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-A Thrash in Time- (AThIT) [w/ Metallica]; (Metallica, Bio, Adventure, Comedy, PG-13, OC, Some Romance, Drama, Het/Gen, Cliff/OFC)
Topic Started: October 11, 2011, 1:33 am (3,828 Views)
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AThIT Ch.7/Pt.4 is in the works :D
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hey everyone........heres what i have for Ch.7/Pt.4
Enjoy>>>>>



Young James: Wha in the H.........Hi

Clare [grn-up]: H.H....H.... Hi.........(inner thoughts: Mahaminin,haminin,haminin,haminin) -slaps self-
i'm so sorry about this

Young James: Thats ok.......any who i think we came off the wrong foot......my name is J.....

Clare [grn-up]: James, i knew your name by now (giggles)

Nikki: hell yea Clare.......Continue on

Clare [grn-up]: o///o NIKKI!!!!!!!!.............Again sorry

Young James: About what?????

Clare [grn-up]: Hmmmmm..... nevermind, anywho we need to get some sleep

Young James: Yea......

Both of them: (laughs)

Clare [grn-up]: Night James (kisses Young James on the cheek)

Young James: 0///0 ........Night Clare

Nikki: Clare & Hetfield sitting in a tree....... K-I-S-S-I-N-G!.....Here comes

Clare [grn-up]: Good night Nikki .......yada-yada-yada

(the next morning)

Lars: Yawn....... Well better get...Hmmmm (sees Young James & Clare [grn-up] still
sleeping)..... Eh, i'll just leave em' be......... They'll get up sometime

Kirk: Whats going on?!?!

Lars: Well look hamster....... (quiet laughter)

Kirk: Cliff is going to have a fucking fit fest if he sees this -laughs-

Lars: Hmmmmm...............I'd doubt it though

Kirk: Wanna bet???

Lars: Bring it on!!!!!!

Shadow (Cliff): Well ......it seems like Clare & James are starting to be friends......by the way guys, i've been overhearing what you two were talking about just now.......& lastly the bet is officially a draw..........pay up

Kirk & Lars: (both give Shadow (Cliff) the bet money)



:nanner: more to come when part 4 is finished :nanner:
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:nanner: NEW PART :nanner:



A Thrash in Time
(Ch.7/Pt.4)

(The last time where we left Metallica off…..they were still at the Orion Homeworld, after Cliff was freed from the glass case…Roadie fell out of consciousness, minutes later she wanted to know where he was at but Young Kirk told her that he was fine & she needed some rest….later on that night Young Lars owes Roadie an apology for the things he said to her….meanwhile Clare [grn-up] befriends Young James….the rest you’ll have to figure out on your own…..Enjoy the story>>>>>)



Young James: Wha in the H.........Hi

Clare [grn-up]: H.H....H.... Hi.........(inner thoughts: Mahaminin,haminin,haminin,haminin) -slaps self-
i'm so sorry about this

Young James: Thats ok.......any who i think we came off the wrong foot......my name is J.....

Clare [grn-up]: James, i knew your name by now (giggles)

Nikki: hell yea Clare.......Continue on

Clare [grn-up]: o///o NIKKI!!!!!!!!.............Again sorry

Young James: About what?????

Clare [grn-up]: Hmmmmm..... nevermind, anywho we need to get some sleep

Young James: Yea......

Both of them: (laughs)

Clare [grn-up]: Night James (kisses Young James on the cheek)

Young James: 0///0 ........Night Clare

Nikki: Clare & Hetfield sitting in a tree....... K-I-S-S-I-N-G!.....Here comes

Clare [grn-up]: Good night Nikki .......yada-yada-yada

(the next morning)

Lars: Yawn....... Well better get...Hmmmm (sees Young James & Clare [grn-up] still
sleeping)..... Eh, i'll just leave em' be......... They'll get up sometime

Kirk: Whats going on?!?!

Lars: Well look hamster....... (quiet laughter)

Kirk: Cliff is going to have a fucking fit fest if he sees this -laughs-

Lars: Hmmmmm...............I'd doubt it though

Kirk: Wanna bet???

Lars: Bring it on!!!!!!

Shadow (Cliff): Well ......it seems like Clare & James are starting to be friends......by the way guys, i've been overhearing what you two were talking about just now.......& lastly the bet is officially a draw..........pay up

Kirk & Lars: (both give Shadow (Cliff) the bet money)

(explosion noises in the distance)

Jason: Huh......morning already????

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM

Jason: Oh shit.........better warn everyone else about this

(meanwhile)

Lars: So what are we going to do about Helena????

