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| Terrible Things; This is Sad, but it is a love Fiction with James/OFC | |
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | January 31, 2012, 7:49 pm Post #121 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I pulled my clothes on and headed down the stairs. My dad sat waiting on the couch, anxiously twidling his thumbs wondering what the conversation would be. I kept my head down hiding my face from his eyes. He spoke first. "What's goin on son.?" I raised my head slowly and his face went white. His fingers stoppped moving and I watched his shoulders tense in anger. "What the fuck happened with you?" "I got into a fight with a guy that I thought was in the wrong." Bailey jumped in rubbing his shoulder tryign to relax him. "James...the girl was being tossed around by her boyfirned and Castor....intended to fix it and help her out." "And you think putting your fist into someone face is the right answer?! Casotr!" He rubbed his hands over his face. "I sat there silent, my head high and my heart not feeling so proud. The worst thing I could ever do was let my dad down. "Do you have anything to say for yourself?" I jumped a the tone of his voice. He was angry but with Bailey in the room he did his best to contain it through grittd teeth. "No I don't. I stood up for what I thought was right. He was being an ass and you can't say shit to me since you did the same thign for Bailey not too long ago!" I srose to my feet and regretted it the minute I got dizzy. But I held my ground. "Sit your ass down boy." "No! I was trying to help her! And what does she do?! Watch me get my ass kicked, slaps me and then goes back with him! She was wrong! She should be with me I would take good care of her! This! This happened because I got jumped! I kicked his ass in front of the school. He did this with his friends in a secluded area like the pussy he is!" My dad rose to his feet and grabbed my shoulder slamming back into the chair. "I don't care about what you did. I'm proud that you did what you thought was right for a woman. But, you're just as bad as him in her eyes now. And now you're gonna have to make things right. With her. Cause you showed that you'd hit anything when you're angry." I shook my head and got up heading to my room. I heard my dad rise but Bailey sat him back down. I decided to keep my path to my room. Slamming the door shut I plopped on my bed closing my eyes trying to drift to sleep. "He's not going to agree with ou James, but you did good." "He's a teenage boy. Filled with testostrone. He beat up some kid for a girl. Am I right?" "Yes." "Then what is he doing here sulking about it? Why isn't he out trying to get her? If he thinks this is helping her...He's got anoter thing comin." "I'd just let him cool off and speak to him in the morning." "I need to make him understand that with the bad comes good." "How you gonna do that?" "Get you to help me." I watched a cheeky smile rise to my man's face and I slapped his shoulder. "James, this is something he's gonna have to learn from." "Well, there's gotta be something there I can do." I touched his cheek and just before I could say anything there was a loud knock at our door. I looked towards the stairs in case Castor may be on his way down. But nothing and the knocking continued. "I'll get it." James rose to his feet and I heard his friendly voice welcome a visitor but when I looked over, his voice and his face weren't so friendly. Kj stepped in next to James. Her facce streamed with tears, a bluish mark under her eyes and her lip swollen. Her hair was touselled and her shirt torn. James looked at me for help and I shot to my feet. "Trace?" She just nodded her head and fell into my arms. I rubbed her back and looked at James somewhat frightened. He presented me with the same expression and motioned his head towards the stairs. I nodded and he went off. "cmon honey lets get you some water and yo ucan tell me about it." She didn't say a word just followed me to the kitchen. I heard James fist on Castors door and then it shut. My guess he went inside. "Why hasn't there been any good out of this?" She sobbed to me. "Why does life always do such terrible things? Why can't we jsut pick and choose how it happens?" Her voice cracked and little droplets of blood hit the granite counter top from her lip. "You know honey, there's going to be some good out of this...That's what Castor is for." I smiled slightly and her eyes watered. "No. I ruined everything with him..I slapped him and I'm surprised he didn't hit me back. He looked so angry." "Oh dear, he wasn't angry he was jsut...He was upset that you couldn't see he was trying to watch out for you. You were naive my girl. ANd that's alright for your age but let my son help you." SHe nodded her head and sipped at the water silently. I saw James at the head of the stairs =, Castor with his head hung, and standing slightly behind his father. They both looked afraid to descend and greet us. I nodded my head and they made for their way down. "Castor...I'm so..." She couldn't even get her sentence out before he wrapped his arms around her. Rubbing her back slowly and letting her cry into his shoulder. His face was expressionless almost like he was tired of haivng to be that guy. That guy stuck in the friend zone that isn't listened to. James arm drapped over my shoulder and he whispered in my ear for us to go to our room. When we got there he picked me up and held me to his waist. His hands rested on my ass and I wrapped my arms around his shoulders smiling down at his pretty face. "What're you doing? We can't have sex right now." He smiled and laid