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-A Thrash in Time- (AThIT) [w/ Metallica]; (Metallica, Bio, Adventure, Comedy, PG-13, OC, Some Romance, Drama, Het/Gen, Cliff/OFC)
Topic Started: October 11, 2011, 1:33 am (3,830 Views)
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I've just read all of your story this evening and I think it's really interesting. I love it! Looking forward for more! :dance
Edited by Izzy, February 10, 2012, 4:40 pm.
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February 10, 2012, 4:26 pm
I've just read all of your story this evening and I think it's really interesting. I love it! Looking forward for more! :dance
:dance tnx Izzy :huggie:
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More please! :heart: I loved it!!! :heart:
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February 14, 2012, 8:29 am
More please! :heart: I loved it!!! :heart:
get ur game face on :biggrin ......(crackwhips keyboard) Type....Type i say.....Type :nannerwhip:
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there is a quote from Cliff Burton in this part (just to give everyone the heads up)
& i also got it from a article that Nora posted on here (all posting [c] goes to her) >>>where i got the quote from<<< (& the quote is [c] of Cliff as well...... Love you :heart: :wub:)




A Thrash in Time
(Ch.6/Pt.3)

(the last time where we left Metallica off, the guys were (& still) in Osaka, Japan to save Roadie from Helena unharmed, luckly before they did anything Jason was asked on how he got to where the guys are at right now-Flashback required- ….the rest you’ll have to figure out on your own….Enjoy The Story>>>>)


Clare: Ma :D

Roadie: Clare…..I’m glad you’re safe

Helena: GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR………….I’ll have something up my sleeve the next time you all see me …… & it won’t be good

Shadow (Cliff): We’ll see about that

(Later at a hotel somewhere in Osaka)

Clare: -sleeping-

Young Kirk: This is bad…..really REALLY bad…..

Roadie: I know Kirk…..(sigh) maybe Lars was right…. I’d just stay out of sight for a while

Young Kirk: When did he tell you this………..

Roadie: Just last month, when you guys were auditioning for bass players

Young Kirk: Why didn’t you say anything to me or James about this in the first place otherwise we could’ve said something to Lars

Roadie: I should’ve ……but I was just too stubborn to tell you anything

Young James: Hey….are you guys doing ok?

Roadie: We’re alright now……..

Young Kirk: Yea James….we’re just fine

Young James: Well then com’on, we’re going to have a band discussion

(a few seconds later)

Lars: Well ….Roadie is back with us safe & sound

James: And we’ve got a lady reaper on the loose too as well

Young Jason: Yea….but what can we do about it since she turned our gig into a almost massacure…..if it weren’t for you guys…..I don’t know what the outcome whould had been

Shadow (Cliff): I’ll tell you what we’ll do………we’re going to fight back if its the last damn thing we’ll do

Kirk: Cliff, are you crazy…..the rest of us will might be in danger & never come back at all…..ever

Shadow (Cliff): I know but its the only way to stop Helena at her tracks for good

Rob: But if its going to work….When are we going to do that???

Shadow (Cliff): We all leave at dawn first thing tomarrow

Young Lars: Us too???

Lars: Yes, that implys you & our younger selfs too mini me

Jason: Cliff is right….. we’re going to stop Helena from doing such evil that she’d put us through already…… if it doesn’t seem to work….. the outcome will be uncertain

(meanwhile)

Helena: Hmmm well then, if you all going to fight me …….I’ll guess I have to wait till they get on my turf HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(later on that night)

Roadie: Kirk…..are you still awake?

Young Kirk: Yea…….I can’t even sleep at all……but why though?

Roadie: I can just see something terrible happen to one of you guys…..or even worse

Young Kirk: Ohhhhhhh….. are you scared about tomarrow morning & all

Roadie: Yes dude…..of course I’am …. better yet I just want to ……..

Young Kirk:…..Give up & die tring

Roadie: Exactly & it just sucks that our lives will be on the line …..then to top that off, I don’t know what the result of that might be (cries)

Young Kirk: Hey……don’t think that way & besides everyone is going to be alright I’m sure of it

Roadie: Lets hope so…..

Young Kirk: Yea….

Roadie: Hey remember in that one interview where Cliff was asked what advice he had for newer musicians

Young Kirk: Oh yea…. That interview a few months before he died….what about it????