Shadow (Cliff): James had just told this last night that he was building a self-distruct device in order to stop Helena once & for all
although he started right away in Osaka up till this morning

Lars: Thats perfect.......let just hope it works & maybe go home like nothing happened

Kirk: Yea.....for your information Lars, (whispers) our wifes are at the HQ probably wanting to know where we're at

Lars: Oh yea......i forgot

Jason: Guys.......GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All 3: Yea Jason

Jason: We'd better get our asses out of here, cause we've been fallowed

Lars: Damn it

Kirk: So what are we going to do guys?

Shadow (Cliff): We need to get out of here & find a different place to settle

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Jason: And Cliff meant right now

Kirk: Right.....

(later)

James: Yawn.........Huh???? whats that noise

Jason: JAMES!!!!!!!!!

James: Hey…….whats with the…..

Lars: Bombing noises….yea, we need to get everyone out of here now

(meanwhile)

Shadow (Cliff): Clare…..Clare wake up

Clare [grn-up]: Huh….whats going on Dad

Shadow (Cliff): Better go get Nikki, cause we’re getting ambushed com’on

Clare [grn-up]: I bet this is one of Helena’s doings

Nikki: Hey Clare….. Over here (waves to Clare [grn-up] )

Clare [grn-up]: Nikki (runs to her friend)

Nikki: Did you & Cliff heard the bombing noises just now

Both of them: Yes we did!!!!!!!!

Nikki: Well …..everyone else had one hell of a wake up call including myself thanks to that…..fucking damn

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Clare [grn-up]: HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......Where is everyone else at????

Nikki: As far as I know…..Lars, James, Jason & Kirk were getting everyone to the time machine & then……..

Kirk: Guys…..Over here

(a few seconds later)

Lars: Ok…..since we’re getting asses bombed by a psychopath from space…..what are we going to do?

Rob: Can we start by………GETTING THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!! (starts to run to the time machine)

All of Young ‘Tallica: Rob wait!!!!!….

Rob: (inner thoughts: theres no place like home, theres no place like home…….theres no place like home) -gasps- I’m almost to the time machine & then I’m home free

BOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [time machine is destroyed]

Rob: Oh fuck…..we’re screwed

Helena: HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whats wrong, going so soon????

Kirk: Rob……Why did you just run off, you know we can’t back out now

Rob: I know Kirk……but look at the time machine

Kirk: Damnit…..now how in the hell are we suppost to get back home

Helena: You are all on my home turf now ….& as I was saying to Clare before her other friend blocked my way…..

Nikki: You wouldn’t dare motherfucker

Helena: Oh………but I can……Clare, prepare to be imprisoned in the homeworld FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!! (unleashes a power sheld towards Clare [grn-up] )

Clare [grn-up]: -gasps- (tears)

Young James: GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM HER!!!!!!!!!!!

Helena: Try to challenge me kid

(-SNATCH-)

Roadie: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

Clare [grn-up] & Young James: HELP……GET US OUT!!!!!!!!!!!

Helena: Its no use……..your friends can’t save you now once we get far away from here to my lair

Cliff: GRRRRRR…You better let my daughter & bandmate go, otherwise there will be hell to pay

Helena: Well….come to think of it….how about you all fallow me & we’ll settle this out hahaha ……CATCH ME IF YOU CAN HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!

Clare [grn-up] & Young James: HELP US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(a second later)

Young Kirk: Now what are we going to do?

James: -silent-

Lars: Uh……James……HELLO EARTH TO HETFIELD!!!!!!!!

James: We’re putting some metal up some evil ass today & saving Clare & my younger self…..we’ll show Helena that the Four Hors…

Jason: -clears thoat-

James: I mean the Five Hors….

Shadow (Cliff): Are you missing someone James

James: ALRIGHT!!!!!!! Anyway as I was saying…….we’ll show Helena that the SIX Horsemen are not to be messed with…..& by the way HOW IN THE FUCK ARE WE GOING TO GET THERE WITHOUT THE TIME MACHINE!!!!!!!!!

Shadow (Cliff): There are some teleporters just close by…..hopfully they still work after from all that destruction from Helena

Young Jason: Could all of us fit in there???

Shadow (Cliff): Of course….we should all teleport to the lair at once, now com’on everyone before it too late

(minutes later at the teleporter)

Lars: Well guys its almost time

Shadow (Cliff): Before we go I’d like to say something…. Us as band have been striving to keep the show on the road for years, from hereon out I’m trusting everything to you all, so lets all kick Helena’s ass literatly ……but try to come back home alive

Teleporter: Link to location…..Teleporting to- Northwest of the Orion Homeworld

James: Ok is everyone ready to go

Everyone else: HELL YEA!!!!!!!!!!!

