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| A London Extra; A Hannah/James Sequel to A French Connection | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: January 9, 2012, 12:42 am (25,096 Views) | |
| Auluna Raie | March 6, 2012, 6:48 pm Post #811 |
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Shark-Tastic!
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I'm sad, now I gotta put the Sharkmobile and the costume away for now
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | March 10, 2012, 10:50 pm Post #812 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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This was something along the lines of what my dad said to my mom about a month back.... "I would have come back long ago if I was the one who had left." That line from your story hit me bro. |
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| Deleted User | March 11, 2012, 2:44 am Post #813 |
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*nods* This line is from a relationship of my own, and the divorce in this story is largely written from my own experience as a child when my parents divorced. So these parts of the story are, I suppose, somewhat real. While I'm sorry it brought up something so difficult to the surface, I'm glad that it touched you. Thank you for your comment and for reading!
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| usmcjahusmc8762 | March 11, 2012, 2:46 pm Post #814 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I actually really loved this story and adored the ending. I'm glad that he ended up with Fran. Even though i was totally Hannah team, I totally changed my mind when fran came down for Christmas.That was like, it for me. Haha. Yeah, it touched home but it's not really a painful thing to bring to the surface. Shit happens. |
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| Deleted User | March 20, 2012, 5:28 pm Post #815 |
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Yes! Christmas was the turning point in the story. I'm glad you picked up on that--sometimes I think my narrative hints are too subtle! |
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| Deleted User | June 30, 2012, 8:45 pm Post #816 |
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I have a question for everyone who has been reading this series of stories. Would you be interested in reading a fourth story where Ray works for Lemmy of Motorhead? It would also involve more about Hannah, Anthony and the Hetfields, especially James' growing family. I ask as I am thinking of writing a part 4 and wondered who would like to read this if I did. (It would be another epic length story if I did). Please feel free to tell me which characters you would be most interested in reading! Cheryl
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| Agarwaen | July 1, 2012, 12:34 am Post #817 |
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Frantic
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As I told you already... James better behave, this time! ![]() I'd love to know what happens to Ray! |
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| Deleted User | July 1, 2012, 7:30 am Post #818 |
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I've started the new story now! James will be naughty as usual!
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I'll take you up on your offer for sure!




8:42 PM Jul 10