right when he opened the door.

"Lars" Kirk sighed.

"Hey." They way Lars replied, the glassiness of his eyes, and how he eyed Kirk's appearance, Kirk knew Lars took more than that single line of coke.

"So what's up?" Kirk asked, eventually wanting to get some sleep in.

"I was wondering if I could sleep with you tonight. I'm not in the right mood to sleep alone." Lars replied, with a hint of a slur in his voice.

"Man, I'm really tired. I don't know if it would be a good idea." Kirk knew from experience that Lars was the type who could talk for hours before falling asleep.

"Please. I promise I'll go straight to sleep, no talking. Just don't want to be alone." The way Lars pleaded convinced Kirk to let Lars have his way.

"Oh, alright" sighed Kirk, but he regretted it right away when Lars walked into Kirk's room with a high-looking, shit-eating grin.

Lars quickly took off his jeans and t-shirt when Kirk shut the door. Lars stared and smiled at Kirk, who tried to ignore him. Lars' smile quickly turned into a look of desperation and he ran into the bathroom to piss with a sigh. Kirk rolled his eyes and went back into bed. Lars flushed the toilet and soon joined Kirk.

Kirk did his best to sleep but was distracted when Lars started rolling around in one spot, huffing and puffing.

"What the hell are you doing?" Kirk asked, annoyed.

"Trying to get comfortable, what does it look like?" After a couple more rolls and heavy sighs, Lars gave up and flopped on his belly with a "Fock".

Kirk sighed to himself with relief and rolled on his side so his back was facing Lars. He felt movement and heard Lars sighing. He could feel Lars burning holes at the back of his head with Lars' eyes. He knew Lars couldn't be much quieter any longer; Lars was too high and drunk to sleep.

"Fock, I can't sleep" Lars finally said.

"Oh." Kirk couldn't sleep either.

"Yeah."

"So what happened with that girl?" asked Kirk, figuring Lars could talk him to sleep.

"Oh, you know, shit happens" replied Lars in a tone that showed that he really didn't care that much.

"Oh, umm, okay." Kirk was surprised by Lars' answer because he usually goes into full blown description. "That's all?"

"Yup. Why you so interested?" Lars asked in a playful tone.

"Oh you know, curiosity and the fact that I'm pretty sure you woke the whole hotel up with your guy's little, um, 'discussion' in the hallway."

"Oh yeah" laughed Lars, remembering. "Whatever, she was a bitch anyway. Glad I don't have to hear her talk anymore."

"Seemed pretty interested at the bar though."

"I don't know. She became less interesting in my hotel room I guess you could say."

"Oh, right then" replied Kirk, still confused. He realized he should just give up because Lars obviously didn't care to reveal what happened. "Well goodnight" Kirk said, hoping to sound sleepy.

"Guh-night" Lars said, with not a hint of tiredness in his voice.

Lars knew Kirk wasn't sleepy enough to go to sleep. He was getting bored and restless fast. He looked over at Kirk again and sighed. Kirk's sigh soon followed and he watched as Kirk flipped on his back, eyes opened, staring at the ceiling.

"Having troubles sleeping?" asked Lars.

"How can you tell?" replied Kirk in more of an annoyed tone than he expected.

"Whoa, sorry, just wondering. I forgot you were this snappy when you didn't get enough sleep." Lars said, shocked that Kirk snapped a bit at him.

"Sorry, really, I am. I just wish I was tired seeing how it's..." Kirk glanced at the clock, "3:51 a.m."

"I know what you mean" Lars said, lying on his side facing Kirk. "I mean, we have a gig tomorrow... right?" Only a high Lars could forget about a gig the next day.

"Yeah, we do" answered Kirk, laughing a bit at this.

"Good, I'll be there" Lars replied, glad he could make Kirk laugh. "Although, I can't promise my drumming will be up to speed seeing how I can't get to sleep."

"Oh you'll be great, like you always are."