James & Lars: Ok then…..Watch out Helena, cause the horsemen are now coming for you

WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPP


To Be Continued
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ok i really have to share this before i go to bed....heres what i have so far & this scene is a Lion King spoof (W/some Klars) XD :lol: .....ENJOY>>>>



(Northwest of the Orion Homeworld - Helena’s Fortresse)

Young Lars: (is looking at the guards) Ugh…..those guys, they look like bouncers at The Stone…..so whats the plan with getting rid of these fuckers

Cliff: Try to distract them

Young Lars: Great idea…..hey!!!!!

Cliff: Com’on Lars…….you have to think of something

Young Lars: What do ya want me & Kirk to do?????, dress in drag & do the hula???

(HUGE Lion King/KLars pun here folks sorry..& if Lars OR Kirk sees this tell them to sue me lol)

-song starts-

Young Lars: WhooWOOOOWWW!!!!!……“If you’re amped for a awesome & good show …..watch us now as we play something badass…….from the streets of san fran we’re 2/4ths of Metallica…all you have to do is get in line…….AHHHHH you achein’

Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup”

Young Lars: “FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR some tunage”

Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup”

Young Lars: “Itssssssssssss very awesome”

Young Kirk: “Yup-yup”

Young Lars: “You can agree with me to, Oi” (air humps)

-song ends-

Both of them: (hugs) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! -runs away-


more to come after its finished
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the first part of Ch.8 will be finished sometime this weekend or next week.....it only depends :D
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A Thrash in Time
(Ch.8/Pt.1)

(The last time where we left Metallica off……everyone was resting for the night till the confrontation with Helena the next day…..Clare [grn-up] & Nikki were sneaking a peek on Young James in a tree to see if he is good looking in person….but that didn’t go as planned when Clare [grn-up] fell out from that same tree on him -back first-….a little embarrassing conversation later she & Young James decided to get some sleep, of course Nikki had to make fun of them as if they were making out [Lawl], the next morning the whole camp was woken up by bomb noises….causing them all to realize it was Helena that was causing all the ruckus, after Helena captured Clare [grn-up]….she also got one more person to go with….which was Young James…..now everyone has to go to Northwest of the Orion Homeworld to save them both…..The rest you’ll have to figure out on your own…..Enjoy the story>>>>


Lars: Well guys its almost time

Shadow (Cliff): Before we go I’d like to say something…. Us as band have been striving to keep the show on the road for years, from hereon out I’m trusting everything to you all, so lets all kick Helena’s ass literatly ……but try to come back home alive

Teleporter: Link to location…..Teleporting to- Northwest of the Orion Homeworld

James: Ok is everyone ready to go

Everyone else: HELL YEA!!!!!!!!!!!

James & Lars: Ok then…..Watch out Helena, cause the horsemen are now coming for you

WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPP

(Northwest of the Orion Homeworld - Helena’s Fortresse)

Young Lars: (is looking at the guards) Ugh…..those guys, they look like bouncers at The Stone…..so whats the plan with getting rid of these fuckers

Cliff: Try to distract them

Young Lars: Great idea…..hey!!!!!

Cliff: Com’on Lars…….you have to think of something

Young Lars: What do ya want me & Kirk to do?????, dress in drag & do the hula???

(HUGE Lion King/KLars pun here folks sorry..& if Lars OR Kirk sees this tell them to sue me lol)

-song starts-

Young Lars: WhooWOOOOWWW!!!!!……“If you’re amped for a awesome & good show …..watch us now as we play something badass…….from the streets of san fran we’re 2/4ths of Metallica…all you have to do is get in line…….AHHHHH you achein’

Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup”

Young Lars: “FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR some tunage”

Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup”

Young Lars: “Itssssssssssss very awesome”

Young Kirk: “Yup-yup”

Young Lars: “You can agree with me too, Oi” (air humps)

-song ends-

Both of them: (hugs) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! -runs away-

Guard: GET THEM!!!!!!!!

(Meanwhile)

Shadow (Cliff): James…… go into the fortresse & pass some guards to reach Clare & your younger self with the others…..I’ll go look for Helena

James: Ok then -inner thoughts: off I go-

[inside the fortresse]

Clare [grn-up]: Well……since we’re locked in here…I’ll try to g..

