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| Tweet Topic Started: August 20, 2011, 7:49 pm (1,146 Views) | |
| Jungleland | August 20, 2011, 7:49 pm Post #1 |
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I'm not overly happy with it, but it seems I can't improve it more than that. Written for Trin Note: Sean is Sean Penn. -- That boyfriend of hers is beginning to steam, Lars notices. Not touching his cocktail, he keeps munching on peanuts, mashing them between his teeth almost violently. As if they were salted little Larses in a bowl. And as he grabs yet another fistful of peanuts, he says: "You two can start talking in English any time now." There's an awkward silence Lars breaks. "Sean speaks English." The black eyes roll toward him and burn. Next to him, Sean chuckles. And the pretty woman in front of him frowns at each of them before going back to their conversation--still in Danish. "Excuse him." "It's alright, he just feels excluded." "It's just been so long..." The boyfriend--he's not sure what his name is--smashes his hands on the table. It doesn't shake anything. "I'm going." The woman--an actress, a good one Sean said, and Lars learned her name was Connie just an hour ago--makes a move to stand up, but never does. Her man disappears behind a wall, not without looking over his shoulders multiple times with an accusing glare. Some people look up from their plates. It reminds Lars of the way Skylar left the house two days ago. Just another argument they could both get over, but here he is without her. He was even more thankful than usual when Sean called him, asked him if he wanted to hang out. Someone wants to speak in Danish with you. "You're not going after him?" "He's been like that since this morning. I'm fed up." After a little shake of his head, Sean gets up to leave too. "Well, gotta go. You two keep talking." And with a pat on Lars's back: "I'll call you." He's gone a few minutes later. Connie finally switched to English for a little while. Now none of them is talking. Irony, Lars thinks, and stares at his half-full glass of wine. He can see Connie's fidgeting fingers through the glass. There's one ring on them that glistens from time to time. Not as big as the one he bought Skylar last month... And then she talks again. About that boyfriend, their problems, how it's probably not going to last. About her dreams and her ideals. Lars knows how to listen to people, so he does; nodding, laughing at some remarks, frowning each time her eyes turn a little too shiny. New York is as animated as ever when they step out of the restaurant. As he lights himself a cigarette, he thinks Skylar would have wanted to keep the night going with some champagne in some club--where at least one waiter would worship Metallica. So after looking around, as if nobody could see him ask that: "Do you want to go somewhere?" Connie just looks at him with a little smile, taking the cigarette away from him. Then, after a slow drag on it: "You're a good man." He snorts and shifts on his feet. "That's not what people say." "Like I care." It's like a first date. In the back of his mind, he sees Skylar leaving and smashing the door. Just one little argument... "I think I'll go back to the hotel," she says, giving him his cigarette back. "You sure?" She looks at him silently again, and steps closer. Those fingers that fidgeted behind the glass touch his cheek, sliding down his skin to capture his chin and bend his neck even further. He swallows hard. Her lips are inches away from his when she whispers "I better not stay", and then she's kissing him. Closed lips on closed lips. Lars's heart beats faster until she pulls away. He never closes his eyes. "Hope I'll see you again." He only nods dumbly at first, but immediately asks again: "You sure you don't want to go anywhere?" It sounds a little desperate. But Connie bites her lower lip, and nods. "Well." He kisses her cheeks, lingering on one. "If you ever want to speak Danish with me again..." He's in his hotel hours later. Connie is probably in hers. Maybe with that angry boyfriend, telling him it's over. And he forgets about her when Skylar calls. Edited by Jungleland, February 23, 2012, 4:59 pm.
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| Isis | August 20, 2011, 7:51 pm Post #2 |
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I SAID IT BEFORE, I'LL SAY IT AGAIN: CONNIE/LARS CIRCA 1997 WHEN THEY FIRST MET ASDLGJA;KLJKS;LDJFASDF LARS AND SEAN PENN AND CONNIE AND THE BOYFRIEND AND THE CIGARETTE AND THE INTIMACY AND THE HOTNESS AND FUCK YOU SKYLAR YOU BITCH AND AKLSDJFLAKSJDF AND AND AND KLGJDKGJDKFJD OMG ILYYYYYYYYYYY I seriously loved this, as if you couldn't tell lol. Even if it wasn't written for me. heeeeee. Thank you for posting it.
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| Lilith | August 20, 2011, 7:58 pm Post #3 |
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♥ Jaimelicious ♥
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Love the instant intimacy between them. :horns2
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| Aria | August 20, 2011, 7:59 pm Post #4 |
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Blackened
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I will admit to almost having an identical reaction to Trinny's when I first read this. Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan. Yes. It's just so...yes. Perfect. Wonderful. Fucking amazing. That's all there is to it. I just love this. It's simply amazing. From Lars not wanting the night to end, her kissing him, all of it. Perfect. <3 I love it. It's an amazing story. <3 Fantastic job. Please write more soon! |
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| Jungleland | August 20, 2011, 8:27 pm Post #5 |
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Aw thanks a lot
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| Lars Mi Amor | August 20, 2011, 10:51 pm Post #6 |
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Lars the Great
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I love this
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| lilevilchick | August 21, 2011, 12:15 am Post #7 |
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i like this.
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| Jungleland | August 21, 2011, 12:29 am Post #8 |
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Glad you both do
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| Isis | September 19, 2011, 4:07 pm Post #9 |
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Just re-read this. Still love it. Write more Lars/Connie. Write more in general. /fangirl |
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| Jungleland | September 20, 2011, 12:06 am Post #10 |
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| Sekhmet49 | March 24, 2012, 10:44 am Post #11 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Read this again for the 5th time... Still love it!! You need to write more girl!!
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| Isis | March 24, 2012, 10:40 pm Post #12 |
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Not write more (okay well that)--finish more stories. PLEASE T_T You're the best. This is still great. Watch me stroke your ego and suck you off READY *does so* okay. Seriously. This is awesome. Het, slash, whatever. You are the fucking best. Period. Write ;;
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| Jungleland | March 25, 2012, 3:11 am Post #13 |
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Glad you like it, Aurore. And Trin, stooop it
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| Voxx | July 2, 2012, 11:44 pm Post #14 |
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I just read this again and realized how stupid I am because I've never commented to say how much I love it. ![]() Really, really, really love it. Loved the little nuances. I'm with Trin. You should write more Lars and Connie No pressure! |
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| Jungleland | July 3, 2012, 4:36 am Post #15 |
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Thank you! ![]() I did start another Lars/Connie. We'll see when it finally gets done. |
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