Lars was relieved they were in the dark, glad Kirk couldn't see him blush.

"I think we should try get some sleep now."

"Agreed, but I don't know how long the agreement will last."

So they both closed their eyes and tried their best to sleep. Kirk peeked an eye open at the clock. It was 4:01 a.m. He then peeked an eye open at Lars.

"Lars?" whispered Kirk.

"Hm?"

"Are you asleep?" Kirk said still whispering.

"Not even close" Lars whispered back. "Should we just give up?"

"I don't think we should, we just need to find something to do that will make us tired."

"Oh?" Lars asked in a playful tone. "Like what would be some of your suggestions?"

"Uh. We could, um... count sheep." Kirk said in a shy voice.

"What?" giggled Lars. "You're not serious, right? I don't see how that works, other than bore you to hell."

"Well, shit, it was the first stupidest thing that popped in my head. I can't come up with anything else" snapped Kirk, a bit embarrassed.

"Sorry dude. To tell you the truth, it never worked for me as a kid" admitted Lars, hoping Kirk wouldn't snap again.

"No no, I'm sorry, again, for snapping, again." Kirk said now facing Lars, lying on his side. "Do you have any suggestions from when you were a kid?"

Lars laughed. "No, nothing worked. Sometimes sleep would eventually come or else it'd be an all-nighter for me." Lars felt a bit shy about the fact how sometimes he'd crawl into bed with his father and fall asleep there in the comfort of his arms.

"Oh" Kirk said, sounding a bit defeated and down.

"Although..." Lars let that word drain on.

"Yeah?" Kirk said, sounding excited.

"There was always one thing I could count on in my adulthood to make me tired" Lars said in a sly voice, hoping to lift Kirk's spirit even more.

"What is it?" Kirk asked, sounding like an excited child about to receive a surprise present.


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Lars :rolleyes:
Edited by MetalliSarah, August 7, 2011, 10:25 pm.
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Its great for your first fan fic :) It made me giggle a lot.
Although I have one problem. I don't know what era this takes place o_O.
But other than that, I can't wait for more :heart:
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August 7, 2011, 10:23 pm
Its great for your first fan fic :) It made me giggle a lot.
Although I have one problem. I don't know what era this takes place o_O.
But other than that, I can't wait for more :heart:
oooo, I knew I forgot something. I'll go fix that.
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I LOVED IT! I didn't want it to end. :heart:

More please. :biggrin
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I like it so far! I can't wait to read more!!
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Grammer still hasn't improved, but here's the second part. Thanks for commenting. :)

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"Well..." Lars slowly lifted his face close to Kirk's in the dark and pressed his lips on Kirk's. Soft but deep. After a few moments, Lars hesitantly pulled away. He tried to study Kirk's reaction, but could only see the outline of what he thought looked like a smirk. After a couple seconds, Kirk spoke.

"Lars, if making out was your plan to make me sleepy, you already know from experience that that's the last thing to make me tired."

"That was just the first part of my plan. I have another thing planned after that."

"Oh really?" Kirk cocked an eyebrow.

"You know it." And with that Lars pulled on Kirk's shoulders and brought him in more deep kisses, tongues twirling with each other. He then sat them up in a sitting position. Kirk grabbed Lars' face and was getting turned on by Lars' roaming hands. Lars first slithered his hands up and down Kirk's back, then his hands slithered to Kirk's chest and started rubbing Kirk's nipples. Lars swallowed Kirk's gasp and moan when he did this. Kirk snaked his lips away from Lars' lips and started kissing, licking and sucking at his neck, making Lars moan. Lars slowly started moving his hand down Kirk's chest to his stomach, then his belly button, and then to the top of Kirk's elastic band of his underwear.

Lars let his hands teasingly rest there while he moaned at Kirk's licking and sucking. Kirk's mind froze where Lars' hands were and was getting turned on even more, wanting Lars to do more with his hands. Kirk knew Lars was teasing him at the moment, so he bit down on Lars' neck so Lars would get the message to get on with it.

