| Little Miss-terious; Het fic w/ OFC, no rating yet | |
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| Topic Started: Oct 3 2011, 04:31 PM (4,033 Views) | |
| Humburto | Feb 21 2012, 08:44 PM Post #106 |
Damage Case
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I love this fiction - I look forwaed to more 
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| Oh Hell | Feb 21 2012, 09:29 PM Post #107 |
The shadow hanging over you.
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It's an: I promise... to try. Do not go yoda on me, I will have family divebombing my house. |
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| olyamet | Feb 21 2012, 09:55 PM Post #108 |
Jäger.....
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I'll take that!
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| tuesday's gone | Mar 19 2012, 06:26 AM Post #109 |
Commando
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Khm... Torr?  |
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| Tallulah | Mar 19 2012, 07:03 AM Post #110 |
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Damage Case
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Yes, I like this story as well, and want to see an update! |
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| Oh Hell | Mar 21 2012, 09:59 AM Post #111 |
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The shadow hanging over you.
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Hey guys, been insanely busy in my non-Internet related life recently. Been on holiday, baby minding, birthday party organising, dog sitting and horse mucking out. Lots going on. I'll get onto this as soon as my mind wants to work on it. Sorry that it's been a little neglected.
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| faroo7luvsmetallica | Mar 22 2012, 05:35 AM Post #112 |
FREE SPEECH FOR THE DUMB!XD
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i finally caught up!yaaaay!james is such a sweetie with her , i wanna know what else will happen
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Mar 22 2012, 05:36 AM Post #113 |
☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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I'm still waiting 
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| olyamet | Mar 22 2012, 07:52 AM Post #114 |
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Jäger.....
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Me too!!!
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| tuesday's gone | Mar 22 2012, 01:03 PM Post #115 |
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Commando
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Make that three |
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| Oh Hell | Mar 22 2012, 03:13 PM Post #116 |
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The shadow hanging over you.
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Please read message above Faroo's message. This is all still going on. 
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Mar 22 2012, 03:17 PM Post #117 |
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☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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We shall not be reading anything...only an update   I know you're busy, I just want you to know how much I like and miss the story
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| faroo7luvsmetallica | Mar 22 2012, 07:35 PM Post #118 |
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FREE SPEECH FOR THE DUMB!XD
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Same Here,i am lovin' dis fic,it's da bomb!
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| namenlos | Mar 23 2012, 09:44 AM Post #119 |
Was auch immer
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Looking forward to more.
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| Oh Hell | Mar 26 2012, 07:47 PM Post #120 |
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The shadow hanging over you.
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Chapter Eighteen The Chinese food was absolutely delicious. There was chicken, noodles, vegetables... and this amazing, tangy, fruity sauce all over it... and there was a bucket load. James was, unsurprisingly, shovelling down his rice and chicken as I slowly and happily twirled my noodles. He'd finished before I'd barely touched my food, curled up on the sofa, sulking over the football results. I munched down my noodles in double quick time after hearing an uncomfortable grumble from the aforementioned sofa. I took James' empty box and cutlery and put them in the kitchen. "Thanks." he groaned from where he lay. I smiled warily, opting not to get into a discussion about sport. "No problem." I replied with a soft look his way. "I'm going to bed." "'kay, night..." "Thank you fo--" "Shhhh... TV!" James flapped his hand in