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| -A Thrash in Time- (AThIT) [w/ Metallica]; (Metallica, Bio, Adventure, Comedy, PG-13, OC, Some Romance, Drama, Het/Gen, Cliff/OFC) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: October 11, 2011, 1:33 am (3,829 Views) | |
| picklegal1 | April 4, 2012, 2:30 am Post #61 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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A Thrash In Time (Ch.7/Pt.2) Sneak Preview Here is what i have so far.......Enjoy>>>>> (????? ????????? - ???? ??????) Roadie: Wow its so……. Clare [grn-up]: Beautiful Roadie: Yea…….Hey Shadow Shadow (Cliff): Yes Roadie Roadie: Are you sure that Helena would be here? Shadow (Cliff): Of course she should…..thats why we’re all here Young Kirk: Hey guys………come over here, I think I found something James: What is it???…….oh my!!! Roadie: (gasps) Cliff!!!!!…….. Clare: Ga??? Shadow (Cliff): Amber………may I talk to you? Roadie: Yea…..what is it? Shadow (Cliff): You see this person over there Roadie: Oh yea Cliff….what about him though Shadow (Cliff): Well you see…..just to make this explainable (Shows himself to Roadie) Roadie: (gasps)……..Cliff…..you were fallowing us all this time…..I thought I’d never see you again Shadow (Cliff): Well……. Lars: Hey Cliff….can you help us get your younger self out of this glass case Shadow (Cliff): Sure thing Pt.2 to Ch.7 will be posted when its done
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| picklegal1 | April 14, 2012, 4:16 am Post #62 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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heres the new one ...........Enjoy >>>>> A Thrash in Time (Ch.7/Pt.2) (the last time where we left Metallica off, they where ambushed by Helena…Proceeding by Helena herself was interrogating Clare [grn-up] about if she or the rest want to stay alive or not…..after the choice was made Helena was going to attack her, but Korey on the other hand was blocking the way in order to save Clare [grn-up] & sacrificing himself as well…….. The rest you’ll have to figure out on your own……..Enjoy The Story >>>) Shadow (Cliff): Everyone……..Helena just gave away her location James: Where to?????? Shadow (Cliff): I’m not sure…..but it could be risky by the time we get there, but I want for all of you to proceed in caution Kirk: Com’on lets go Clare [grn-up]: (inner thoughts: Don’t worry Kor…….Justice will be served …..I just know it) WWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Orion homeworld - Near future) Roadie: Wow its so……. Clare [grn-up]: Beautiful Roadie: Yea…….Hey Shadow Shadow (Cliff): Yes Roadie Roadie: Are you sure that Helena would be here? Shadow (Cliff): Of course she should…..thats why we’re all here Young Kirk: Hey guys………come over here, I think I found something James: What is it???…….oh my!!! Roadie: (gasps) Cliff!!!!!…….. Clare: Ga??? Shadow (Cliff): Amber………may I talk to you? Roadie: Yea…..what is it? Shadow (Cliff): You see this person over there Roadie: Oh yea Cliff….what about him though Shadow (Cliff): Well you see…..just to make this explainable (Shows himself to Roadie) Roadie: (gasps)……..Cliff…..you were fallowing us all this time…..I thought I’d never see you again Shadow (Cliff): Well……. Lars: Hey Cliff….can you help us get your younger self out of this glass case Shadow (Cliff): Sure thing (a few seconds later) Lars: Com’on guys ….lets get Cliff out of this glass case Cliff: (awakes) Where in the hell I’m I & Why I’m I doing in this glass case? James: Long story…. :/ Clare [grn-up]: Although we’re going to get you out of there….. WAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRPPPPPPPP Nikki: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….Umph……ouch (inner thoughts: Huh….is that Clare with Metallica………..Clare Burton you lucky son of a bitch…..& where is Korey, hes always with her 24/7) Clare [grn-up]: (inner thoughts: Is that who I think it is?) Hey Nikki ![]() Nikki: Hey Clare (waves) wheres Korey??? Clare [grn-up]: He is gone Nikki: Sorry to hear that Everyone: Clare!!!!! Clare [grn-up]: Coming….lets go Nikki Nikki: Right behind you (minutes later) Young James: Grrrrrr, its no use ……we can’t get Cliff out of there….unless we break the case open…he’d be free…..thats it (whispers in Young Lars’ ear) Young Lars: Lets do that (both of them broke the glass case open in just minutes later) Cliff: Well…..good to see you all still kicking Roadie: Cliff……(faints) (to be continued) & congrats to IceCat19 on DeviantART for guessing the new (& last location of the fic)
Edited by picklegal1, April 14, 2012, 4:18 am.
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| picklegal1 | April 22, 2012, 5:24 am Post #63 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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Pt.3 to Ch.7 is in the works :horns2
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| Izzy | April 26, 2012, 12:53 pm Post #64 |
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Outlaw Torn
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I've just caught up with the chapters I missed since I haven't been online for several weeks. ![]() Anyways, I still love this fic. Can't wait for more.
