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A London Extra; A Hannah/James Sequel to A French Connection
Topic Started: January 9, 2012, 12:42 am (25,114 Views)
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And the clue from a few chapters back was this: Ray said to Fran on the phone, I get out of rehab on friday, and Anthony's birthday is on saturday. That was the clue that he was going to turn up. :D
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Wow, I never should have gone away! I missed SO much! I don't even know where to begin!

...I guess I will start by saying that while I am really happy that James and Fran did the dirty ( :heart: ) the fact that he rushed right into her arms without even thinking, without even considering Hannah makes me nervous. I know he still has feelings for Fran and I understand that. But, he claims to love Hannah and want to spend the rest of his life with her. If that was true, why would he rush into the arms of his ex-wife at the first chance he got. I know he is angry that she lied about filing for divorce from Ray...but still! If he loves her, he shouldn't cheat on her. Bad James. (even though I'm secretly really happy that him and Fran had sex!! :lol: I just want him to want to be with her for the right reasons, not because he is feeling hurt!!)

The kids...well I'm not surprised at all that Cali reacted the way she did when she found out about Hannah. I don't think any young girl wants to picture her father in a serious relationship, let alone a single encounter, with a call girl. It just doesn't produce nice images.

That being said, in a way, I do sympathize with Hannah and her reasons for turning to that industry to make money. Being a cash-strapped student is tough and in many ways the easiest way to make money is through sex. So while maybe not the most noble of professions, I understand. I also understand the shock of her family. No one wants to think about their little girl and sister selling her body for money. I really understand why everyone is reacting the way that they are.

I was surprised that Ray showed up for the party...well actually not really. Fran did make the suggestion to him. I was surprised that he was so adamant about being with Hannah again, though it did make me happy. And Hannah was right when she realized that her and Ray hadn't been having any kinds of problems when she left him. She just left him to be with James. It's not like the two of them fell out of love. I think when she is alone with him in London, something might happen. Maybe.

Gosh, I'm sure I missed commenting about something, but there was just so much! Can't wait for more!

PS. I saw your siggy and I died. They are such a beautiful family. They make me melt! It's the reason why I'm team Fran! :heart: :heart:
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YEEEEEEAH! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:

James and Fran are so awesome together! And the scene was FREAKIN HOT :drool :drool :drool

But I agree with Voxx, I mean, it's not nice that he says to Hannah the whole time he loves her, and wants to build a family with her and then run to Fran like this. I think even James doesn't know which team he's! :lol:
Oh and I hope he can talk with the kids and make everyone feel better, especially Cali :heart:

:horns: :heart: :horns2
Edited by Nah Bruno, February 6, 2012, 2:26 pm.
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February 6, 2012, 2:23 pm
YEEEEEEAH! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:

James and Fran are so awesome together! And the scene was FREAKIN HOT :drool :drool :drool

But I agree with Voxx, I mean, it's not nice that he says to Hannah the whole time he loves her, and wants to build a family with her and then run to Fran like this. I think even James doesn't know which team he's! :lol:
Oh and I hope he can talk with the kids and make everyone feel better, especially Cali :heart:

:horns: :heart: :horns2
I was so happy about James and Fran I forgot about Hannah :blush:

And I agree :rolleyes:
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Voxx
February 6, 2012, 12:06 pm
Wow, I never should have gone away! I missed SO much! I don't even know where to begin!

...I guess I will start by saying that while I am really happy that James and Fran did the dirty ( :heart: ) the fact that he rushed right into her arms without even thinking, without even considering Hannah makes me nervous. I know he still has feelings for Fran and I understand that. But, he claims to love Hannah and want to spend the rest of his life with her. If that was true, why would he rush into the arms of his ex-wife at the first chance he got. I know he is angry that she lied about filing for divorce from Ray...but still! If he loves her, he shouldn't cheat on her. Bad James. (even though I'm secretly really happy that him and Fran had sex!! :lol: I just want him to want to be with her for the right reasons, not because he is feeling hurt!!)

The kids...well I'm not surprised at all that Cali reacted the way she did when she found out about Hannah. I don't think any young girl wants to picture her father in a serious relationship, let alone a single encounter, with a call girl. It just doesn't produce nice images.

That being said, in a way, I do sympathize with Hannah and her reasons for turning to that industry to make money. Being a cash-strapped student is tough and in many ways the easiest way to make money is through sex. So while maybe not the most noble of professions, I understand. I also understand the shock of her family. No one wants to think about their little girl and sister selling her body for money. I really understand why everyone is reacting the way that they are.

I was surprised that Ray showed up for the party...well actually not really. Fran did make the suggestion to him. I was surprised that he was so adamant about being with Hannah again, though it did make me happy. And Hannah was right when she realized that her and Ray hadn't been having any kinds of problems when she left him. She just left him to be with James. It's not like the two of them fell out of love. I think when she is alone with him in London, something might happen. Maybe.

Gosh, I'm sure I missed commenting about something, but there was just so much! Can't wait for more!