Roadie: He said that when he first started….his decision that he will devote his life to it
Devotion really paved the way for Cliff I’d tell you, but what he really said was that “To absolutely devote yourself to that, to marry yourself to what you’re going to do & not get sidetracked by all the other bullshit that life has to offer”

Young Kirk: So thats why you were at the auditions because of what he said in that interview

Roadie: Yes, & when he said that…..those words were stuck to me like glue
& they will for the rest of my life


(To Be Continued)
Edited by picklegal1, February 16, 2012, 3:01 am.
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Cliff is right! And they must do what they feel because they're married with music and nothing else matters! :heart:

I loved this chapter and I NEED to read more!!! I'm so curious about what they're going to do!!!! :nanner:

Thank you Katie!!!! you're the best!!!!!! :heart: :horns2
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February 16, 2012, 3:37 pm
Cliff is right! And they must do what they feel because they're married with music and nothing else matters! :heart:

I loved this chapter and I NEED to read more!!! I'm so curious about what they're going to do!!!! :nanner:

Thank you Katie!!!! you're the best!!!!!! :heart: :horns2
no problem Nora....... i'll shall put on my thinking cap & brainstorm the night away :nanner: :huggie: :heart:

:nanner: NANNERS AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :nanner:
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I almost got lost with the history, but is great!

Keep it on! :horns2
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tnx :nanner: :biggrin
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:dance Ch.6/Pt.4 is in the works :dance
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A Thrash in Time
(Ch.6/Pt.4)

(the last time where we left Metallica off, they were discussing on how things were going to go as long as they’re not seen by Helena & getting prepped for her confrontation the next morning, later on that night Roadie was talking to Young Kirk about an interview w/ Cliff a few months before he died…..The Rest You’ll Have To figure out on your own
Enjoy the story>>>)


Young Kirk: So thats why you were at the auditions because of what he said in that interview

Roadie: Yes, & when he said that…..those words were stuck to me like glue
& they will for the rest of my life

(meanwhile outside the hotel)

Clare [grown-up]: So that was why Mom wanted to join the band for a reason……yawn, now to get some shut eye before tomarrow (sleeps)

Korey: Hey Clare….I found a way to…get back home?!?…..oh well…I shouldn’t wake up Ms. Sleepy-copperhead while she has her beauty rest

Clare [grn-up]: ~I heard that Korey~

Both of them: (laughing)

Helena: Hmph…..since the daughter is here…I’ll make an altematum she’ll never refuse
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(the next morning)

Lars: (inner thoughts: I don’t know what Cliff is up to about this whole situation we’re dealing with on Helena here……..but ….what ‘am I saying ….I just need to get my head out of the gutter & focus on whats going to happen later on)

James: Hey….You’re up early

Lars: Hahaha yea…..-sigh-

James: Its Helena isn’t it?

Lars: Yes…..& to top it all off….All of us are now in serious amounts of danger that we’ve ever been, not to mention injuries, traps that Helena might set up, or even……you know
I can’t even take the fact that …..we’re going to fight to the death….because of what Helena did to Cliff

James: We’re going to get through this….I know it….but we all have to think of something to stop her you know….

(noise from background)

Clare [grn-up]: Kor…Com’on…. Mom has to be somewhere up there

Korey: Ok…..phew…….but I highly doubt your mom will be in there

Clare [grn-up]: Of course she will dude…..now com’on

Lars: Um……hello!!!!!

Korey: (inner thoughts: Fuck…..we’re in sooooooooo much trouble now) Hey Lars
wassup ^^ keeping the band in check….eh?

Clare [grn-up]: Kor!!!!!!!! Sorry James, Lars…… for my buddie’s excuse…..& as you were saying Lars

Lars: anyway you two get in here…. and as for Clare

Clare [grn-up]: Yes???

Lars: There is someone you should meet

Korey: Sweeeeet…..who are we meeting?????

Clare [grn-up]: I guess we’ll both have to see to find out

(a few minutes later)

Young James: Yawn….good morning Japa…Hello there (sees Older Clare at the door)

Clare [grn-up]: Is this this the right room?

Lars: Of course it is….now come in

Young James: Well Well…… who is this beauty coming in our hotel room <3 ^^

James: Uh…..mini me…..I hate to burst your bubble but…..thats Cliff’s kid you’re after

Clare: Grrr…..

Young James: “*-* </3.……….Alrighty then…..I’m going back to sleep

Clare [grn-up]: Did you always done this often?…..Hmmmmm??????

James: I plead the fif Clare…..yes

Shadow (Cliff): Whats going on here???

Clare: Gaa???

