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| Somebody That I Used To Know; Het, James fic, drama/romance | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: December 16, 2011, 2:04 am (14,457 Views) | |
| cmania | March 9, 2012, 2:45 pm Post #286 |
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Frantic
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Lovely But i didn´t understand one litlle thing Victoria it´s daughter of him ? lovely
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| Voxx | March 9, 2012, 2:52 pm Post #287 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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@ Kasia Thank you for your kind words and support throughout the duration of the writing process It means a lot! And thank you for the compliment about my writing. Sometimes I feel like I have the same problem that you face. I never know if what I'm writing is being conveyed the way I picture it in my head! But thank you all the same!@ Alma It's sad, but throughout this whole writing process, Jason is probably the one character that I didn't hate writing at any given point. I love him ! I never intended for him to become the main love interest. I honestly didn't! But he kept weaseling his way in there and I felt like it would be just wrong to write him out of it somehow. And yeah, I'd stab her too if she messed it up even more!! No worries Thanks for reading and sticking the whole way through this! It means a lot to me @Cmania Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! And no, Victoria is not Jason's daughter, but James', though he is unaware of her existence.
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| Scorpion Flower | March 9, 2012, 2:56 pm Post #288 |
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Outlaw Torn
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Victoria is James' daughter, Cmania:) I liked the ending very much I must say. It made sense concerning all the previous events. Like Lilith said she sounded more humble now, so I also belive her regret and man...we all learn from our mistakes. It kinda leaves it open for us to imagine she and Jason will get together eventually, now that he was going to New York and staying with em for a while. Also it takes love to hide a daughter from a band's mate for eleven years:)) I liked that bit too, that she had his daughter and didn't tell him. I like that concept. I wrote that too on a story here, though in my fiction (as it started there) he ended up finding out he had a 10 years old daughter and then the story flows from there. Anyway...I like that concept a lot, though I don't think it's fair for someone having a kid and not knowing about it for such long time, But I loved it. I truly did.Very well done.
Edited by Scorpion Flower, March 9, 2012, 3:03 pm.
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| CarpeDiemBaby | March 9, 2012, 3:12 pm Post #289 |
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// Sunglasses indoors.
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Speachless!! I always wanted her to stay with Jase. But I think that it's kinda unfair that she hid Victoria from James. I bet James would be an awesome father as well as Jason is. Althought Kat had her own reasons, but I think with the time, James is gonna know it, and that means new troubles and more drama. So at the end, the creepy stalker was Michael right? I was hooked it to this story since the very first day that I read it! did you remember that I didn't even slept for read this? AWESOME-AMAZING-FANTASTIC STORY! I loved the end, you know what I mean.... Hope you could write a sequel about this, I mean in a future not so far.
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| Voxx | March 9, 2012, 4:07 pm Post #290 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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@ Scorpion Flower Thank you!! The reason why I chose to not include James in her life after the last time she saw him was because ultimately she wants Jason. She can't have both, right? And she doesn't want both. I felt like including James in her life, even as having an active role in Victoria's life, wouldn't give Jason and Kat the possibility of reconciliation; which felt more likely to happen than her seeking out James and pestering him with a daughter. I'll be honest, if I ever write a sequel, I don't know that I would include James finding out. But yeah. Anyways! I've always appreciated your lovely comments!! Thank you so much for reading and sticking with me to the end! ![]() @ Fio Oh yes, I remember you telling me you stayed up a whole night to read this! It was such a lovely compliment! And thank you again for reading. It means a lot to me. Yes, in the end, Michael was the stalker. I actually intended to play that out more, a lot more. But, like I said before, I felt like I was losing touch with the story and I ultimately decided to end it rather than drag it out and let it get even crazier than it already got! If I choose to write a sequel...well he's getting out of prison as his note indicated...so I'm sure he would make an appearance But thank you again for reading! Your comments always made me smile.