PS. I saw your siggy and I died. They are such a beautiful family. They make me melt! It's the reason why I'm team Fran! :heart: :heart:
Stephanie! :heart: I bow down to your epic commenting, as always! :horns:

I agonised over the beginning of the last chapter considering whether or not to include James apologising to Hannah for their argument about not asking Ray for a divorce. But I decided to leave it out, since the last chapter was all about James and Francesca. :drool Without giving spoilers, I will say this. James and Hannah ARE still engaged. However, this is a very momentus turn of events! :nanner:

Well, Francesca took the opportunity to seduce him very cleverly. She told him in their prior conversation that she still loved him 'more than she should' and he admitted too that he missed her and them being a family. Also, after their most recent (angry) conversation where she yelled at him about Hannah, she chose not to tell the kids because she didn't want them to hate their father if they got back together. She still wanted there to be hope for them. She also waited up for him to arrive (which she didn't need to do, since he had a key), and tugged him upstairs in her underwear. Francesca is cunning, she tried to send Ray back to Hannah, and she knew James would fall for her after nearly sleeping with her during his last trip. She had it planned. She's a smart woman!

Ray still wants everything he once had with Hannah. He hasn't been privy to this whole situation so he doesn't understand yet why Hannah won't just come back to him, like she's just been on holiday or something. James not handing over Anthony surprised Ray. He also doesn't know about James' tattoo, or what else this author has in store for him! :lol:



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February 6, 2012, 2:23 pm
YEEEEEEAH! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:

James and Fran are so awesome together! And the scene was FREAKIN HOT :drool :drool :drool

But I agree with Voxx, I mean, it's not nice that he says to Hannah the whole time he loves her, and wants to build a family with her and then run to Fran like this. I think even James doesn't know which team he's! :lol:
Oh and I hope he can talk with the kids and make everyone feel better, especially Cali :heart:

:horns: :heart: :horns2
:lol: :nanner: :heart: Glad you liked the hot scene! :lol: Hope it didn't break your computer again!

You're right--at the moment, James is a tad confused about which team he's on.

He will do his best to sooth the tension with his kids. I will post this tonight (hopefully). :wavey
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February 6, 2012, 3:09 pm
Nah Bruno
February 6, 2012, 2:23 pm
YEEEEEEAH! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:

James and Fran are so awesome together! And the scene was FREAKIN HOT :drool :drool :drool

But I agree with Voxx, I mean, it's not nice that he says to Hannah the whole time he loves her, and wants to build a family with her and then run to Fran like this. I think even James doesn't know which team he's! :lol:
Oh and I hope he can talk with the kids and make everyone feel better, especially Cali :heart:

:horns: :heart: :horns2
I was so happy about James and Fran I forgot about Hannah :blush:

And I agree :rolleyes:
James has not forgotten his allegiance to Hannah. Lets see if his conscience kicks in, in time! :lol:

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wow i was not expecting that at all, what a fucking twist!!!
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February 6, 2012, 7:19 pm
wow i was not expecting that at all, what a fucking twist!!!
Oh thanks! :lol: :horns:
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The other thing you may have noticed (if you're trying to pick sides!) is that James hopes to mend things with his family, where Hannah doesn't expect to reconcile with anyone. She has already more or less accepted that people will not forgive her actions, but James is always seeking forgiveness.

It's a bit of the double-standard that women are 'whores' and men are 'studs', if they sleep with multiple partners.

Something to think about! :wink :rolleyes:
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At 6am Francesca woke James, stroking his hair in disbelief that he was next to her in their bed once more. She remembered his hair when it had been nearly as long as hers in 1990. The memory of his hands and his touch that had reignited her last night, had been with her for a long time. She observed the ink on his hands and arms, taking in the sight of the decorative letter ‘F’ on his left hand that she knew was for her. She remembered his hand and his body before all the ink, long before his accident and long before they had started their family together. His body was the most familiar thing to her that there was. It had been the best night’s sleep she had had in nearly two years. He smiled a half-smile as he woke, taking in her eyes, remembering the curves of her face and her blue eyes that were quite unlike Hannah’s brown ones. The early summer light was already beginning to creep into their bedroom.

‘James’ she whispered his name softly to rouse him. They smiled gently into each other’s eyes as they woke. ‘Do you want to stay here, or go to the guest room—the kids might come in and find you here with me’ she said, half-wanting them to and for him to agree. She grinned hopefully and he tickled her smooth skin and under sheets as he slid his hands over her nude body. She loved his playful morning mood: it was another thing to add to the list of things she missed about him. She rested her head on top of her praying hands on her pillow. His eyes searched hers again with love.

‘I should probably go to the guest room.…at least until…’but he stopped, not sure what he meant to say next. Her eyes had glistened at the thought. She thought now that she had him wanting her back.

‘Alright’ she smiled warmly, she was still amazed at being in bed with him, she felt whole again for having his company. He made to pull back the covers to leave their bed.

