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| -A Thrash in Time- (AThIT) [w/ Metallica]; (Metallica, Bio, Adventure, Comedy, PG-13, OC, Some Romance, Drama, Het/Gen, Cliff/OFC) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: October 11, 2011, 1:33 am (3,828 Views) | |
| JH_KH_CB_Lover | May 1, 2012, 4:44 pm Post #76 |
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| picklegal1 | May 1, 2012, 5:27 pm Post #77 |
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ur welcome
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| picklegal1 | May 3, 2012, 2:31 am Post #78 |
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AThIT Ch.7/Pt.4 is in the works
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| MasterOfPuppets | May 11, 2012, 2:32 am Post #79 |
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♉ Love that little man always on my mind ♑
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how mean I am! I've been reading and haven't comment ![]() sorry! but aaah ftvkfikbjadx it's great!!! :horns2 Spoiler: click to toggle |
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| picklegal1 | May 12, 2012, 2:10 am Post #80 |
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| picklegal1 | May 12, 2012, 2:11 am Post #81 |
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| MasterOfPuppets | May 12, 2012, 2:43 am Post #82 |
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♉ Love that little man always on my mind ♑
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| picklegal1 | May 12, 2012, 10:04 pm Post #83 |
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| picklegal1 | May 15, 2012, 2:15 am Post #84 |
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hey everyone........heres what i have for Ch.7/Pt.4 Enjoy>>>>> Young James: Wha in the H.........Hi Clare [grn-up]: H.H....H.... Hi.........(inner thoughts: Mahaminin,haminin,haminin,haminin) -slaps self- i'm so sorry about this Young James: Thats ok.......any who i think we came off the wrong foot......my name is J..... Clare [grn-up]: James, i knew your name by now (giggles) Nikki: hell yea Clare.......Continue on Clare [grn-up]: o///o NIKKI!!!!!!!!.............Again sorry Young James: About what????? Clare [grn-up]: Hmmmmm..... nevermind, anywho we need to get some sleep Young James: Yea...... Both of them: (laughs) Clare [grn-up]: Night James (kisses Young James on the cheek) Young James: 0///0 ........Night Clare Nikki: Clare & Hetfield sitting in a tree....... K-I-S-S-I-N-G!.....Here comes Clare [grn-up]: Good night Nikki .......yada-yada-yada (the next morning) Lars: Yawn....... Well better get...Hmmmm (sees Young James & Clare [grn-up] still sleeping)..... Eh, i'll just leave em' be......... They'll get up sometime Kirk: Whats going on?!?! Lars: Well look hamster....... (quiet laughter) Kirk: Cliff is going to have a fucking fit fest if he sees this -laughs- Lars: Hmmmmm...............I'd doubt it though Kirk: Wanna bet??? Lars: Bring it on!!!!!! Shadow (Cliff): Well ......it seems like Clare & James are starting to be friends......by the way guys, i've been overhearing what you two were talking about just now.......& lastly the bet is officially a draw..........pay up Kirk & Lars: (both give Shadow (Cliff) the bet money) more to come when part 4 is finished
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| picklegal1 | May 22, 2012, 1:41 am Post #85 |
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NEW PART A Thrash in Time (Ch.7/Pt.4) (The last time where we left Metallica off…..they were still at the Orion Homeworld, after Cliff was freed from the glass case…Roadie fell out of consciousness, minutes later she wanted to know where he was at but Young Kirk told her that he was fine & she needed some rest….later on that night Young Lars owes Roadie an apology for the things he said to her….meanwhile Clare [grn-up] befriends Young James….the rest you’ll have to figure out on your own…..Enjoy the story>>>>>) Young James: Wha in the H.........Hi Clare [grn-up]: H.H....H.... Hi.........