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| Unrequited; DavexJames, hints of JamesxJason | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: August 20, 2011, 1:53 am (1,080 Views) | |
| Aria | August 20, 2011, 1:53 am Post #1 |
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So, I wrote this for a contest in another forum. Two pairings I normally don't write at all, but still had some fun doing. Enjoy! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ James was happily drunk. Even beyond happily drunk, he was well on his way to getting laid tonight. Both the pretty blonde in the corner and the brunette Dave was flirting with were giving him ‘the look’. It took everything in him to smile shyly back. Fuck yes. He was gonna get laid for the first time tonight, and Dave would never let him down for it. But fuck if he cared what Dave thought. Neither of them were fucking ugly, even with the beer influencing him. Taking another long swig, he stood up and started making his way towards the brunette. She was the prettier. And she was all legs. James was only a few steps from her when suddenly Dave stepped in front of him. “Hey James, come with me a moment?” Dave said, grinning at the sight of the inebriated blonde. Perfect. James would be his tonight. Especially half-cocked as he already was. James was definitely “up” for some fun. “No, Dave, I’ve got someone that I’m-” Dave grabbed James’ arm and started to take him to the direction of the bedrooms. “She can wait. Believe me James, she isn’t going anywhere.” He teased. His eyes were dark and diabolical. James wasn’t going to be able to think about anything other than him going forward. Time to teach the innocent a few tricks. Bringing James into his bedroom, he shut the door behind him. Spinning around to glare at Dave, James walked further into the room, absently noticing that it was dominated by a huge bed. “What the fuck man, I just-” Rolling his eyes, Dave grabbed James and pinned him back against the wall by his shoulders. “You wanted to have your first time with that stupid slut. I’m not blind James. I’m gonna give you a first time you won’t ever fucking forget.” He promised, leaning in to kiss James, their lips and tongues tangling together. Fucker wasn’t even responding. Biting down on James’ lip, he growled. “Don’t ignore me!” James just stared at Dave, his eyes wide, still surprised even after Dave pulled away and growled at him. “What...the fuck....” He whispered, trying to push Dave back, away from him. “Fucking. Yes. Your ass, my dick, that bed. Get with the fucking program here Hetfield. Think I brought you in here to sweet-talk you?” Dave asked, his lips curling in a sneer. “Uhhh.” James didn’t know what to say. All he could do was stare at Dave, stare at his lips. Belatedly, he realized he had gone from half-hard to fully hard and straining against his jeans since Dave had pushed him into the wall. That meant he liked it, didn’t it? Dave just stared at James, seeing those blue eyes looking at a point past his shoulder. He was clearly thinking about something else, which was exactly what he didn’t want. “All right, all right. I’ll fucking take it easy on you since you’re new to this shit.” He muttered, pressing James into the wall again, leaning closer, about to kiss him. “But you’ve got to get with the fucking program here.” That would have been a hell of a lot easier if he had known exactly what it was he was supposed to be doing! James licked his lips and leaned up, pressing their lips together in determination. Well fuck if he was gonna let Dave call him a fucking innocent again. Smirking at the clumsy kiss that was pressed to his lips, Dave knew surrender when he felt it. Nothing was more sweet. And nothing would be quite as sweet as the surrender of one James Hetfield. James moaned into the kiss, unable to keep the reaction from escaping him. Why did this feel so good? It was Dave for fuck’s sake! Kissing Dave shouldn’t feel good! Dave pulled back, watching Hetfield’s face drop, unable to keep from smirking anymore. “Tell you what. We’ll make this fucking easy at first, okay? Won’t even make you take your pants off.” He purred, reaching out and pushing James’ shirt up and off, watching him cringe. Confused, James looked up at Dave, his hair wild and a smirk settled firmly on his lips. Fuck, his cock was pounding, begging for release. Wasn’t Dave going to give it to him? He’d just fucking said he would. “Actually, fuck that. Scratch that. You are gonna lose your pants. Show you how fucking good this shit can feel.” Dave said, reaching out and stripping his own jeans off, showing that he was wearing nothing underneath them. He felt James look and then stare at him, his lips curling in a smirk once again. He’d watched plenty of porn. James knew more or less what another guy’s dick looked like. Fuck, Lars whipped his out every fucking chance he got. But somehow...Dave’s hard cock was far more fucking intimidating, and made lust curl in the very pit of his stomach as he stared at him. “Like what you see Hetfield?” Dave purred, watching those blue eyes snap back up to his. He could tell that James did. Pressing close to James again, his hands went to the button, undoing it slowly, then sliding the zipper down and over his hard cock before pushing his pants off of him. “Nothing underneath, just like me, hmm? Good.” He growled, wrapping his hand around James and stroking. James moaned and arched at the touch to his cock. Fuck, Dave’s hand felt so fucking DIFFERENT. “Dave, what the...ahh...fuck...Dave!” Dave snorted. Hetfield was such a fucking virgin. “Don’t worry, I’m not gonna get you off here like this. I told you, we’re taking shit fucking slow. Because you’re a pussy.” “I am not a fucking pussy!” James snarled back, glaring at Dave. “Oh really?” Dave raised an eyebrow and leaned as close as he could to James without touching him. “My cock, your ass, right here, right now doesn’t scare the shit out of you?” He caught the moment of hesitation, the fear of the unknown that crossed James’ eyes. “Exactly. So we’re gonna take this fucking slow.” James nodded. There was nothing else he could do. “Fine.” He growled out. Good. Little virgin was gonna be fucking his. Dave shoved James back onto the bed, watching him flail before he climbed on top of James. “Lesson number one. Few things feel better against a hard dick than another hard dick. Got it?” Shifting to straddle James, Dave demonstrated, watching James shiver and give a low moan. Leaning closer so their lips were only separated by a few inches, Dave repeated the slow hip roll and watched James moan again, this time swallowing that moan with his lips. He leaned into the kiss, moaning even more loudly, his hips bucking upward. Fuck. Dave was right. This felt so fucking amazing. Hot and heavy. James reached out and grabbed Dave’s hips, trying to pull him closer, wanting more, not wanting him to stop moving after every single thrust. “F-fuck...Dave, I got it...just, more, fuck, please....” He