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A London Extra; A Hannah/James Sequel to A French Connection
Topic Started: January 9, 2012, 12:42 am (25,124 Views)
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fiometal
January 29, 2012, 2:22 am
"You go up then, if you’re tired. I’ll stay here and read for a while" :lol: :lol:

I'm starting to think that James is NOT so in love with Hannah as she thinks, I mean he should understan that she's tired but he didn't :rolleyes:

More! :biggrin
His face understood, but was surprised somehow at my rejection. It occurred to me after a short while of reading his expression, that it might have been the first time I had ever turned him down for sex.

He understood, he was just having a little strop because it was the first time she didn't immediately bow to him for sex. :rolleyes:
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Something is fishy about this Dave thing, Fran told him, right? :blink:

*waits*
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January 29, 2012, 4:47 am
Something is fishy about this Dave thing, Fran told him, right? :blink:

*waits*

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Yep, she sure did! Well done for spotting it! Have a medal! :lol: James totally didn't realise she told David! Subtle way to get him back, Fran! :lol: :nanner:
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*shows her chest proudly* :biggrin

Fran, woman, that was the worst thing to do :blink:
If James will find out she'll be trouble :ugh:
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January 29, 2012, 6:15 am
*shows her chest proudly* :biggrin

Fran, woman, that was the worst thing to do :blink:
If James will find out she'll be trouble :ugh:
Francesca DEEPLY regrets telling David now that James is serious about Hannah. The kids won't understand at all. But still, they're gonna find out sometime. No matter when they do, it's gonna hurt. :ugh:

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January 29, 2012, 6:25 am
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January 29, 2012, 6:15 am
*shows her chest proudly* :biggrin

Fran, woman, that was the worst thing to do :blink:
If James will find out she'll be trouble :ugh:
Francesca DEEPLY regrets telling David now that James is serious about Hannah. The kids won't understand at all. But still, they're gonna find out sometime. No matter when they do, it's gonna hurt. :ugh:

I can really imagine it :ugh:

Poor kids :( I hope they won't argue in front of the kids :ugh:
To make things complicated ther should be a 3rd woman for James :lol: *joke*
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He came to bed finally at nearly 3am. The lights were out, but I was still lying awake. I had just climbed back into bed after giving Ant his 2am feed. I was still thinking about James’ disappointed face after I’d turned him down. I rolled towards him in bed to let him know I was awake. He was being as quiet as possible not to wake me.

‘Hannah?’ he asked sadly. I couldn’t see his face in the dark, but I knew that he was close to mine, his warm body and pulled me into his.

‘I’m sorry for being a grumpy bastard’ he apologised. I’m tired and jetlagged and I got some big news this weekend’. I turned on the light behind us, pleased he was ready to talk properly. Something was clearly on his mind, he had been acting strangely since he returned that morning. He took a deep breath before the reveal.

‘Francesca told me that Cali lost her virginity, I’m still reeling from that’ he explained. My mouth dropped open in surprise.

‘Oh! James! That’s such big news’ I gasped. A few stray tears fell down his face.

‘I wasn’t even there to talk to her!’ I held his sad face with my hands in sympathy.

‘James, you can’t be there for everything, all the time. She would have chosen her Mom over you, there’s no way a girl would ask or tell her father about that. I would never have talked to my father about losing my virginity!’ I exclaimed. This seemed to make him feel worse somehow.

‘Really?’ he sobbed.

‘Of course—she’s going to talk to her mom first, every time’.

‘17 is pretty normal though’ I reassured him.

‘I was 20!’ James gulped. ‘Before the band started up, I’d never so much as been in the same room with a girl who wasn’t my sister!’ he admitted. ‘Lars was the same—we both stole Dave’s girlfriends because we couldn’t get girls of our own!' he remembered.

‘I was 16’ I offered, since we were sharing stories. ‘It was just after school one afternoon. We weren’t even dating, he just walked home with me one day, we went upstairs and just did it on my bed with my bedroom door wide open’ I remembered in astonishment at my younger self. ‘Thank God my Mom wasn’t home!’