‘Just wait one more minute!’ she teased tugging his warm hand back to her. He accepted her warm kiss and she cradled his body on top of hers . Her hands searched his back as he motioned on top of her, he knew exactly what she wanted. They kissed slowly for the early morning, and James rolled his hips into her in question. She accepted his suggestion, and his hard penis curved easily into her in a smooth easy rhythm as he made love to her for the morning rush that she so badly wanted.

‘Oh James!’ she moaned gently, her head rolling back. He had been hard and ready for her already. He gasped happily in open moans as he pleased her. He moaned back for her, buckling his hips into her faster as he read the pleasure on her face.

‘Oh yeah!’ she gasped. He smiled wickedly, pleased he was driving her to moan for him. He tried what used to be her favourite move that he knew stimulated her so much: he broke from his rocking rhythm and circled his hips gently, rubbing her in slow stimulating circles. He kissed at her throat in the smooth crease flicking his tongue over her skin. He knew always, without fail, would make her squeal. It worked exactly as he thought, and she squealed loudly in surprise.

‘You know that tickles me!’ she laughed, wriggling as he pinned her still under his strong body.

‘Yep!’ he boasted proudly with a laugh.

She returned to moaning his name gently into his ear as he pulsed harder into her for his own climax. Her hands that held desperately to his waist slipped lower, holding his buttocks that tightened hard as his chest stiffened, preparing to come.

‘James! She cried out louder this time and he groaned deeply.

‘Mmmhmmm!’ he promised,’ I’m gonna come!’ he bleated. He took three hard breathy moans before his hips made a hard pulse forwards, bucking into her with his full strength.

‘Oh shit!’ he cried, he head rolled back and forth as he enjoyed her. He withdrew with a heavy gasp and lay panting beside her. He opened his eyes, taking in the satisfied look on her face with a happy smile. They heard footsteps in the hallway—the children were up, and they might catch their parents in bed any moment now.

‘Go, go!’ she teased in an urgent whisper, and James found his briefs on the bedroom floor and exited with a short wave.

At 8am they made breakfast together in the kitchen downstairs. He couldn’t help himself while he stood behind her at the kitchen bench from holding her body tight against his, as she tried her best to pour milk evenly in bowls of cereal.

‘James!’ she laughed. His mouth kissed at her neck with tongue, he loved that she was so ticklish. She felt his hard cock sliding suggestively against her from behind.

‘The kids will be down any minute!’ she warned. She was right, Castor’s feet ran down the wooden stairs to greet his father, and James stood back from seducing their mother. Their new found intimacy was still their secret.

‘Dad!!!’ Castor yelled happily. James lifted his son off the ground in a strong welcoming hug. Cali and Marcella were not far behind.

‘Daddy!’ his youngest daughter launched herself into his arms in happiness.

Cali had hung back, smiling at her younger sister’s reaction, but clearly she was still mad enough with her father that she didn’t offer him her usual warm welcome.

‘Hi Dad’ Cali acknowledged. James opened his arms to her, and she accepted a short hug awkwardly. Francesca had expected as much, she knew her daughter was still furious with her father’s betrayal.

‘Hey Dad, can we go to the beach today?’ Castor begged hopefully. It was already turning out to be a stunning hot summer day.

‘That sounds like a good plan’ he agreed with a smile. Francesca turned her happy face to him with a wide smile. She wanted more than anything to kiss him again, but knew that it would confuse their children. Instead, her hand found his waist.

‘James, why don’t we watch the kids swimming from here?’ she suggested. They could see them easily from their pool that over-looked the beach across the road. He read her cunning smile exactly.

‘Yeah, you kids can go anytime’ he grinned. ‘Your Mom and I will watch you from here, okay?’ Castor and Marcella had both missed their mother’s innuendo, but Cali saw the look in her father’s eyes: it was the same pleading look he had given Hannah, that she recognised now as desperation for intimacy.
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OMG - loved it and the last chapter :D . Cant wait for more, although I'm sure the good times with Fran wont last...
I am totally on team Fran by the way.
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February 8, 2012, 6:53 pm
OMG - loved it and the last chapter :D . Cant wait for more, although I'm sure the good times with Fran wont last...
I am totally on team Fran by the way.
Nice to get a post from you!!! :wavey

Yeah, they are enjoying their reconcilliation for now...

Team Fran! Woo! :nanner:
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I was waiting a lot! :lol:
Oh god! I don't know how Cali is gonna feel, if she saw her dad having the same cares with her mom that he had with Hannah, maybe she could be a mix feeling? I mean, happy to see her parents together again, but weird because her dad's behavior being acting similar with Fran and Hannah. :rolleyes:
More please! :heart: :heart:
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February 8, 2012, 7:11 pm
I was waiting a lot! :lol:
Oh god! I don't know how Cali is gonna feel, if she saw her dad having the same cares with her mom that he had with Hannah, maybe she could be a mix feeling? I mean, happy to see her parents together again, but weird because her dad's behavior being acting similar with Fran and Hannah. :rolleyes:
More please! :heart: :heart:
Yes, sorry for the delay. I'll have more up in a few hours. My kids have been driving me crazy this week! :lol:

Cali is old enough to read the signs. James will talk to her soon. :D
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