asked, staring up at him. “Don’t worry. I’ll give you more.” Dave promised, his eyes dark and lustful. And he would. Little virgin James wouldn’t last very long at this rate. His eyes were already starting to glass over and his hips were bucking wildly. Starting the movements again, but this time more of a slow rub of their cocks together, he watched James’ reaction. It didn’t disappoint. He choked on his moan, whimpering and clutching harder at his hips. James thrashed beneath Dave, whatever Dave was doing felt even fucking better than before. He could feel every inch of their cocks together like this. Moaning loudly, he thrust up against Dave, leaning up, wanting to kiss him again. “Dave!! Aaaah, fuck, please Dave, please!” He bit down on his lip, his fingers falling away from Dave’s hips to clutch the blankets, his orgasm coiling in the pit of his stomach. “F-fuck...Dave...please...” His little virgin was so close. Dave could feel it in the desperate thrusts. “Gonna come for me?” He purred out, watching James buck and moan again. Though he’d never admit it to James’ face, this little innocent was turning him on so fucking much, he thought that he was going to explode right then and there. A whimper escaped him just before a loud shout did as James exploded all over his stomach and Dave’s. His cock pulsed over and over again, and his whole body was shivering. Dave followed his little virgin only moments later, taking in the sight of him overwhelmed in ecstasy like that. Staring down at the spent come on their stomachs, and the way that James’ eyes were dark and glassy, Dave smirked. Hetfield was his. And no one else’s. “Good?” He purred. James grunted. This time he laughed. Dave rolled off of him and grabbed a corner of the sheets to wipe them off. “Just imagine how good fucking is going to be!” He made sure to be staring at James’ cock while he said it, and watched it twitch to life again. James was gonna be the perfect virgin for him. Driving Dave to the bus station, seeing the furious look on his face didn’t make James feel any better. He didn’t want to lose Dave. He loved him! And Dave loved him back! It didn’t matter that he fucked other girls, or brought another guy with him into bed. Dave would always let him stay and sent those others away. James tightened his hands on the steering wheel as he pulled into the station, about to say goodbye when Dave simply opened the door and got out without another word. “D-Dave!” But Dave didn’t look back. James made sure to take the long way home, so none of the others would see him crying. He was watching another Megadeth video when he thought none of the rest of them were looking. Jason noticed that James did that a lot. He also had the saddest look on his face when he did. Determined to bring James out of his slump, Jason walked over and touched James on the shoulder. “Hey, want to go out and play some basketball?” “No I’m good.” James looked up at Jason for only a moment before back to the TV. Back to Dave. His heart thumped painfully. Jason came around to the front of the couch and crouched down in front of James, giving him a shy smile. “There are other fish in the sea.” He said quietly. “And there are plenty of other people who understand a broken heart.” Jason watched those blue eyes flash in anger, then in sadness, his own heart squeezing tight. Not that he would ever tell James that. Standing up, he squeezed James’ shoulder again, amazed at his own daring and headed outside. Looking after Jason in confusion, James looked back at the TV. He stared at it for a long time. It didn’t hold the same allure that it had earlier this morning. Grabbing the remote, he flipped the TV off and went to his bedroom to change into gym shorts. Maybe hanging out with Jason would be a good thing. |
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| youthanasia | August 20, 2011, 2:42 am Post #2 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Such a hot story, but the ending is so sad
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| larscriancinha | August 20, 2011, 3:01 am Post #3 |
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Hot, sad and everything in between. I loved it.
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| Burnout | August 20, 2011, 6:32 am Post #4 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Hot, hot, hot! (virgin James is too cute ) Sad ending But, I's say, an amazing story! |
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| LaurenHetfield | August 20, 2011, 7:14 am Post #5 |
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Very sexy, and James being a virgin is very adorable. But the ending was a little sad.
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| Jik Hyun | August 20, 2011, 12:47 pm Post #6 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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SEQUEL! u canna just leave it there! |
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| Izzy | August 20, 2011, 3:00 pm Post #7 |
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Outlaw Torn
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I loved this story. It was so hot but the ending was quite sad. ![]() Anyway, I completely loved it.
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| Aria | August 20, 2011, 4:56 pm Post #8 |
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Hey guys! I'm glad that you all liked it, and liked cute little virgin James. In regards to a sequel....I don't think there will be one, just because I don't think I can write JamesxJason. ^^; I'm sorry. Buuuuuuuuuuuuut. I will leave it open for someone else if they would like to. |
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| youthanasia | August 20, 2011, 5:23 pm Post #9 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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You could write like, a between-quel, where it's just a whole bunch of James/Dave smut and you don't have to worry about Jason
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| Jik Hyun | August 21, 2011, 1:10 pm Post #10 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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yeh must has more smut at least. can live with it being james/dave porn haha. just need and want more. |
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| Aria | August 21, 2011, 11:29 pm Post #11 |
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Heh, not this time. We'll see about the possibility in the future though. <3
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| ElisabethOrion | August 25, 2011, 10:57 am Post #12 |
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I'm creatively constipated.
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OMG I'm so late at reading this. I love it.
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But the ending was a little sad.
We'll see about the possibility in the future though. <3

I love it. 
4:47 AM Jul 11