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| picklegal1 | April 27, 2012, 10:33 pm Post #65 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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tnx izzy
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| picklegal1 | April 29, 2012, 11:21 am Post #66 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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(intermission) guy 2: hey guy 1 guy 1: hey guy 2......sup guy 2: not much, but I bought the new fruit flavored vodka at the supermarket next to the one cent store...... guy 1: wow, may I try some? guy 2: but it contains some magic powers guy 1: what kind of powers guy 2? guy 2: well.......the kind to solve friendships guy 1: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! both of them: lets embrace it ![]() -Water flavored vodka- (solving friendships everywhere) -end of intermission- |
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| JH_KH_CB_Lover | April 29, 2012, 12:47 pm Post #67 |
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Bad Seed
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Awesome! Keep writing! It got kinda confusing in some parts but I still liked it! |
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| picklegal1 | April 29, 2012, 1:47 pm Post #68 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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it gets confusing at times (although it twists ur mind on the details.....idk but what the hay) |
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| JH_KH_CB_Lover | April 29, 2012, 3:32 pm Post #69 |
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Bad Seed
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Lol it's still good though! |
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| picklegal1 | April 29, 2012, 11:24 pm Post #70 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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thanks
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| JH_KH_CB_Lover | April 30, 2012, 7:37 am Post #71 |
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Bad Seed
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No prob! *hugs back lol*
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| picklegal1 | April 30, 2012, 12:31 pm Post #72 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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it's a hug party YAY!!!!!!!........(sorry everyone in the fan-fic section of the board) |
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| JH_KH_CB_Lover | April 30, 2012, 10:12 pm Post #73 |
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^ Hehehe... I'm not high... Post the next chapter!!! I'm Going InSaNe!!!! |
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| picklegal1 | May 1, 2012, 12:25 am Post #74 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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currently writing right now in my profile's notepad as we speak
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| picklegal1 | May 1, 2012, 1:31 am Post #75 |
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Dat boi shit waddup
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alrighty then the new update is finito......ENJOY>>>>>>>>>> A Thrash in Time (Ch.7/Pt.3) (where we last left Metallica off, everyone is at last at the Orion Homeworld where Helena is to be stopped once & for all.....but they have to get a couple people first......meanwhile when getting Cliff out of the glass case, another one of Clare's [grn-up] close friends named Nikki (Nicolette) Rinaldi appeared out of nowhere but she wanted to help out..............the rest you'll have to figure out on your own Young James: Grrrrrr, its no use ……we can’t get Cliff out of there….unless we break the case open…he’d be free…..thats it (whispers in Young Lars’ ear) Young Lars: Lets do that (both of them broke the glass case open in just minutes later) Cliff: Well…..good to see you all still kicking Roadie: Cliff……(faints) -a few minutes later- Roadie: Augh.......Huh????? Clare [grn-up]: Shes awake guys Young Kirk: Hey.......Are you ok???? Roadie: I'm alright now......i was kinda lightheaded for a few minutes after Cliff awoke & where is he anyway.......is he alright, Cliff is not hurt is he? Young Kirk: He'll be just fine.........you & the rest of us just need some shuteye Clare: Ga - Ga Nikki: And you were more than lightheaded......you got us scared for a moment Young Lars: Yea.... we don't want you passing out on us again Amber Roadie: Whatever you say Ulrich......just don't rupture my time ok Young Lars: Roadie......i ju... Roadie: JUST FUCKING DON'T OK!!!!!! i need to be alone with the girls Young Kirk: Alright.....Com'on Lars Young Lars: ......................................(sigh).......Call us if you need anything Clare [grn-up] & Nikki: Ok we will -a few more minutes later while everyone was asleep for the night- Young Lars: ...............................................................................(falls on knees)............................................................................................... .................(sobs to tears)............................................................ Clare [grn-up]: What the hell is tha.....................oh hey, what seems to be the matter??? Young Lars: Its a long story Clare but may i speak to your mom please Clare [grn-up]: Sure.....what for??? Young Lars: Its something i should discuss with her on our terms (meanwhile) Roadie: Whats that sou..... Young Lars: Amber...... Roadie: Its just you, what is it this time Lars Young Lars: I came to tell you something that i should had done 2-3 years ago when you gave me my first encounter with the "Bull" Roadie: (chuckle) Well then say it then Young Lars: I'm sorry for being a prick, a pain in the ass, a assho........ Roadie: Ok ok ok ok Lars, i accept your apology.....just don't go any further with this or i will give you the bull again Both of them: (laughs) Roadie: Now lets try to get some sleep shall we? Young Lars: Yea.......Night Roadie Roadie: Night Lars -later- Clare [grn-up]: Nikki.......Nikki........HEY NIKKI!!!!!!!! Nikki: Wha......ow!!!! Clare [grn-up]: Com'on........we're sneaking a peek on James' younger self Nikki: Uhhhh......is that kinda snooping Clare [grn-up]: Yea......but if anyone else dosen't know we'd be ok -a few minutes later- Clare [grn-up]: Alright Nikki, all we have to do is wait in this tree &........Woah......OHhHhHh say can you see...........AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...........Umph (lands on Young James) Young James: Wha in the H.........Hi Clare [grn-up]: H.H....H.... Hi.........(inner thoughts: Mahaminin,haminin,haminin,haminin) -slaps self- i'm so sorry about this Young James: Thats ok.......any who i think we came off the wrong foot......my name is J..... Clare [grn-up]: James, i knew your name by now (giggles) Nikki: hell yea Clare.......Continue on (To be continued) this part was typed on my sister's comp |
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