the air, his other beer can-clad hand hanging off the sofa. "Okay..." I frowned a little before grinning, shaking my head and plodding up the stairs to my room to change into my new pyjama pants, before crawling into bed. I snuggled down into the soft, warm bedding, my tummy full of tasty food. ------------------------------------------------------------------ But... for some unknown reason, I can't sleep. It must've been at least an hour. Every single time I thought I was out, something roused me. The most recent was James stumbling up the stairs, making a sound like he'd tripped over a step and smacked his knees on the hard, wooden floor. "Aaaah! Shit... fuck!" I winced as I heard him yelp, grumble and curse. I didn't dare call out to see if he was okay... for fear of getting my ear torn off. I cuddled into the covers, trying to sleep again, now that all was quiet. James had made the rest of the way to his bedroom. I heard the door slamming loud and clear. I tried counting sheep, counting backwards, thoughtlessly wondering what was going to feature in my dreams... but, nothing seemed to work. Nothing. I was laying, bored and tired, yet wide awake in bed, wondering what the hell to do with myself... until a stupid thought crossed my mind. ------------------------------------------------------------------ "Mmmph... no!" Bash, bash, fuckin' bash! I'm trying to sleep here! It woke me up, slowly... didn't really sound as hideous or as loud as I remember. This soft, little tapping sound. "James?" Oh... it's her knocking on the bedroom door. Well, this is a first. Ignore it. "James, are you awake?" Yeah, you're damn right I'm awake. You knock on people's doors, it tends to wake them up. Her little voice really... makes me uncomfortable. She sounds so needy and it drives me mad but, she needs... nah. "Yeah, I'm awake... what is it?" I grumble. Annoyed. Awake... still drunk. Woo-fucking-hoo. "Can't sleep." She fucking woke me up to tell me that she couldn't sleep?! Remind me how old she is again?! "Well what do you expect me to do about it?" I roared -sleepily- into my pillow. "I gave you somewhere to stay... and now I have to provide the bedtime stories, milk and cookies? Give me a break..." "Look... I-I... sorry I... bothered you." Fuck me. Fucking tortured little whimpers, whispers... what the hell did I do to deserve this? Dammit... and there's the creaking floor boards. Must do what I can to prevent the sulky teenager thing happening. "Allie?" I sat up in my bed, wrapping my almost nudity in the covers and called out to her. I'd done a shit ton for her today. I was nice, kind and whatever the fuck. I let her share my Chinese pig out. I'm a fucking saint! I can't ruin this now. "Listen, I'm sorry... come in?" The door slowly cracks open and she peeps her little head through the gap in the doorway. "Did I wake you?" she asks, voice barely a whisper. "Yeah, you did. Hadn't been out long though." no point in lying. "Sorry." she smiles, pushing the door open with her little ha-- woah. Did I really buy her that? "It... uh..." Okay so, if I didn't know I was going to hell before, I do now. "It's okay... I'll live." I gulped back my next words and tried not to stare. "You ought a keep some more clothes on." I tried. I really did. I tried not to make that smirk look in any way suggestive but, come on man, who can blame me?! I know... fuck. Be polite. Unsuggestive. But she's in just a bra and pyjama pants. Where the hell else am I supposed to look?! "If you're not careful, you'll have the flu to keep you company instead..." I chuckled, making a joke of her attire. She stays stood, just inside the door, with her hands in her pockets. "Sorry... it's too damn hot for that pyjama blouse thing you bought me... and... ummm... yeah..." she blushed. "It was a nice thought but... Cali weather most the year..." she coyly giggled and scratched the back of her head. I laughed a little with her before inviting her to sit. "Come, uh, sit down, get comfy..." "You're sure?" "Yeah. If you want to. Not forcing you." Oh well done, smart ass. She slowly walked over and sat down on the edge of my bed, swinging her legs up and laying down against the pillows. I looked back to her face and smiled a touch. Not bad for a kid really. "Well, I can see why this is your room." she commented, looking around what is, without question, my bedroom. "Yeah, well, all the guitar stuff..." "This bed is... very comfortable." she smiled, rolling over, yawning softly. ... and I was just about getting ready to tell her about my guitars... all she cares about is how comfy my bed is. She's simple. I kind of like that about her. "Yeah, it..." I snorted a laugh, looking down and seeing her sleeping next to me. "It is." I snuggled back down and rolled, politely, away from Allie, letting her sleep. The least I could do. ----------------------------------------------
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