‘I always talk to her, about everything!’ he exclaimed.

‘Well, now, things are changing James’ I said gently. ‘Castor will surely see you as his number one?’ I tried to reassure him. He nodded hopefully. He thought for a moment before speaking.

‘You said you think your Dad knows about your old job, and your mom doesn’t?’

‘My mom wouldn’t only not disapprove, she’d disown me. My father, on the other hand, is not at all judgemental. He knows I’m an adult and I make my own decisions, and that I’m still his daughter, even if I was a call girl’.

‘I can’t imagine what I’d think or do if one of my daughters was a call girl…….’ his face was blank and staring.

‘So how do you think your Dad knows, exactly?’ James asked. He was listening as he ran his fingers in circles around my bare stomach.

‘One day, years ago when I was working, we met up for lunch’ I began, remembering. ‘I had seen a client that morning and I was quite dressed up, a little over the top for an office job that I claimed to have. I went up to the bar afterwards to pay for lunch, I had a big thick collection of cash in an envelope with ‘Belle’ written on it. He surprised me by leaning over the bar with his credit card to insist that he would pay, and he saw me separating a few notes to hand over. He just paused on my face, on the envelope in my hand, the big wad of cash, my clothes, my hair and my makeup—and he knew’.

‘Wow!’ James breathed in surprise.

‘Did you ever talk about it?’ he asked.

‘No, never’ I replied simply.

The outstretched palm of his hand smoothed my stomach suggestively. His breath had turned warm and I knew I had his attention.

‘I know you’re too tired tonight’ he kissed. ‘But can I do something?’ he asked gently. He had sufficiently apologised to receive my approval. I agreed to his suggestion with a kiss.
His fingers slid below my stomach, warming my pussy--massaging in gentle circles. His mouth was panting and excited, and he kissed at my throat for permission to explore me further. I opened my legs further for him, and his middle finger slid gently into me. I moaned sweetly into his mouth, his touch was driving me crazy.

My trembling hands held onto the bicep on his strong arm as he touched me under the sheets. He smiled, he loved being able to make me excited with just his hand. He shifted closer, his cock was hard against his abdomen and he wanted me to know it. After a minute more of pleasuring me with his eager rubbing fingers, he rolled on top of me suggestively.

‘Can we? Please?’ he begged.

‘Alright!’ I smiled with a whisper, not wanting to wake Anthony who was finally sleeping. I felt sorry for James being apart from his kids—so much of what he was doing was for me. He was genuinely hurting and needing my love. I received him warmly. His body was generous and slow, appreciating every deep movement with a loving groan. I held onto his neck as he brought me closer to my own rush with stronger thrusts of his hips. As his body sped up, he breathed eagerly with an open mouth as he made love to me, harder and faster with determination. I made a crying whimper as I felt myself building, and his mouth found mine underneath him joyfully.

‘Are you gonna come for me?’ he gasped eagerly.

‘Yeah!’ I moaned, my head was rolling slowly from side to side on the soft pillow. I was so close to the edge.

‘Oh James!’ I begged softly. His nose nudged my neck, tasting me with soft kisses.

‘Come for me, darling’ he urged me. I was loving that he was making this all about me. With him talking dirty in my ear it didn’t take much at all. He withdrew to watch me come, and I rubbed myself to a climax as he watched in happy surprise.

‘How does Mrs Hannah Hetfield sound to you?’ he breathed in question as his eyes poured over my body that panted heavily in orgasm.

'Yeah!' I breathed in reply, panting hard.
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Can you please stop writing this hot scenes? :lol:

I have dirty thoughts later :P

James always gets what he wants, what if he would want Fran back? :rolleyes:
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January 29, 2012, 8:15 am

James always gets what he wants, what if he would want Fran back? :rolleyes:
Subtle hint taken! :lol: :heart:
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Knowing the character Hannah better than most readers here, I want James and Hannah to stay together. Though she was a cold, calculating and high class escort, she was trying so hard to find and stay in love outside of her job. So, team Hannah member one and only. She's finally fallen love properly, she's engaged and happy. Let her be.
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Interesting chapter.