(inner thoughts: Mahaminin,haminin,haminin,haminin) -slaps self- i'm so sorry about this Young James: Thats ok.......any who i think we came off the wrong foot......my name is J..... Clare [grn-up]: James, i knew your name by now (giggles) Nikki: hell yea Clare.......Continue on Clare [grn-up]: o///o NIKKI!!!!!!!!.............Again sorry Young James: About what????? Clare [grn-up]: Hmmmmm..... nevermind, anywho we need to get some sleep Young James: Yea...... Both of them: (laughs) Clare [grn-up]: Night James (kisses Young James on the cheek) Young James: 0///0 ........Night Clare Nikki: Clare & Hetfield sitting in a tree....... K-I-S-S-I-N-G!.....Here comes Clare [grn-up]: Good night Nikki .......yada-yada-yada (the next morning) Lars: Yawn....... Well better get...Hmmmm (sees Young James & Clare [grn-up] still sleeping)..... Eh, i'll just leave em' be......... They'll get up sometime Kirk: Whats going on?!?! Lars: Well look hamster....... (quiet laughter) Kirk: Cliff is going to have a fucking fit fest if he sees this -laughs- Lars: Hmmmmm...............I'd doubt it though Kirk: Wanna bet??? Lars: Bring it on!!!!!! Shadow (Cliff): Well ......it seems like Clare & James are starting to be friends......by the way guys, i've been overhearing what you two were talking about just now.......& lastly the bet is officially a draw..........pay up Kirk & Lars: (both give Shadow (Cliff) the bet money) (explosion noises in the distance) Jason: Huh......morning already???? BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM Jason: Oh shit.........better warn everyone else about this (meanwhile) Lars: So what are we going to do about Helena???? Shadow (Cliff): James had just told this last night that he was building a self-distruct device in order to stop Helena once & for all although he started right away in Osaka up till this morning Lars: Thats perfect.......let just hope it works & maybe go home like nothing happened Kirk: Yea.....for your information Lars, (whispers) our wifes are at the HQ probably wanting to know where we're at Lars: Oh yea......i forgot Jason: Guys.......GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! All 3: Yea Jason Jason: We'd better get our asses out of here, cause we've been fallowed Lars: Damn it Kirk: So what are we going to do guys? Shadow (Cliff): We need to get out of here & find a different place to settle BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMM Jason: And Cliff meant right now Kirk: Right..... (later) James: Yawn.........Huh???? whats that noise Jason: JAMES!!!!!!!!! James: Hey…….whats with the….. Lars: Bombing noises….yea, we need to get everyone out of here now (meanwhile) Shadow (Cliff): Clare…..Clare wake up Clare [grn-up]: Huh….whats going on Dad Shadow (Cliff): Better go get Nikki, cause we’re getting ambushed com’on Clare [grn-up]: I bet this is one of Helena’s doings Nikki: Hey Clare….. Over here (waves to Clare [grn-up] ) Clare [grn-up]: Nikki (runs to her friend) Nikki: Did you & Cliff heard the bombing noises just now Both of them: Yes we did!!!!!!!! Nikki: Well …..everyone else had one hell of a wake up call including myself thanks to that…..fucking damn BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clare [grn-up]: HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......Where is everyone else at???? Nikki: As far as I know…..Lars, James, Jason & Kirk were getting everyone to the time machine & then…….. Kirk: Guys…..Over here (a few seconds later) Lars: Ok…..since we’re getting asses bombed by a psychopath from space…..what are we going to do? Rob: Can we start by………GETTING THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!! (starts to run to the time machine) All of Young ‘Tallica: Rob wait!!!!!…. Rob: (inner thoughts: theres no place like home, theres no place like home…….theres no place like home) -gasps- I’m almost to the time machine & then I’m home free BOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [time machine is destroyed] Rob: Oh fuck…..we’re screwed Helena: HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whats wrong, going so soon???? Kirk: Rob……Why did you just run off, you know we can’t back out now Rob: I know Kirk……but look at the time machine Kirk: Damnit…..now how in the hell are we suppost to get back home Helena: You are all on my home turf now ….