Lars gasped at the bite he received from Kirk and giggled a bit in his head knowing Kirk was getting more horny and impatient. So Lars slowly moved his hands south and rubbed Kirk over his underwear on his half hard cock.

Kirk broke from his biting to let out a loud moan. Then as Lars continued to rub harder, his own dick becoming hard, he took his turn to mark up Kirk. He started out licking and sucking Kirk's neck, and then when he slid his hand into Kirk's underwear, he started biting.

Kirk was very hard when Lars started to stroke him. In between moans, Kirk tried to kiss Lars wherever his lips landed, but gave up when Lars yanked off Kirk's underwear and threw them somewhere in the dark. Lars pushed Kirk down so he was lying on back.

Kirk's anticipation grew when he felt Lars rub his legs and thighs. He let out a shiver when he felt Lars' tongue on his thighs move agonizingly slow. Kirk tried to look down at Lars but all he could see was the shape of Lars on his hands and knees over him.

Lars circled his tongue around Kirk's thighs onto his hips and across the area just above his pubes. Kirk shuddered at Lars' tongue but gasped when he felt Lars' hair teasingly sweep across his extremely hard and erect cock.

"Fucking tease" Kirk said, breathing very heavily. He held his breathe when he felt Lars' tongue make its way towards his dick. Kirk was painfully hard and horny that when Lars finally put his tongue on Kirk's dick, he first gasped but then let out a sigh.

Lars first played with his tongue over Kirk's cock like how did with Kirk's thighs and pubic area. Circle motions here, licks there, all the build up Kirk's nerves. Lars licked Kirk's throbbing head of pre-come and went down the base. With one final lick, Lars finally put Kirk all in his mouth moving slowly down to the base and slowly up again. He then released Kirk with a pop!

Kirk almost let out a cry when Lars moved his mouth away, taking the warmth and feeling away. But Kirk looked at Lars in the dark and saw him lick his palm before grabbing Kirk's balls and started massaging them. Then Lars put his mouth back on Kirk and started to suck while bobbing his head slowly, matching his hands speed on Kirk's balls.

"Oh.... Laaarrrrsss" moaned Kirk, voice so deep with lust it made Lars more painfully hard in his underwear.

"Mmmm" Lars said still sucking, remembering that the vibrations from his voice could make Kirk go crazy. He got the reaction he wanted when Kirk shuddered a moan out.

"Fuck." Kirk's breathing became heavy and short. "Lars..... uhhhhh....... finger...... please.... Laarrsss." Kirk was already close to coming, he just wanted to try one more thing before he did.

Lars looked up at Kirk and slowly moved his mouth away. Oh so that's how you want it? Lars sucked on his finger making sure it was fully covered in salvia before asking, "Are you sure?" Kirk frantically nodded his head yes.

Lars spread Kirk's legs apart and brought his finger around Kirk's balls down to Kirk's entrance. He teasingly rubbed it, making Kirk shiver and get goose bumps. He glanced once more at Kirk to make sure Kirk was sure. Kirk looked anxious and lost in lust. Lars pushed his finger inside extremely slow before stopping and glancing at Kirk. Kirk let out a groan. Lars started moving his finger in and out all the while watching Kirk groan and moan. Lars moved his mouth back on Kirk's throbbing cock and started sucking.

Kirk's mind was getting lost in the pleasure and hotness of Lars' finger and mouth. He started moving his hips on Lars' finger and into Lars' mouth. Kirk grabbed at the sheets, the familiar feeling building up in his stomach and balls. He frantically moved his hips faster and his breathing became uneven.

Lars moved a second finger in and started to suck harder. Kirk let a loud moan escape from his lips. Lars moved his fingers in deeper and faster feeling Kirk's hips move faster and more out of control. Lars then angled his fingertips.