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| Tallulah | March 15, 2012, 7:04 pm Post #291 |
Bad Seed
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I'm so glad I finally joined, and that I finally decided to just go on a reviewing spree of all my favorite fics. This one? Ultimate favorite. Period. Bar none. Nothing compares. I loved how flawed and awful Katerina was. She seemed so real. I really felt awful for James and Jason. It's rare that I read a het fic where the woman is the bad guy, and yet it's so hard to see her as the bad guy, because we're reading it from her perspective. But in that regard, because she's the focus, she's an unreliable narrator, and gradually through the story it became harder and harder to sympathize with her. Absolutely brilliant characterization and storytelling. I actually hope you don't continue this, because I really like how you ended it. James doesn't need to know, and she doesn't need James. All she needed was right there, with Jason, and she fucked it up. But now she can possibly have him back. You ended it on a hopeful note there. I'm so thrilled. You're the reason why I joined the forum, I just wanted you to know that. You and your brilliant fic. Thank you so much for writing this. I look forward to your next fic with eager anticipation. |
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| Voxx | March 15, 2012, 7:24 pm Post #292 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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AW ![]() Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm honestly flattered that you enjoyed it so much! And I'm so glad that you joined this site!! I hope you enjoy some of the other great writers here too!! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the ending and were able to appreciate that yes, Katerina was definitely flawed, but for me, that was what made her real. So at the end of it all, the ending I chose felt like the ONLY thing that realistically could happen! Once again, THANK YOU for reading! It means so much to me! I am writing, but it's so slow going! ![]() Hope to see you around more! Edited by Voxx, March 15, 2012, 8:47 pm.
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| HannahBanana | March 15, 2012, 8:39 pm Post #293 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I finished the entire story (Finally) Lol and I have to applaud you, it was very intriguing and wonderfully descriptive I just have to say I'm really glad Kat and Jason ended on good terms. Jason was really loyal to Kat and he never really tried to abandon their friendship even after everything that had went wrong. I was so angry though because I can't believe that Kat never told James about their daughter-- I mean come on, really? Lol She should've told him the truth. I wanted to see how James would've reacted to the news, but I kinda figured that she'd end up pregnant anyway because James didn't do as he promised (If you know what I mean). I still think her daughter has the right to know who her father really is. I was also very disappointed that she slept with James one last time knowing that she had feelings for Jason, She shouldn't have given James the luxury of having her one last time, he didn't deserve it... The fight scene between Jason and James-- that was very realistic it felt as if I was actually there. You described it in such great detail along with Kat's dream about James turning into a beast and feasting on her neck-- I loved it! On an end note, I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you're able to write more fics in the future
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| Voxx | March 15, 2012, 9:39 pm Post #294 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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@ HannahBanna Thank you so much for taking the time to both read and comment!! It means a lot to know that people enjoyed reading (even if they got pissed off a few times throughout the course of the fic!! ) I'm very glad to hear that you enjoyed the detail I tried to put in there (key word being tried!! )I'm currently working a fic...we'll see how it goes. It's a little difficult to write and it might be controversial! Haha! But once again, thank you so much for reading!
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| FriendOfMisery | October 20, 2015, 8:24 pm Post #295 |
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Bad Seed
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OMFG.... Can we all take a moment to appreciate the beauty of this? So well written that I really cried when Jason left her... the steamy scenes are just to die for, specially the ones between Jason and Kat, because, well, I'm all team Jason I started reading this expecting a JamesxOFC, and stuck around because she was close to Jason, and deep down I always knew she was friendzoning him... it was pretty obvious he felt something for her, but you always tried to be discrete. I'm not sure you'll read this reply, but I cannot fathom why there's no more praise to this story... the ending wasn't predicable and I could never figure out whether she'd choose Jason or James but was afraid she might pick the last. Glad she didn't! Like many people here, I think James is an incurable tease and too full of himself to think that everyone just falls at his feet with a snap of his fingers. What I enjoyed the most was how you portrayed Jason. Damn... there were times that I had to stop reading and think "Fuck me... this is Jason fucking Newsted.... this is him". You've ruined me.... I'll never find a better Jason than this one..... Thank you so much for this incredible gift... This was just... amazing.... better than Lars' drumming now (kidding!). |
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| HellHathNoFury | October 30, 2015, 3:31 pm Post #296 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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OMFG… I just read this over the past week. I loved it, truly. |
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| treadlightly | November 10, 2015, 1:31 pm Post #297 |
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Bad Seed
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What an amazing story! Jason and James are really well portrayed and your OFC is flawed like any human should be and I love that! Overall, a great read! Thank for sharing this beautiful work
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