& as I was saying to Clare before her other friend blocked my way….. Nikki: You wouldn’t dare motherfucker Helena: Oh………but I can……Clare, prepare to be imprisoned in the homeworld FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!! (unleashes a power sheld towards Clare [grn-up] ) Clare [grn-up]: -gasps- (tears) Young James: GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM HER!!!!!!!!!!! Helena: Try to challenge me kid (-SNATCH-) Roadie: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Clare [grn-up] & Young James: HELP……GET US OUT!!!!!!!!!!! Helena: Its no use……..your friends can’t save you now once we get far away from here to my lair Cliff: GRRRRRR…You better let my daughter & bandmate go, otherwise there will be hell to pay Helena: Well….come to think of it….how about you all fallow me & we’ll settle this out hahaha ……CATCH ME IF YOU CAN HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Clare [grn-up] & Young James: HELP US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (a second later) Young Kirk: Now what are we going to do? James: -silent- Lars: Uh……James……HELLO EARTH TO HETFIELD!!!!!!!! James: We’re putting some metal up some evil ass today & saving Clare & my younger self…..we’ll show Helena that the Four Hors… Jason: -clears thoat- James: I mean the Five Hors…. Shadow (Cliff): Are you missing someone James James: ALRIGHT!!!!!!! Anyway as I was saying…….we’ll show Helena that the SIX Horsemen are not to be messed with…..& by the way HOW IN THE FUCK ARE WE GOING TO GET THERE WITHOUT THE TIME MACHINE!!!!!!!!! Shadow (Cliff): There are some teleporters just close by…..hopfully they still work after from all that destruction from Helena Young Jason: Could all of us fit in there??? Shadow (Cliff): Of course….we should all teleport to the lair at once, now com’on everyone before it too late (minutes later at the teleporter) Lars: Well guys its almost time Shadow (Cliff): Before we go I’d like to say something…. Us as band have been striving to keep the show on the road for years, from hereon out I’m trusting everything to you all, so lets all kick Helena’s ass literatly ……but try to come back home alive Teleporter: Link to location…..Teleporting to- Northwest of the Orion Homeworld James: Ok is everyone ready to go Everyone else: HELL YEA!!!!!!!!!!! James & Lars: Ok then…..Watch out Helena, cause the horsemen are now coming for you WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPP To Be Continued |
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| picklegal1 | May 24, 2012, 1:48 am Post #86 |
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Ch.8/Pt.1 is in the works :horns2
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| picklegal1 | May 26, 2012, 2:33 am Post #87 |
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ok i really have to share this before i go to bed....heres what i have so far & this scene is a Lion King spoof (W/some Klars) XD .....ENJOY>>>>(Northwest of the Orion Homeworld - Helena’s Fortresse) Young Lars: (is looking at the guards) Ugh…..those guys, they look like bouncers at The Stone…..so whats the plan with getting rid of these fuckers Cliff: Try to distract them Young Lars: Great idea…..hey!!!!! Cliff: Com’on Lars…….you have to think of something Young Lars: What do ya want me & Kirk to do?????, dress in drag & do the hula??? (HUGE Lion King/KLars pun here folks sorry..& if Lars OR Kirk sees this tell them to sue me lol) -song starts- Young Lars: WhooWOOOOWWW!!!!!……“If you’re amped for a awesome & good show …..watch us now as we play something badass…….from the streets of san fran we’re 2/4ths of Metallica…all you have to do is get in line…….AHHHHH you achein’ Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup” Young Lars: “FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR some tunage” Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup” Young Lars: “Itssssssssssss very awesome” Young Kirk: “Yup-yup” Young Lars: “You can agree with me to, Oi” (air humps) -song ends- Both of them: (hugs) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! -runs away- more to come after its finished Edited by picklegal1, May 26, 2012, 2:37 am.