Kirk was so on the brink of coming hard, he wanted to last a bit longer, but when Lars angled his fingertips, Kirk knew his time was coming. A jolt of pleasure went all the way to his toes as Lars hit his prostate and sucked harder and faster. Kirk held his breath as another jolt struck him and he exploded in Lars' mouth while he let out a series of moans, his muscles tightening over and over again. He came hard down Lars' throat as Lars continued to finger him and suck him dry.

When Lars swallowed the last drop of come, he looked up at Kirk and removed his fingers. Lars moved his way up Kirk and gave him a quick peck before lying on his side, facing Kirk. He noticed Kirk's breathing was still laboured and heavy, but it began slowing down. Wanting to see Kirk's face, Lars finally flipped on a bedside lamp. Kirk looked satisfied and, in Lars' opinion, a bit starstruck.

"Wow" Kirk finally breathed, laughing a bit.

Lars giggled a bit after this, too. He stopped giggling when he remembered his problem in his pants, covered a bit in pre-come. He'd have to fix that when Kirk was finally asleep.

"That was great." Kirk still looked a bit star struck, making Lars grin wide.

"So did my plan work? Are you sleepy now?" Lars asked. Kirk got a serious look on his face and stared into Lars' green eyes.

"Are you kidding?" asked Kirk, confusing Lars a bit. Kirk's serious expression turned into a horny one. "I'm just getting warmed up."
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asdfghjkl :splat:

I'm feeling funny things down my pants >>
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holy slut bunnies that was mad hot.
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Things are about to get hotter! :drool
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:drool :drool Now, that was hot.
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It turned out so HOOOOOOT. :drool
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Thank you everyone for reading. Here's the last part.


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Before Lars had a chance to reply, Kirk crushed his lips against Lars' swollen ones. Given the luck that he started kissing Lars when he was shocked, mouth open a bit, Kirk dove his tongue in Lars' mouth and Lars very quickly followed. Making out again, Kirk quickly took the reins when he started to rub Lars' very hard dick, making Lars gasp.

"Whoa, Kirk" Lars mumbled between kisses.

Breaking away from the kiss, faces just an inch part, Kirk replied, "What? I figured it was my turn to make you 'tired'." With that, Kirk shot Lars a very playful look and took Lars' underwear off. He started stroking Lars.

Lars shuddered and moaned, already getting close to close, given how horny he was. "Ohhhh, fock, Kirk." Lars started to move his hips into Kirk's hand, wanting more than just the sweaty palm.

Kirk looked up at Lars' face and saw Lars' eyes begin to close. He knew Lars was getting there faster than he'd hoped. He'd have to do this now or never. Kirk pulled his hand away.

"No, fuck" Lars whined, trying to grab Kirk's hand to get the friction back.

"Nuh uh" Kirk said, teasing Lars a second. "I said it was my turn, so I'm going to do it properly." Kirk licked and spit on his hand, and then went back to kissing Lars again. Kisses were softer this time and he rubbed his wet hand over Lars' hot and throbbing cock. Feeling this and Lars' lips made Kirk's dick hard again, and fast.

Still kissing Lars, Kirk swung his naked thigh over Lars so he was straddling Lars, sitting in his lap. Their dicks rubbed together for a few moments, making Lars whither and whimper at this, moving his hips slowly rubbing their cocks together harder.

"Fock, Kirk." Lars shivered as he stopped kissing Kirk. He could feel Kirk shake a bit as he watched Kirk's anxious expression. Kirk looked up at Lars, and Lars thought he would come at that moment when Kirk threw him a wicked smile.

Kirk moved his hips and angled his ass a bit. "Ready?"

Lars sputtered out, "Hell yes." With that, Kirk grabbed onto Lars' shoulders for support and slowly pressed him himself onto Lars, who was leaking of pre-come. Lars moaned very deeply and Kirk shuddered. Kirk slowly moved all the way down Lars and stopped when Lars was all the way in. Even though he was bit stretched from the blow job, Kirk still needed time to adjust, but he knew it couldn't be for very long. He could feel Lars' cock twitching and throbbing inside of him.