Lars: damn……I almost forgot, Clare this is……

Clare [grn-up]: You’re …….you’re…… augh… (faints into nerdness)

Shadow (Cliff): Uhhhh….was there something I said???? -__-”

Korey: No….she is always like this when she meets famous people

Clare [grn-up]: ~Shut up Kor~

Lars: Should we tell her when she gets up????

James: I think that would be wise if we would

(2 minutes later w/ some noises echoing in Clare‘s mind as she wakes up)

Roadie: Clare…..Clare………Clare……wake up sweetie

Clare [grn-up]: argh…… What the fuck just happened

Young Lars: You passed out in the hallway for who knows how long….thats what happened

Young James: <3 Yea……. & you’re REALLY pret…… <3

James: Mini me …..-___-+

Young James: </3 Damn it </3

Shadow (Cliff): Would you two knock it off for once…Jase, Rob …get everyone outside
Clare & I will be out in a while but it won’t take long

Jason & Rob: Got it

(meanwhile)

Clare [grn-up]: Sooooo, I haven’t gotten to properly introduced myself yet…..the names Burton…..Clare Burton…..Metal extraordinaire….. & Thrash inturpiter too :D

Korey: No shes not ^^

Clare [grn-up]: KOREY, DO YOU MIND!!!!!!!!!!!!! O///O”

Korey: Ok..ok……I’ll be outside with the others

Shadow (Cliff): Was that your boyfriend????

Clare [grn-up]: Nonononono Cliff…… he is just a good bud of mine since middle school thats all & he is also an avid Metallica fan too….when we first met & he was playing Ride The Lighting on his CD player in the school hallway…. that really got me hooked to that music for life

Shadow (Cliff): (inner thoughts: My own kid….a Metallica fan???…who knew) Oh…..anyway, just right before we leave Clare I need to tell you something

Clare [grn-up]: Yea sure Cliff….its just very obvious that we’ve just met….but anywho what were you tring to say????

Shadow (Cliff): I wonder if your mom told you this or not but she used to be a Bass Tech or Roadie as we like to call her on & off the road….she was with us from Pre - Kill em’ All through Post - Master of Puppets

Clare [grn-up]: How do you know that???

Shadow (Cliff): Its obvious….. :D

Clare [grn-up]: Oh…..I see, but here is a question I’ve been asking mom for years that I don’t even come to terms with……why is my last name any different from yours?….and she always answers with this saying, “you’re a very special human being……. That I’ll always have in my heart forever….till my dying day I will still love you no matter what”

Shadow (Cliff): sigh…….. The reason why your mom told you this cause she was scared to tell you the real story on her life on the road with us……everything was fine since day one when me & her joined but your mom still had the Bass Tech role in the road crew, until one night all of us were going to Copenhagen, Sweden

Clare [grn-up]: What happened????

Shadow (Cliff): A few hours passed…..& it was 5-6 in the morning, we were all asleep & then……

Clare [grn-up]: Then what?????

Shadow (Cliff): Your mom & I were ejected from one of the sides of the bus windows…me on the other hand…wasn’t very lucky, but overall you & your mom survived

Clare [grn-up]: Mmmm………wait you said “Your mom & I”…but if you had an relationship with her…. & for me being born in ‘86.… that means you’re my…………ohhhhhhhh alrighty then

Shadow (Cliff): Yep…that indeed I’am

Clare [grn-up]: Would you excuse me for a moment……..Ohhhhhhhhhh Korey

Korey: Yea?

Clare [grn-up]: This is the best fucking day of my whole…….ow my elbow….life

Shadow (Cliff): Com’on you two lets go

(to be continued)
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A Thrash in Time
(Ch.7/Pt.1)

(the last time where we left Metallica off….. They were leaving Osaka to confront Helena
Earlier they met up w/ Clare [grn-up] & her friend Korey…..unknowingly what lies ahead for those two…..later on Clare [grn-up] had a talk with Shadow (Cliff), just to bring her up to speed…..the rest you’ll have to figure out on your own………Enjoy The Story>>> )


Clare [grn-up]: Mmmm………wait you said “Your mom & I”…but if you had an relationship with her…. & for me being born in ‘86.… that means you’re my…………ohhhhhhhh alrighty then

Shadow (Cliff): Yep…that indeed I’am

Clare [grn-up]: Would you excuse me for a moment……..Ohhhhhhhhhh Korey

Korey: Yea?

Clare [grn-up]: This is the best fucking day of my whole…….ow my elbow….life

Shadow (Cliff): Com’on you two lets go

(Later……)

Kirk: I wonder whats taking them so long???