us down on the bed. Brushing the hair from my face. "Sometimes life does really shitty things..And I thoguth forever that I shouldn't fall in love cause there would be too much to lose. But once you and I had that...moment in the garage I knew...That after all the terrible thigns...all the shitty experiances were just leading up to something so beautiful and true...I feel that with you Bailes...And I want my son to feel that with Kj." I stroked his cheek, smiling at his watery blues. "I love you James...And Castor will, but he's gotta do it on his own, like you did. He's a mini you and if I know anythign about the male Hetfield, it's that they are stubborn and can't learn from others. They have to learn for themselves before they take an once of advice." He kissed my lips lightly and we drifted off to sleep. THE END!!!!! So what do you guys think of there being a sequel....But all from Castor and Kj POV? If not, then I'll leave it with this ending and what not. If you guys sayyes, then I'll get started on the next one. |
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| Shannyn(: | February 1, 2012, 6:56 pm Post #122 |
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you already know my answer! |
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | February 1, 2012, 6:58 pm Post #123 |
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☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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Yo dude, have a gues Same here
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | February 1, 2012, 8:43 pm Post #124 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Awh really guys? :') I'll get started then! Had kind of a break in my thoughts...sort of a doubt but I'm gonna do this. If not for my own confidence but for your guys enjoyment. And since you guys have been faithful to my stories, I'll let you know that the sequel will be titled, 'With all Bad, There Comes Good.' It will be James teaching Castor to deal with the anger he feels towards himself and towards the situation at hand with Kj, and also focus a lot on Castor and Kj trying to build a relationship. I hope you guys enjoy. I won't post the first chapter until tomorrow. Thank you for your reviews! Btw Some_Kind_Of_Monster: I love your fics. Both of them keep up the great work. |
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| Shannyn(: | February 2, 2012, 1:36 am Post #125 |
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Dude, never ever doubt yourself & your ability to write a fic Your amazing dude!I really enjoy reading them Lol, i'm sure that's how we became friends ![]() I wish i could write a damn fic I will be waiting around waiting for you new fic
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | February 2, 2012, 9:12 am Post #126 |
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☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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Thank you I was taking some of the inspiration form the fics here, yours is one of them
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| Shannyn(: | February 2, 2012, 7:39 pm Post #127 |
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Audra (usmcjahusmc8762) just wanted to me to tell all the readers on here that she's going to start writing her sequel tomorrow instead of today, she's having computer difficulties until then.. Enjoy the dancing bananas
Edited by Shannyn(:, February 2, 2012, 7:41 pm.
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | February 3, 2012, 6:00 am Post #128 |
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☠ (R.I.P) † Return Is Possible †
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*dance along*
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | February 4, 2012, 3:57 pm Post #129 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Thank you Shannyn I appreciate it. Hahaha. Love the dancing Bannanas and Some_Kind_of_Monster I'm honored that you found inspiration. :') that means a lot to me as a writer. I'll be posting when i get things fixed withmy computer. |
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| Shannyn(: | February 4, 2012, 6:21 pm Post #130 |
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kehehehe! YEAHHH!
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| Shannyn(: | February 4, 2012, 6:22 pm Post #131 |
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You're welcome m'dear!
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | February 4, 2012, 7:13 pm Post #132 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Don't call my dear douche bag. Hahahahaha don't you love our brotherly love? By the way it's working again on my computer. So I may post hahaha |
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| Shannyn(: | February 6, 2012, 1:35 am Post #133 |
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I will if i want to LOL JK, i don't know why i typed it.. wooooops.OOOOO PLEASE POST IT SOON
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| HellHathNoFury | February 15, 2013, 3:25 pm Post #134 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Awww that was so good! James and Bailey are so good together I'm glad he ended up happy.
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | October 24, 2016, 6:27 pm Post #135 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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IIIIMMMMMMM BAAAAAACCCKKKKKK!!!!! |
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Lol, i'm sure that's how we became friends
I will be waiting around waiting for you new fic
I'm glad he ended up happy.

8:37 PM Jul 10