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| picklegal1 | June 8, 2012, 3:11 am Post #88 |
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the first part of Ch.8 will be finished sometime this weekend or next week.....it only depends
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| picklegal1 | June 10, 2012, 3:02 am Post #89 |
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A Thrash in Time (Ch.8/Pt.1) (The last time where we left Metallica off……everyone was resting for the night till the confrontation with Helena the next day…..Clare [grn-up] & Nikki were sneaking a peek on Young James in a tree to see if he is good looking in person….but that didn’t go as planned when Clare [grn-up] fell out from that same tree on him -back first-….a little embarrassing conversation later she & Young James decided to get some sleep, of course Nikki had to make fun of them as if they were making out [Lawl], the next morning the whole camp was woken up by bomb noises….causing them all to realize it was Helena that was causing all the ruckus, after Helena captured Clare [grn-up]….she also got one more person to go with….which was Young James…..now everyone has to go to Northwest of the Orion Homeworld to save them both…..The rest you’ll have to figure out on your own…..Enjoy the story>>>> Lars: Well guys its almost time Shadow (Cliff): Before we go I’d like to say something…. Us as band have been striving to keep the show on the road for years, from hereon out I’m trusting everything to you all, so lets all kick Helena’s ass literatly ……but try to come back home alive Teleporter: Link to location…..Teleporting to- Northwest of the Orion Homeworld James: Ok is everyone ready to go Everyone else: HELL YEA!!!!!!!!!!! James & Lars: Ok then…..Watch out Helena, cause the horsemen are now coming for you WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPP (Northwest of the Orion Homeworld - Helena’s Fortresse) Young Lars: (is looking at the guards) Ugh…..those guys, they look like bouncers at The Stone…..so whats the plan with getting rid of these fuckers Cliff: Try to distract them Young Lars: Great idea…..hey!!!!! Cliff: Com’on Lars…….you have to think of something Young Lars: What do ya want me & Kirk to do?????, dress in drag & do the hula??? (HUGE Lion King/KLars pun here folks sorry..& if Lars OR Kirk sees this tell them to sue me lol) -song starts- Young Lars: WhooWOOOOWWW!!!!!……“If you’re amped for a awesome & good show …..watch us now as we play something badass…….from the streets of san fran we’re 2/4ths of Metallica…all you have to do is get in line…….AHHHHH you achein’ Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup” Young Lars: “FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR some tunage” Young Kirk: “Yup, yup, yup” Young Lars: “Itssssssssssss very awesome” Young Kirk: “Yup-yup” Young Lars: “You can agree with me too, Oi” (air humps) -song ends- Both of them: (hugs) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! -runs away- Guard: GET THEM!!!!!!!! (Meanwhile) Shadow (Cliff): James…… go into the fortresse & pass some guards to reach Clare & your younger self with the others…..I’ll go look for Helena James: Ok then -inner thoughts: off I go- [inside the fortresse] Clare [grn-up]: Well……since we’re locked in here…I’ll try to g.. Young James: Its too late……and besides Clare, we’re going to be locked up here for the rest of our lives anywho Clare [grn-up]: Oh com’on James, we can’t give up now…..at least we need to think of something (STOMP, STOMP, STOMP, STOMP) Clare [grn-up]: Someone is coming Guard: ………Silence…..both of you ……on Lady Helena’s orders she dema….huh???? Where is that other kid Young James: (inner thoughts: -sigh- Where has Clare gone to now?????) Guard: Well?!?!?!?!?!? Clare [grn-up]: Looking for me butt-horn Guard: Huh?!?!?!?! Young James: Wha?????? Clare [grn-up]: EAT MY DUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!! (lands on the Guard) Guard: *~X_x~* ‘thud’ Young James: Hey….um one question Clare if I may ask…..ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR FUCKING DAMN MIND!!!!!!!!