Rob: Cliff said it won’t take long

Korey: We’re back :D

Jason: What took you guys so long

Everyone else: Yes!!!!!!

Clare [grn-up]: Well….it took a bit longer than we expected……Right Dad (winks)

Shadow (Cliff): *///* Yep it did

Young Kirk: So where to…..

(BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Young Lars: Now what the hell is going on???

Clare: (about to cry) Ma????

Roadie: Shhh….its alright ….we’re all here

-Laughter echoes in background-

James: Where are you!!!!!!

Lars: Show yourself

Helena: Hahahaha…..at last…the battle begins MetalliSnoops

Young Jason: What do you want from us this time you creep?

Helena: I’m not here for you fools……I’m here for one thing & one thing only….Hmmm
……. Ahhh Clare Burton….so we meet at last

Clare [grn-up]: Uhh guys, what the hell is going on?

Helena: Foolish child….. Since you & your friend arrived I’ve been wondering…..

Clare [grn-up]: Wondering what….????

Helena: About making an some sort of a agreement

James: Don’t listen to her…..she is just messing with your mind

Helena: Silence……. Anyway Clare I want to make an agreement with you…..although it would involve your life……Them or you????……make a choice

Shadow (Cliff): (inner thoughts: Please don’t make the wrong decision)

Roadie: Com’on Clare…….don’t let her fool you

Clare [grn-up]: I know………I’ll try to not go easy on her

Helena: Come along………………….I’m waiting for an answer

Clare [grn-up]: I’m sorry but my family comes first

Helena: Why you no good little……pfft….ok if your going to be that way…something I’d should had done to you & your mother (goes to attack Clare)

Clare [grn-up]: Noooooooooooo!!!!!

Korey: CLARE!!!!!!!!!!!!! (blocks Helena)

Clare [grn-up]: ……………Kor????

Korey: Hey……..-coughs-

Young Lars: Hang in there kid……..just don’t go dying on us

Helena: Hahahahahahahaha, foolish people…….you just don’t get it do you, & see why this person is dying in Clare’s arms

Clare [grn-up]: CAUSE YOU TRIED TO FUCKING KILL ME & KOERY DID A VERY BRAVE THING…..only in which he sacrificed himself doing

Helena: Hahahaha……Silly girl, you are wiser beyond your years than I thought…just like your dad

Clare [grn-up]: There Is only one thing you can’t even touch…… & that infact is all us….we’re a family…..that can’t be torn apart…..& We’ll never allow you to put all of us to shreads…..NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Helena: Hmph………..if your going to be arrogant……I could perhaps battle all of you at my homeworld……..

Clare [grn-up]: What happens if you lose????

Helena: …….I’m not giving any details away till you all get there HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPP!!!!!!!

Young James: We’ll just see about that

Clare [grn-up]: Korey…..don’t you dare leave us

Korey: Sorry Clare…………. I tried my best….to save you

Clare [grn-up]: What do you mean Kor?????

Korey: What I’m tring to say is that……I love you Clare……. You’re the best person I’d ever met since our school days -coughs-

Clare: Ohhh Kor…..please don’t go……Korey????? …………..Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! (Sobs)

Shadow (Cliff): Everyone……..Helena just gave away her location

James: Where to??????

Shadow (Cliff): I’m not sure…..but it could be risky by the time we get there, but I want for all of you to proceed in caution

Kirk: Com’on lets go

Clare [grn-up]: (inner thoughts: Don’t worry Kor…….Justice will be served …..I just know it)

WWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(To be continued)
Edited by picklegal1, March 25, 2012, 10:13 pm.
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Ch.7/Pt.2 is in the works :horns2
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one last update.......i swear & i'll get to writing :dance


on DeviantART, i'm doing a contest to see who might guess the next location the guys -MetallicA- will be heading to (& it will be the very last location aswell)


here is the question.............

"Try to guess the next location the guys (Metallica) will be heading next (this will be the last....sorry readers :huggie: )
& yes Helena is in this Location............ But try to guess the name of the Homeworld though"

here is a hint............... it is named after one of "MeT's" instrumentals & its also a constellation


the prizes -


whoever gets the name correct will get

5 Points, Free Wallpaper from the deviantART muro or MS Paint, & a spot as a new character.........(I will commish the OC to whatever you want....the price for Commissions is 1 Point)


anyone who guesses 2nd will get

3 Points, & Free Wallpaper from the deviantART muro or MS Paint

(Good luck MetChicks :biggrin :horns2 )

contest here >>> AThIT Ch.7 Contest
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