I think the conversation that James and Hannah had about Cali and her getting older and starting to make adult choices was a really genuine conversation. I can appreciate the whirlwind of feelings that James must have been feeling, especially the thought of his little girl growing up. The most interesting line in the chapter, I thought, was:

" 'I can't imagine what I'd think or do if one of my daughters was a call girl.....' his face was blank and staring."

It makes me wonder what James really thinks about Hannah's past and whether or not it affects the way he thinks about her. Whether or not he admits it, I think just by saying that, even though he leaves the ending open, he's making a judgement about the career of being a call girl. Somehow, I don't think James would approve of either of his daughters choosing that career path. But then, I wonder why it's okay for him that Hannah was a call girl. It's a bit of a paradox lol.

Very interesting, for me at least.

Thanksgiving soon?? Yes?? Okay :biggrin :heart:
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January 29, 2012, 1:26 pm
Interesting chapter.

I think the conversation that James and Hannah had about Cali and her getting older and starting to make adult choices was a really genuine conversation. I can appreciate the whirlwind of feelings that James must have been feeling, especially the thought of his little girl growing up. The most interesting line in the chapter, I thought, was:

" 'I can't imagine what I'd think or do if one of my daughters was a call girl.....' his face was blank and staring."

It makes me wonder what James really thinks about Hannah's past and whether or not it affects the way he thinks about her. Whether or not he admits it, I think just by saying that, even though he leaves the ending open, he's making a judgement about the career of being a call girl. Somehow, I don't think James would approve of either of his daughters choosing that career path. But then, I wonder why it's okay for him that Hannah was a call girl. It's a bit of a paradox lol.

Very interesting, for me at least.

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Yes, it was very much a genuine conversation. It's worrying though--from the chapter earlier that he had to ask her to trust him. :ugh: Especially when he knows he was kissing Fran, and he didn't tell her about nearly sleeping with his ex-wife either! Bad boy James!

Hannah can identify with Cali being 17 and sleeping with her boyfriend, so she understands James' grief. James is realising that he's missing family time by being away, and that he's really only got himself to blame.

James is realising more and more that her history as a call girl is going to be a problem for all of them--and very likely, a breaking story. He's thinking out loud about whether he would ever permit his daughters to do the same. It worries him as a father, he wants to keep his girls safe. Hannah purposely let that one go, she didn't want to get into an argument with James about her past while he was upset and talking about his kids so openly.

Yes, yes--thanksgiving is next! :heart: :wavey
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Oh, I almost feel bad for Fran when her treachery comes to light...almost. :biggrin
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January 29, 2012, 9:42 am
Knowing the character Hannah better than most readers here, I want James and Hannah to stay together. Though she was a cold, calculating and high class escort, she was trying so hard to find and stay in love outside of her job. So, team Hannah member one and only. She's finally fallen love properly, she's engaged and happy. Let her be.
Thanks Torr!

Yes, Hannah is no longer the cold, calculating bitch that she was when she met him (as her character is through most of the TV show), when she was still working. Even then, when she met James, he was one of her last official clients anyway--she had nearly given it up while she was almost finished her degree.

Hannah is desperately trying to find love and so is James, ironically, probably both of them for the wrong reasons. *sigh* :rolleyes:
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January 29, 2012, 6:07 pm
Oh, I almost feel bad for Fran when her treachery comes to light...almost. :biggrin
I haven't explained this part of the backstory yet, but I will soon.

Francesca told David innocently, during a phone conversation about James and his new girlfriend. She told him Hannah was an ex-call girl when he asked how they met, and David's eyes flashed dollar bills. :o
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