….. Clare [grn-up]: Apparently……. Young James: Well for almost getting us killed & knocked out the Guard….remind me to thank you later Clare [grn-up]: Deal (a few seconds later) James: Phew…..thats the last of them for awhile -cracks knuckles- Alot -o- Guards: -moans & groans- Clare [grn-up] & Young James: Hey!!!!!! James: Hmmm….How did you two get out, I was about to….. Young James: Clare knocked out a Guard….so we decided to take this stairwell out of where we came in James: Fair enough….com’on (meanwhile) Shadow (Cliff): (inner thoughts: Helena should be close by…..I should think of something & quick) Guard: Hey….. Shadow (Cliff): Whoa….I’m warning you now…..stay the fuck back whatever you do Guard: Relax, I’m on your gang’s side & if you want to finish off Lady Helena for good It would be a good time to use these (shows Shadow (Cliff) seven sets of weapons) & the flying red crossbow is the most strongest out of the weaponry Shadow (Cliff): So what else is here???? Guard: Well we have a pair of Sai, a Spear, some daggers, a laser gun, a pair of ninja stars, a …….Hmmmm I was thinking of a bomb but I might of misplaced it Shadow (Cliff): I have a friend who just finished a self-distruct device I hope if that’ll work Guard: Ohhhh yes that will be perfect thank you very much …..& the last weapon is the Orion Sword it can be only be wield by the Princess of this Homeworld…..& legend states that the orginal owners of the Sword & Weapons which belong to the Orion Royal Family & to them only until now….….before Helena came along we all lived happier lives & everyone was carefree & spontaneous …..including Princess Lyra Shadow (Cliff): And what else????….. & Whos Princess Lyra anywho????? Guard: thats the person I told you about earlier when I was talking about the Orion Sword anyway…………As the years came & went by……………she appeared Shadow (Cliff): Helena??? Guard: Yes (back in the fortresse) HELP!!!!!!!! Clare [grn-up]: Wait guys…..I think I heard someone crying for help….be right back GET ME OUT OF THIS PLACE!!!!!!!! James: Clare!!!!…..com’on mini me….we got to see who is doing all that noise Young James: Alright (a few seconds later) Clare [grn-up]: -gasps- Korey…..was that you???? Korey: Clare….well I thought I was gonna get cooped up in here forever Clare [grn-up]: I thought so too….& Nikki also caught up with us Korey: The whole gang is together again YAY!!!!!!!!!!! :3 Clare [grn-up]: Oh you……now com’on lets get the fucking hell out of here before we get caught by Guards (meanwhile) Guard: Anywho when I saw Clare in the background she might be the Sword’s carrier Shadow (Cliff): Hmmmm….. wait so you’re saying is…… Guard: Yes…..she might be Shadow (Cliff): Ohhhhhh Clare [grn-up]: Dad!!!……whats all this???? Shadow (Cliff): -whispers- Weapons to just to settle Helena once & for all Guard: Ahhh Princess Lyra, finally its an honor to meet you in person Clare [grn-up]: Uhhhh….. Who is he talking about???? Shadow (Cliff): it’s a long story Clare Roadie: Hey guys……-scared-….I think some help would be wonderful please Lot -o- Guards: heheheh…..looks like we got the Queen here HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Cliff: Leave her alone….ALL of you!!!!!! Nikki: He really means it…..you deadbeat death beaters Lot -o- Guards: GET THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clare [grn-up] & Korey : Way to go Nikki Young Jason: Now what are we going to do???? Shadow (Cliff): -sigh-…………“When a man lies he murders Some part of the world These are the pale deaths Which men miscall their lives All this I cannot bear To witness any longer Cannot the kingdom of salvation Take me home ?” SHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Young Lars: H….hey what in the hell is going on here????? Young Kirk: I don’t kno……. OOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (to be continued) |
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| Achernar | June 10, 2012, 3:25 am Post #90 |
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I want my dragon back :c
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this is....pretty silly and cute ¡ n_____n you gotta love kirk xD I finally posted here
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