Lars was about to explode, but he had to hang on for Kirk. His mind was stuck on how Kirk was surrounding him, hot, moist, and tight and he wanted to pound into Kirk and never stop. Lars' breathing was becoming very heavy and laboured. He had to force himself to speak. "Ready?"

Kirk looked at Lars, his face inches away. Lars' eyes were so dark with lust they looked black, and he could almost see every bead of sweat roll down Lars. "Are you ready?"

"Ready to fucking come, yeah" sputtered out Lars again.

Kirk slowly started to rock his hips. Lars moaned at the tightness and heat moving around his dick and his eyes already began to flutter shut. He rested his hands on Kirk's butt cheeks, squeezing, making Kirk groan. When Kirk started sliding his hips up and down, still slow, Lars couldn't sit up any longer. He fell on his back so Kirk was completely riding him now.

Kirk started to stroke himself when Lars lay down. Lars was much deeper in him now so Kirk angled himself a bit, looking for his prostate. Kirk was groaning and his breathing was rigid. He glanced down at Lars. Lars' eyes were squeezed tight and he was grabbing at the sheets, lips slightly parted as he moaned and panted. His hips were moving off the bed as he moved in and out of Kirk, moving out of time with Kirk's hips.

Kirk saw Lars was forcing himself not to come. Kirk moved faster on Lars and stroked himself harder, building up his own orgasm. With one particular thrust, Lars hit Kirk's prostate. Kirk made sure to stay in that spot and moved his hips harder and faster on it, jolts of pleasure rushing through him.

Lars was going to come hard and messy, and he knew it. Lars moved his hips and knew he hit Kirk's sweet spot, seeing Kirk whimper and eyes flutter. Lars was extremely close he figured he'd keep hitting Kirk's sweet spot over and over again, riding it into his orgasm.

Kirk was getting extremely close, too. Lars was hitting his swollen prostate over and over. His mind was becoming fuzzy and he couldn't feel his legs. Hell, he couldn't feel any of limbs and he sure as hell couldn't think. All of his will was focused on the pleasure seeping through him, building him up to make him come.

With a loud moan and "Ohhhh", Lars came hard into Kirk, making Lars jump giving Kirk his hardest thrust yet, straight into Kirk's prostate.

"Fuck, Laarrrsss!" Kirk came again for a second time that night, into his hand and on Lars' stomach and chest. Lars continued to ride out orgasm, feeling Kirk clench around him. His breathing was still hard and laboured. When Kirk started spasm a teensy bit, Lars slowly stopped moving his hips.

Kirk almost collapsed on Lars, but he put his hands on either side of Lars' head to stop him. He slowly lowered himself so that only half of his body was lying on Lars. He started kissing Lars and they quickly turned into sloppy kisses. They were too spent to put effort into it.

Lars looked at Kirk's face. Kirk looked very satisfied and now sleepy with droopy eyes. Kirk closed his eyes for a second and rested his head on Lars' shoulder.

"Hey" Lars said softly, grinning lazily at Kirk.

Kirk opened his eyes and grinned back. "Hi."

"I just want to let you know that before you fall asleep, that I can't sleep like this." Lars whispered, talking about the fact that he was still inside Kirk.

"Mm." Kirk got off Lars and plopped on his stomach beside Lars.

Lars continued whispering, "Thanks."

" 'S okay." Kirk closed his eyes again. "Thank you" Kirk whispered, glad he could finally be able to fall asleep.

Lars smiled to himself, "Anytime." He watched as Kirk quickly drifted off to sleep, before he himself couldn't keep his eyes open any longer and fell sound asleep.


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The end! Hope you all enjoyed my little story :)
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That was amazing!!! and hot :drool :drool :bed:
I loved it :heart:
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This story is great! I really hope you are gonna write more!!
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I loved all of it. Great job, it was very hot. :biggrin
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