Young James: Its too late……and besides Clare, we’re going to be locked up here for the rest of our lives anywho

Clare [grn-up]: Oh com’on James, we can’t give up now…..at least we need to think of something

(STOMP, STOMP, STOMP, STOMP)

Clare [grn-up]: Someone is coming

Guard: ………Silence…..both of you ……on Lady Helena’s orders she dema….huh???? Where is that other kid

Young James: (inner thoughts: -sigh- Where has Clare gone to now?????)

Guard: Well?!?!?!?!?!?

Clare [grn-up]: Looking for me butt-horn

Guard: Huh?!?!?!?!

Young James: Wha??????

Clare [grn-up]: EAT MY DUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!! (lands on the Guard)

Guard: *~X_x~* ‘thud’

Young James: Hey….um one question Clare if I may ask…..ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR FUCKING DAMN MIND!!!!!!!!…..

Clare [grn-up]: Apparently…….

Young James: Well for almost getting us killed & knocked out the Guard….remind me to thank you later

Clare [grn-up]: Deal

(a few seconds later)

James: Phew…..thats the last of them for awhile -cracks knuckles-

Alot -o- Guards: -moans & groans-

Clare [grn-up] & Young James: Hey!!!!!!

James: Hmmm….How did you two get out, I was about to…..

Young James: Clare knocked out a Guard….so we decided to take this stairwell out of where we came in

James: Fair enough….com’on

(meanwhile)

Shadow (Cliff): (inner thoughts: Helena should be close by…..I should think of something & quick)

Guard: Hey…..

Shadow (Cliff): Whoa….I’m warning you now…..stay the fuck back whatever you do

Guard: Relax, I’m on your gang’s side & if you want to finish off Lady Helena for good
It would be a good time to use these (shows Shadow (Cliff) seven sets of weapons)
& the flying red crossbow is the most strongest out of the weaponry

Shadow (Cliff): So what else is here????

Guard: Well we have a pair of Sai, a Spear, some daggers, a laser gun, a pair of ninja stars, a …….Hmmmm I was thinking of a bomb but I might of misplaced it

Shadow (Cliff): I have a friend who just finished a self-distruct device I hope if that’ll work

Guard: Ohhhh yes that will be perfect thank you very much …..& the last weapon is the Orion Sword it can be only be wield by the Princess of this Homeworld…..& legend states that the orginal owners of the Sword & Weapons which belong to the Orion Royal Family & to them only until now….….before Helena came along we all lived happier lives & everyone was carefree & spontaneous …..including Princess Lyra

Shadow (Cliff): And what else????….. & Whos Princess Lyra anywho?????

Guard: thats the person I told you about earlier when I was talking about the Orion Sword anyway…………As the years came & went by……………she appeared

Shadow (Cliff): Helena???

Guard: Yes

(back in the fortresse)

HELP!!!!!!!!

Clare [grn-up]: Wait guys…..I think I heard someone crying for help….be right back

GET ME OUT OF THIS PLACE!!!!!!!!

James: Clare!!!!…..com’on mini me….we got to see who is doing all that noise

Young James: Alright

(a few seconds later)

Clare [grn-up]: -gasps- Korey…..was that you????

Korey: Clare….well I thought I was gonna get cooped up in here forever

Clare [grn-up]: I thought so too….& Nikki also caught up with us

Korey: The whole gang is together again YAY!!!!!!!!!!! :3

Clare [grn-up]: Oh you……now com’on lets get the fucking hell out of here before we get caught by Guards

(meanwhile)

Guard: Anywho when I saw Clare in the background she might be the Sword’s carrier

Shadow (Cliff): Hmmmm….. wait so you’re saying is……

Guard: Yes…..she might be

Shadow (Cliff): Ohhhhhh

Clare [grn-up]: Dad!!!……whats all this????

Shadow (Cliff): -whispers- Weapons to just to settle Helena once & for all

Guard: Ahhh Princess Lyra, finally its an honor to meet you in person

Clare [grn-up]: Uhhhh….. Who is he talking about????

Shadow (Cliff): it’s a long story Clare

Roadie: Hey guys……-scared-….I think some help would be wonderful please

Lot -o- Guards: heheheh…..looks like we got the Queen here HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

Cliff: Leave her alone….ALL of you!!!!!!

Nikki: He really means it…..you deadbeat death beaters

Lot -o- Guards: GET THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Clare [grn-up] & Korey : Way to go Nikki

Young Jason: Now what are we going to do????

Shadow (Cliff): -sigh-…………“When a man lies he murders
Some part of the world
These are the pale deaths
Which men miscall their lives
All this I cannot bear
To witness any longer
Cannot the kingdom of salvation
Take me home ?”

SHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Young Lars: H….hey what in the hell is going on here?????

Young Kirk: I don’t kno…….

OOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH


(to be continued)
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